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IELTS Writing Samples Band 6.5

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Developing the economy will always damage the environment. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The advancement of technology had the greatest impact on the environment to a great extent. I agree with this statement because many animals are extinct, and it creates the issue of global warming.

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in some countries,more and more people are hiring a personal fitness trainer, rather than playing sports or doing exersice classses what are the reasons for this? is this a positive or negative development?

In several nations, individuals who take private training lessons are increasing, compared with those who attend exercise courses or play sports. There seem to be some drawbacks stemming from this matter and it could have two main reasons .

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For school children, their teachers have more influence on their intelligence and social development than their parents. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is often thought that teachers have more impact on children’s intelligence and social improvement rather than their parents. Personally, I partly agree with this statement due to the fact that the role of parents can not be ignored.

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The use of violence in music lyrics, video games and films seen by children is causing concern in many societies. What problems may be caused by this type of violent imagery, and what steps could be taken to lessen the impact on young people?

In the modern era, there are many ways to entertain ourselves thanks to technology. However, it is argued that the violence shown in songs, movies and video games has a great impact on young ones which is causing certain problems in some communities. In this essay, I will justify the problems behind this trend and some solutions are also discussed to mitigate this issue in the upcoming paragraphs.

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Some people believe that children of all ages should have extra responsibilities (for example, helping at home or at work). Others believe that, outside of school, children should be free to enjoy their lives. Discuss both views and give your own opinion...

It has become increasingly prevalent for children of all ages to have their own duties either at home or at work. While others opine that they should spend that time chilling and enjoying their lives. I agree with the former viewpoint and discuss the reasons as follows.

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Some university students want to learn about other subjects in addition to their main subjects. Others believe it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for a qualification. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

While some university students are eager to take extra-curricular classes in addition to their primary topics, others are certain that it is essential for them to dedicate their time and focus to obtaining the qualification. This essay will analyze both points of view and present my opinion on the subject.

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Compared to the past, people can now work in places that are far from their homes because of modern means of transportation. How has this affected the lives of workers? Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of having modern transportation. Support your answer with specific reasons and example.

There are many ways of transportation developed in recent times which has allowed people to work in places that are highly distanced from their homes. Modern transport systems such as tram networks, underground trains, improved road conditions for drivers and frequent bus services have allowed people to travel conveniently to workplaces that are far from home. The advantages of being able to work in places further away include faster career advancement opportunities, more job availabilities and being part of a larger workforce. Such benefits outweigh the small disadvantages that come with travelling such as time and money spent on travelling up and down.

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the best way to cut down crime rate is by building more prisons and giving longer sentences. do you agree or disagree? what other methods are there to control the crime rate?

It is thought by some that the most effective way to reduce crime in society is to construct more prisons and give criminals longer sentences. In the following paragraphs, advantages, disadvantages and my opinion about methods to reduce crimes will be outlined.

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Trying to save endangered animal species from extinction is a waste of valuable resources.Do you agree or disagree?

In today's world, the population of various animal species has witnessed a significant decrease due to the impact of human activities and environmental changes. Therefore, the question of whether spending too much on protecting endangered animal species has become a matter of considerable debate. Some argue that conserving endangered animal species to prevent extinction is a misuse of valuable resources. However, from my perspective, I disagree with this viewpoint.

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These days, a lot of people rely on traditional medicine. Is this a positive or negative development?

These days, alternative medicine is relied on by a lot of people who have tried it before. In my opinion, this is a good development because of its cheap cost and its availability.

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The internet has transformed the way information is shared and consumed, but it has also created problems that did not exist before. What are the most serious problems associated with the internet and what solutions can you suggest?

The internet has indeed made our lives easy by storing all kinds of important information and useful documents are just one click away, but it has also created difficulties that never existed ever before.

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More students travel abroad for further education. Do you believe the advantages of this experience are greater than the drawbacks associated with it?

Some people suppose that migrating to another country for further education might bring more benefits than drawbacks. In this essay, I will examine both views and explain why the advantages of studying abroad outweigh the disadvantages.

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Some businesses find that their new employees lack basic interpersonal skills such as team. What are the causes? Suggest possible solutions.

In this modern era, more and more people compete to get a good job opportunity. Is this a good development? Some people claim that a number of new employees lack soft skills. However, I would explain why this phenomenon happens, and I would offer a solution to the rising problem.

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Detailed reporting of crime has bad effects. Consequently, such details should not be reported in the media. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

These days, there is a view that broadcasting officials cannot cover a detail of certain incidents in the media or news. However, others claim that it is important they should publish the details to the public to prevent similar crimes in the future. I endorse the latter.

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Most people accept that we now live in a globalised world but not everyone agrees that this is benefcial. To what extent is globalisation a positive or negative development? Write about the following topic: Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or examples

Currently, people have different views as to whether the majority of people accept that they get many benefits from a globalised world while some people do not think like that. Despite the fact that the minority of people will get to affect more than advantages. I believe that a globalised world will create many positive things around the world.

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Some people think thats it's a good idea to socialise with work colleages during evenings and weekend. Other people, think it's important to keep working life completely separate from social life. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

There are two controversial opinions that socialising with co-workers after a working day and on weekends is a splendid idea. Nonetheless, others do believe that it is vital to separate the working and private lives. This essay agrees with the first statement due to the obvious fact that nice relationships with colleagues are the surefire way to productive labour and disagrees with the second statement, as some jobs imply social relations between the workers.

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Although family is a great influence in any child's life, it is influence from outside the home that plays a bigger role in his or her development. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

In the present day, many people argue that the factors of children's development consist of external and internal influences, which are the surrounding environment and family factors respectively. Moreover,mostly still believe the external outweighs the internal with a more vast impact. However, I personally have a balanced opinion on this topic and will then describe some relevant instances in the next paragraphs.

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Some people feel that entertainers such as film stars, pop musicians, or sports stars are paid too much money. Do you agree or disagree? Which other types of jobs should be highly paid?

Entertainment has been the top priority of the majority of people in this stressful world. So, entertainers like comedians and singers are earning more money than other professionals like doctors, and nurses. I completely agree with the notion that these people who are from the field of entertainment are earning much more than the previous decade.

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Describe a rule that is important in your school or at work. You should say: What the rule is about what happens when people break the rule. why you think it is an important rule and explain how you feel about the rule?

I believe that rules play a vital role in shaping people and the environment. Rules are everywhere and we should obey them in order to live a peaceful life. Today I would like to talk about a rule which is important at my workplace and the rule is not to grow nails. So, at workplace, we cannot grow our nails because we work with small children. As small children's skin is very delicate, we cannot have longer nails as it can harm children's skin. Along with that, we also have a rule of not eating junk food in front of small children because they would imitate us. Eating junk food is not a healthy option, We encourage children to eat healthy food every day. So, whenever we are eating in front of children we cannot have junk food otherwise children will also do the same. If we break any of the rules at school we get a memo, a memo is like a fine which is not good for a teacher to earn and if we get 3 memos we will be terminated from the school. In order to not get that memo we take car...

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Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

To begin, smartphones are utilized for long periods of daily life by few offspring. Increasing the technology in the present time so children use phones and this essay is a positive development for easy excess learning ability through the mobiles.

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