Your child is going on a trip to another country for 3 days. School is looking for some parents who can join the trip and you decided to apply for the same. You are interested in going with trip. Write a letter to the head of the school and include: Why you want to join the team What you can do to assist Queries related to the trip.
Dear
Ms.
Mona,
I am Swastika Tusu, mother of your student Kistika Tusu, Grade II, Student No. 123456. I am writing to you in response to your notice regarding the school Change the punctuation
Ms
trip
to Blue
Mountains on 6th MayCorrect article usage
the Blue
,
2020.
Remove the comma
apply
To begin
with, apart from the information provided in the brochure regarding the trip
, I would like to get some more details on the same. First
, what is the main purpose of this
trip
during this
time of the year? Furthermore
, as it is 3 days long trip
, what essentials items should we pack for the trip
? Also
, how many teachers and students in total are going for the trip
?
As you are already aware about
Kistika’s condition. She has a dietary requirement and cannot consume dairy and gluten. Change the preposition
of
Also
, she must take her supplementary tablets every night after dinner. Would it be of any inconvenience to your team accompanying
the children on Change the verb form
to accompany
this
trip
?
I hope you will be able to help me resolve my queries. Please feel free to contact me if you need more information regarding Kistika.
Yours sincerely,
Swastika ShresthaSubmitted by 2011.swasti on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite
