IELTS Writing Samples of Band 5.5

Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion

It has been observed annually that different languages go into extinction. Some individuals believe that this development is unimportant because life will be more convenient if there are reduced native tongues globally. In my own view, I disagree with this perspective because language is essential for preservation of cultural heritage and maintenance of individual's identity....

Some people think that teachers should be responsible for teaching student to judge right and wrong and to behave well. Some say that teacher should only teach students about academic subjects. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

There is a general opinion about tutors whether they should be held applicable for personal grooming such as decision making and atequates or only focus on distributing knowledge from books. This essay will enlighten these concepts and will further share personal perception on this topic....

Some parents buy their children a large number of toys to play with, What are the advantages and disadvantages for the child of having a large number of toys.

Toys plays vital role in the development of children. Buying toys is an increasingly popular trend and every now and then parents buy toys resulting in large number of toys with children .This essay will discuss advantages and disadvantages of this trend....

Some parents buy their children a large number of toys to play with, What are the advantages and disadvantages for the child of having a large number of toys.

Toys plays vital role in the development of children. Buying toys is an increasingly popular trend and every now and then parents buy toys resulting in large number of toys with children .This essay will discuss advantages and disadvantages of this trend....

People are becoming too dependent on the Internet and phone. Is it a positive or negative development?

Nowadays, the internet and phone are part and parcel of every single person. It has been viewed that many people are relying on this technological life a lot. Despite the positive development of internet and phone on individuals; however, i resolutely opine that technological dependency has taken us far away from the fundamental life concerns, which is indeed a negative aspect. This essay will argue that the internet and phone mostly have negative facets on the people’s life despite having few positive sides....

It is better for young to get advice from older people than young people. Do you agree or disagree?

while some people prefer advice from young people, another one prefers from older, in that essay, I'm going to give my point but explaining both because this topic is polemic and controversial....

Some people believe that technology has made man more social. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Experts throughout both the developing and developed world have debated whether the advent of sophisticated modern technology such as mobile phones, laptops and iPad have helped to enhance and improve people’s social lives or whether the opposite has become the case. Personally, I strongly advocate the former view. This essay will discuss both sides using examples from the UK government and Oxford University to demonstrate points and prove arguments....

students perform better in school when they are rewarded than punished. to what extend do you agree or disagree ?

while some people believe that suffering if helpful,in my opinion,the most of part prefer the way that rewards student, in that essay I'm going to show both of sides but I know that is a polemic topic and controversial....

With the increased global demand in oil and gas, undiscovered areas of the world should be open up to access more resources. To what extend do you agree?

in my point of view, we need stop this as soon as possible, we should stop it and save the nature to the prospective, politics should protect this undiscovered area and invest in another kind of energy, in that essay I'm going to give my point about this but I know that is a polemic and controversial topic....

Buying things in the internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries is becoming more and more popular. Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages?

In this contemporary era, it has been becoming so popular to use online sites for shopping. People prefer to buy things online instead of going to shops. Due to its numerous benefits, this trend outweighs its drawbacks. The two prime advantages of online purchasing are convenience and discounts; however, the main disadvantage that is fraud payment cannot be ignored. This essay will not only cover both aspects in detail but also support the arguments with relevant examples....

Some people think that women should not be allowed in police force. Do you agree or disagree?

A certain section of the society believes that women should not be present in police department. I completely disagree with this statement, because women bring strength and diversity to the group and support the administration in solving cases related to female victims....

One problem face by almost every larger city is traffic congestion. What do you think the causes are? What solutions can you suggest?

Indeed traffic congestion is one of the biggest problem faced by almost every larger city in the world and it is irritating for every citizen residing in the city. I have briefed the major causes and problems related to it....

In many countries good schools and medical facilities only available in cities. Some people believe that new teachers and doctors should work in rural area for few years, but some think everyone should be free to choose where they work, discuss both and give opinion.

Basic education and healthcare should be available to each person in the country irrespective of whether a person is from a rural area or an urban city. But in most countries, this is limited to cities only. Many people think newly graduated teachers and doctors should spend the early part of their career in rural areas while others think they should have a choice. In my opinion, although it can beneficial to give everyone a choice, I believe that new teachers and doctors should work in rural areas for some time....

Some people believe that technology has made man more social. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Experts throughout both the developing and developed world have debated whether the advent of sophisticated modern technology such as mobile phones, laptops and iPad have helped to enhance and improve people’s social lives or whether the opposite has become the case. Personally, I strongly advocate the former view. This essay will discuss both sides using examples from the UK government and Oxford University to demonstrate points and prove arguments....

The government should pay to the parents of very young children, so that one of them can stay at home and look after their children. What do you think are the pros and cons of this policy? Justify your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

It is often noticed that parents are not able to spend ample amount of time with their juveniles due to their hectic work schedule. The authorities must take the initiative of assisting these families financially, so either of the parents can stay with the child. This task will enlighten the benefits and drawbacks with an appropriate example of paying salary to different households....

Today's teenagers have more stressful lives than previous generations. Discuss this view and give your own opinion.

In this fast-paced world, everyone is under immense strain to meet their deadlines at work or achieve a good grade in their academics. In this regard, youngsters, of late, are subjected to excess pressure than their ancestors or parents. Some of the paramount reasons include completing their assignments in their academics and also to land a well-paying job that could alleviate their economical burden....

The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in cities and town closing. Do you agree or disagree?

In the modern society, many people shop thru online and the online shopping industry growing up rapidly. Because it has many benefits. Therefore, some people believe that all of offline shops will close because of online shopping. I disagree about this perspective. Online shopping has not only a lot of benefits but also has drawback....

Tell me about yourself, what do you do. Do you agree or disagree

I am a graduate of Nursing Science from the Ladoke Akintola University of Technology, Ogbomoso, Oyo State, Nigeria, a Registered Nurse/ Midwife. I have over ten year’s progressive work experience both in hospitals and clinic settings. I believe my combination of teamwork, interpersonal, health education counseling and communication skills will make me a successful addition to your team....