The table below shows the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie charts below illustrate the results
how
satisfied visitors were in Ashdown Museum before and after its refurbishment Change preposition
of how
during
a year.
Change preposition
over
Overall
, the survey indicated that the crowds' responses seemed to be good since the number of dissatisfied people decreased while
the opposite feeling
were increasing gradually.
Fix the agreement mistake
feelings
Firstly
, in the first year mentioned, despite the quantity of the folks satisfied shown, most visitors, about the percentage of 40, were dissatisfied owing to the internal appearance, which was not impressive, and another 10% very displeased, however
, approximately 5% of goers who did not respond to the poll.
On the contrary
, a year later, the musuem
Correct your spelling
museum
had been
renovated causing many good responses Wrong verb form
was
by
the visitors, Change preposition
from
besides
that, three-fourth
of the Correct your spelling
three-fourths
crowds
who had been there were pleased about the refurbishment but those grumpy still existed, Fix the agreement mistake
crowd
nonetheless
, some were not willing to give any answers.Submitted by nutthan.aud on
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