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the chart below shows that Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. the table shows the salaries of the Anthropologist in work after five years

the chart below shows that Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. the table shows the salaries of the Anthropologist in work after five years
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The pie chart illustrates what anthropology
graduates
 in one university did after finishing their
bachelor
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bachelor's
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 degree, categorized by six distinct
destination
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destinations
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 and measured in percentage. Meanwhile, the table gives information about the four
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ranges
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range
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 of money they would receive after working more than 5 years based on three different
type
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types
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 of employment.
Overall
, the majority of
graduates
 would end up as a full-time worker.
Furthermore
, half of
graduates
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the graduates
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, who had worked in the
goverment
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government
 sector for more than five
year
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years
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, would receive
income
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an income
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more
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 than $100.000, the highest earnings among the categories. More than 50% of
graduates
chosed
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choose
chosen
chose
 to be a full-time employer. Part-time
worker
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workers
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 ranked the second place
of
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with
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 15%, followed by unemployed in third place, with 12%. The rest, namely full-time postgrad
student
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students
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, unknown, and both
of
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part-time
worker
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workers
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 and postgrad
student
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students
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 were below 10%, which were 8%, 8%, and 5%, respectively. About 10% of
privat
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private
employee
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employees
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 earned more money in the first category ($25.000-49.999) than the other groups.
Similary
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Similarly
,
this
 pattern
also
 happened in
second
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 group ($50.000-74.999) with 35% for
privat
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private
employee
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employees
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 and 15% for
other group
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another group
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.
However
, the rest of the range displayed different situations, since freelance
consultant
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consultants
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 and government
employee
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employees
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 surpassed the number of
the
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privat
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private
employee
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employees
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. The former ranked the first
positition
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position
 in
third
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 category ($75.000-99.999) and the latter
were
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the
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first place in
fourth
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 category ($100.000-above) at 50%.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words graduates, employee with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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