IELTS Writing Samples Band 8.5

The ways of cuisine consumption of the human have undergone significant change in the past couple of decades. We have surpassed the traditional cooking methods, which undertook the importance of foods' nutritional value, and we have adjusted to a lifestyle depending on processed foods that are readily available to us. Even though they are some advantages, I firmly believe that the disadvantage far outweighs them. In this essay, I will discuss the reasoning for my perspective and provide relevant justifications....
Nowadays, people are facing overweight problems either due to their tight schedule or lack of physical exercises that could have negatively impacted their body. Some people reckon that this concern could be resolved by introducing various physical subjects during their children’s academic calendar. I will be examined why I feel that physical exercises play an important role in the holistic development of anyone, and primary school must start the sessions on sports, yoga and meditation....
it is true that wealthy people indeed have chances to help others in society nowadays, while I believe that people who have a warm heart without wealth can give some consolation to the person needed help....
Nowadays, people are facing overweight problems either due to their tight schedule or lack of physical exercises that could have negatively impacted their body. Some people reckon that this concern could be resolved by introducing various physical subjects during their children’s academic calendar. I will be examined why I feel that physical exercises play an important role in the holistic development of anyone, and primary school must start the sessions on sports, yoga and meditation....
In recent years it is become increasingly popular to watch criminal series and read crime novels. There are some blatant reasons for their popularity and I will discuss them in the following paragraphs and enforce with my own opinion....
In recent years it is become increasingly popular to watch criminal series and read crime novels. There are some blatant reasons for their popularity and I will discuss them in the following paragraphs and enforce with my own opinion....
It goes without saying that the world has developed throughout the years, especially in terms of education. However, some individuals claim that renowned institutions insist on teaching facts rather than practical skills, which is quite harmful to students. I tend to agree with that because, from my point of view, this is an outdated methodology and should be abandoned....
A section of society believes that the mainframe is necessary for everyday life. While others feel it is an interference in the present day. Technologies have outgrown in today's generation. Although the computer makes our work easier, it also has an impact on our lifestyle and thinking capacity. This essay will discuss what are the troubles that this development has caused us. In my opinion, computers are making us lose analytical thinking and we are a slave to process even a simple task....
It is believed by some individuals that shifting huge factories and commercialism to rural areas outside big city centres would be fruitful. Although this view has some pitfalls to the workers as well as industry owners, I will concur that the benefits outweigh, as aids in preserving natural beauty and combat pollution....
People have different opinions about gender equality. Some insist that there are men centric jobs that are not for women. Conversely, there are people who advocate for equality in the workforce. I will accord with the latter. In the upcoming paragraphs, I will put forth my views in detail....
People have different opinions about gender equality. Some insist that there are men centric jobs that are not for women. Conversely, there are people who advocate for equality in the workforce. I will accord with the latter. In the upcoming paragraphs, I will put forth my views in detail....
Some people argue that families with youngsters in private institutions should be exempted from paying taxes that fund universal schooling through the public school system. I disagree with this opinion because it will deny the government the needed revenue to fund public learning....
There are a lot of controversies surrounding the allocation of monthly stipends to the unemployed population of a country. People opine that those without work should receive some sort of benefits, however, it is opposed by some with the argument that it is completely wasteful. I concur with the latter that argues it is totally unnecessary and not needed....
The development of megacorporation around the world is enhancing the trend of international business to provide benefits to communities. I completely agree that having trade between corporations globally has positive impacts on everyone. Initially, this essay will argue that consumers satisfaction and then more employment opportunity are major benefits of opting for the globalization trend....
It is thought that working for a multinational company is the best way to understand other cultures. People from one nation are highly likely to be exposed to other nations in such organizations. I agree that working for an international structure can help in understanding foreign cultures....
The development of human society provides numerous channels for people to explore the world as well as learn the tradition of other countries. While the Internet gives the topics and related background for the places people interested, my view leans in the direction that travelling has irreplaceable advantages that media cannot outweigh....
The development of megacorporation around the world is enhancing the trend of international business to provide benefits to communities. In my opinion, having trade between corporations globally has positive impacts on everyone. Initially, this essay will argue that consumers satisfaction and then more employment opportunity are major benefits of opting for the globalization trend....
Over the past few years, youngsters being affected by obesity had been on the rise. This is mainly due to their diet which contains a lot of fat. As a result, they are facing many health issues at a very young age. Initially, this essay addresses the problems caused by obesity and in the latter half, feasible solutions are answered....
It is considered by some that self-employed is better than a position in a company or in an establishment. In my opinion, I agree because self-employed individuals have more opportunities to plan their own life without any disturbance....
The residents of different nations are able to have fast foodstuff in their streets due to the establishment of these shops around the world. This essay believes that the benefits of this outweigh the drawbacks. Initially, the essay will demonstrate why this type of cuisine is beneficial in the fast-paced era and then it will indicate some detrimental ramifications of having unhealthy food in our lives....