IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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Nowadays more and more information and resources related to arts and entertainment are being digitized. Do the advantages of this trend outweight the disandvantages?

The art and entertainment digitalization has become an increasingly debated issue in modern society. It is obvious that there are positive and negative aspects of this trend. This essay will discuss both the merits and demerits of art and entertainment resources available online and evaluate whether one outweights the other.

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Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It has been argued that in the modern world, there are many choices for individuals, and this fact gives people the freedom that they need. This essay totally agrees with this statement because of the lack of opportunities that humanity suffered from in the past, and the human's instinct that led to a noticeable growth in our lives' quality.

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Some people think that competition at work, at school and in daily life is a good thing. Others believe that we should try to cooperate more, rather than competing against each other. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

There is no denying the fact that competition and cooperate a commen supject need to discussed. While it is a commonly held belief that compettion at both work and school very essential to get and achive your goal, there is also an argument that cooperate and help tgaother it is also important part.

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Before a lot of advantages, some people believe that the internet creates many problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree whit this statement?

There is no denying the fact that the internet has a lot of troubles, but it is becomes the most popular things in the recent years. while it is commonly held belife that web has the power to transform the way we live and work. There is also an argument that opposes view. In my opinion, I consider that digital world has more benefit than the drawback.

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Some people think that high salary is important when choosing a company to work for, while others think that good working atmosphere is more important. Discuss both view points and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant example from your own knowledge or experience.

these days some people think that high salary is important when choosing a company to work for, while others believe that good working atmopshere is more important. This essay will discuss oth sides and will draw my personal conclusion.

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Aircraft have been increasingly used to transport fruits and vegetables to some countries where such plants hardly grow or are out of season. Some people consider it a good idea, but some people oppose it. Dicuss in both views and give your opinion.

In recent years, the transportation of crops and plants by air have become more common, especially to regions where such products can not grow. While some people believe this is a positivie developement, others think it has negative consuqences. This essay will argue that the increasing transportation of fruits and vegetables by air is a possitive developement.

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Some think hosting an international event is beneficial for the country while others believe it is bad.

It is widely debated whether hosting an international sports event is beneficial for the country. I believe there are several advantages and disadvantages to hosting international events, and the benefits clearly outweigh the drawbacks.

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Millions of dollars are spent on space research every year. Some people argue that this money should be allocated to improving living standards on Earth. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Today, most richest countries trying to win space over other competitive countries. While they doing space research, some people accusing, the millions of money they spending on those research are not really useful and it's better those money could be allocated to improve living standards on earth. So, this essay will discuss with reasons why i'm partially agree to this statement above.

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"Some people believe that the media should be strictly controlled to prevent false information, while others argue that freedom of the press is essential. Discuss both views and give your own opinion."

Media control over false news has recently become a major concern in the society. Some individual insists that media should be rigid rules and regulations to prevent news that are not true while others believe that there freedom of the press is relevant as such, be given the opportunity to share whatever they want to share. Although, there are different views to this, I will discuss both views but I believe that news should be well investigated before it is shared thereby not abusing the freedom of press.

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Sme people spend most of their lives living close to where they were born. What might be the reason for this? What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

Living closer to one's place of birth has currently become a major concern among many people. Some individuals spend most time in the environment where they were born due family attatchment, lack of opportunity, comfort. Although, there are many reason why one would prefer staying where they were born, I will be discuss the advantages and the disadvantages.

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Human activity has had a negative impact on plants and animals around the world. Some people think that this cannot be changed, while others believe actions can be taken to bring back a change.

Over the last years it's been shown that human activity is causing an impact on plants and animals around the world. Some people think it cannot be changed because of all the damage already caused while others believe that we are still on time to stop and make a positive difference.

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Human activity has had a negative impact on plants and animals around the world. Some people think that this cannot be changed, while others believe actions can be taken tobring back a change.

Humanity has provoked a negative impact on animals and plants thanks to their activities. Some people think that the biological annihilation of some animal species can be changed next to the restoration of ecosystems and habitats destroyed by humanity. While others think it cannot be changed and that the obliteration of some animal groups and the natural destruction is permanent.

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People will buy a product if it has quality or fulfil their needs. There is no need for advertisement. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

some argue that high-quality products that fulfil consumer needs do not require advertising, I strongly disagree with this statement. In the modern market, advertising is an absolute necessity for both brand awareness and sustained corporate growth.

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Some people think that the best way to resolve environmental problems is to increase fuel and vehicles’ prices. Do you agree or disagree with the statement?

It has been suggested that the best solution to settle environmental issues is to grow fuel and vehicles' costs. In my opinion, I think there should be equal solutions for these obstacles.

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Nowadays, there is a trend that reports of media focus on problems and emergencies rather than positive development. Some people think it is harmful to individuals and to society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Recently, we have been noticing a popular trend among the media to report information, emphasizing the issues and crisis instead of focusing on the positive changes. Some believe that this could negatively impact the viewers and the community, and I agree with their belief.

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Many foods are shipped from far away. Some people think that eating local food is more environmentally and economically. Do you think the advantages outweigh its disadvantages?

Some believe that eating regional food is a better environmental and economical option than eating foods shipped from distant regions and countries. This essay will discuss the advantages and disadvantages of both these options, and I will explain the reason why I believe the pros of interstate or international trade of foods, outweigh its cons.

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Many people around the world spend the majority of their free time at home watching TV shows. What are the advantages and disadvantages?

Nowadays, people from around the world choose most of their free time by watching TV shows at home. I believed this activity has benefits but there is also certain drawbacks that can be ignored. This essay will explore both advantages and disadvantages.

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In most of the countries, people prefer to live in a rented apartment rather than buying a home. What are the advantages and disadvantages of living in rented accommodation?

Along with the inflation, prices of the houses and the cost of building a house are getting increased, cause of this issue, most of people prefer to rent apartments rather than buying a house. So, this essay will explain with reasons why i'm disagreeing with this statement.

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Some believe that school children should not be given homework by their teacher, whereas other argue that homework plays an important role in education of the children. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.

The modern world has changed drastically when it comes to schools grading systems. Moreover, many schools are now considering not giving homework to children. However, people are arguing with this idea. Furthermore, I think that giving work outside of school is a tarrible idea. This essay will examine the advantages of not making children work at home and the disadvantages of making them work at home.

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In today's world many people own a smartphone. Do ou think the advantage of owning a smartphone outweigh the disadvantages?

In the present times our community tend to own a smartphone. I believe that the advantage of owning a smartphone does not really override the disadavantage. At least three reasons I would like to write down, having an advanced mobile phone surely help us a lot but it declines our survival mode as human. Not only that, when everything becomes easy we are as human also become easy we become more fragile and weak and last but not least having a smartphone gets us more confused.

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