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IELTS Advantages and Disadvantages Writing Samples Band 6.5

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The cost of international travel is decreasing,and tourism is increasing in many countries. What are the advantages and disadvantages of the rising trend of tourism for countries.

Many people tend to travel to other countries due to a decrease in the cost of travelling abroad. In this essay, both advantages and disadvantages will be discussed before reaching my conclusion.

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IN SOME COUNTRIES, THERE HAS BEEN AN INCREASE IN THE NUMBER OF PARENTS WHO ARE CHOOSING TO EDUCATE THEIR CHILDREN THEMSELVES AT HOME INSTEAD OF SENDING THEM TO SCHOOL. DO THE ADVANTAGES OF HOME EDUCATION OUTWEIGH THE DISADVANTAGES.

IN AN EVER-PROGRESSIVE SOCIETY , HOMESCHOOLING IS NOW A NEW PRIORITY WHILE STUDYING AT SCHOOL HAS LOST ITS SIGNIFICANCE IN SOME PARENT'S PERCEPTION. IN LIGHT OF THIS, I CONTEND THAT THE DRAWBACK OF DEFICIENCY IN PROPER EDUCATION STRATEGIES AND TIME WASTING OUTWEIGH THE BENEFIT OF MORE CARE IS PROVIDED. IT IS VITAL TO UNDERSTAND THAT LACKING OF EDUCATION WILL SIGNIFICANTLY AFFECT OE'S CHILD STUDY PROCESS. IN OTHER WORDS, SOME PARENTS MAY NOT MAJORED IN EDUCATIONAL FIELDS OR LACK SPECIALISED KNOWLEDGE AND TEACHING EXPERIENCE. AS A RESULT, THE POTENTIAL OF TEACHING IN INAPPROPRIATE DIRECTION WILL RISE. TAKING MY NEIGHBOUR AS AN EXAMPLE, THESE PARENTS TRY TO PROMULGATE ACADEMIC LESSONS BUT DUE TO LACKING OF SPECIALISED EXPERTISE, THEIR CHILD HARDLY EVER FULLY ABSORB THE LESSONS. SOME PEOPLE, HOWEVER, JUSTIFIED THAT TAKING HOMESCHOOLING WILL BRING MORE EFFICIENCY AS THE PARENTS CAN KEEP TRACK OF THE STUDY PROGRESS MORE CAREFULLY. THIS BELIEF IS BASED ON THE COMMON THINKING THAT PARENTS C...

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There seems to be increasing trend towards assessing students through exams rather tah than Continual assessments. What are advantages and disadvantage?

Education is the utmost need of the contemporary era, so every individual is supposed to struggle to get enlightenment. But it's a major concern how to evaluate students to promote them in the next class and it is becoming ubiquitous all around the world to assess pupils through an annual exam system rather than a continual assessment. Annual evaluation via exams has certain benefits as it aids in making a merit of students and helps students to choose a subject for further studies but there will also be some drawbacks.

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In the past employees worked for small businesses but now many are working for large businesses. What are the advantages and dis advantages of this trend ?

It is thought by some that people in the past tended to apply for small companies instead of going to large businesses. In this essay, both advantages and disadvantages will be outlined before reaching a conclusion.

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In the past, when students did a university degree, they tended to study in their own country. Nowadays, they have more opportunities to study abroad. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this development? You should use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.

It is argued that pursuing study in another country gives more benefits rather than studying in their own country. This essay will elaborate on the advantages and disadvantages of studying abroad.

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In the future, robots will do more and more jobs instead of humans. Does this development have more advantages or disadvantages?

When I was young, robots were toys for children. Robots nowadays are different. They increased productivity, efficiency, quality and consistency. As a result, there is a trend that they are going to take over most of humans’ work in the future. In this essay, I am going to discuss what are the advantages and drawbacks of having robots complete tasks for men and why I think the advantages of that outweigh the disadvantages.

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Research shows that business meetings, discussions and training are happening online nowadays. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

It is true that there is an increasing number of businesses nowadays having their conferences and training sessions held online. While this can offer various advantages, it can also bring about some detrimental effects.

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Some expert believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school.Do the advantages of this outweight the disadvantages. According to some academicians, it is better to introduce a foreign language in elementary school than in secondary school. I agree with this view.

