You recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or to try to get a job. You think he/she should get a job. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter • say why he/she would not enjoy going to college • explain why getting a job is a good idea for him/her • suggest types of job that would be suitable for him/her Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter ad follows:
Dear Samira,
I hope you are doing well! It’s been
long
that, we haven't met each other. Correct article usage
a long
However
, when I received your letter last
week, it revived all the memories and I felt myself on the top of sky
that, still I have a friend like you who wants my guidance to do the job or to pursue Add an article
the sky
further
studies. Just Joking!
As I know you for last
ten years and well aware Correct article usage
the last
about
your conserve nature. Keeping in mind the trending culture of the colleges, I think it will be better for you to opt job as a Change preposition
of
next
task. In spite of ongoing
culture, the college fees are too high which will be a burden on your parents’ pocket.
As you don't have Correct article usage
the ongoing
hands on
experience in working in a multinational company, I would suggest you Add a hyphen
hands-on
to
apply Remove the particle
apply
in
the same company so that, you can learn teamwork and Change preposition
apply
new
coding language. Correct article usage
a new
Beside
Replace the word
Besides
this
, you will be exposed to IT
industry to a much larger extent.
Yesterday I was thinking and realised thatCorrect article usage
the IT
,
you will easily get a job in any programming company, as you already had created many application software in the school. It is Remove the comma
apply
most
advantageous skill you have in your hands to prove your mettle.
I hope my suggestion will be helpful for you. Hoping to see you soon.
Yours Lovingly,
AnkitaCorrect article usage
the most
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite