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Curriculum Vitae for a Doctoral Program Chen Fan School of History and

Culture

Shandong

University

27 Shanda Nan Road, Jinan, 250100 P.R China Mobile: +86-17853137939 Email: [email protected] EDUCATION: M. A. in

Culture

Industry

Management

Shandong

University

, June 2022 (expected) Selected Coursework: Western Cultural

Industry

Theory, Industrialization of Cultural

Resources

, Literature Introduction of Cultural

Industry

B. A. in

Culture

Industry

Management

Shandong

University

, June 2019 Thesis:

Research

on Innovation of Slow-Paced Variety in China -- to“Dear InnⅡ”as a Case

RESEARCH

AREAS: Local Cultural

Industry



Development

of Rural Cultural

Resources

Industry

, Rural

Revitalization

and Cultural

Tourism

Integration Modern Cultural

Industry

Project

Management

Cultural

Industry

Project

Conceptual Planning, Brand Marketing Promotion, Cultural and Creative Product Design WORKING EXPERIENCES：

Research

Assistant, Institute of Cultural

Industry

Shandong

University

, 2018 – Present Duties include: the conceptual planning of characteristic towns, beautiful villages, rural

revitalization

and regional

tourism

. Cultural

Industry

Project

Planner, Institute of Urban

Culture

Shandong

University

, 2017 Duties include: the modern cultural

industry

project

management

in Shibei District. IMPORTANT PROJECTS: Cultural

Industry

Planning, January 2020 - present Analyzed the theories and cases of cultural

industry

planning, summarized the unique practical and applicable rules and methods of cultural

industry

planning. Qilu

Culture

Animation

Project

, April 2019 - August 2019 Build Qilu

culture

and animation theme library, build a large IP resource cluster, drive the improvement of local animation

industry

chain, and form a cultural brand with Qilu cultural characteristics and international influence. Zaozhuang Cultural

Resources

Big Data

Project

, July 2018 - January 2020 Summarized the cultural

resources

of Zaozhuang, and updated the

overall

framework of Chinese cultural

resources

Research

on Targeted Poverty Alleviation and Rural

Revitalization

Strategy, September 2017-August 2018 Investigated the current

development

of rural cultural

industry

at the grassroots level, made plans

according to

local conditions, participated in the formulation of targeted poverty alleviation for rural areas in Hebei and

Shandong

, presented

project

reports and wrote conceptual plans several times. PUBLICATIONS: “

Research

on the Construction of Space-Time Image of Contemporary Homesickness in Li Ziqi Short Video”, Humanities World, 2020(10):42-45. “

Development

Idea of Urban Cultural

Tourism

Cluster in Shibei District of Qingdao City”, Guide to the Cultural

Industry

, 2019(05):30-34. “

Research

on the Innovative Strategy of Slow-Paced Variety in China”, Humanities World, 2019(37):24-32. “The

Development

of Beijing 798 Art District and its Enlightenment to Jinan D17 Cultural and Creative Industrial Park”, Social Science, 2017(03):275. “Bike-Sharing Under the Tide of Sharing Economy”, Economy, 2017(05):17. CONFERENCE PRESENTATIONS: “Theory and Practice of Rural

Revitalization

-- Taking Comprehensive

Tourism

Development

of Shanshan Village as an Example”,

Shandong

University

Rural

Revitalization

Advanced Forum, Jinan, September 15, 2019 “Panoramic Immersive Network: A New Model of Urban Cultural

Tourism

Cluster

Development

-- Cultural Reconstruction of Urban Space in Shibei District”, Qingdao City

Culture

Forum, Qingdao, November 20, 2018 HONORS AND AWARDS: Outstanding Academic

Scholarship

Shandong

University

, 2019 First-class

Scholarship

for Outstanding Students,

Shandong

University

, 2019 Second-class

scholarship

for Outstanding students,

Shandong

University

, 2018 Excellent Student from Guanghua Fund,

Shandong

University

, 2017 Second-class

scholarship

for Outstanding students,

Shandong

University

, 2016 PROFESSIONAL MEMBERSHIP: Head of the New Media Department in Students’ Union,

Shandong

University

, September 2019- June 2020 SKILLS: Computer ·Proficient in Microsoft Word, PowerPoint, Access and Excel ·Certificate of NCRE-2 (2017) English ·Fluent in spoken and written English ·IELTS: 7 (2019)

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