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Student should be taught academic knowledge so that they can pass the exam, and skills such as cooking or dressing should not be taught. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Dear James, It's been a while since we have met, I hope things are going great at your end. I am writing
this
 to tell you that I have recently switched my job, reason being, the
last
 one was becoming too frustrating for me because of the office politics and ethics and
also
 with the recent change in my home, I had to travel a lot to reach my
last
 office,
hence
 I have changed my job. Now, I have got a job in Eastern company, it is a manufacturing company where I am working as a supervisor of the production and I have to ensure the smooth production till the delivery of the product that we make.
Moreover I
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Moreover, I
 wanted to tell you that I have recently started reading new books in the field of self growth and I would recommend to you as well,
in addition
 to that I have recently got a new sports car and I love it, so why don't you come to my house and see it by yourself and maybe we can go for a drive as well. Lots of Love Jaspreet Singh.

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