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The graph below provides the amount of books which were borrowed in four various months in 2014 from four village libraries, with the pie chart indicating the proportion of books that were borrowed over this period.

The graph below provides the amount of books which were borrowed in four various months in 2014 from four village libraries, with the pie chart indicating the proportion of books that were borrowed over this period.
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The graph below provides the
amount
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 of
books
 which were borrowed in four various months in 2014 from four village libraries, with the pie chart indicating the proportion of
books
 that were borrowed over
this
 period. As can be seen from the line graph, there had been
a sharp fluctuations
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 for only Ryeslip which
was
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differed considerably from the other
books
.
For example
, the highest and the lowest features reached
to
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300 and 100 of stuff respectively.
By contrast
, the rates for the other three kinds come by gradual changes: upward and downward. As regards the
first,
West Eaton and Church Mount
both
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were almost equal to each other.
Nevertheless
, these
occured
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are
 the same figures in June and September in comparison with Jule and August. It is clear from the pie chart that Fiction is rated as a popular sort of book for
the
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debt among the majority of all borrowed
books
, with
a
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just 43 per cent from
ocupying
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occupying
 people.
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