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Many aspects of the way people dress today are influenced by global fashion trends. How has global fashion become such a strong influence on people’s lives? Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

Modern fashion has been hugely impacted on people in today’s globalized world.There are several factors attributed to changing fashion trends. I believe it is largely a negative development because it can pose a threat to both an individual country’s culture and the environment.

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You are going to write a persuasive essay in response to the following: “How do you think the issue of overpopulation should be tackled?”

The world's population is increasing rapidly, and it is causing several problems. This issue has sparked considerable debate. This issue can be tackled by running awareness programs about family planning and by making strict policies regarding the number of children a family can have. This essay will present the possible solutions to control the world's population.

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Many children today are overweight. This is a serious health problem. Give the reasons for this problem and give solutions to fix it.

Society has changed a great deal, and that includes the eating habits of children. Today, many children suffer from obesity. This is a serious global issue. This essay will examine the reasons for child obesity and the solutions to help this problem.

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In many places large shopping malls are replacing small shops. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this development? Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

In modern society, life has changed a great deal. especially in how the shopping malls change. This includes the change of the large shops and the small shops. Some people believe that the large malls have many positive points. However, others prefer the small shops. Thus, both views have significant points. This assay will provide key information to explore the topic.

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Hard work and determination are the main requirements for success in life. Others think that other factors are more important. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Opinions are divided. Some consider that to become successful , people should work hard and be dedicated to their decisions, while others believe factors such as funding and family play a crucial role in achievement. From my perspective, hard work and being determined are the most essential factors required for success.

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Many students graduate high school in their country and want to continue their studies in another country. Give the reasons why students want to study overseas and give some problems they might have.

In modern society, life has changed a great deal, especially in how students graduate. This includes many reasons and problems. Most people believe that studying in another country has many causes. However, others believe that it has many problems. Thus, both points have significant points. This assay will provide key information to explore the topic.

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Some say that today's life is better than it will be in the future; others disagree and say that in the future life will be better than now. Discuss and include your opinion

While some people say that the future life is better than the present time, I side with those who believe that today is the best life we can get. This is because we do not know what lies ahead tomorrow, as it contains high risks we never know about, so we only live our breath now.

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Some people believe that using a bicycle as the main form of transport has a lot of advantages, whereas others think that it has many disadvantages. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Bicycle is a widely known transportation that have been used for a long time. It was even used by our ancestors. I personally agree that bicycle has a plenty of advantages, but they should come along with a proper environment and equipment. So in this case, I am still in between both sides, and this essay will explain the reasoning behind it.

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Write an essay using all the notes and giving reasons for your point of view. A lot of young people take a gap year before they start university. Do you think this is a good or a bad thing?

It is undeniable that the younger generation has a lot of pressure while they are deciding their future studies. Nowadays, a lot of them opt for taking a gap year before they start their education in universities. In my opinion, I believe it is not a bad idea to take some time before university if students ise it well, whereas some people would disagree with it.

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Some people feel that entertainers such as film stars, pop musicians or sports stars are paid too much money. Do you agree or disagree? Which other types of job should be highly paid?

Some people might argue that entertainers such as actors, musicians or athletes are paid too much and we should focus on unemployment or other issues in the country. I strongly disagree because most of the time entertainers are getting paid with tickets or sponsorship. This money is spent willingly by fans, so it does not come from taxes or reduce funding for unemployment and other public services.

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The behavior of students in class is becoming worse and worse.. What are the causes of this? What solutions can be offered?

It is argued that the number of students misbehaving in class is dramatically increasing. I believe that this is caused by an incorret and exaggerated use of online platforms and social media, which results in insufficient time dedicated to sports and recreational activities. Parental supervision and guidance could be a way to tackle the problem.

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Higher education should be available to students according to their ability rather than their family's financial situation. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is often argued that higher education should be available to students according to their ability rather than their family's financial situation. However, I personally agree with this view because it promotes equality of opportunity and allows talented students to contribute to society.

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Some people think it's better to choose friends who always have the same pinions as them. Other people believe it's good to have friends who sometimes disagree with them. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

It is often debeated whether people should perfer friends who share the same opinions or those who sometimes hold different views. While some belive that the samilar opinions create stronger and more comfortable friendships, the other argue that disagreement can be beneficial. In my opinion, having friends who occasionally disagree is more valuabe in the long run.

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Only people who earn a lot of money are successful. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

It is argued that success only comes from high salaries. I completly disagree with the statement, since I believe success to be a subjective concept, not only measurable through the amount of money earned.

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Some people believe that governments should spend more money on public transport, while others think that building more roads is a better way to reduce traffic congestion. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

There is an ongoing debate over whether the government should invest in building more roads or allocate more funds to public transport to combat traffic congestion.While expanding the road network has some benefits, such as reducing traffic congestion, I believe that improving public transport is more effective because it can reduce congestion and allow people with financial difficulties to travel around the city at a lower cost.

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Students should be allowed to choose academic courses or practical courses, e.g carpenters. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is argued that students should be able to choose between academic and practical courses. I completely agree with the previous statement, since I believe that everyone, especially young people, should follow their passions and inclinations.

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The illustrations show how chocolate is produced. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. IELTS Process - Chocolate Production

The diagram illustrates the process of producing chocolate from cocoa beans. Overall, the production involves several stages, beginning with the harvesting of cocoa pods and ending with the production of chocolate. The beans are gradually processed through fermentation, drying, roasting and grinding before being turned into chocolate.

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Some People think that Multinational Companies could help to boost the development of a state, while others claim that Multinational Companies capitalize labors and exploit a particular country’s resources. Discuss both sides and give your opinion!

Multinational companies (MNCs) play an important role in the global economy. Some people believe that these companies can accelerate the development of a country, while others argue that they exploit workers and natural resources. In my opinion, MNCs can provide significant benefits, but they need to be properly regulated by the government.

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Nowadays transportation is a major problem in every developing city. Many people opine that it is more important to spend money on roads and motorways than in public transport system. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

Transportation plays a major role in our day-to-day lives , and as most developed species, we are known for our ability to move. Nowadays, there are multiple ways to go from one place to another. These days, the general public is debating whether, money-wise,roads and motorways development need to be focused on more or public transportation. In my opinion, I believe that both play a vital role in our community, I partially agree with the statement considering the importance of ways of transportation and public services.

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Even though globalisation effects the world's economy in a very positive way, its negative side should not be forgotten. discuss both views

Globalisation has played a huge role in the development of the various nations throughout the past years. Nowadays, it is a topic of discussion whether its benefits should be appreciated more, or whether we should consider the negative impacts of globalisation on world wide economy more. In the following paragraphs, this essay will discuss both, pros and cons of internationalisation.

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