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TV is dangerous because it destroys family life and any sense of community,instead of visiting people or talking with our family we just watch TV. What is your opinion?

#tv #life #sense #community #people
Nowadays vast majority
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The nowadays vast majority
 of people are flocking to watch
TV
 in order
too
in the direction of
to
full
make full, also in a metaphorical sense
fill
 their time. There is an opinion asserting that watching
TV
 may put family bonding in
jeopardy which
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jeopardy, which
 can be followed by taking apart from communicate with others. Admittedly, I tend to agree with
former statemant
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the former statement
former statement
former statements
former settlement
 on the basis of some rational justifications.
To begin
 with, the
first
 and
the most adversely
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the most adverse
 impact of keeping an eye on
Tv
 is that tit would
exerts
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exert
 pernicious effects on structure of
family
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the family
. Take
famiy
a social unit living together
family
 gathering which is one of the important
element
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elements
 for any close-knit family as an example;
this
 in turn will alter their
intract
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interactions
interact
interaction
 with each
otherdue
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other due
 to the fact that they are more engaged with
this
 magic screen.
Consequently
, they are more prone to rob
themeselves
reflexive form of "them"
themselves
 of being in family togetherness. Yet another compelling argument against watching
Tv
 is that the more spend time in front of
television
Suggestion
the television
, the more communication skills will be destroyed. A good illustration of
this
 is that people may
are
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be
 faced with
low-level social position
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a low-level social position
.
That is
 to say, if
the young
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younger
the younger
 members of a family tend to watch
Tv
instead
 of being in society, the inevitable outcome will be the ultimate loss of good job opportunities. To sum up, I
completly
to a complete degree or to the full or entire extent
completely
 agree with latter argument and considering the points discussed above, the most rational conclusion to be drawn is that unlimited
watchin
the act of observing; taking a patient look
watching
Tv
 should be avoided.
This
 is mainly because it may
;
Accept space
;
ay the groundwork for
lossing
fail to keep or to maintain; cease to have, either physically or in an abstract sense
losing
 social and
interaction
Suggestion
interactive
 skills.
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