IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 9

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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Some people believe it is better to raise children in the city, while others consider the countryside to be a more suitable choice. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Nowedays there are many parents who like care for the youth people in the city, while another of them do not believe in this way,However I will discuss both said given my opinion

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TASK 2: STUDENTS SHOULD PAY THE FULL COST FOR THEIR OWN STUDY, BECAUSE UNIVERSITY EDUCATION BENEFITS INDIVIDUALS RATHER THAN SOCIETY TO WHAT EXTENT DO YOU AGREE OR DISAGREE?

Students ought to cover the entire expense of their education since university environment benefits persons rather than society. This is obvious that every student need to relize the importance of university education and pay a fee for it. This writer agree with the previously mentioned statement to some extent, which will be discuss in this essay.

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In many countries, the government prioritises economic growth above all other concerns. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this.

Across the globe, many nations focus on making money as their priority compares to solving other concerning issues. This clearly has the benefits of increasing the employment opportunities and improvement in infrastructures, but have the drawbacks of environmental degradation and social inequality.

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Students should pay the fukk cost for their own study,because university education benefits individuals rather than society.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Pupils are suggested to afford all the costs of their own studies because college lessons bring more benefits to each individual than society at all.This writer disagrees with this statement and will explain why.

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Transport delays and long journey times are a widespread phenomenon in many cities today. What are the causes of this problem, and how could the situation be improved?

These days traffic delays and long time commute is major drawbacks in many urbans. This essay will discuss the main causes of this problem and suggest potential solutions to alleviate the situation.

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The bar shows the percentage of people going to cinemas in one European country on diﬀerent days.

The bar chart depicts variation in peoples’ attendance in the cinema, in three periods, from 2003 to 2007, with intervals of two years in one European country. As reflected by the y-axis the population is measured from zero to 50 percent of the population with intervals of five.

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A big salary is much more important than job satisfaction. Do you agree or disagree?

Some people think that high wage is an essential than job satisfaction for every employees, while others argue that person cannot work in profession which do not want this job. This essay will be discussed in both point of view.

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In the modern world, more and more emphasis is being placed on the acquisition of practical skills rather than knowledge from text books or other sources. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this trend.

Besides past years which technical studies were a step ahead, nowadays, in the modern worlds, emphasis on acquisition of practical skills rather than knowledge from textbooks or other sources are increasing. Both view of these ideas will be debate in this assay.

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International communities should act immediately to encourage countries to reduce the consumption of fossil fuels, such as oil and gas. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people think international communities should act quickly to moderate of consumption of fossil fuels,such as oil and gas.But it is uncomfortable for people.

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Car ownership has increased so rapidly over past thirty years that may cities in the world are now on big traffic jam. How true do you think this statement is? How government should encourage people to reduce using their cars.

Number of people who owned car has went up in the last thirty years. I my opinion, this situation has potantial to cause big traffic jam in the world. In this essay, it will be discussed why I support this statement and how should governments encourage people to decrease using cars.

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Many people think that students should be allowed to choose the subject that they study in school, whereas others feel that they should choose the curriculum. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In many educational systems, there is a debate over whether students should have the freedom to choose their subjects or if they should follow a fixed curriculum. However, while both perspectives have their merits, I support a balanced approach that incorporates elements of both views.

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Percentage change in total crime arrests for persons under 18 by locality, 1995-1998

The line graph gives information about the percentage of some crime arrests for persons under 18 by locality between 1995 and 1998.

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Serious violent crimes among people who are under-18 are becoming more common. Some people think that children who commit serious crimes should be treated like adults, while others would say that they should be rehabilitated. Discuss both these view and give your opinion.

In recently years, a lot of violent crimes are committed by adults as well as under- 18 teenagers. Some people believe that teenagers who doer serious crimes should punish like adults. Others think argue that they should be rehabilitated, which will be discussed in this essay.

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The increase in the production of consumer consumption goods results in damage to the natural environment. What are the causes of this and what can be done to solve this problem?

In the developed world, there is an upsurge of the production in the consumption goods, as a result this engender damage to the environment. In this following essay I will provide why this is happening based on my point of view as well as what should be done to solve this problem and make the better environment.

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some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

r than the time they didn't do any sports.

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Topic: Children’s education is expensive. In some countries, the government pays some of or all the costs. Do the advantages out weight its disadvantages?

In today's contemporary era, the fee of kid's education is too high. In many countries, the states have responsibility to pay all or a big part of the fee. This action might have both advantages and disadvantages that in continue, this essay will express some of them.

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Students are becoming more and more reliant on technology. What are some of the problems associated with reliance on computers, and what are some of the possible solutions?

It is true that student's dependence on applied science seems to be getting widely distributed. There are several reasons for this, and both schools and parents should work together to enhance the situation.

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in this period of globalization many people are lucky or forced to live in other country and face serious social and practical problems because of the foreign language

in this period of globalization many people are lucky or forced to live in other country and face serious social and practical problems because of the foreign language, some of the problems are socializing with others or simply taking a trip in a taxi or asking for directions , in my opinion i strongly agree with this notion and my opinion will be discussed in further paragraphs with a suitable conclusion.

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Some people think that young people should spend their free time with teir families instead of enjoying outside entertainment. However, others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Young people spend most of their lifes in school or studying. Therefore, when they have free time, they can either do activities with their families or go out an enjoy outside entretainment. My personal opinion is that there should be time to enjoy both options.

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Nowadays changes need to be made regarding the school curriculum, in order to prepare children for adult life. Discuss which subjects could be introduced and why and they would be beneficial to young adults. Are there any subjects which you feel are now obsolete and why?

Certainly, updating the school curriculum to better prepare children for adult life is a crucial step in ensuring they have the skills and knowledge necessary for success in the modern world. In this essay I will highlight some subjects that could be introduced or emphasized in the study plans.

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