According to some, learning a new language at primary school is beneficial for children compared to learning it later in secondary school. According to a recent survey, student's learning capabilities are potent when they are young, and as they age their skill reduces for multiple reasons. Hence, I believe younger ones exposed to new languages get better advantages compared to senior ones and I have the following comparisons to substantiate my claim.

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Nowadays more and more people consume fast food on a regular basis. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend?

In the present day, the number of individuals consuming fast foods has gradually increased over the years. In my opinion, this trend might cause negative consequences in the long term. This essay will describe both aspects regarding the strengths and weaknesses with some examples.

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More and more people are leaving the countryside and moving to cities. Do the advantages of this trend outweigh its disadvantages?

The increase in basic necessities in the world has led the majority of people who live in rural areas to move to modern cities. In my opinion, both sides have negative and positive sides and I will explain each of them.

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The relatively recent development of games on phones, computers, and TV consoles is extremely popular with people all over the world. What are the advantages and disadvantages of such electronic games?

The modern enhancement of electronic gaming on smartphones, consoles, and personal computers is widely in demand with citizens around the globe. The majority of individuals support this innovation because of its numerous benefits. Nonetheless, some people prioritize discussing its drawbacks initially. In the subsequent essay, both the advantages and disadvantages of the subject will be thoroughly examined.

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Discuss the benefits of extra curricular activities to secondary school students. 400 WORDS

Engaging in extracurricular activities offers numerous benefits to secondary school students. These activities, which take place outside of the regular academic curriculum, provide students with opportunities to explore their interests, develop important skills, and foster personal growth. Here are some of the key advantages of participating in extracurricular activities.

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A company has announced that it wishes to build a large factory near your community. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this new influence on your community. Do you support or oppose the factory? Explain your position.

Having a factory around the neighbourhood is always troubling and beneficial to the inhabitants. If there were to be one in my community, the harmful impact would probably outweigh the positive influence.

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The way that people work today has changed significantly due to the development of technology. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of these changes.

Some people argue that the changes in the development of technology in the workplace have brought many disadvantages. However, I firmly believe these changes seem more advantageous because they make workers able to do their jobs without a limit of distance.

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Robots‌ ‌can‌ ‌free‌ ‌people‌ ‌from‌ ‌difficult‌ ‌and‌ ‌dangerous‌ ‌work.‌ ‌However,‌ ‌some‌ ‌people‌ ‌are‌ ‌worried‌ ‌about‌ ‌the‌ ‌possible‌ ‌dangers‌ ‌robots‌ ‌may‌ ‌create. ‌‌Discuss‌ ‌the‌ ‌benefits‌‌ ‌of‌ ‌using‌ ‌robots‌ ‌and‌ ‌the‌ ‌‌possible‌ ‌dangers‌‌ ‌from‌ ‌it.‌ ‌

It is thought by some people that using machines to work can ease users' hardship and harmfulness while others might say it is not safe to leave automation doing all the work. In this essay, both advantages and disadvantages will be outlined before reaching a conclusion.

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The threat of nuclear weapons maintains the world peace. The benefits of nuclear technology far out-weight the disadvantages.

In contemporary society, due to the development of technology, the interest in nuclear weapons has increased. The threat of nuclear weapons could be beneficial to our society such as inventing technology, however, I also believe this has harmful effects on not only society but also citizens's lives so that it can't maintain world peace.

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Some employers want their employees to be contactable for work purposes at all times. Does this attitude have more advantages than disadvantages?

There are requests for the availability of workers during different hours of the day by employers. Although, there are manifold benefits involved in this trend the drawbacks are by no means negligible. I assert the disadvantages of this trend outweigh the advantages.

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Chigozie Ogbonna: Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular. Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, it becomes increasingly common to buy things on the Internet like books, air tickets and groceries. In this essay, I will explain why the benefits of buying things online overshadow the potential drawbacks.

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In some countries, people prefer to rent a house than buy one. What are the advantages and disadvantages of renting a property?

In the modern era, anything can be rented such as houses, cars and bikes. Similarly, this is becoming common in most countries to rent a place to live rather than purchase a property. However, there are certain pros and cons of this situation that I will discuss in the upcoming paragraphs.

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Nowadays, technology is increasingly being used to monitor what people are saying and doing (for example through cell phone tracking and security cameras). In many cases, some people being monitored are unaware that this is happening. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, it is readily apparent that technology plays a vital role in human life and society. This development has been used to monitor the activity that people do in a day through many devices. In my opinion, the technology gives various positive consequences rather than drawbacks, which will be discussed in the following paragraphs.

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