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This is a diagram on the topic of how to pu’erh tea is made.

The given flowchart diagram illustrates the steps of making puerh raw and ripe tea. The main component of the tea, which is the tea leaf, is pan fried for enzymes deactivation, before being rolled and left dried under direct sunlight. After that, the dried tea is called loose raw tea, which can be compressed to get raw tea or underwent mold fermentation to achieve loose ripe tea.
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Fossil fuels are the main source of energy around the world. However, people are encouraged to use alternative energy sources such as wind energy, solar energy and so on. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

Most of the industries rely on fossil fuels as the essential part of the power around the globe. Despite,  this type of consumption could already be replaced by the mean of the power plants which produce drastically low green gas emissions. This type of energies comes from natural force such as: wind energy, solar energy and etc.
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Some people think it is better for people to change their career at least once in their life and do different kinds of jobs. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

It is a common belief that the change career at least once in their life and doing different kinds of jobs can make positive effect in mind. However, Some people argue that the change their career at least once is too dangerous. They have two significant reasons: 'different' kinds of jobs already have a lot of risks, too much new challenge bring crucial stress in mind. Therefore, I fully disagree this common belief
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The bar tart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010.

The graph illustrates the proportion of the constant body activity for the Australian population, based on different age category in 2010.
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Today, many people getting married at the age of thirties and having children rather than marry at teen age. Is this a positive or negative development?

2.The authors test this idea in a few linked ways. They use IL-17RAfl/fl mice crossed with different Cre lines to switch off IL-17RA in T cells, myeloid cells, keratinocytes or in all tissues. Psoriasis- like skin changes are brought on daily 5% imiquimod cream on the back and ears for 5 – 6 days, with scores each day for redness, scaling and skin thickness. To see how inflamed the skin is, ear samples go through flow cytometry for myeloid cells, H & E and MPO/F4/80 stains on sections, and qPCR on ear RNA.
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In many countries children are engaged in some kind of paid work. Some people regard this as completely wrong, while others consider it as valuable work experience, important for learninh and taking responsibilities. What are your opinions on this?

In many countries children are engaged in some kind of paid work and they are some people regard this as completely wrong.
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Your city library is closing for renorvation for three months Write a short message to your classmete about how you feel and what you will do instead

Did you hear that our library was closed for three months? I am really upset about this situation because it was the best place for me. I used to go to the library to read books when I was bored, and the library helped me to relax. I think we may be bored until the library is fixed again.
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Students in university should be specialized in one subject rather than to develop a wider range of knowledge in many different subjects. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The data given shows export earnings of 5 different products between 2015 and 2016. Information about percentile changes in value in the given years are shown in the table. Overall, exports increased except for gems and jewellery.
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Nowadays governments are investing more in public transport such as buses and trains rather than in building new roads. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

In recent years, governments have invested a lot in public transit systems, like buses and trains. This approach has made postive influence in human society. I think its benefits are more substantial.
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Some people say that students who achieve the highest scores in theirexams should be rewarded. Others say that those who show progress should be rewarded instead. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

3-The authors thought that human embryonic stem cells could be nudged along an endoderm path that echoes how the pancreas forms. If that path holds, the cells would end up as pancreatic endocrine cells with insulin storage and release close to that of adult islets. Earlier ES-cell work was patchy. In many lines the cells held little insulin, showed neural traits or never showed a clear link to endoderm. From here, the group sketched a tighter route, rooted in normal pancreatic development, as their way towards more functional β-like cells.
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Topic: Some people think that cities are the best places to live. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of living in a big city.

It is usually believed that some people think that cities are the are think better places to live , In my opinion, I advantages with this statement ، but some people may disadvantages of living in a big city .In this essay, I am going to discuss this question from both points of view and give reasons for my opinion.
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It has been argued that giving gifts to friends and family should not be encouraged, because money is often wasted on things that people do not like or want. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In today worlds, many belived that receving or giving gifts not important, or it is a waste of time ans a waste of money, I completly disagree with that, matter fact it is one of the nicest things in the world, no one can deney that getting a gift is chearful, I completly agree and im going to explain my point of veiw on the essay.
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The illustration shows fire exits in college accomodation with 7 bedrooms.

The photo shows university, there were planning fire exit plan for students who live in accommodation with 7 bedrooms which merged with hall.
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Although there is a lot of translation software available, learning a language could still be advantageous. What are the benefits of learning languages? How to learn a new language effectively?

Many think learning several langugaes has it own future,it to improve comuncation with others, for instance travilng to a diffrent city it could be meaningful for the ones who speaks the country language, they got to know about the culture if they comunicate with the residents with there own language, they would feel more comfotable to tell them stories, even asking for dierction would be a lot easier
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the illustration below shows fire exit plan in a college accomodation

This map shows emergency exit plan in a student housing.
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In some countries, the difference in age between parents and children is generally greater than it was in the past . Do you think the advandtages outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, there are a trend that marry or raise a child after having a stable work. Therefore, many people may tend to get their own children on a big age. It makes the difference in age between parents and children is generally greater than it was in the past. Some people may think that this situation makes the chatting topics and the thinking being too difference between parents and children. Some people may think that people get their own children after the considering, they will give a higher living quality to children. In my opinion, I think this trend has a variety of advandages.
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Developing countries require international organization’s help. Some people prefer financial aid while others think practical aid and advice are better. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Nowadays, there are still many developing countries in the world. Some of them cannot afford clean water and enough food, their citizens can only survive of drinking dust water or eating leafs. Therefore, a suggestion of providing them finanical aid was proposed. Advocates claim that providing them money is a possible way to let them develop their society and fulfill their needs, such as buy food from others countries or hire profressional to complete their farming system. On the other hand, opponents critize that offering them practical aid is a better way to solve their requirement completely, finanical support will not long last, encourage their to create their own money of providing practical support will be the possible way. Campared with both sides arguement, I prefer practical aid more than finanical aid.
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One of the major problems that faces today’s governments is creating enough satisfactory housing for their increasing populations whilst still trying to protect the environment. Discuss this statement and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

Nowadays, the population density is incresing. Therefore, governments is building more and more satisfactory housing but environment protecting problem will worsing. In my opinion, both environment and housing are improtant. Therefore, we need to keep this two side balance?
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Nowadays more and more people are using smartphones and computers to communicate, so they are losing the ability to communicate with each other face to face. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement?

These day, people cannot deny using devices, such as smartphone or computer to communicate with each other. However, people rely on them so much that it compromise the ability to talk with their interlocutors.
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With the rise in popularity of the Internet, newspapers will soon become a thing of the past. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In the new generation, the rise in popularity of the Internet , newspaper will soon become a thing of the past. That's a ture. People use more than 4-5 hours to watch the phone. People easily be attract by the phone. It is become more common in recent years.
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