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In many countries around the world, rural people are moving to cities, so the population in the countryside is decreasing. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

These days, public debate has been going on over whether, in many countries, local people moving to cities has decreased the population in the countryside. I tend to believe that a decline in the rural population has a positive impact because it can keep the countryside safe and clean.

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Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. others ‚however, believe that school is the palce to learn this. discuss both these views and give your opinion.

Nowadays, the importance of instilling values in children has been emphasized. While some point out that it is mainly the task of parents at home, others argue that it is the responsibility of schools. Personally, I think that the role of educating children is a duty for parents as well as teachers and educators. In this short essay, I will address both perspectives before presenting my opinion.

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Some people argue that primary schools focus too much on formal learning. To what extent do you agree with this opinion? How important do you think it is for children to play as well as learn in the primary school classroom? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Primary education plays an important role in fostering cognitive development. While, some people believe that many elementary schools focus on formal learning is causing burnout. However, I believe that it is crucial that for schools to include some leisure activities with learing to help in child cognitive development.

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Many people around the world use social media every day to keep in touch with other people and get news events. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

It is widely considered that currently social media is being utilised by a mass of people in order to communicate with other people and be aware of news events. From my perspective, this trend involves more benefits than drawbacks as it reduces the difficulties of distance.

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In some cultures, children are often told they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advanatages and disadvantages of giving children this message?

In some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. This topic is important in many cultures. This message has both advantages and disadvantages.

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Some university students want to learn about other subjects in addition to their main subjects. Others believe it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for a qualification. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

These days, public debate has been going on over whether, in many countries, local people are moving to cities, which has decreased population in the countryside. I tend to believe that a decline in the rural population has a positive impact because it can keep the countryside safe and clean.

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The internet has become so popular that many people use it for reading and learning. Some suggest that it could replace the use of books as the main source of knowledge for education. To what extent do you agree?

Society is very different today from the past. The internet is considered a huge part of life. I partially agree with people who think that the internet has become so popular. However, I disagree with people who think that the internet can replace the use of books. This essay will provide evidence to support my opinion.

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Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor.Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

These days, an increased number of people are tend to use alternative treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor. Some people believe that this treatment is cheaper and more convenient, while others argue that visiting a doctor is an essential for identifying health problems. I believe that is a negative development because taking medicines without advice from a qualified doctor may dangerous.

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Most countries have traditional celebrations that ocur annually. İn Your opininon, what benefits do these celebrations have for society? Support your opinion with reasons and examples from your own knowladge or experience.

In today's increasingly westernizing world, numerous countries still celebrate traditional festivals. These occasions have been a very integral part of their culture in promoting culture and traditions and instilling family values in the future generations and social awareness too.

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Some people prefer living in the countryside, while others prefer living in cities. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some people prefer living in the countryside, while others prefer living in cities. Both places have advantages and disadvantages. In my opinion, living in a city is better because it provides more opportunities and services.

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In some cities, public parks and open spaces are being changed into gardens where local residents can grow their own vegetables and fruit. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

It is widely considered that open places and public parks are being changed so that local people can cultivate their plant life. From my perspective, environmental changes should have more advantages than disadvantages.

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Most countries have traditional celebrations that ocur annually. İn Your opininon, what benefits do these celebrations have for society? Support your opinion with reasons and examples from your own knowladge or experience.

In today’s rapidly evolving world, it is becoming increasingly among numerous countries to celebrate traditional events annually. I tend to believe that these celebrations can bring about positive outcomes to societies, including promoting cultural awareness and social cohesion, resulting in societies’ development.

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Many aspects of the way people dress today are influenced by global fashion trends. How has global fashion become such a strong influence on people’s lives? Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

Modern fashion has increasingly impacted on people in today’s globalized world.There are several factors attributed to changing fashion trends. I believe it is largely a negative development because it can pose a threat to both an individual country’s culture and the environment.

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You are going to write a persuasive essay in response to the following: “How do you think the issue of overpopulation should be tackled?”

The world's population is increasing rapidly, and it is causing several problems. This issue has sparked considerable debate. This issue can be tackled by running awareness programs about family planning and by making strict policies regarding the number of children a family can have. This essay will present the possible solutions to control the world's population.

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Many children today are overweight. This is a serious health problem. Give the reasons for this problem and give solutions to fix it.

Society has changed a great deal, and that includes the eating habits of children. Today, many children suffer from obesity. This is a serious global issue. This essay will examine the reasons for child obesity and the solutions to help this problem.

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In many places large shopping malls are replacing small shops. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this development? Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

In modern society, life has changed a great deal. especially in how the shopping malls change. This includes the change of the large shops and the small shops. Some people believe that the large malls have many positive points. However, others prefer the small shops. Thus, both views have significant points. This assay will provide key information to explore the topic.

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Hard work and determination are the main requirements for success in life. Others think that other factors are more important. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Opinions are divided. Some consider that to become successful , people should work hard and be dedicated to their decisions, while others believe factors such as funding and family play a crucial role in achievement. From my perspective, hard work and being determined are the most essential factors required for success.

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Many students graduate high school in their country and want to continue their studies in another country. Give the reasons why students want to study overseas and give some problems they might have.

In modern society, life has changed a great deal, especially in how students graduate. This includes many reasons and problems. Most people believe that studying in another country has many causes. However, others believe that it has many problems. Thus, both points have significant points. This assay will provide key information to explore the topic.

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Some say that today's life is better than it will be in the future; others disagree and say that in the future life will be better than now. Discuss and include your opinion

While some people say that the future life is better than the present time, I side with those who believe that today is the best life we can get. This is because we do not know what lies ahead tomorrow, as it contains high risks we never know about, so we only live our breath now.

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Some people believe that using a bicycle as the main form of transport has a lot of advantages, whereas others think that it has many disadvantages. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Bicycle is a widely known transportation that have been used for a long time. It was even used by our ancestors. I personally agree that bicycle has a plenty of advantages, but they should come along with a proper environment and equipment. So in this case, I am still in between both sides, and this essay will explain the reasoning behind it.

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