The given maps illustrate the layout of a school in 2004 and the plan for its transformation after a 20-year period.
The given maps illustrate the layout of a
school
in 2004 and the plan for its transformation after a 20-year period. In general, although
the school
will experience a dramatic transformation with the erection of a car
park and a school
building to have enough room for more students, the rest of the school
will remain nearly the same.
In 2004, the two buildings in the school
campus could cater for 600 students, they were separated by a path which led to the sports field at the North East corner of the school
area. However
, to meet the capacity of 1000 still, the sports field is expected to be moved to the East of the map for the erection of the third school
block. Meanwhile
the two original buildings will be linked by a small road. As regards the campus’s surroundings, even though the main entrance and the Add a comma
Meanwhile,
car
park in front still remain the same, the second car
park is projected to be constructed to the East of the campus. Furthermore
, a new road which runs through the map to connect the two car
parks from West to East will be erected.Submitted by weezel on
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