IELTS Writing Samples Band 6.5

These people claim that the government should finance only for public services regardless of thinking about funding in music, arts, and theatre. Personally, I agree that the government should focus on the public sector, though investment in cultural sectors is important as it plays a vital role in our society....
There has been a considerable amount of discussion going on among people about the present condition of water bodies. An enormous amount of waste is found in rivers and oceans which has generated a matter of concern for many. In this essay, we will discuss the causes of such conditions and the major steps should be taken to remedy the situation....
In this day and age, the role of women has significantly changed. They have participated in various sectors, such as manufacture or economy, instead of doing house chores. However, there is a debate about whether women are suited for police or military forces or not. From my point of view, females should be given an equal chance to work in these sectors....
Nowadays, most of people sometimes think that leadership is a genius when they were a kid. One the other hand other people say that leaders who spent a lot of time to learn personally. I would stand with those who support that we could study any skill to become a wonderful leader....
It is a well-known fact that the physical activity, such as walking, contributes to the healthy life, however, recent statistics shows that the number of people who frequently walk has dropped significantly over the past couple decades. This essay will analyse the reasons of such trend, and will give some mitigation ways to the status quo....
Nowadays, more people are migrating to other countries than ever before. This raises questions about whether these immigrants should culturally assimilate into their host country or should stick to their traditional lifestyle and live as a separate minority group. From my point of view, immigrants should embrace new customs while maintaining their old traditions....
In today's technology-driven world where people have interests in various fields, music is the only art which unites them across generations overcoming geographical boundaries. In my opinion, I agree that all forms of music irrespective of its origin and language will bring people together to celebrate and enjoy the notes just for the sheer beauty of it....
Recently, the number of people who can afford household goods such as television and vacuum cleaners is higher than it was in the past. This is because those apparatus is cheaper than it was some years ago. In my opinion, it is extremely positive how those products have become more affordable and this essay will present arguments to support my thought....
Nowadays, more people are migrating to other countries than ever before. This raises questions about whether these immigrants should culturally assimilate into their host country or should stick to their traditional lifestyle and live as a separate minority group. From my point of view, immigrants should embrace new customs while maintaining their old traditions....
It is true that having a good set of friends is indispensable in life. While some think that selecting friends with common views are better, but other people think it's good to have friends with different thinking. In this essay, I will discuss both sides of the arguments and support the latter view....
Issues related to space exploration are discussed these days. It is argued that taxes have been unreasonably invested in exorbitant research. Despite the fact that this trend has some advantages, I would argue that there are more disadvantages. The explanation will be shown in the following paragraph....
Few topics have drawn as much scholarly attention as the extinction of languages, especially in the past few years. Although there is substantial advocacy for this trend, I am of the opinion that this advocacy in unwarranted, as it fails to take countless drawbacks entwined with the death of languages....
It is argued by many individuals that there shouldn't be any taxes on their hard-earned money as they don't get many facilities from the government. This essay partially disagrees with this notion as the government need money to run the system....
Nowadays, the school life has become so hectic that one can not get enough time to get relaxed and rejuvenate himself, due to which many youngsters are intersted to get a break on their study for a year right after completing the schooling and before joining the university.This essay will describe both the merits and demerits of it with few examples ....
It is believed that cell phones have become a ery crucial thing for the children among all other gadgets like laptop and desktop. It is always the debatable issue that whether it is boon or bane for youngsters. Personally, I think that the mobile phone is not of any worth for children because its usage results in the significant reduction in their studying habit and playing mobile is unhealthy too....
Fast foods are becoming increasingly popular and enable people to eat whilst living in a fast-paced environment. In this essay, I will discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this rising trend. Firstly, I will discuss the advantages of fast foods. Secondly, I will consider the disadvantages....
It is believed that cell phones have become very crucial thing for the children among all other gadget like laptop and desktop. It is always the debatable issue that whether it is boon or bane for youngsters. Personally, I think that the mobile phone is not of any worth for children because, its usage results in the significant reduction in their studying habit and playing mobile is unhealthy too....
Physical activity is very important for children s development. Some of us think that this activity should be taught by parents and not by teachers because will be a loss of time from the school schedule.I agree with the view that parents should have an important role in their children sports education, but at the same time,it is compulsory to have sports lessons in schools....