More and more people want to own famous brands such as cars, clothes, or other items. This is positive or negative? Give out your opinion.
while
some families think having a famous brand is extremely delightful for themselves and their family members, other people believe that a well-noun brand is not essential to have a nice life.Let me discuss my view in the next paragraphs.
To begin
with,today with economic growth many families enjoy utilize
famous mark because they believe it is fully useful for Wrong verb form
utilising
their
.Correct pronoun usage
them
for
example, the Capitalize word
For
well-noun
car helps them Correct your spelling
well-known
have
Verb problem
apply
a
Correct article usage
apply
relaxed
when they are driving, Wrong verb form
relax
for
this
reason,it is completely safe and they have a confident behaviour or if we have a choice they prefer to buy the papular dress, in fact, clothes aid them to have a delightful feel.As a result
, they say utilize of
perfect marks Wrong verb form
utilising
such
as Correct article usage
a watch
watch
or sunglasses or Correct article usage
a watch
Correct article usage
a dress
dress
or car ... Correct article usage
a dress
help
them to have more comfort and health so it is entirely positive for folk.
Correct subject-verb agreement
helps
On the other hand
, a lot of people and experts think the only quality is vital to keep
healthy and comfortable folk and Wrong verb form
keeping
Correct article usage
the brands
brands
name is not important.Fix the agreement mistake
brand
For instance
, a lot of types of equipment make
with low-level marks but they have good material and Wrong verb form
are made
also
they are really cheaper than a famous brand,Moreover
, we have to give a new quality chance to present their own work and this
subject help
to make a competitive.Despite the aforementioned ,advantages Correct subject-verb agreement
helps
this
is a negative thing if we want to buy only well-noun
brands.
In conclusion, I am used to before buying anything, compare it and if I want to say what my opinion is I should say I think a famous character is fully catchy but sometimes we Correct your spelling
well-known
have
not enough money to buy them and sometimes we can find high-quality gool without having a famous character, so I believe it is negative for all citizens.Add a missing verb
do have
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