IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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There is no doubt that globalisation has benefited the world by bringing together people, business and nations. People who criticise it stand in the way of progress. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Globalisation has, without a doubt, improved the general life of global citizens, especially by tightly connecting the whole world; consequently, the critics represent an obstacle to progress.

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Some people believe that teenagers should concentrate on all school subjects. Others believe that teenagers should focus on the subject that they are bet or that they find the most interesting. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Teenage is the age where the individual themselves are fighting their own battle . In that circumstances, there are lots of stuff that they want their hand into . Students of that age have got so much in their plate . A lot of questions may arise to this situation and every parent or guide have their own way of dealing with it.

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Some feel that tourism endangerers culture while others feel it is beneficial. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

Tourism is a major industry that contributes to economic growth , yet it is often debated whether it harms or preserves cultural heritage . While some argue that tourism leads to cultural erosion . Others believe it helps preserve traditions and brings financial benefits. discuss both opinions and give my own view.

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A lot of places in the world rely on tourism as a main source of income. Unfortunately, tourism can also be a source of problems if it is not managed correctly. Describe the advantages and disadvantages of tourism in the modern world. Do you think that benefits of tourism outweight its drawbacks?

As tourism is getting really a lot of popularity in terms of many economical, social and financial perspective . If used properly then it definetely has so many pros but if its mishandled then the cons cannot be neglected . This essay will try to explain why is it the reason .

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To meet the grow need for food to support an increasing population, a country should make use of edible insects as a food source. However, some people believe that insects are not only unhealthy but harvesting them will also negatively affect nature. What are the benefits and drawbacks of eating insects?

There is no doubt that these days we face a shortage of food with increasing the number of people. The question is, should we make an insects as food for people? In this essay i will discuss my view in this subject.

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At the present time, the population of some country includes a relatively large number of young adult, compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?

In the present days, the overall population in the world have a large number of young adult, compared with older people which are slightly reduced by significantly situations in nowadays, for instance, economics, environmental problems, or other relatively moments. Hence, this essay will shows the advantages and disadvantages of this topic.

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Shopping is the favorite pastime for most of the young people. Why do you think is that? Do you think they should be encouraged to do some other useful activities?

It is generally observed that majority of youngsters give preference to do shopping in their leisure time. It is mainly due to the influence of social media. However, I believe that it is beneficial for them if they do take part in valuable engagements.

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It is responsiblitity of individuals to save and provide for their own retirement. Governments have no obligation to provide this benefit. To what extend do you agree or disagree with these statements ?

It is control of persons to save and offer for their own retirement. Government have no consideration to develop this advantageous. I disagree with this statement owing to the following reasons.

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Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree? What other measures do yu think might be effective?

This essay deals with the agreement that is related to raise of cost in petrol will resolve traffic and pollution. I totally disagree with this logic, because there are other factors taken into consideration for rising pollution.Let's discuss about that in the upcoming Paragraph.

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Global warming/Climate change are pressing problems that every country and the world will have to deal with in the future. What are the causes of global warming? What are some possible solutions? (Probable question)(BAYRAM)

Today,Global warming is one of the most critical concerns the world encounters. It also predicts possible problems for next years.There are some reasons which cause increasing temperatures in the atmosphere.This essay will provide proven factors and suitable solutions to overcoming concern.

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Global warming/Climate change are pressing problems that every country and the world will have to deal with in the future. What are the causes of global warming? What are some possible solutions? (Probable question)

Today,Global warming are one of the most critical concerns the world encounter.it also predict possible problem for next years.There are some reasons which cause to increasing temperatures on atmosphere.This essay will provide proven factors and suitable solutions to overcoming concern.

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Some people think that government funding for schools should be spent on science subjects rather than on other subjects. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

here are different views on whether government funding for the schools subject such as science or it should be spent on other subjects. I strongly agree that the science curriculum is more important than other terms at school.The essay will discuss supportive reasons for this view and present my own opinion.

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In many countries, people are now living longer than ever before. Some people say an ageing population creates problems for governments. Other people think there are benefits if society has more elderly people. To what extent do the advantages of having an ageing population outweigh the disadvantages

In today's world, longevity are more likely to be seen in people than the past. The ageing community has some positive and negative impacts on society. It is considered by some inviduals that longevity of population has disadvantages to governments, while others believe that there are more advantages of ageing. This essay will discuss both the benefits and drawbacks of this issue.

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In many countries recently young single people have been living far from their parents,from the time they began studies or work and until they are married.Do you think there are more advantages or disadvantages to this trend?

Nowadays, many young single adults are living far away from their families, after they join univeristies or the workforce until they get married. I think it is beneficial for the youth to live indepently from their parents before they get married, because it will help them to gain life expereiance and mature faster, which make them prepared for marriage's responsiblity in the future. In this essay, I will discuss this matter in detail.

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You are a student at your local college. The school is considering offering health insurance to all its students. This would include 50% coverage of dental, vision, and prescription drugs. If the school decides to implement this plan, $100 would be added to each student's fees every semester. Which option do you prefer? Explain your choice? Option A: Approve the plan Option B: Reject the plan

Recently, the managers of the local college made a descision to offer health insurance which is include 50% coverage of dental, vision, and prescription drugs. Therefore, if everybody be agree with this plan, then the parents have to pay 100$ extra every semester. I disagree with this plan because of two reasons. I will explain in this following statement.

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Some schoolchildren dislike learning maths What might be the reason for this? What might be the best ways to make learning maths enjoyable for schoolchildren.

These days many puple spend most of their time in social media such as Instagram, Telegram and so on. That is why students lose interest in exact subjects like math and in this essay I will explain the reason for this circumstances and give solutions to them.

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[Detailed report of criminal act in the media can lead to negative effect on society. Therefore news media should be strictly controlled. To what extent do you agree or disagree?]

The use of news media should be limited because they are covering full length incidents that has negative impact on the society. I partially agree with this statement as it has both negative and positive consequences, will explain my thoughts in the upcoming paragraphs.

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Excessive traffic has made cities unpleasant places to live and work in. For this reason, private cars should be completely banned from o centers. to what extent do you agree or disagree?

Reading the task, I would say that I can't completely agree that cars should be totally banned from city centre.

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(S.A) Each year, the crime rate increases.What are the causes of crime and what could be done to prevent this rise in criminal activity?

It is a fact that the number of crimes rise every year.Since people are forced to suffer from offenses,the problem should be solved by both the government and the public.This essay will explain causes of the issue and show measures that lead to people tackling it.

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Some feel that tourism endangers culture while others feel it is beneficial.

Nowadays, tourism is developing increasingly day by day. Some people believe that tourism is dangerous for culture. However, others think it is beneficial. And these concepts are leading to many arguments. In this essay, I will discuss both views and mention bellow my own opinions.

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