You said you would attend your best friend's birthday party, but you did not go. Write a letter to your friend. In the letter apologise for not going explain why you were not there, say how you will make up for it.

Dear Aman, How are you? I hope you've been well. I'd like to apologize for not coming to your birthday party. I know it was an important day for you and being a best friend I need to be with you
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special occasion. I really feel bad for not coming to the party but I got stuck in a family problem. Actually, a day before your birthday my father
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met with an accident. It was a minor accident but still doctor suggested
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be on bed rest for a week. I was unable to leave my dad and family in
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situation. You don't need to worry about him; he is fine now. I know you would have missed me, so I am thinking of coming to your place
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next weekend and
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some quality time with you and your family. You will be glad to see the gift which I bought for you. I can't wait to see you! Best regards, Simran
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Make sure to structure the letter in clear paragraphs with one central idea per paragraph for enhanced readability.
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Include a stronger expression of apology and a more elaborate plan on how you intend to make up for your absence to fully satisfy the task requirements.

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