You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. A good friend has just changed schools and is having difficulty fitting in and needs your advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • make suggestions as to how they could make friends • suggest joining clubs, participating in school activities • give any extra general advice You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear..., You should write at least 150 words.
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Dear Emily,
I hope you are doing great and coping well with the
school
. I am writing you this
letter, filled with some tips and tricks to help you get adjusted in
your new Change preposition
to
school
.
Firstly
, be confident and open, I understand it is hard to make friends but confidence is the key to achieve
it. Girls love Wrong verb form
achieving
such
nature and will reach you to be friends with you. You will get prominent in teacher's
eye too which is another benefit.
Correct article usage
the teacher's
Secondly
, join different school
clubs and choose wisely as it should be the place where your intrest
lies. Correct your spelling
interest
Also
, take
part in different class activities Wrong verb form
taking
as well as
school
activities, it
will help you engage.
Correct pronoun usage
apply
Thirdly
, it is most important, Fix the infinitive
to trust
trust
yourself as you Fix the infinitive
to trust
got
the Verb problem
have
potiential
to score high and be a best friend to anybody. You have a friendly and humorous nature which should be visible to all, don't get afraid of failure it is Correct your spelling
potential
also
a step forward.
I hope this
can help you and if you need me, I am a call away. Sending you love and hugs!
Best Regards,
Emma WatsonSubmitted by abid.srm on
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coherence cohesion
Your letter's structure needs attention. Try to arrange your ideas in clear, separate paragraphs, each containing a single main idea with supporting details.
task achievement
The tone of the letter is a bit informal and could be more appropriate for the context. Consider using a mix of formal and informal language to suit the situation.
task achievement
Some more specific examples or personal stories could strengthen your suggestions and make them more relatable.
coherence cohesion
Although you have a greeting, the letter lacks a personalized sign-off. It would be more appropriate to end the letter with your own name instead of a celebrity.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite