IELTS Writing Samples Band 9

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It is often considered that change is more beneficial to people than trying to avoid it and have everything remain the same. Do you think advantages of change outweigh the disadvantages.

Some people think that the process of change in life is an integral part of everyone and has more pros than cons. In this essay, I will understand why opinions may differ. Firstly, I will discuss how change can positively affect an individual. Secondly, I will consider possible difficulties.

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Your friend recently moved to the same town where you live. Please write a letter to invite your friend to go to the gym together. In your letter o describe why you go to this gym o say what part of this gym you recommend o explain why you think it is suitable for your friend

First of all, I welcome you to our town. I am writing to know if you want to join me in going gym together.

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Some people today believe that it is acceptable to use physical force to discipline children, but others feel it is completely unacceptable. Discuss this view and give your opinion.

Whereas some individuals,nowadays,are fans of physical punishments in order to teach ethical issues to scions,the opponents convict such treatments with children.However,in my point of view,its associated dire consequences surpass in various aspects.Nevertheless,both sides are explained here.

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In many countries today, crime novels and TV crime dramas are becoming more and more popular. Why do you think these books and TV shows are so popular? What is your opinion of crime fiction and TV crime dramas?

In many nations, dramas and books about crime are being famous due to the fact that they provide constant entertainment. In my opinion, they alert the normal public about potential dangers.

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Ownership of mobile phones has risen dramatically in the recent years despite the potentially harmful effects they may have on our health and society. Governments should introduce measures to restrict ownership of mobile phones to those who need them for their work. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Owing to the hazardous impressions that using cell phones is associated with,some individuals expect governments to restrict the humans' access to this gadget except for citizens, who require to utilize that for occupational purposes.However,in my point of view,it is necessary for everyone to be free in terms of using their personal mobiles.Nevertheless,both sides are explained here.

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The system used for rubbish collection in your local area is not working properly. This is causing problems for you and your neighbors. Write a letter to local council. In your letter: o Describe how the rubbish collection system is not working properly o Explain how this is affecting you and your neighbors o Suggest what should be done about the problem.

Residence of Behnam street and I are dissatisfied with your rubbish collection system. Thus I am writing to inform you of this dire condition. I am absolutely convinced that your hired company which is responsible for waste collection is not working properly. Because it is always delayed leads to the accumulation of vermin around them. More importantly, it is dumped on the ground most of the time when garbage is collected and moved. It is generally known that house wastes, especially wet wastes make a contribution to an awful smell. Due to these unbearable circumstances, cats and dogs are seen in our surroundings all night which causes various diseases like rabidity and tetanus.

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Many would argue that scientific research requires a degree of oversight from the relevant governmental authorities. In my opinion, properly handled, this is a sensible and necessary policy. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

Supervision of responsible authorities on significant research, like a scientific one, has ALWAYS been debated. While some people do not agree with this policy, I do believe that researchers with the help of these rules are able to improve their efficiency which leads to more acceptable consequences.

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Some people think it's better to choose friends who always have the same opinions as them. Other people believe it's good to have friends who sometimes disagree with them. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

The general public believes that like-minded people are better connected with each other, nevertheless, there are those who oppose this point of view. In this essay, I will discuss both opinions and give my own one on the matter. Firstly, I will explore the way dissident friends affect us and secondly, I will write about how it is important for our mental health when there is someone who absolutely understands us.

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In some cultures, childrens are often told they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message?

In some countries, people think they should exaggerate the abilities of children and it is a cultural habit among them. So they usually tend to tell children that they could achieve anything if be hardworking. Although giving motivation would help younger people to have more confidence, it could have some negative points if they do not reach their goals.

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It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behavior to children ?

Penalizing,nowadays,is considered an impressive approach in order to revise scions' behaviours to prepare them for entering society.Whereas some debates have always existed about this treatment,in my point of view,it would be beneficial if is used properly.However,not only its associated footprints but different types of punishments are also uttered here.

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many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal .some people,however, think other types of progress are equally important for a country. discuss both views and give your own opinion.

It is considered by some authorities that growth in the economy of the nation is the most essential task which should be achieved. While, other experts argue that other progress, such as environmental improvement, and citizen safety also play an important role in a developed country. I opine that both contribute an equal portion of their benefits.

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Last month you had an overseas holiday with a friend from your college. They have just sent you some holiday photos together. In your letter: thank them for the holiday and the photos Explain why you didn't write earlier. invite them to come and stay with you

It felt like it just happened yesterday after I got the photos of us you sent me. It was a precious moment which allowed me to get away from the monotony of life. It was very generous of you that you invited and allowed me to stay over at your flat during our vacation.

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In the future all cars,buses and tracks will be driverless.The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantage?

In the next generations, we may travel anywhere without drivers. Some people claim that these innovations can comfort our life during travelling , while others argue that there are some drawbacks, like accidents, which can occur. From my point of view, I agree with the latter one that driverless vehicles may bring some problems to our societies. In the following paragraphs, Both views of these statements will be outlined in detail.

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Children can learn effectively by watching television. Therefore they should be encouraged to watch television regularly at home and at school. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people believe kids will have the ability to learn more effectively by watching TV and should therefore be more encouraged to watch more of it regularly at their private residence or at school. In this essay, I will explain why I do not agree with this statement.

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Some people say that parents should encourage their children to take part in organised activities in their free time. Others say that it is important for children to learn how to occupy themselves on their own. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Parenting is a huge challenge for any married couple ,especially how to shape them for the future or if their children's behaviour is worrisome how to tackle this issue and so on? It is believed that adolescents should be boosted by their elders to participate in well-managed exercises in their spare time, whilst it is considered by some masses that it is crucial for teens to allow them to know how to engage themselves on their own. In this essay, I will explain both views along with reasons, and examples and in the end will make my personal views.

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You are unhappy about a plan to make your local airport bigger and increase the number of flights. You live near the airport. Write a letter to your local newspaper. In your letter explain where you live describe the problem give reasons why you do not want this development

I am writing this letter to express my dissatisfaction with the new development of increasing the number of flights in the local airport.

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Big salary is much more important than job satisfaction. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, people work in different places and spend the most valuable time in workplaces, some believe that paying a huge amount of income is more necessary than job contentment. It is an inevitable fact that this idea can lead to decreasing the rate of life satisfaction and job performance. I strongly disagree that the huge salary plays the most influential role in the job span.

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In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It si therefore necessary for the government to impose a higher tax on this kind of food. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

The fast-food chain is the major cause of health issues that the vast majority of people have been suffering due to excess food consumption. I agree that government must implement a policy of paying high taxes on this type of food. I will give my examples and relevant evidence in the ensuing paragraphs.

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Big salary is much more important than job satisfaction. Do you agree or disagree?

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In the past shopping was a routine domestic task. Many people nowadays regard it as a hobby. To what extent do you think this is positive trend?

It is true that nowadays visiting malls and purchasing different kinds of tools or clothes is becoming a hobby, while in the past it was just an obligatory household task. Some critics maybe disagree with me, but I totally believe that it is a negative change in people's attitudes.

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