IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Some university students want to learn about other subjects in addition to their main subjects. Others believe it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for a qualification. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

A growing debate between college and university students is “Should I study a second major?”. The answer to that question is a yes or no. In this essay, L will go through both answers. Discussing how the two groups look at the problem, as well as state my personal opinion on the matter.

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Some people think that parents should teach their children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the best place to learn this. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Many argue that a child learns what is acceptable for society at home, while some believe that school is a better place where these values are taught. Although teachers can certainly change children’s mindset it will not account for the influence other students have, and that is why I think that they should be raised accordingly by parents as they know what the specific needs of their sons and daughters are.

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Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Many people believe that loss of particular plant and animal species are the major ecological issues in today’s world. Others believe that there are more serious environmental issues that need our attention. This essay will discuss both views, the impact on environment losing of certain species of flora and fauna, and the main environmental issues prevailing in the world.

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Access to clean water is a basic human right. Therefore, every home should have a water supply that is provided free of charge. Do you agree or disagree?

In our modernized world, clean water is an essential human need for survival, and it should be accessible to everyone. However, the assumption that every home should be provided with free water supply is problematic. While water is undoubtedly a fundamental human right, I partially disagree with the notion that it should be given to everyone free of charge. This is primarily due to concerns about reckless consumption and the finite nature of water resources.

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Modern technology has increased surveillance in society. Do the benefits outweigh the drawbacks?

Undoubtedly, the contemporary advancements in surveillance, owing to the modern technology, have benefited the people tremendously. Cutting-edge monitoring devices ensure public safety and reduce the crime rate. However, personal information and privacy are compromised due to this. Considering the benefits of digital surveillance, I strongly believe that their advantages outweigh the disadvantages.

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In many countries, many people do not do exercise or play any sport. What are the causes? And what will be the effects on society?

There is no denying the fact that practicing sports is worth considering, and it plays a vital role in improving our health. While there are many people who do not like to exercise. This essay will discuss the reasons and impacts on a community.

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Studies have shown that many young children worry about their appearance. What are the reasons for this? What might best be done to reduce the problem? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

Some studies have shown that the majority of youngsters are concerned about their appearance from their early age. The main reasons behind this are advertising fashion products and peer pressure. This problem can be reduced by a campaign against advertising and the steps taken by parents and school simultaneously.

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Many people spend the whole day at a computer and don’t have much time for exercise. What problem does this lifestyle lead to? How can these problems be avoided?? Give reason for you answer and include any relevant example from your own knowledge and experience.

There is no denying the fact that individuals nowadays use their computers the whole day and do not allocate time to work out. This issue clearly reflects an essential truth about laziness and how it affects our health, which requires careful attention and analysis.

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Some people think that competition at work, at school, and in daily life is a good thing. Others believe that we should try to cooperate more, rather than competing against each other. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, many people assume that competition in their daily life, whether at work or at school, is a good thing, while some others argue that cooperation is more important. This essay will discuss both points of view and in the concluding paragraph I will include my personal stance regarding the issue.

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Some companies have uniforms for their staff which must be worn at all times. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this.

Nowadays, staff wearing a uniform at the workplace during the job is a must in many companies. Thisthis can come with some disadvantages because employees will be limited to a specific type of clothing and they might not be able to wash their uniform every day, although there are more advantages , for example, recognising the staff and asking for services.

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Some people think that physical strength is important for success in sport, while other people think that mental strength is more important. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

There is no denying the fact that both physical and mental appearance are crucial for long-term journey success. While it is a commonly held belief that the presence of physical health is essential in all fields to achieve success. There is also an argument that mental stability is vital to managing your psychological condition. This essay will analyse this critical topic from both points of view and express my opinion.

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some people say that governments should spend money on building theatres and sport station. Instead, they should spend money on medical care and education. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some argue that authorities ought to invest money in creating theatres and sports facilities, while others think that money should be allocated to medical care and education. This essay agrees with the latter idea. Both perspectives will be examined in this text.

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many people say that the only way to guarantee a good job is to complete a course of university education. to what extent do you agree or disagree

It is argued that university courses can guarantee an equal job position. This essay provides reasons against this argument, which will be discussed in the following paragraphs.

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Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Music is often hailed as a universal language, and I fully agree that is serves as a powerful medium to connect people from diverse cultural backgrounds and age groups. It’s unique ability to transcend verbal and generational barriers makes it an unparalleled tool for fostering unity.

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In modern times, children are spending less time with their families and more time with their friends. Why has this change occurred? Do you think parents should force their children to spend more time at home?

Nowadays, children spend more time with their friends than with their families. This change has occurred because children do not want to feel left out amongst their peers , and parents should not force children to stay home because they will resent their parents for it.

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With the rise of artificial intelligence, some believe creative fields like writing and music composition will become largely automated. To what extent do you think that AI's increasing role in creative endeavors will enhance or diminish human artistic expression?

In the contemporary world, it is believed that in the future in many creative fields, such as art, music, and literature, artificial intelligence will be used for composition and idea generation. I believe that this trend will not affect the expressions and emotions of the artists.

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Some people believe that it is best to accept bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage if money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Describe both these views and give your own openion.

Nowadays, job hopping has become common among youngsters. A group of people believes that it is better to be in the same job despite low pay or stress. While others think that job hopping is fine to get better pay and satisfactory work. I am in support of the latter view. Reasons behind both the views and my opinion are discussed further in this essay.

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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement

It is often said that living in a country where a foreign language is used on a daily basis, can led to practical and social problems. This essay completely disagrees with this opinion, as there are many resources available to learn languages nowadays, and also technological advancements are lessening the barriers of language exchange.

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Some people think that governments should give financial support to creative artists such as painters and musicians. Others believe that creative artists should be funded by alternative sources. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

The general public has a multitude of views about the funding of creative artists. While some people think that the government should not financially support artists as they do not directly contribute to society, I believe that there are strong and significant reasons why funding of art projects should come from both the government and the artists themselves.

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Some people think the money spent in developing the technology for space exploration is not justified. There are more beneficial ways to spend this money. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

To begin with, some people think developing the technology for space exploration is a waste of time and money. And suggest that there are more efficient ways to spend this money. In this essay, I'll elaborate and explain both points and give my opinion at the end.

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