THE FOREST AND THE NEED TO PRESERVE IT. WHAT DO YOU THINK ABOUT THAT?
In recent times, a lot of attention has been drawn to the need to protect the forest.
Although
, some persons
argue Replace the word
people
otherwise
, however
, I believe there are benefits in
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to
the
wildlife. Correct article usage
apply
This
essay will discuss in detail some of the advantages of securing forest life.
To begin
with, the protection of natural bushes can serve as a source of revenue generation for the government. Accordingly
, uncultivated areas and landscapes of aesthetic appeal usually serve as a
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attraction
to both locals and foreigners who travel great distances and pay a significant amount of money to have Fix the agreement mistake
attractions
such
experience
. Correct article usage
an experience
For example
, a recent study shows that the income generated from tourist sites in Nigeria has doubled in the last
decade. Therefore
, even if the authorities invest heavily in natural reserves, it will impact the economy positive
Furthermore
, conserving faunas and floras help
in achieving a balanced ecosystem. Correct subject-verb agreement
helps
As a result
, a predator-prey relationship is checked. For instance
, if there was an overpopulation of prey, this
could lead to increased
incidence of zoonotic diseases which can have devastating outcomes on the public. Correct article usage
an increased
Hence
, it is important to protect the wild for health reasons.
Lastly
, some untamed species are endangered and at risk of extinction due to
the activities of a man like poaching. Consequently
, through various conservation projects, a host of these organisms are secured. To further
illustrate, following recent law
prohibiting deforestation by the federal government, new Fix the agreement mistake
laws
breed
of species were able to be identified and placed in reservation sites. Fix the agreement mistake
breeds
Thus
ensuring their safety.
In conclusion, I am of the opinion that the protection of wildlife has numerous advantages to society and conscious effort should be tailored into securing them.Submitted by joshuaosarenmwinda on
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