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The charts compare the proportion of students in a British university who know how to speak foreign languages in two
seperate
act as a barrier between; stand between
separate
 years 2000 and 2010. It is clear that Spanish was by far the most popular
second
language
 spoken by people in that university.
Additionally
, with the exception of
French's
Suggestion
the French's figure
figure
, all the percentages of individuals who were able to speak more than one
language
rose
come into existence; take on form or shape
arose
 during the research period. In 2000, 30% of people in the university were able to speak Spanish, which was the highest
figure
 in the graph. Meanwhile, the rate of students who does not know any
language
 other than English stood at 20%. In the same year, the proportions of those speaking French and another
language
 were equal, at 15% respectively.
Likewise
, 10% of the students knew either German or two other languages. During 2010, while the percentage of students who do not know any other
language
 dropped to 10%, the
figure
 for Spanish speakers rose slightly to 35%. At the same time, both the rates of individuals who know another
language
 and two other languages increased by 5% to 20% and 15% respectively. While
German's
Suggestion
the German's figure
German's figures
figure
 remained at the same level, the proportion of French speakers declined by 5% to 10%.
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