The diagram below shows how a central heating system in a house works. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows how a central heating system in a house works.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram explains the step-by-step process of a central heat system in a
house
from the collection of cold
water
,
storage
position, heating and distribution of hot and cold
water
to different
locations
in a
house
for usage
purpose
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purposes
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. A
water
tank
is installed on the top of the building roof and
a
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an
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overflow pipe is connected. The overflow pipe diverted into two directions, one direction for Hot
water
to taps and another
is
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for
Storage
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a Storage
the Storage
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tank
. From the
storage
tank
,
water
flows towards
boiler
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the boiler
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, the boiler consumes
a
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gas or oil and
generate
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generates
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the
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apply
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hear
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heat
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to create
the
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apply
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hot
water
.
Further
, the hot
water
passes through hot
water
radiators to different
locations
.
In addition
, a cold
water
pipe is installed into the
house
from outside and cold
water
flows to
storage
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a storage
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tank
,
thenafter
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then after
thereafter
,
water
goes to various
locations
in the
house
by the usage of
pump
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the pump
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. Nowadays, we can see that the majority of houses contain central hot
water
heating systems to supply the
water
to various
locations
for multiple uses.
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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words house, water, storage, locations, tank with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Central heating system
  • Boiler
  • Radiator
  • Pipes
  • Circulate
  • Heat source
  • Thermostat
  • Convection
  • Combustion
  • Energy-efficient
  • Flow rate
  • Expansion tank
  • Hot water cylinder
  • Insulation
  • Temperature control
  • Pump
  • Valves
  • Heat exchanger
  • Programmable
  • Zoned heating
  • Renewable energy
  • Double glazing
  • Carbon footprint
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