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A global trade increases between countries ,many daily necessities are produced in other countries .Such goods are usually transported a long distance .do the benefits of this trend outweigh it's drawbacks? Opinion,the advantage and disadvantages.

One of the disadvantages of trading goods globally is: pollution, where the ships whom transporting the goods will generate, by hurting the sea animals and plants. Also the time that it take from a distination to another, for example, the shipping time from china to canada is 35-50 days, which is a big amount of time, howerver, if you ship it by plane it will be much less time, but the cost will rise significantely.
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The restoration of old buildings in major cities in the world involves a lot of government expenditures. This money should be used in new housing and road development. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The renevation of old buildings in well known cites in the world involves a lager amout of goverment funds. This money sould be used in housing projects and infastructre development. I partly agree with this view becouse i belive that goverment must focues on both road development and sustanability development.
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These days most people prefer not to leave in rural areas. Task: What are the advantages and disadvantages of living in rural areas?

the advantages from people leave in rural areas are they be a far away from a people travic and the have a lowad live and a lot of moment with ther famliy and childrean and take a orginc food such as eggs,milk,meat and vigetables if they have a farm.
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Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment; only governments and large companies can make a difference. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is aruge that people can not do anything to enhance the environment, Only public sector and major comanies can make a change. I disagree with the nation as i belive the both parties have equal responsiblity to protect the environment.
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Parents are trying to learn how to take care of their children. Is this essential? Give your opinion on this and illustrate an example.

Parents are trying to learn how to take care of their children. Is this essential?
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Some people think that school and government should take responsibility to transport children to school. While some people think that parents should get children to school. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

In the modern world, some people think that schools and governments should take responsibility for transporting students between home and school. In this essay will discuss both views and present my own opinion.
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Some people believe that parents are the best teachers for children while others think that schools are more important.

Nowadays parents raise their children very important and her nurture. Actually childrens for second familiy their teacher. For example child get basic knowledge from parents. Thereafter they go to the kindegarden. Those learnt to education, mental creative and intelektual creative for example counting, make an animals , drawing a picture this activities from a teacher. Parents are main positsion their are knowledge strong for they must exercise together. Firstly knowledgeable parents to give their children much knowledge. For example they to study at home but parents because of work and many problems, tiredness, depression they lack of time for children. As result children of give at kindegarden, because game with study at here. In conclusion I think parents have to find time for children. Every day fathers or mathers to make time one hour eachday. The knowledge was given by teacher, parents must support of childrens.
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In some countries more and more people are becoming interested in finding out bout the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this?

people lately start question themselves about the place they are actully live in, unlike people from the past, they do not conserve themselves with the story that began and started from day 1 with the house.
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Many people sayt that we now live in ,,consumers societiesʼʼ where money and possessions are given to much importance. To what extent do you agree or diagree

In the recent years,cost expensis is rapidly increasing in a lot of countries over world which is more likely lead to be consumer societies while this may seem like a controversial move to some. I firmaly believe the world has changed and we have to accommodite the fact that we are living in consumers societies.
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Many people believe that the best way to protect the environment is for governments to impose strict laws on industries and individuals. Others think there are better ways to encourage environmental protection. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

There has been a fierce debate over whether the governments impose strict laws on industries and individuals, which is the best way to protect the environment or having others ways to encourage environmental protection. This essay will discuss both views before drawing my conclusion.
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The role of education is to prepare children for the modern world. Schools should cut subjects such as arts and music out of the curriculum so that children can focus on subject such as information technology. To what extent do you agree?

Knowing that the role of education is to prepare children for the mordern world doesn't mean they should change the way it's.
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It is a positive thing for people who are in senior management positions in companies to have much higher salaries than other employees in the same company or organzation. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

A school of thought holds that higher salaries given to senior managers, compared to other employees would be advantageous. From my perspective, I partially agree with this perception due to the following reasons.
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1.1.part Zulayho You wont beleive what happened .I recently ordred new Laptop which is iconic around the world especialy my country but the courier delevred it to a neighbor who went to on a holiday .Finally I got this Laptop 2 week later .This Laptop condition very owfull and stop working .I beleive the campany must take full responsibilty and offer my funding .cheers .Dilnoza

I am writing to inform you about issue with watch.When I firstly buy this watch condition is better than ather itms but may be 2 week later the watch compeletely stopped working and the watch screen frozen .I am tried changing the watch battery but it did not help to .l do not know why this watch compeletely stopped working.At first when I ordred this watch I wait a lot of day because the courier delevred it to a neighbor which is went to Istanbul where loceted in a Turkey as the result this watch demeged l beleive your company which is opened newly and your service should take full responsibilty and use ather usefull method if you use better way and replace your service you will be achive great goal .Thank you your attention.your soncerely
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You recently received a message from youth center. The manager asked students what equipment should we use? What space should be created? Should we create areas for gaming and relaxing? How can we make it more welcoming? Write a short note to your friend, who is also a member of the youth center. Tell them how you feel about the center and what improvements you think the youth center needs Write about 50 words.

Did you hear what’s going on? It made me feel quite disappointed. I think they should take action because students don’t enjoy spending time there. Also, it would be nicer if they could deal with it properly, since adding game consoler, a quiet relaxing area, comfortable seating and more sports equipment would make it more welcoming.
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Some people think that liking your job is more important than how much money you earn while others think that your salary is more important than how much you like your job. Discuss both these views and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

I believe that liking your job is the first step towards getting to know yourself better. We represent ourself with how we interact with other people, act towards them, and make use of our daily life. The main thing to know is how to enjoy liking those challenging jobs that provides more money. It is certainly better to do a much easier job with a high salary, but life making decisions comes with a higher price. That is why higher salary job comes with a much higher risks. Albeit getting a job that you dislike meaning those jobs will get repeatingly repetitive.
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In many countries, many people do not do exercise or play any sport. What are the causes? And what will be the effects on society?

In many countries many people do not do exercise or play any sport this is caused by a social environment and various social factors also have life busy with work or study and also family .
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IN SOME COUNTRIES OWING THE HOME RATHER THEN RENTING ONE IS IMPORTANT ? WHYS MIGHT BE THE CASE DO YOU THINK IT IS A POSITIVE SIDE OR NEGATIVE.

In many countries, an increasing number of people choose to rent a home rather than own one. I strongly believe that it is a negative development because it lead to finiancial insecurity and lack of long-term stability.
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Increasing car uses in many global cities has caused a number of problems. Some cities have proposed banning private vehicles from the city centre. To what extent, do you agree or disagree?

A and B give the same current on the I-V plot, with voltage at two different values. Current depends on driving force (ΔV) and the conductance (G) (I = ΔV×G). The same current can still show up with a trade-off between ΔV and G. A current (I) can have larger driving force with less conductance could be the same current that have smaller driving force with a larger conductance. The number of channels, and the probability of being open (Po), don’t directly depend on current itself. That part comes from conductance, (G= NPoγ). Two currents with the same value don’t mean they have same channels availability.
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The world production output from Asia, Europe, and the rest of the world in different years.

The given bar graph illustrates the manufacture of the world from Asia, Europe and other countries of the worldwide between 1840-2000.
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Learning abaut the past has no value for those of us living in the present. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is believed that people who live in the present do not need to learn about the past and it has no value in the modren world. from my perspective, I strongly agree that shearching about the past is useless.
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