IELTS Writing Samples Band 7.5. Page 9

IELTS Writing Samples Band 7.5

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Many people still believe that riding a bicycle is the best way to get to places. What are the advantage and disadvantage of using a bicycle these days?

Nowadays, the trend of using the bicycle to travel to different places is becoming popular, a healthy approach to commuting in the cities. However, there are several benefits and some drawbacks associated with this approach. In this essay, I will enumerate some of these merits and demerits.

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Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the economic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely.

However, some people believe that unlimited information sharing in scientific research, business and the academic world is possible because the information will be used to create more value for society and the number of readers will not affect the cost of data collection which already occurred. I disagree with the above statement because the information-gathering process and analysis require high investment.

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In many countries, the number of animals and plants is declining. Why do you think this is happening? How can this issue be solved?

Recent years have seen a decrease in the number of different species of animals and plants all over the world. This mainly originates from directly devastating activities of human beings, which lead to dire consequences. This essay will suggest the causes and effects as well as solutions to this problem.

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Around the world, many adults are working from home, and more children are beginning to study from home because technology has become cheaper and more accessible. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

In recent years, there has been a notable surge in the adoption of remote work and remote learning worldwide because of the cost-effectiveness and increased accessibility of technology. While there are undeniable advantages to this trend, I contend that the drawbacks outweigh the benefits, particularly in terms of social isolation and blurred boundaries between work and home.

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A person’s health is their own responsibility rather than the government’s responsibility. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

It is believed by many that personal fitness is an individual's own responsibility and not a part of governmental responsibilities. However, I disagree with this sentiment and believe that while people do bear some responsibility for their health, the government should also take part in providing accessible Healthcare to its citizens, as health individuals are valuable contributors to economic growth and without regulations, false advertisements hinder their efforts to maintain a healthy lifestyle.

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Online classes make conventional classrooms unnecessary. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Since the breakout of the COVID-19 pandemic, virtual learning has become so popular that many people assume that it can replace traditional classes in the near future. While it is undeniable that cyber classrooms offer some benefits, I believe that they also pose various problems for students.

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Everyday people suffer from illness related to stress. what are the causes and what could be the solutions.

A lot of people are suffering from diseases that happen because of being under pressure. In this report, I will present the reasons, and then allow me to share some ideal solutions.

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The best way to plan a holiday is by not planning at all. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Going on a holiday is a luxury that most people cherish. Some people believe that the best way to enjoy this luxury is not to have no plan in place at all. I partially agree with this statement as I believe that although there are benefits to travelling without a strategy such as, increased flexibility, having some plan in place helps to adhere to time and budget limitations, making for a more relaxing holiday experience.

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Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmes (for example working for a charity, improving the neigbourhood or teaching sports to younger children). To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In today's world, the popularity of doing unpaid community service has increased. There are several advantages of doing society services for teenage students such as developing their soft skills. This essay agrees that community services should be part of high school programmes.

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In many places, new homes are needed, but the only space available for building them is in the countryside. Some people believe it is more important to protect the countryside and not build new homes there. What is your opinion about this?

Nowadays, most nations have problems with land around the city because they are looking for a place to build apartments. Some say that we do not need to build apartments in the countryside to protect nature. Personally, I do not agree with this idea, and in this essay, I will support my opinion with examples.

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While some think that the problem with education in poor countries is the teaching methodology used, others believe it is the lack of resources that is the real issue. Discuss both sides

It is thought by some that education in poor countries is not improved due to a methodology they are using while others say it is because of the lack of resources for teaching. In the following paragraphs, These viewpoints will be discussed before a conclusion is reached.

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Some people think that the amount of money spent on library is a waste as a new technologies are developing and replacing library functions. Do you agree or disagree?

In a developing society, people tend to believe in technologies rather than old sources of places which used to be crowded as libraries. On the other hand, we still assume that the best preservation of ancient books will be in libraries over generations. From my point of view technologies which are not capable enough to substitute libraries, can not replace them. It is still known that robots can not replace a person as technology can not substitute an ancient book.

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In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this?

It is true that nowadays, many individuals are eager to learn more about the historical stories of their houses, or the spaces they live in. There are many factors related to this phenomenon, and several effective methods can definitely be employed for people to conduct their research.

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Some people think that men and women have different qualities, therefore certain jobs are suitable for men and others for women. to what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is generally discussed that males and females possess various types of skills so both of these genders are specialised in certain professions. I partially agree with this statement for some reasons.

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Many people in cities today live in high-rise apartment blocks. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this type of living? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

The increasing population in urban landscapes has led to a surge in high-rise apartment buildings. While this trend offers several advantages, it also presents significant drawbacks that can not be ignored.

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For some people, shopping is not just about buying what is necessary, but is a form of entertainment. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

Shopping is a renowned activity done by folks in this modern world.However, it introduces a lot of concerns depending on people's perspectives while having this trend among them. Therefore, visiting malls on a regular basis does not merely fulfil their needs and what they want meanwhile it is a way of enjoying their leisure moment.In this essay, my contention will be further elaborated with its merits or demerits along with a logical conclusion.

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Some university students want to learn about other subjects in addition to their main subjects. Others believe it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for a qualification. Discuss both these views and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

In the Western world, universities have created course options for students, where they can select any subjects from different areas to gain credits for graduation. In the present scenario, some scholars are interested in learning about different topics in addition to their majors, while others focus only on their area of specialisation. As such, this essay will discuss both choices with some examples and conclude that both are valid choices.

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J. Multinational companies are becoming increasingly common in developing countries. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

Recent human advancements resulted in many changes in business and commerce worldwide. Multinationals have been increasing their presence globally including nations in development as potential markets. This brings benefits to countries' economies and creates new jobs, but there are also some disadvantages as it can affect local businesses and create economic dependence.

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In some countries, shopping online is replacing shopping at store. Discuss both the pros and cons of this trend.

Online shopping has taken over the world as it is the most reliable and quick form of a network in this growing age. In this generation people are majorly attracted to things with less effort, resulting in popular choice. The argument about internet shopping replacing in-person shopping is a controversy that is both agreed upon and disagreed with by many. The two sides of this disagreement will be thoroughly analysed and discussed in this essay before drawing a reasoned conclusion.

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Nowadays there is an increase in social problems involving young people because more parents spent time at work than with their children. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give specific reasons and examples to support your answer

In today's world, many parents spend more time at work rather than spending time with their children and teenagers feel alone. This essay totally agrees that young people's social problems have rapidly increased. There are several drawbacks to their academic life and mental health.

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