The chart below shows the numbers of three types of visitor to a museum between 1997 and 2012.

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over a 15-year period, spanning from 1997 to 2012. It is evident that

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the

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of adult

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was more than the

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of teenagers and special

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between 1997 and 2012.

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, and special

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experienced a marked rise compared to the first year, the

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of children decreased. The figure elucidates that,

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, the total

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was 448100

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300100 was allocated to

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and the

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of youths was almost half of the

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, 120000, and the remaining 28000 accounted for the

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. In 2002, the

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of elders was equal to its

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in 1997, but in 2007 it reached a peak at 400500, and eventually it was 380000, which was less than the count in 2007.

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and in 2002, 2007, and 2012 it was 441200, 525200, and 504300 respectively. As depicted in the chart, the quantity of teenagers, who visited the museum, was 110000, and the

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of special exhibition

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was approximately one-

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29200.

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aged under 15, slightly decreased to 82300, and the

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of special

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reached 42000, which is almost

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half of the

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of youngsters.