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Some people think that it is too difficult for poor people or people from rural areas to go to university. So that the universities should make it especially easy for them.

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These days, the higher institute is becoming important for humanity to gain knowledge of their working life, but it is opined by few masses that it is hard for poor
people
 which belong to the countryside area to go to university. So the higher institute must make it easy for them. I completely agree with
this
 statement because poor
people
also
 need to increase their knowledge for getting the job easily.
To begin
 with, the major reason why it must be easier is that until now a lot of humans still not get a reasonable education which is really important for
people
 and they do not get the education because they do not have money to pay the fees so
that is
 why universities must help them with giving them a cheaper fee or free fee until they get a degree and can get a job which can help them to live their life.
For example
, if they get free fee until they get a degree from the course they are studying in, it can help poor
people
 get jobs easily which can reduce the number of unemployed communities in the country, in
this
 case, multiple crowds can live their life cheerfully with their family. Moving
further
, another reason is most of the universities are located in the city which is extremely far for the population who are living in unsophisticated areas and
also
, they are underprivileged, so they do not have money to pay for the transportation which can bring them to the higher institute. For
this
 reason, the higher vacancy should be built in every rural area which would be an aid for
people
 to study there and
also
 it will benefit the needy society to save their money because they do not have to pay for transportation. In conclusion, every human whether they are affluent or impoverished must study and gain more knowledge since it is extremely useful for them and with the help of the government it will be simpler for underprivileged
people
 to study in the educational institution
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • barriers
  • limited access
  • financial constraints
  • equality and diversity
  • comprehensive approaches
  • scholarships
  • mentorship programs
  • academic support
  • root causes
  • maintaining academic standards
  • fairness
  • merit-based
  • inclusive higher education system
  • social and economic benefits
  • dynamism
  • innovation
  • tailored support
  • admission criteria
  • inclusive approach
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