IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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It is difficult for both poor and rich to accessible in univerity. do you agree or disagree ?

There is an interesting opinion that going to university is hard for both wealthy and needy people. This is mainly because tertiary tuition tends to be more and more expensive. From my perspective, I totally disagree that socio-economic status does not impact both poor and rich people since wealthy people can access private extracuriccular activity and the tuition is not a burden for them.

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It is important for children, young adults, working people and the retired to have at least one hobby. What's your opinion about this?

The issue of having a hobby has become increasingly important in today's society. I completely agree that people should have at least one hobby regardless of your age or gender. This essay will explain my perspective.

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Consider the impact of public art, such as sculptures, murals, and installations, in urban environments. How do such works of art transform of spaces they inhabit, influence the community, and reflect cultural identity? Provide examples and discuss both positive and potential negative effects.

In the fast-paced world, there is an ongoing debate regarding the impact of public art in urban environments. This essay will shed light on the transformation of spaces through art and its positive and potential negative effects.

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Some people think that children's free time must include educational activities otherwise they will waste their time. What is your opinion?

It is widely considered to provide learning related activities to children while they are having a free time. While some people defend that it might be beneficial to their education if their time is not wasted with other tasks, others argue that it is essential for a child to have spare time to develop skills they want to and create meaningful childhood memories while playing.

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The most important aim of science should be to improve people's lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement

Most people think that the primary aim of science should be to improve human life and I fully agree with this view. However, I think science should go beyond the human benefits and address environmental challenges and include the protection of endangered species.

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The media should include more positive stories and reduce reporting of crimes andviolence. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Recently, whether the media should publish more positive stories instead of focusing heavily on crime and violent events has become a controversial issue. Some people argue that this approach can help create a more optimistic social atmosphere and reduce unnecessary fear among the public, while others believe that news reports should reflect reality,even when it is unpleasant. This essay will discuss both views and explain why I believe factual reporting is more appropriate.

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Scientists are doing experiments on live animals for the purpose of research nowadays. Do you think advantages of this outweigh disadvantgaes?

Thousands of live animals have been sacrificed in many scientific laboratories in the name of science for over a hundred years. These experiments have been criticized among people, and I personally sympathize with the loss of innocent lives. Having said that I also believe that these tests being conducted contribute to longer human lives compared to the past.

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All over the world, societies are facing a growing problem with obesity. This problem aﬀects both children and adults. What are the reasons for this rise in obesity, How could it be tackled?

In recent years, we have witnessed that, health concerns due to excessive weight is becoming common globally, which is affecting both children and adults. In this essay, we will discuss why this is the case, and also look at various ways to handle this.

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Parents should encourage their children to spend less time studying, and more time doing sports/physical activities. Do you agree or disagree

Nowadays, parents play an important role in guiding their children’s lifestyle. Some people believe that parents should reduce their children's study time and encourage more physical activities. I partly disagree with this idea because it may limit children's freedom to manage their own time.

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Full-time university students spend a lot of time studying. Some say they should do other activities too. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Full-time studying at a university is a topic of considerable debate. Whether or not students should engage in other activities, I strongly believe that they must invest their time and participate in such activities during their studies.

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society is experiencing an increase in many problems such as crime and drug abuse due to urbanization. Give some suggestions to control this trend?

Urbanization is one of the defining characteristics of any modern society. Unplanned urbanization often lead to serious problems such as criminal activities and drug addiction. There are many initiatives I think government should take to control these issues.

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Some people believe that it is a good idea to continue to work at their old age. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Many people believe that it is a beneficial idea to continue to work even if they get older.This essay will discuss this topic and present my opinion.

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In past, people wear clothes that shows their culture. Nowadays people like to wear common clothes worldwide. Is this a positive or negative development?

Wearing cultural clothes back in the day was quite common. However, currently everyone prefer to dress similar across the world. I believe this situation has both positive and negative results.

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There have been major advance in technology over recent decades and this has led to significant improvements in peoples live. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

Big developments have been seen in the field of technology in recent times, and certain people argue that these advancements have led to major improvements in their lives. I agree that the improvements in this field have bettered our lives, due to not only giving us better access to information, but also making daily tasks much easier.

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in many cities construction of new houses and office buildings is not controlled, and it leads to everybody building in whichever style they want without thinking about design. Do you agree that advantages outweigh disadvantages?

Many cities have lost a parcicular style and looks like a mix of diferent architecture branches because authorities do not have specific requirements for building facade.I think it has more disadvantages than advantages.

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How recycle paper is made Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The provided diagram outlines how paper is reprocessed.

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In many parts of the world, shopping is no longer a way that people buy things that they need, and it has been developed into a fun activity. What are the reasons for this development? Is this a positive or negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Throughout the globe, the activity of shopping has evolved into a mode of entertainment. There are a variety of causes behind this development, and this has various adverse consequences, which will be captivated in the forthcoming paragraphs along with the conclusion at the end.

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Nowadays people eat more fast food than in the past. This has led to many health problems. Why do people eat more fast food? What can be done to solve this problem?

Due to fast pased life style people in big cities usualy dont have time for food preparation so they take their meals in fast food restaraunt.This fact have direct asociation with the rise in obesity,heart diceases and mental problems.

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Some people think that books are losing importance as a source of information and entertainment. To what extent do you agree?

In the modern era, the majority of people think that the importance of books is reducing in people's lives, and they have started to use other sources of entertainment and information. I totally agree with this viewpoint since recreational centres and playdium locations are being developed and e-books are more convenient to use.

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In the modern world, a university education is essential in order to get a rewarding job and earn a high salary. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There is no denying the fact that the university degree has many appeals, especially in our modern world. While many people believe that a university education is necessary in order to get a good job with a high salary, others argue that it is not essential if a person has many skills. In my opinion, I tend to believe that having a higher dgree is play a pivotal role in getting a high position and a high income. In this essay, I will discuss this topic and explore my own view.

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