IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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In some countries, there are many social problems involving teenagers. Some people say this is because parents spend much of their time at work and not at home. Do you agree or disagree?

These days there have been problems when it comes to teenagers. Other believe that parents didn’t focus on their child development, instead they’re pre-occupied of their jobs and status position. In this essay I will give my opinion if I agree or disagree.

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Information technology is changing many aspects of our lives and now dominates our homes, leisure and work activities. To what extent do the benefits of information technology outweigh the disadvantages?

In today’s era, technology is revolutionizing the way humans live and is taking over every part of the world. It has reached all the corners of our lives, even if it is work, fun, homes everywhere. There are numerous pros and cons of innovation that will be discussed in my upcoming essay.

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Some people think that old buildings should be knocked down and give way to modern facilities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There is an ongoing debate about ancient buildings, some arguing that ancient buildings should be knocked down and give space to build new facilities. In my opinion, I strongly agree, because old buildings are mostly seperated in small crowded cities. In addition, old buildings are designed completely different than modern houses. Hence, old buildings should be knocked to enhance the way people live.

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Some people believe that we cannot learn anything from the past for our life today, while others believe that history is a valuable source of information to understand human's life. Discuss both views and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

It is often argued that history cannot teach us everything in today’s era. While some individuals view history as a key source of information for understanding human experiences. I firmly contend that history plays a vital role in a human’s life. This essay will discuss both perspectives and explain why history assists in shaping a person’s life.

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Many countries are experiencing a decline in traditional arts and crafts as mass-produced goods become more affordable and accessible. Should governments financially support these traditional skills, even if they are not economically viable? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your experience.

Several countries are facing a decrease in traditional arts and crafts because a huge amount of produced products are more easily available. But these craftsmen should be financially supported by the government even though these are not profitable. In the upcoming paragraphs, I am going to explain the reasons behind this phenomenon.

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Some people believe that we cannot learn anything from the past for our life today, while others believe that history is a valuable source of information to understand human's life. Discuss both views and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

The issue of learning from the past has sparked considerable debate in recent years.Some people believe that we cannot learn anything from the past for our life today,while others argue that history is a valuable source of information to understand human life. This essay will examine both perspectives before offering my own opinion.Although both arguments have their merits, firmly believe that we can learn from past experince to avoid repeating the same mistakes and improve our lives.

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It is the job of governments and companies to deal with the huge environmental problems which we face. Individuals on their own can do little or nothing’. What is your opinion about this statement?

There is no denying that governments and companies are largely responsible for addressing the environmental problems. However, citizens also have some duties about protecting the environment. This essay will discuss both perspectives before presenting my own opinion, supported by relevant reasons and examples.

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The world of work is rapidly changing, and employees cannot depend on having the same job or the same working conditions for life. Discuss the possible causes and suggest ways to prepare people to work in the future.

Rapid alterations in the world lead to changing work and life conditions which people are getting used to. The causes of this appear to be focused on two areas, and a number of solutions also appear to be possible.

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Some people believe that we cannot learn anything from the past for our life today, while others believe that history is a valuable source of information to understand human's life. Discuss both views and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

There is no denying that history offers us valuable knowledge aand expeience. However, nowadays, some people believe that the information releted to the past has no contrubution to the modern life, while others think that the past plays a significant role in the present life. This essay will discuss both views before presenting my own opinion, supported by relevant examples.

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Some people think that old buildings should be knocked down and give way to modern facilities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In nowadays, many people believe that buildings with old history should be replaced with new and modern facilities area. In my opinion, I do believe that replacing old building with new facilities is a significant and great idea.

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Some people believe that we cannot learn anything from the past for our life today, while others believe that history is a valuable source of information to understand human's life. Discuss both views and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In nowaday's, many people think the learning from our life in the past is not useful and can not change anything, while others argue that our past is nessecary to help us remembering some information and understand our life's. I do belive that learning from our past life can be benificial fo our present lifs.

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Some people think that the media (newspapers) have the right to publish details of people’s private life, while other’s think it should be controlled ? Discuss both views

It is an undeniable fact that media such as newspaper and television have been major source of information around the world throughout the years. It is a topic of discussion whether they should be allowed to publicize someone's private information or not. Some individuals believe that it is not a problem for them to release something private about someone where others oppose.

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In many countries, primary and secondary schools close for two months or more in the summer holidays. What is the value of long school holidays? What are the arguments in favour of shorter school holidays?

The school break period has opened an argument whether it should be conducted in long or short days. The extended vacation is generally viewed as a moment for the pupils to get a decent pause from the institute tasks. Meanwhile, the temporary break could become purposeful for the generations to train their responsibilities. However, the number of days itself should be revisited by weighing the benefits of longer and shorter vacations.

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Some people think that governments should give financial support to creative arts such as painters and musicians. Others believe that creative artists should be funded alternative sources. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. (2nd time)

Many individuals believe that the governments should invest more money in creative materials, such as paintings, sculptures or songs for these talented artists. Meanwhile, others claim that this kind of investment should be optional. From my personal perspective, I strongly agree that funding creative artists should be an alternative due to several reasons that will be clarified in this essay.

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Compare the advantages and disadvantages of three of the following as media for communicating and information. State which you consider to be the most effective - comics - Books - radio - television - film - theatre Give reason for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experiance.

Nawadays, there are several media to express opinion, spred information or promote products. Companies and other institution shoul chose what they would use to reash their gould about communication. Although all different types of communication resorces have pros and coins, I strongly believe that books is far the best way to give infirmation and cominicate ideas because the information is preserve for long time and its content could be deepen and studied .

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In many countries crime rates among teenagers are higher than among other groups.What are the causes for this problem and what can be done to solve this?

Crime rates in many countries differ but are majorly caused by teenagers as they make up the highest population and are the youth in many countries.Due to various factors associated with increased illegal activities ,most of the teenagers also end up being arrested through juvenile courts,engaged in community cleanup punishments or end up being killed.

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The plans below show the site of a farm in 1950 and the same site today. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The given map illustrates the Beechwood farm site in 1950 and how it looks nowadays.

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•It is thought by some that it is better to live in a city while others believe that life is beer in the countryside. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Some people think it is better to live in a city while some of them believe that life is better in the countryside. Living in the city can be easy access for everything and Living countryside is more peaceful than urban areas. Rest of the essay I’m going to discuss both views.

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One of the major problems that faces today’s governments is creating enough satisfactory housing for their increasing populations whilst (=while) still trying to protect the environment. Discuss this statement and give your opinion.

Nowadays, government has been facing issues building adequately habitable infrastructure without damaging the environment. I opine that government has been doing it's best by approving new sactions, housing loans and investment opportunities and investing in acquiring new structural technology which promotes environmental stability.

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Some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about a person’s culture and character from their choices of clothes. Do you agree or disagree?

It is an undeniable fact that a person's way of presenting themselves explains alot about them. Nowadays, it is an ongoing debate in general public whether a person's character and culture should depend on their apparel choices or not. In my opinion, i believe that a person's character and culture can not be judged through the clothes they put on their bodies because character is depicted from one's actions and cultural appearances are not very popular on daily basis these days.

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