The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
the diagram illustrates a map from 20 years ago
as well as
an after-transition version of the floor plan of a public library.
Overall
, the infrastructure of the facility remained untouched while
all the previous rooms are now replaced by a quite distant exhibition.
Initially
, the centre of the library was equipped with tables and chairs that are now utterly removed from the facility. However
, an information desk was added to the right side of the place, which used to be where adult non-fiction books
were gathered, and are accompanied by adult fiction books
and self-service machines. Moreover
, the adult fiction books
that used to be the left wing of the place, are now replaced by all reference books
.
On the left side, we can now see an expanded version of CDs, videos and computer games centre which is now where storytelling events take place and children's fiction books
are stored. This
room
is also
accommodated by two sofas. Besides
, the reading room
is now being used as a computer room
and the children's books
room
as a lecture room
. Additionally
, the enquiry desk which was located at the right side of the entrance, is now serving as a cafe.Submitted by bita.rezaei7052 on
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