The graph below shows the average time spent by four car manufacturers to produce vehicles at their US factories.
The line graph describes the average time how four car companies that make cars in their US manufacture.
In general, there was a significant decrease in the time spent by all vehicle companies.
General Motors manufacturers decreased the average hours the most from 32 hours per vehicle (
HPV
) in 1998 to 22 HPV
in 2005. While
the average time spent by Ford increased from 28 HPV
in 1998 to approximately 31 HPV
in 2001, this
figure
noticeable
dropped to approximately 21,8 Change the word
noticeably
HPV
in 2005.
Speaking of Toyota and Honda manufacturers, the
both had the same Correct your spelling
they
figure
at the beginning. But in 1999 Toyota slightly rose from 22 HPV
to 23 HPV
before this
figure
decreased to 22 HPV
in 2001 and this
figure
fluctuated up and down before decreased
to 20 Wrong verb form
decreasing
HPV
in 2005. By contrast
, in 1999 Honda decreased to 20 HPV
before this
figure
continuously increased from 20 HPV
in 1999 to approximately 24 HPV
in 2002. However
, there was a remarkable decrease from 24 HPV
in 2002 to 20 HPV
in 2005.Submitted by weezel on
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