IELTS Writing Samples of Band 6.5

Should animals be kept in zoos? Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Whether animals should be kept in zoos or not has been a topic of heated debate for decades. Although some people insist that keeping wildlife in zoos is inhumane and cruel, I think that wild species should be held in zoos....

In major cities around the world, traffic congestion has become a serious problem. How can this problem be tackled? Give reasons and examples from your own experience

This is one of the most difficult questions to be answered. Reflecting, on my personal life, the first inspiration came from a hospital visit to India, where my grandmother was diagnosed with cancer and she had surgery. I met a few nurses on the ward who were looking after my grandmother and they were very caring, compassionate, supportive, and helped us to explain everything very briefly what will happen after surgery and what kind of care she will need. I saw nurses in every aspect of healthcare from admission to the theatre. It was my first visit in hospital as I have not been to the hospital before, but this visit blows my mind, then I make my mind to pursue my profession where I can interact with different people, support them, and can cure people directly. I got supportive family they support my decision to change my career from a bio-technologist to a nurse....

Some organisations believe that their employees should dress smartly. Others value quality of work above appearance. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, Intelligent and Hardworking employees are the heart of every successful company. In today's time, Few firms assert that their workman should look perfect, While some of them have more focus on quality of the task. In this easy, I will intent to discuss the both views before the reasonable conclusion can be drowned. In my point of view quality of the job is more important....

Compare the advantages and disadvantages of three of the following ways of learning a foreign language. State which you consider to be the most effective. - studying on your own - taking lessons with a private tutor - taking lessons as part of a class - taking lessons online - going to live in a country where the language is spoken

Nowadays, knowledge of foreign languages is one of the basic necessary skills and we have got a lot of opportunities to learn and improve it. For instance, we can choose a self-study way, especially given the vast array of educational resources, but in this case there are some disadvantages in the long learning period and the lack of feedback from the real person. We can also study with a tutor, but this option is more expensive and its effectiveness depends on the teacher. From my point of view, another option is the fastest and most efficient, but also the most stressful and difficult, it is to go live in the country with native speakers....

Some people choose to eat no meat or fish. They believe that this is not only better for their own health but also benefits the world as a whole. Discuss this view and give your opinion.

Being a vegetarian could save the world? On today's life, some people choose not to consume any kind of animal source product like meat. They have been saying, this situation is profitable for humans either our planet. While it is possible that health could be affected by healthier foods for the human body. In addition, with fewer cattle, sheep and fish farming, we could save our Earth's limited resources. This essay will discuss, why not to eat meat is more efficient for us totally....

It is often considered that change is more beneficial to people than trying to avoid it and have everything remain the same. Do you think the advantage of change outweighs the disadvantages?

Transformation is frequently believed to be helpful for the person. It is one of the hot topics which has been debated over time and again. However, certain people have the perception that things should stay the same without embracing any shift in their lives....

Some people think everyone should be a vegetarian, because we do not need to eat meat to have a healthy diet. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is believed by many that, to have a disease-free life, one should be a vegetarian, and eat food devoid of meat. I completely agree with this because while there are several benefits of feeding on mainly vegetables, the consequences of taking meat could be highly detrimental to health....

What are the pros and cons of using public transportation?

Public transport has become an essential service and one of the world’s main means of transportation. However, using public transportation has both merits and demerits, which are discussed below....

These days, we are seeing an increasing amount of violence on television, and this is having a negative impact on children's behaviour. Do you agree or disagree

Reopening of schools is a hotly debated topic that often divides opinion; most of the parents assume that distance learning is safer than the face to face learning in class. As the vaccine for the COVID 19 has not been invented yet. So it would be safer to comply with the safety measures....

Air travel has become cheaper than before. Some think it is a positive development. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Recently years, tickets for traveling by air have decreased to compare with the last few decades. Several people believe that friendly prices for an air journey are great possibilities for exploring a new destination, while others suppose that it has a negative influence on the environment. From my perspective, air travel tickets should not be cheap because it rises frequent flights for using natural resources and air contamination, as a result of harmful our planet's surroundings....

Some people think news has no connection to people's lives, so it is a waste of time to read the news in newspapers and watch television news programs. To what extent do you agree or disagree? You should write at least 250 words.

It is often a debatable topic in today's time, where people have started assuming about the irrelevancy of the media and news channels and it doesn't make any sense to be in touch with any of them and therefore, I disagree with the mentioned statement and will demonstrate how print media and news channels are imperative in today's period by updating people with the latest updated news....

Technology is becoming progressively universal. In the fullness of time, classroom teachers will be totally substituted for technology. Do you agree or disagree?

In this present world, the usage of technology is constantly on the rise. Even classrooms are among the many places that enjoy the usage and benefits of technology. It is disagreed that classroom teachers will be totally substituted for technology. Analysing the incapability of disciplining classroom students with technology, as well as the limitation in the learning process of students taught with technology will prove this....

some people believe that after the child begins his/her schooling their teacher will have more influence than their parents. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Children are quick learners and adopt the things considerably fast. Consequently, some people say students have more influence from teachers rather than parents, others say parents impact more. This essay will delve into both vantage points and, subsequently, will explain my own perspective, in turns....

Write about the following topic. A person’s health is their own responsibility rather than the government’s responsibility. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

It has been put into discussion that whether the government or the person himself is responsible for his health. I believe that nobody else but ourselves should take care of our own physical and mental condition for these two following reasons....

Using a computer every day can have more negative than positive effects on your children. Do you agree or disagree?

Computers are considered to be a friend and a foe of humankind. Be it any age, computer is used every day for various task completion. But, in specific, some believe that the continuous use of this electronic machine has more cons than pros for children. I agree with it to a great extent that using a computer on daily basis effects a child's health and cause problems like obesity and inactive lifestyle....

Smacking children is the best form of discipline. To what extend do you agree or disagree

One of the most challenging part of raising children for parents ishow to make them behave in a good manner. Some people think using physical punishment is the best way of training. This essay will argue that using corporal punishment is not definitely an accepted way of behaving with children....

World history suggests that violence and conflict were more evident under male leadership than under female leadership. So, for peace to prevail, female leadership can be considered as a better option than male leadership.

The history showed that Male ownership was always considered as the main contributor to crime and conflict. While a majority of people are apparently of the opinion that the male leads are most accepted in the world. However, I strongly disagree and believe that the claim is certainly wrong....

As countries develop, more and more people buy and use private cars. Do the advantages of this trend for individuals outweigh disadvantages for the environment?

Nowadays, with the improvement of the economy, a growing number of people believe that private vehicles are both beneficial and necessary. On the other hand, however, there is a body of opinion which holds that automobiles present a mounting threat to the environment, and should be eliminated. In this essay I will examine both sides of the debate to seek a conclusion....

In some countries, young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this.

Usually, young students after completion of their higher studies, they want to do the job or go for a trip in a year gap before starting university. This essay will elaborate the advantages and disadvantage of this trend....

Some people believe that children that commit crimes should be punished. Others think the parents should be punished instead.Discuss both views and give your own opinion

There is no doubt criminals should be penalized according to the gravity of their crime. However, there are some peolpe believe that, even, the young offenders need to be sentensed, the opponents of this argument says that the parents of these children must face the judisial encounters than their offsprings. In my opinion, the penalty should be based on the circumstances and emotional and intellectual level of the juvenile offender....