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Demand for gas and oil is increasing and so finding new resources in remote and untouched areas is a necessity. Do the advantages of this outweigh its disadvantages?

Nowadays the gas and oil’s demand is so high to fulfil our needs in almost any field, such as transportation, manufacturing, production. So, we need these resources not only for different types of vehicles, but also for the most vital structures adequate functioning. That is why some people consider we have to discover new places, usually untouched by the humans, contain vital natural resources. Otherwise, these remote areas are sacred and necessary for its unique flora and fauna, and destroying the nature can lead to a real disaster. In this essay the main idea is to prove that there is no need to cause harm to our planet digging the wild areas.

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Many people believe that media coverage of celebrities is having a negative effect on children. To what extent do you agree?

A lot of people consider that media coverage of celebrities is affecting children negatively. I completely agree with that statement, because the unconcious mind of children getting hampered by watching lavish, and indecent lifestyle.

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In some cultures, children are often told that they can acheive anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message?

Children can achieve whatever they want, if they try their best, encouraged by some people in some cultures. However, this can be motivative, but it may have some negative effects. Both perspectives will be examined before I present my own viewpoint

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Some people think that government should ban dangerous sports while others think people should have freedom to do anysports or activity. Discuss both views and give your opinion

Some citizens say that authorities must ban dangerous sports. Whereas, others believe people must have choose sports or activities freely. I will discuss both views, and give my opinion in the conclusion. People learn sports for different reassons, also some these reassons can make sure that they are safe.

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Large internet companies and organizations hold the personal information of many individuals. Do you think the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

There has been a long standing debate about large internet companies and facilities hold the individual information of number of people. While this trend has both positive and negative aspects, i believe the advantages far outweigh the disadvantages,and this essay will explain why.

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Some people believe that it is more effective for students to study in a group, while others believe that it is better for them to study alone. Discuss both view and give your own opinion

It is commonly known that method of study is an integral part to improve knowledge in different fields; while some argue that study alone is the better option to prepare an exam, others say that study in groups may help to enhance this preparation.

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Many aspects of the way people dress today are influenced by global fashion trends. How has global fashion become such a strong influence on people's lives? Do you think this is a positive or negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

I partially agree, although i believe fashions uprise has positive influence on the daily lives of individuals, there are also several drawbacks to be considered. Fashion is an art where one can express themselves. This essay will provide evidence to support my claim.

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Some people think that teachers should be able to ask disruptive children to leave the class. Do you think it is the best way to deal with a disruptive child in the classroom? What other solutions are there?

Disruptive students sometimes tend to disturb the equilibrium of the class. With their actions or words, they could make their classmates lose focus. Some people believe that the ideal way to deal with this, is to seperate said students from the class before they create more chaos in the room. I personally strongly disagree with this opinion.

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Many young people leave school with negative attitudes towards learning. What are the causes? How to encourage young people to study？

Nowadays, many young individuals graduate from school with negative thoughts of learning. There are several causes of this problem, such as immense academic pressure caused by the educational system and decreasing of the discipline toward educational places. This essay will examine the main causes of this problem and propose some effective solutions.

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Some people think that offenders should be put in prison. Others, however, believe that providing offenders with education and training is more effective than putting them in prison. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Undoubtedly, with the rapid development of modern society, reducing crime rate has become a critical issue. Whereas some people look upon putting offenders into prison as the most effective way, others refer to providing offenders with education and training as a more sustainable solution. As for my perspective, I am in favor of the latter, and the reasons will be elaborated on thoroughly as follows.

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4.Scientist found that most crimes are committed by people who lack education. Some people think that the best way to reduce the crime rate is to provide prisoners with education because it will help them find a job when they leave prison. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

According to many researchers, uneducated indulge more in illegal activities such as theft, individual attacks and murder. Most of the people believe that best education should be provided in the prisons to overcome crime rate. In this way, prisoners can get employment when they get out of the jail.

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As the cost of living rises, most people need more than one job to pay the bills. Describe the possible causes of this and suggest how the problem can be dealt with

The cost of living crisis has affected people from all sectors of society. This has led to most people working more than one jobs just to keep up with the bills. This phenomena is not only creating a strain on the job market, but also making people more stressed out in their day to day lives. In this essay, I will explain how this is disadvantageous to society.

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For centuries, importants part of education have remained such as reading, writing, and maths. With the advent of computers, some people think that computer skill be made as fourth skill to be added to the list. To what extent do you agree.

For many decades , reading , writing and mathematics are the only three priorities of learning. Some people believe that with the advancement of technology and introduction of artificial intelligence, computers should be the fourth priority for the education system. This aligns perfectly with my view because nowadays , all our day to day problems can be solved online .

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In some countiries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for some people. Why might this be the case? Do you thing it is a positive or negative situation?

In some cities, owning a proporty instead of renting one is very significant for some citizens. I think it is a positive situation especially for young people in the beginning of their lives. Because, people can invest their money for owning a house. Afterwards, this home can save them during any finacial crises. When, homes prices always increase.

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Young people today spend much of their leisure time using electronic devices or interacting on social media. Many people say that this is a waste of their free time. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is true that nowadays a lot of children spend their leisure time on social media, people claim that it is a waste of their time, I totally agree with this view, as I believe that children are wasting their time while learning nothing and over a certain period of time, they might hate studying.

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It has become easier and more affordable for people to travel to other coutries. Do you think it is a positive or a negative development? Give your opinion and relevant examples from your experience

Nowadays, people can travel easier and affordable, especially from country to another. I think it is a positive development, because with internet improvement people can find different ways to travel freely. Also with this they can gain experiences.

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Life in the 21st century is better compared to life in the previous century. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The world has changed a great deal from the past. However, life in the 21st century is better compared to life in the previous century. This essay will explain to what extent I agree and disagree.

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Some people think that patents should teach children how to be good member of society. Others, believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

While some people believe that parents should educate their children to be a useful member of society, others consider it is the responsibily of a school. Both sides will be discussed in the forthcoming paragraphs, and I believe in the foremost statement.

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The average life span of citizens is increasing in developed countries. What problems can this cause? What measures should be taken to deal with these problems?

The life span of people is rising in developed countries. It is a positive aspect, but there are also some problems this can cause. Urbanisation intensification is one of the most important issues of today.

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Some people prefer to carefully plan activities in their free time others think it’s a waste of time. Discuss both views and give your answer?

Sometimes, people prefer a carful planning for their activities, in their free time. Others think this it is a time consuming for them. I will dicuss both views, in my opinion, activity planning can save people money. Also listing activities make sure they will have a good times in their future trips.

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