IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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it is important for everyone, including young people, to save money for their future.

it is often argued that everyone including young people should save money for their future in order to provide an appropriate life for the individual and his family. I strongly agree with this argument, and specially the fact that it include young people since it will build the self-awareness among them.

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In the future,(nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

There is no doubt that technology is common in recent years. It has become easy to access anything you want for free. For that, many individuals believe that online books and news websites will soon fully replace real books and newspapers. Although, there are several benefits to reading real books, i mostly agree with that point, and the reasons will be thoroughly discussed in this essay.

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Many parents believe that beating or spanking is a good way to discipline their children. To what extent do you agree? Write an essay of about 250-350 words.

These days children's upbringing become one of the controversial issues. Older generation are the belief of that the fastest way to discipline children is to hit them. This essay will argue why physical punishment is not the best method of discipline, as it can harm children emotionally and damage their relationships with their parents.

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Some schools are very strict about their school uniforms and the appearance of their pupils, while other schools have a very relaxed dress code. Which approach do you think has more advantages? Are there any disadvantages to children having a school uniform?

In the contemporary era, some schools make it mandatory to wear uniforms and follow appearance rules, while others allow informal clothes. Although they have some pros, I contend that school uniforms promote equality in a classroom and reduce financial burden on parents.

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Some people think that government funding for schools should be spent on science subjects rather than on other subjects. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Government funding for schools is said that it should be paid for science subjects rather than for others. In my view, I strongly agree with this statement , and the following examples will be provided to support my view.

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In many countries, people are not doing enough physical exercise. What are the causes of this problem, and what can be done to solve it?

In many countries, a growing number of people are leading sedentary lifestyles and not engaging in sufficient physical exercise. This essay will discuss the main causes of this issue and suggest possible solutions.

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Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children who are taught to co-operate rather than compete become more useful adults. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

Nowadays, there is a debate about whether children should be encouraged to compete or to co-operate with each others. Some people believe competition is important for children's development, while others argue that learning to work together is more valuable. In my opinion, both of them are useful, but co-operation is more important in the long run.

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As a result of and illegal hunting, many animal species are becoming endangered and some are even facing extinction. Do you think it is important to protect animals? What can be done to deal with this problem? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In the contemporary era, illegal hunting is becoming ubiquitous. It causes a lot of harmful implications such as extinction of some species. From my perspective, I wholeheartedly believe that we have to preserve all types of animals for future generations by setting more penalties for illegals and encouraging new measures to protect them.

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As a result of illegal hunting, many animal species are becoming endangered and some are even facing extinction. Do you think it is important to protect animals? What can be done to deal with this problem? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In the contemporary era, illegal hunting is becoming ubiquitous. It causes a lot of harmful implications , such as the extinctions of some species. From my perspective, I wholeheartedly believe that we have to preserve all types of animals for future generations by setting more penalties for lawbreakers and encouraging new measures to protect them.

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In the last decade, there has been a great increase in global air travel. What do you think are the reasons for this and do you think it is a good thing?

Nowadays, there has been an important increase in international air travel. This essay will argue that the reason behind it is mainly the globalisation, and the economic airline companies. I firmly Believe that this is a good thing, as it made the world even smaller.

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In the future, more people will choose to go on holiday in their own country and not travel abroad on holiday. Do you agree or disagree?

In this modern world, whether one agrees with the viewpoint that travelling to other countries is a better choice has been a widely debated issue. Some people believe that enjoying a holiday locally is far more beneficial. In this essay, I will explain why I strongly agree with this statement.

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some people think that art is an essential subject for child at school, while others think it is a waste of time. discuss both side and give your opinion

Some people believe that art is an essential subject for children at school, while others think it is a waste of time. This essay will discuss both views, and I believe that art plays an important role in children’s development.

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At school, children should either be taught to compete or to cooperate. In your opinion, which form of education would best benefit society as a whole? Describe both sides of the argument and explain your own opinion.

At school, children are either taught to compete or to coopereate. Teaching students to be competitive can prepare them to with more opportunities in some countries. However, students who learn how to cooperate can become more responsible individual to the soceity. In my opinion, teaching children how to cooperat is more beneficial to the whole society from a long run. In this essay, the reasons for both sides will be explained and I will also tell why I have the favor for cooperation.

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In many countries, smoking is now illegal in many public places. Many people believe that such a ban is completely justified. To what extent do you agree.

Throughout the years, the number of people who smoke has increased, polluting the atmosphere. In many countries. Smoking has been banned in public areas, due to many reasons. There is a thought that such a rule is absolutely logical. I completely agree with this statement. Smoking has an extreme negative impact on the environment. This essay will provide reasons to support my opinion.

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Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships that people make? Has this been a positive or negative development?

Technology has had a profound impact on the ways people interact and build relationships. While these digital tools provide a constant connection, this development has a negative influence on real-life bonds.

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In many countries it is very easy to apply for and be given credit card. However, this causes some people to have problems with debt they cannot pay back. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

In the contemporary era, credit cards are given to residents conveniently in some parts of the world, which can create some problems for them. I believe that this scenario has more pros than cons.

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Some people believe that art (such as paintings, music, and literature) plays an important role in society, while others think it is a waste of time and money. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

On today’s world, there is an ongoing debate about whether art is an important factor for society or not. Some people contend that paintings and music are crucial as it represents their culture, whereas others argue that it is a waste of time and money, and the authorities should focus on real-life issues. This essay will analyze both the arguments, followed by my opinion.

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We can access information from the internet easily. We can access information from the internet easily. Some people say that libraries are no longer necessary. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Throughout the years, accessing information from different sources has changed. Today any piece of data can be accessible through the internet. Due to these changes some people say that libraries aren’t necessary. I partially agree with this statement.

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Doctors recommend that older people should excersice regularly.However many of them do not exercise enough. What are the causes? What can be done to encourage them to exercise?

Nowadays, a large segmant of older people in our society tend to neglect working out, opposing to what doctors recommend. There are numerous reasons for this issue, and effective solutions for each one of them. This essay will thoroughly discuss some of the reasons and give possible solutions.

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Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

It is argued that constructing more sport facilities only is sufficient to enhance the public, however other people say that adopting this measurement only is not enough. While the first argument is not completely wrong, I firmly agree with the latter.

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