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Children's Education is expensive. In some countries, the government pays some or all of the costs. Do the advantages outweight its disadvantages?

Nowadays children's education requires a high expenditure, which in some countries is totally or partially paid by the government. Personally, I think advantages outweight drawbacks in a substantial way.

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Some sociologists argue that the widespread proliferation of algorithms and automated decision-making in the judicial and financial systems eliminates human bias and guarantees fairness. Others, contend that these technological systems merely entrench and perpetuate systemic societal inequalities.

Some social scientists believe that the global proliferation of automated systems in the legal and banking institutions reduces human bias and ensure fairness. However, others suggest that these technological programs just reinforce and maintain social discrimination.

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In some countries, the government has tried to reduce traffic. For instance, they impose a congestion tax during rush hours. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

Nowadays, traffic jam has become common problem, in some countries, the government has tried to reduce traffic, while they imposed a congestion tax during peak hours. From my perspective, I think that is a positive development since people may change the ways hot they commuting to work and improving nature surroundings.

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Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment; only governments and large companies can make a difference. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, some people think that society can do nothing to improve the environment, while governments and large companies can make a difference. From my perspective, I totally agree with this statement because they can impose taxes regarding nature and can allocate funds for this issue.

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The best way to motivate employees is to increase their salaries. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Are there any other ways to encourage employess to work more efficiently?

Currently, it is very common that after a period of time people gets tired of doing its job's. However, some studies suggested that a rise in incomes it is necesary to encourage people. Although there are another ways such as Bonus and trips, I believe that an increase in the base salary has a stronger reaction in workers life's.

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some people believe that electronic games are improving the skills of young people. Others think that it is a complete waste of time. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

There is no denying the fact that electronic games is becoming increasingly popular. While it is a commonly held belief that it improve yong people skills, there is also agrument that opposes it. In my opinion, I consider that it improves the skills of young people.

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living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. to what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.

There is an ongoing argument that living in a foreign language country may create serious issues socially and practically. I largely agree with statement because language is one the most significant issues among immigrants. This essay will explain the reasons behind this statement.

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Nowadays, the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships people make? Has this become a positive or negative development? (250 words)

In recently, the way individuals interact with each other has changed because of technology impact. In my opinion, I think there are several ways that technology has effect on relationship of people. This is a positive development.

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It is suggested that everyone should have a car, a TV and a fridge. Do the disadvantages of this development for society outweigh the advantages?

In this contemporary society, it is a social norm to have casual technology developments in our everyday life, such as personal transportation or a television. Many people believe that those convenience are a must, while others believe that its’ unnecessary to own them. Personally, I believe that despite the problems, these devices’ can positively contribute to owner’s life.

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It is argued by some that the foremost environmental issue facing the world today is the disappearance of certain plant and animal species. Others contend that there are environmental issues of far greater significance. Discuss both perspectives and provide your own opinion

It is controversial that most of the environmental problems the world is going through currently is due to the extinction of certian plant and animal species. Others believe that there are other environmental issues with higher significance. While the disappearance of some animals and plants is of great importance there is a problem with far more complication which is the global warming. In my opinion , the global warming is affecting the planet and the ecosystem which causes the animals and plants disappearing .

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Many young people are leaving their homes in rural areas to study or work in the cities. What are the reasons? Do the advantages of this develoment outweigh the disadvantages?

In modern era, it is obvious that many individuals are relocating from counrtysides to urban areas in pursuit of greater education and better employment opportunities. In this essay, an attempt will be made to explore the reasons behind this practice, and evaluate the merits and demerits.

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It is important to give children the chance to act independently and make their own decisions from early age. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this idea?

There is a commonly held belief that it is a crucial for a child to make their own decisions in early age. I believe it is beneficial to developing their personality. So I totally agree.

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Nowadays, it is becoming increasingly common for individuals to change jobs or even professions several times during their working lives. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend?

Nowadays, public has a little hesitation about staying in one occupation. However, there is a growing trend of people changing jobs more frequently. This essay will discuss the advantages and disadvantages, and express my opinion.

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Some argue that schools should prioritize life skills such as working in teams and solving problems instead of traditional academics. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowdays a lot of people sure that schools need to teach more some life skills like teamworking and problem solution. Basic lessons such as math, science and history are important, but I believe that life skills are also that important and useful for the future. And this essay will explain why so.

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Some people think the best way to stay fit is by joining a gym, while others think doing everyday activities such as walking is sufficient. Discuss both views and give your opinion .

Many people think that to stay active in their life the best way is to join a gym, as it will help in reducing fat more efficiently, whereas others believe that walking is sufficient for maintaining good health. I believe both views will have correct in their place. I will be discussing this in the following paragraphs.

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Some people think that competition at work, at school and in daily life is a good thing. Others believe that we should try to cooperate more, rather than competing against each other. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

It is often argued that competition at educational institutes, at offices, and in daily life is a beneficial thing, while others argue that we should learn to cooperate with eachother. This essay will discuss both perspectives before explaining why I believe that in this contemporary era, competition is essential in every field of life.

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Some celebrities say their love lives shouldn’t be under scrutiny in the media. However, other people feel that they should accept this as part of their fame. Discuss both perspectives and give your opinion?

In the era of social media, everyone wants to know what is going on in the lives of the celebrities they like. The decision to share the information of their personal activity in media depends on thier mutual understanding. In general, if we talk specifically about the love beings, most of famous individuals like to keep it in thier personal space or up to thier close ones. In my essay, I would love to share two different points of view on this topic.

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An increasing number of people are buying what they need online. What are the advantages and disadvantages for both side individuals and companies to shopping online ?

It has been observed that these days everyone change their way from shopping at the mall to shopping online, while this change have cons and pons for both side, companies and individuals. However, in this essay we will discuss the advantages and disadvantages for both side.

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Some people argue that the primary purpose of natural resources, such as forests and rivers, is to support human development and economic growth. Others believe that it is essential to protect the natural environment and its wildlife, even if it restricts human activity and progress. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

There is no denying the fact that the natural features may affect to human improvement. This essay will discuss about some people argue around the purpose of natural resources and the significance of protecting the natural environment and its wildlife, even if it restricts human activity and progress.

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Children should not be allowed to own smartphones until they reach the ages of 16. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, some children own smartphones even at the young age. Considering about the negativity, I strongly agree that smartphone should not be given until they reach certain age. Additionally, poor academic and lack of social interaction can be affected to the young ages because of massive spend of using smartphone.

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