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The bar chart below shows the percentage of people who ate five portions of fruit and vegetables per day in the UK from 2001 to 2008.

The bar chart below shows the percentage of people who ate five portions of fruit and vegetables per day in the UK from 2001 to 2008.
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The bar chart provides information about
consumption
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the consumption
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 of
five
portion
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portions
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 of fruit and
vegetables
 per
day
 by males, females and kids in
United
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the United
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 Kingdom between 2001 to 2008. The data is provided in percentages.
Overall
, it can be seen that for the whole 7
years
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years,
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 females were top
consumators
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consumers
 of
this
 kind of food, followed by
men's
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men
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 and at least children.
As well
as in
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at
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 the
begining
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beginning
 of
period
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the period
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 people ate
less
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fewer
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vegetables
 and fruits per
day
 than
in
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at
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 the end of 2008.
However
, in 2001 more than 20% of
women's
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women
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consumpt
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consumed
five
 portions of fruit and
vegetables
, where it comes to
mens
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men's
men
 it was about 17%, and for children 13%.
After
this
 period consumption of
five
 a
day
 fruit and
vegetables
increase
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increased
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 slightly before reaching the
pick
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peak
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 in 2006
approximatelly
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approximately
 35%
ladies
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of ladies
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was
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apply
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ate
five
portios
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portions
portion
 of that food every
day
.
Furthermore
, in 2007
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the consumation
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consumation
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consumption
consummation
 of veggies and fruits experienced
slight
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a slight
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 decrease around 31% of females and
mens
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men's
men
 and kids were quite similar
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in proportion
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proportion
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proportions
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 about 26-27%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words five, vegetables, day with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "provides" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Trend analysis
  • Significant fluctuation
  • Dietary habits
  • Public health campaign
  • Demographic breakdown
  • Socio-economic status
  • Predictive suggestions
  • Consumption rates
  • Dietary guidelines
  • Technological advancements
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