IELTS Writing Samples Band 3.5

Children are known as the nation builder.They are the future of the country.In many ,nations youngsters are involved in some types of employment.Some individual believes that this totaly wrong and while others agree with this because they think that it gives knowledge and experience about work.In upcoming ,paragraphs i'm going to discuss my views....
Now a days, upbringing matters a lot. In that sense one group of people claim that it is parents duty to pore good moral and values in to the children, whereas, others opine that it is wholly responsibility of school. Both have their own merits and drawbacks....
In recent years, unfortunately, several people are suffering from do not get adequate sleep due to unbalanced lifestyle. Not to mention, there are some detrimental problems for the person who can hardly have proper sleep. Herein, the possible actions to tackle these problems are also mentioned....
Nowadays, there are many individuals who are still diagnosed with a certain disease that are caused by poor lifestyle. It is not too late to find solution to this problem and this essay will discuss to you some of my suggestions...
In the globalisation and ,liberlisation numerous hard task depends on the technology. People are realising to doing dangerous work but certain masses are worried about the generate robots is also very arduous work. Technology has enormous merits but as well as using robotics things is dangerous. I will benefits and dangerous in the upcoming paragraphs....
Governments in some countries spend large amounts of money on space exploration programmes it is a waste of money, the spending should go to public services....
Technological advances is very effective on job who do the job around the technology and without knowledge and Today's technology is totally depend on latest technology system....
Many museums around the world are imposing fees for the visit but some of it waives their entry fees for the visitors. Museum are cultural heritage for every country and also it is transmitting the history of ancestors to next generation. I am inclined to believe the merits of charging the public for the permit is far outweigh its demerits....
The three pie charts depict the data about the three sectors of coffee around the globe. It is evident that Europe is a major nation that contributes to using coffee, South Africa in manufacturing it, and profit expenditure are higher through the delivery service....
Some people opine that large outdoor public buildings should be built in cities and towns. I also believe this is crucial because these help the citizens to spend their leisure time and these areas are useful for open markets....
Most of people spend their life time at work; thereby, job satisfaction is concerned as a major element of individual well-being. It is indisputable that working overloaded can cause mental problems to workers. I think that job satisfaction will increase life quality of people in nowadays....
The bar charts depict the data about the proportions of proficiency in a foreign language by the students in different nations. It is evident that the percentage of a female category is higher than the male in all the countries, whereas Indian females are higher in number among all the countries....
It is undeniable fact that in the 21st-century women are ruling in every sector and creating tough competition with men . As a result, women earrings are skyrocketing as compared to the history of humankind. However, some individuals perceive that high income is the main reason behind women avoiding marriage because earlier they used to rely on men for the financial needs of their life. Whereas I completely disagree with the statement because some women have different priorities in their life....
In world more than a hundred languages are being spoken presently. While some of them are used by less number of persons, hence dropping its significance and lead to vanish entirely. In this essay, I will delve into it as negative progress....