“Some people feel that education should be provided exclusively by the state, and that private education should be prohibited.”
With the rising cost
in
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of
education
, every parent must decide whether to give their children a state-run education
or private education
. Some societies feel that education
should be entirely state run and not a privatized one. In this
essay, I will completely agree that education
should be state run and private education
should be banned.
Firstly
, banning private education
will give an equal chance to everybody. Some parents feel that a private education
will give a biased advantage to those who are able to afford it. This
might be evident when students apply for tertiary education
as they are often given preference over students from other schools. Also
, being in a private school
might raise a form elitism in the children from the start. This
was shown in a research conducted recently among a group student from private schools and state-run schools. With these few instances banning of private education
will be on most parent’s mind
.
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minds
On the other hand
, private education
tends offer
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to offer
wider range
of curriculum for its students. They Suggestion
a wider range
also
tend to employ the best of professionals for their teaching position. This
can also
be seen by the high standards and marks attained by the students. Private
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Private schools
The private school
school
also
tends to pay close attention to each individual as they tend to teach in small group environment
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a small group environment
For example
, a private school
class may only consist 10 -12 students compared to a state-run school
who has up to 20 plus students in one class. Therefore
, having a private education
system might not be that bad Afterall.
In conclusion, with the benefits of having a private education
system but not everybody will have access to it. Therefore
, I completely agree that a state-run education
is of
the best interest for everybody and banning of private Suggestion
in
education
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