IELTS Writing Samples Band 7.5

It has been said that children should start their formal education as early as possible. Despite the many merits they may deprive of this argument, this essay will prove that the drawbacks are more justifiable by analysing how heavier academic pressure can be in learning at an early age....
There are numerous types of music that are played worldwide. However, an array of masses nowadays, less prioritize the classical one than other sorts of music like Pop, Rock, etcetera. There are enormous reasons behind this trend and this music should not be demolished....
With the advent of the internet, fast electronic mediums of communications have completely revolutionalised the traditional ways of exchanging information. One such modern medium of conversation is an email. Although this method has certain drawbacks in the workplace and in our personal communication, It has a lot of advantages which overshadow its weaknesses....
It is evident that the improvement in countries’ economy can bring a good quality of life to their citizens. Nevertheless, it can lead to the loss of human values such as some people might be driven only by money. In my opinion, I believe although it has some negative impact, economic growth by and large benefits societies greatly in many aspects....
A revenue-generating venture is an outcome of several elements working towards the same goal. And I completely agree with the view that marketing and promotion are two of those key contributors who play a significant role in the growth of a firm. In this essay, we will briefly understand their part in building a successful business model....
Advancement in technology opened doors to various methods of shopping. Shopping online has become one of the primary methods of purchasing goods and services. I totally disagree, with the author's point of view. Buying goods can only take up a few percentages of regular shopping methods, but will not lead to shutting down the majority of shops in cities and towns....
In the world we are living, advertisements have become an integral part of our lives. Television commercials, newspaper and social media ads are the most common means of reaching people. Some believe that adverts encourage one to buy unnecessary things, whereas, others think that they provide useful information about the new product. I agree with the notion of advertising products will improve the standard of living of people by helping them to buy appropriate items....
In this contemporary era, industrialization plays an indispensable role in everybody's life. There are myriad advantages and drawbacks of promoting industries to the countryside in order to consider the issues of houses and transport facilities. However, as per my perception, merits of this statement outweigh its demerits which will be discussed in upcoming paragraphs....
Nowadays, the large number of students tend to apply for various universities. Some people argue that the main purpose of this phenomenon is for students to work in the business industries after graduation, while others claim that public interest could increase due to a rise in the number of university students. In this essay, I will elaborate on both aspects of this phenomenon and discuss my statement....
The advancement in the field of information and technology has helped people in almost all areas and shopping is one of them. While there is a faction of people who favour the notion that such technologies have actually eased doing shopping nowadays, there is another group that opposes this belief. This essay will shed light on both the viewpoints and present my ideas on why I agree that online shopping has indeed helped people by making shopping easier and convenient....
Visionary people are very well known as an open mind people,Some of us argue that these peopleshould express themselves without any barrier.I agree with the view that everyone should have the freedom to express, but we have to maintain a limit especially public person because they could be seen as a leader....
Nowadays, unexplored places are preferred more as compared to the crowded and common such as desert and Antarctic. The best point of nature is usually located at intense geographical conditions. This essay will discuss both the merits and demerits of visiting rare spots. Whereas the wonderful views give splendid memories but it comes along with the troubles of such harsh climates....
Advancements in technology and transport methods have allowed people the freedom to travel and work from any place. While some people argue that this has so many benefits such as increased flexibility and communication between people, other people think otherwise. In my opinion, I believe that the upsides outweigh the downsides....
Including Physical Education exercises into school schedule is essential as some people think, while their opponents consider that subjects of precise-science are crucial. In my opinion, although it is great for children's academy performance to play sports activities, it is more important to study scientific subjects....
It is true that nowadays it is by far preferable for children to spare their time reading books rather than watching the television and playing computer games. Although I completely agree with the previous statement, I also consider that children need to be allowed to have an enjoyable time doing whatever they want....
There is no doubt that today employees devote extravagant time to their work, as a result of which they usually get stressed. This essay shall highlight various reasons and present a solution for the same....
The world around us has definitely changed with the advent of technology. Human being nowadays are been monitored via their electronic devices by various organisations\individuals. In many cases, people are not aware of this happening. This essay will discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this evolution. This essay will also discuss how I feel the advantages of this development don't outweigh the disadvantages....
To be extremely famous, such as a basketball star, can result in positive outcomes as well as negative ones. This essay discusses whether there are more merits or more drawbacks about being a celebrity and I believe that the advantages outweigh the disadvantages....
Continuing education is an important thing to do in our life, especially starting university. However, assuring your mental and psychological are more vital before you enter to university. Therefore, some young folk like to choose a gap year for travelling or gaining work experience in order to refresh their mind before taking that big step. Even though it is a good notion for some people, but there is still a group of people who think that is really waste their time. So, in this essay, I would like to explain why it is wholesome for those students as well as the plausible conclusion regarding that matter....
In today's world, there is a large number of discussions on the topic of the provision of social and sports activities by companies located nearby. I believe that this measure will be beneficial for local communities and simultaneously will not put any obligations on firms which are going to provide these facilities. Firstly, this essay will answer the question, why local organisations should provide sport and social facilities and, secondly, it will analyse the other side of this scheme....