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Everyone of us should become vegetarian because eating meat can cause serious health problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

A vast majority people should become vegetarian because eating meat can cause serious health issues. I totally disagree with the statement because vegetarian food and non vegetarian food both have some merits. However, non vegetarian food such as meat soup, fish which are useful for our health.
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Nowadays many people chose to be self employed, rather than to work for a company or organisation. Why might be the case? What could be the disadvantages of being self employed?

nowday freelancing is common and many people prefer it over working for someone or a company. more so self employment has its many drawbacks and benifits.
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More and more people no longer read newspaper and watch TV to get information. Instead they use Internet to get actual news. Do you think this is a positive or negative development? Give your own opinions or relevant examples.

There is an ongoing topic that individuals don't tend to read the newspapares and watch TV. Instead of that they prefer to get information from Internet and social media. I think it has its own prons and cons but i can say the negativity overweigh the positivity. THis essay will express my opinions regarding this matter.
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Some people think that the increasing use of computers and mobile phones nowadays has unwanted effects on young people's reading and writing skills. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

it is clear that technology overtook the entire world over this decade, furthermore many young folks are overspending time on devices , this can cause many side effects such as poor reading and writing skills.
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It is neither nor useful to provide university places for a high proportion of young people. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In this modern era, it will not be efficient to allocate university seats in a higher ratio to youngsters. I disagree with this because young people are the future of the nation, who will help to develop nation and unemployment ratio in young generation will reduce.
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Many young people leave school with negative attitudes towards learning. What are the causes？How to encourage young people to study？

The negative attitudes by students towards learning is more prevalent than ever before, though the education system is more developed and functional compared to a century ago. There are quite a few motives behind this behaviour which can't be overlooked, because the outcomes of discouragement for learning also influence their success in the future.
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Reading books keeps a person’s mind active, whereas watching films and television is passive and does not require a person to use their imagination. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

It is commonly believed that reading books maintain a reader's mind triggered, while films and watching television does not simulate the brain to be creative. To some extend I agree with this idea because a person needs to see and visualize as well.
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It is important for all towns and cities to have large public outdoor places like squares and parks. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

It is often argued that towns and capital to have puplic outdoor zone like squares and parks . In my opinion i agree with this topic .
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When international media (including movies, fashion shows, advertisements and other TV programs) convey the same messages to the global audience, people argue that the expansion of international media has negative impacts on cultural diversity. What is your opinion?

in recent years , the international medica convey the same massage to global audience which lead to negitive impacts in indvidule , in my opinion , i am agree because ecah counitry have sepcific education and culture
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Being a celebrity, such as a famous film star or sports personality-brings problems as well as benefits. Do you think that being a celebrity brings more benefits or more problems?

I'm completly angree, Being a celebrity like a famous film star can brings more benefits.
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A person’s worth nowadays seems to be judged according to social status and material possessions. Old fashioned values such as honour, kindness, and trust no longer seem important. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some argue that the value of a person is judged by his social status and mterial possessions. However, old values, including kindness, respect, and trust, are no longer consider. I completely agree with this viewpoint and argue that influences of social media and powers hold by rich people are the main reasons behind this.
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In many countries around the world, rural people are moving to cities, so the population in the countryside is decreasing. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

In recent years, a growing number of population have moved from rural to urban areas which made the proportion of people residing in countryside plummet even more compared to the last decades. I am of the opinion that, relocating of people from countryside to cities
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It is the responsibility of individuals to save and provide for their own retirement. Governments have no obligation to provide this benefit. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

In this era of mordern, financial security after rtirement has become the subject of debate.some people argue that individuals should be responiable for accumulationg suficient saving for their after retirement. but,others say government should assist them and provide them pension in their old age stage. I partially disagree with this view because personal planning for retirement funds is importion .whereas, higher authourities should take responsibility on their on behalf.
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some people think government should invest more money in teachin science than other subjects in order for a country to develope and progress. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people think, the more money the giverment spend in teachin science will make a good deeds for country to develope and progress. Well, in my humble opinion this could be true. Some of subjects does not need to be priority. Science will be a good investment especially for human resource. With a valuable human, will make the country be a great. However, one of the subject that could be prioritise is Law. With a great foundation of law, the country will be able to make a strong roots. The strongest roots, have a great opportunity to make the country become superior. At the end, science is more rialeble for now on.
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“Many people believe that social networking sites (such as Facebook) have had a huge negative impact on both individuals and society. To what extent do you agree?”

In term of huge negative impact, it should not be that bad. Because some of individuals had a positife impact from social networking, even we know that with social networking sites our privacy become more publicly but in certain ways, social networking help people reach something that they never believe before like becoming a influence person, a ownership, and others. it can be bad, but if we can take a good side from it, it should be fine too. For society, back in that days we even cannot understand some of group in our neighborhood, but because of social networking even my daughter knows the information for it. It is not always be that bad, back again it is aways about how we react from it.
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In som countries,it is common practice for young people (13-17yrs) to get a part time job in the summer.Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of teenage employment.

There is an ongoing debate regarding about what is teenage's autonomy and responsability. There are a myriad of benefits as well as drawbacks of young people employment. Both the pros and cons are elaborated in the ensuing paragraphs.
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In some countries, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this messages?

In many countries, paarents and teacher often tell children that they can achieve anything if they work hard eoungh. While this message has sime clear benefits, it can also create problems.This essay will discuss both sides.
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Some childeren spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think is a positive or a negative development?

Nowadays, there are numerous youngests tends to play with their smartphones every moment, which causes a phenomonon that the children who lower their head watching the digital devices exsit in almost everywhere and it would lead to deep anxiety among their guadians.
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the number of students that read books for fun has dropped dramatically in recent years.What are the reasons and how can we encourage children to read more?

Agree that the number of people who read book has decrased in recent years. In my opinion, one of the reason for this is internet.
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“Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?”

As same products can be bought anywhere globally, differences among every nation have also become blurred. From my perspective, this trend is a net positive development for the following reasons.
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