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It has been argued that giving gifts to friends and family should not be encouraged, because money is often wasted on things that people do not like or want. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In today worlds, many belived that receving or giving gifts not important, or it is a waste of time ans a waste of money, I completly disagree with that, matter fact it is one of the nicest things in the world, no one can deney that getting a gift is chearful, I completly agree and im going to explain my point of veiw on the essay.
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The illustration shows fire exits in college accomodation with 7 bedrooms.

The photo shows university, there were planning fire exit plan for students who live in accommodation with 7 bedrooms which merged with hall.
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Although there is a lot of translation software available, learning a language could still be advantageous. What are the benefits of learning languages? How to learn a new language effectively?

Many think learning several langugaes has it own future,it to improve comuncation with others, for instance travilng to a diffrent city it could be meaningful for the ones who speaks the country language, they got to know about the culture if they comunicate with the residents with there own language, they would feel more comfotable to tell them stories, even asking for dierction would be a lot easier
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the illustration below shows fire exit plan in a college accomodation

This map shows emergency exit plan in a student housing.
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In some countries, the difference in age between parents and children is generally greater than it was in the past . Do you think the advandtages outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, there are a trend that marry or raise a child after having a stable work. Therefore, many people may tend to get their own children on a big age. It makes the difference in age between parents and children is generally greater than it was in the past. Some people may think that this situation makes the chatting topics and the thinking being too difference between parents and children. Some people may think that people get their own children after the considering, they will give a higher living quality to children. In my opinion, I think this trend has a variety of advandages.
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Developing countries require international organization’s help. Some people prefer financial aid while others think practical aid and advice are better. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Nowadays, there are still many developing countries in the world. Some of them cannot afford clean water and enough food, their citizens can only survive of drinking dust water or eating leafs. Therefore, a suggestion of providing them finanical aid was proposed. Advocates claim that providing them money is a possible way to let them develop their society and fulfill their needs, such as buy food from others countries or hire profressional to complete their farming system. On the other hand, opponents critize that offering them practical aid is a better way to solve their requirement completely, finanical support will not long last, encourage their to create their own money of providing practical support will be the possible way. Campared with both sides arguement, I prefer practical aid more than finanical aid.
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One of the major problems that faces today’s governments is creating enough satisfactory housing for their increasing populations whilst still trying to protect the environment. Discuss this statement and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

Nowadays, the population density is incresing. Therefore, governments is building more and more satisfactory housing but environment protecting problem will worsing. In my opinion, both environment and housing are improtant. Therefore, we need to keep this two side balance?
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Nowadays more and more people are using smartphones and computers to communicate, so they are losing the ability to communicate with each other face to face. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement?

These day, people cannot deny using devices, such as smartphone or computer to communicate with each other. However, people rely on them so much that it compromise the ability to talk with their interlocutors.
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With the rise in popularity of the Internet, newspapers will soon become a thing of the past. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In the new generation, the rise in popularity of the Internet , newspaper will soon become a thing of the past. That's a ture. People use more than 4-5 hours to watch the phone. People easily be attract by the phone. It is become more common in recent years.
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Some people believe that it is wrong to keep animals in zoos, while others think that zoos are both entertaining and ecologically important. Discuss both views and give your opinon.

It is argued that zoos are not suitable place for animals to live because naturally, it is not their habitat, while others argue that zoos plays vital role for entertainment purposes for public as well as have benefits for environment. Although, two school of thoughts are true according to thier belief, i agree with the latter view.
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Many people believe that social networking sites (such as facebook)have had a huge negative impact on both individuals and society?To what extent do you agree? In the current world, The usage of technology is constantly on the rise.

The study sets out its limitations clearly, as the authors used HERG-transfected cells only, so other currents may also play a part. In addition, their protocol didn’t clearly draw between open and inactivated block. They also omitted metabolites such as norcisapride, which may feed into the effect in vivo. Lastly, as they note, Cisapride links to 5-HT4 receptors in the right atrium, with no place in the ventricles and a limit to how far the results extend.
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Some people think that activities done in a person’s free time should be planned, while others disagree. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

In today's world everyone occupied by work and there are many activities we can do. It is argued that, planning is beneficial for everything before doing the some activities. However, others think life is unpredicatable and we are unaware next of second out life. I will discuss both prespectives in essays below.
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Everyone should be required to stay in school til age of 18 . To what extent do you agree or disagree ?

The society has changed greatly today, this includes people mentality about education. It sholud be complasary for children to countinue their education at schools till the age of eighteen. I completely agree with this idea. This essay will provide evidence to support my point of view.
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Do you think the environmental situation should improve in the nearest future

In mice, the team looked at how tirzepatide works in the brain, in what they note as “a combination of neuroanatomical approaches.” The drug held a faint fluorescent tag and was tracked over exposed parts of the brain with iDISCO light sheet method. From there, they noted shifts in neuronal activity in different regions of the brain with whole-brain FOS analysis, while RNAscope showed where the GlP1r and Gipr receptors are. With genetic tools, they switched certain neurons on and off, and together with feeding work, linked those brain sites to appetite and weight.
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Some people believe that as internet access becomes widespread,traditional libraries will become obsolete.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is true that unternet has transformed how people access to information leading some to believe that traditional libraries will soon disappear.However,i completely desagree wit,h this view,as libraries continue to play an essential role in education and community life.
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Learning English at school is often seen as more important than learning local languages. If these are not taught, manya are at risk of dying out. In your opinion, is it important for everyone to learn English? Should we try to ensure the survival of local languages and, if so, how?

English language learning is considered more important rather than local language learning in settings of many schools. If we continue to prioritize foreign languages over our own, we risk losing our national identity. To my way of thinking, even though there might be certain threats associated with this matter, it still is vital for everyone to learn English. However, we should not forget about abovelisted risks, and therefore appropriate measures should be adopted to avoid them.
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It is argue that some markets should not be allowed to sell any drink or food that has prove to have negative effect on individuals’s health. I firmly agree with this statement because bad food lead to health problems that will not ends.

It is argue that some markets should not be allowed to sell any drink or food that has prove to have negative effect on individuals’s health. I firmly agree with this statement because bad food lead to health problems that will not ends.
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some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary schools rather than secondary schools. do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

In recent years, there has been an ongoing debate over whether introducing foreign language acquisition at the primary school level is more beneficial than waiting until secondary education.Some critics claim that this trend brings several drawbacks, such as academic stress and cultural conflicts. Nevertheless, I firmly believe that its benefits, including developing soft skills, broadening children’s horizons and fostering cognitive progress, far outweigh its disadvantages. This essay will discuss both the advantages and disadvantages of this phenomenon.
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The plans below show a harbour in 2000 and how it looks today. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps demontrate how a horbour's plan have changed from 2000 to present after renovation.
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Caring For Children is very important for our society. therefore all mothers and fathers should take childcare training course. To what extent you agree or disagree?

As we all know that children are the future of our lives in every mean so it is an obligation to take care of them particularly and sincerely. In community family has big importance, as parents have a duty to concerning about children they need some help from the authorities to improve their facilities about growing and self-care of a child. This essay will explore my aggrements and disagreements on exercising care of a child with an ongoing school or threatment.
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