IELTS Writing Samples Band 8.5

While many opine that television and friends have a substantial impact on the growth of a child, I completely disagree with this view as in my opinion, parents hold a superior role in nurturing the young ones. In this essay, we will discuss the part played by both television or friends and parents in a child's life....
In the modern era, an increase in the number of stressed teenagers is a major concern across the countries. With each passing day, people do spend a lot of time while dealing with teenagers, that really made their lives complicated, there is enough chance for improvement. Huge numbers of people do react differently because of ample freedom. The present essay will discuss the topic in a broader manner....
In recent times, big corporations are replacing smaller business entities which are finding it harder to stay afloat. In my opinion, the prolific benefits of cheaper prices of products for consumers and diverse product choices that come with big companies do not overshadow the drawbacks of putting many small-scale organizations out of place and destabilizing the economy....
In the modern era, an increase in the number of products is a major concern across the countries. With each passing day, people spend a lot of time while dealing with products, that really made their life complicated, there is enough chance for improvement. Huge numbers of multinational companies do react differently because of ample freedom. The present essay will discuss the topic in a broader manner....
In recent days, the movement of having teams which combine people from many categories of age has seen a gradual increasing tendency in companies. I totally believe that the beneficial aspects of this outweigh its adverse points. The following essay will examine both views and also support my opinion....
In the modern era, an increase in the number of stressed teenagers is a major concern across the countries. With each passing day, people do spend a lot of time while dealing with teenagers, that really made their lives complicated, there is enough chance for improvement. Huge numbers of people react differently because of ample freedom. The essay will discuss the topic in a broader manner....
There is a common impression that banning all forms of advertisements would benefit the society as they are of no use and can be damage it as well. I fully disagree with this idea and this essay will explain further with reasons and examples to support the same....
It is believed by certain people that governments should restrain their funds for the amenities and well being of the host country only. However, I disagree with this statement. Nations must look at the broader picture and provide a helping hand to the underprivileged countries because it is feasible to do so and helping others means we are helping ourselves....
The population of the world is changing. The size of the existing human population exceeds the actual carrying capacity of Earth. It concerns demographers that the problem of overpopulation is affecting our lives. In order to confront the negative effects, it is important to find out what kinds of problems are caused and provide one probable solution for this issue....
Numerous characters deem the blueprint of an edifice which will be erected in a municipality, must get drawn and checked by the government; in contrast, certain groups of people oppose and affirm the investors of the construction must draw the design. In this essay, I will discuss, firstly, the merit a design approved by the government's specialists, and secondly, the negative aspect of neglecting the consent of the city planners, followed by a reasoned conclusion....
In the modern era, an increase in the number of stressed teenagers is the major concern across the countries. With each passing day, people spend a lot of time while dealing with teenagers that really made their lives complicated, there is enough chance for improvement. Huge numbers of people do react differently because of ample freedom. The present essay will discuss the topic in a broader manner....
The importance of things in human life have changed in past few years. Nowadays, there is a new trend of throw away, which is very prominent in many developed and developing country. Moreover, people usually buy certain things, use it for a short period of time and then discard it without even using it to the fullest. According to me, there are many reasons for this attitude, which includes globalisation as one of them. Also, it leads to many perilous results and these outcomes are elucidated in the further essay....
It is commonly believed, that big industry can contribute to the local people in terms of sport and social service. In my opinion, I agree to the above statement to a large extent as such act of kindness will bring the talented ones who cannot afford it, and charitable events can be helpful for those who are in need, along with which the company’s reputation will be increased....
Nowadays the rate of repeat offenders has surged drastically. People tend to commit more crimes after serving their first punishments. The major reason for this situation is the interactions that occur between fellow offenders and the best solution to fix such problems are to eliminate such interactions....
It is argued that the promotion of products is the main reason for consumerism, while, others believe that it can be neglected without paying heed to such brand promotions. This essay will discuss both the aspects, firstly, how such activities influence the mind of an individual in treating their skin problems. Secondly, by the ways,advertisements on a digital platform can be neglected without watching it entirely. In my opinion, I believe both things can happen which varies from person to person....
Bicycling is one of the healthiest forms of transportation but we have seen a drastic decline in terms of its number of users. We will discuss a few causes of this shift and ways in order to reverse this movement in the below essay....
Many individuals grumble about sleep at night which is a very common problem nowadays. It is due to the stress that is taken by a person which make his sleep more difficult and due to the smartphones which are used continuously. In this essay, we will discuss the cause of related issue and how to overcome it....
There is currently a contentious argument over the permission for people after 65 years old to performance. In my perspective, this controversial issue depends on various aspects, especially job demands and workers’ ability. This essay is going to examine this preference and analyze my opinion....
In today's fast-paced world, our mother earth faces the danger of extensive loss of greenery, which is forests, and many animals are on the verge of extinction. While some believe that global warming and the consequent climate changes pose a major threat to the earth, I could not agree more with this view....
It is true that text messaging apps have made communication between people easier than it was in the past. However, it is common to see people using abbreviation and wrong spelling when they are using those technologies. In my opinion, those apps can be a serious threat to the language because of the way people use it affects both grammar and spelling....