Your ordered product online. However, when you received it, it was damaged. Send a letter to the manager of the company. Write a letter
dear.
manajer
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manager
i
am writing Change the capitalization
I
this
latter
regarding Correct your spelling
letter
product
you Add an article
the product
a product
sand
to me is wrong , i Verb problem
sent
hope
your company
will can
responsibility Verb problem
take
about
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for
this
situation .
my name is jonatan
am from Change the capitalization
Jonatan
zimbabue
my address Correct your spelling
Zimbabwe
24
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is 24
streat quenn
. no Correct your spelling
Streat Quenn
package
222442 .
i
make note Change the capitalization
I
about
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that
you
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your
company
is wrong sand
me Correct your spelling
and
package
i
wait just 3 Change the capitalization
I
month
long time for wait i always Fix the agreement mistake
months
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package
speed come home but the reality Correct article usage
the package
so
different .
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is so
i
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I
hope
your company
can Add a missing verb
be responsibility
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responsible
responsibility
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responsible
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for
about
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for
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the
teh
situation Correct your spelling
the
i
need you Change the capitalization
I
gat
the Add the particle
to gat
package
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to
in
my home and change Change preposition
to
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it again
again
if Correct pronoun usage
it again
i
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I
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do
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donen't
done
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do
for waiting
, you must Change preposition
to wait
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be responsibility
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responsible
responsibility
, Replace the word
responsible
i
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I
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want
wana
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want
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to go
go
out of townFix the infinitive
to go
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for 2
2
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for 2
week
for Change to a plural noun
weeks
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now
naw
. because Correct your spelling
now
i
can go to working
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I
however
i
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I
done
nite you reason again if you done Add the auxiliary verb
did
have done
reaspon
my note Correct your spelling
reason
i
can report Change the capitalization
I
you
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your
company
in
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to
police
, you have Correct article usage
the police
trow
away my time for waiting and wrong Correct your spelling
throw
pacage
we Correct your spelling
package
hope
you can settle matter
to your satisfaction
regards
customersCorrect article usage
the matter
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grammar
Ensure accurate spelling and grammar usage to improve clarity.
structure
Organize your letter with clear paragraphs for each main point to improve structure.
content
You've included key details such as your name, address, and order number, which is good for clarity.
content
The purpose of your letter is clear as you have expressed the main issue and what you expect the company to do.
Structure your letter
A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:
- A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
- The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
- A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)
When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.
All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.