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it is important for people to take risks, both in their professional lives and their personal lives. do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages?

There is an argument that taking risk is essential for people in both professional and personal lives. I think the adavantages of taking risk outweigh the disadvantages. This essay will clearly explain both sides.

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Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Is it a positive or negative trend?

Most children spend a large amount of time every day on their smartphones. Although this is a largely unwelcome trend, there is upside as well. Firstly, in this essay I will discuss the negative impacts of smartphones on children before explaining positives.

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Some people think that the government should establish free libraries in each town. Others believe it is a waste of money since people can access the internet at home to obtain information. Discuss both the side and give your opinion.

There is no denying the fact that people need to establish free libraries in each city for become good members of society. While it is a commonly held belief that the government is responsible for providing a free library, there is also an argument that some people see that a west of money because the internet has a free information and a person can access the network at home. This essay will analyse this topic from both points of view and express my opinion.

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In many countries, people are now living longer than ever before. Some people say an ageing population creates problems for governments. Other people think there are benefits if society has more elderly people. To what extent do the advantages of having an ageing population outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, there is no denying the fact that people are now living longer than in the past. While it is a commonly held belief that the ageing population creates issues for governments, there is also an argument that there are benefits if the community has more elderly people. This essay will analyse this topic from both views and express my opinion.

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Social media has amassed large user bases. Do the advantage of being a part of social media site outweighs the disadvantage?

The topic of the social media has amassed large user bases has been the subject of considerable debate in recent years. Some people believe that social media has several benefits that will affect people`s lives, while others believe that the drawbacks exceed the benefits. This essay will explore the advantages and disadvantages of the social media.

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We now live in a consumer culture. What are the reasons for this and what are the consequences?

Nowadays, a consumer culture is becoming more popular because of a large number of different products. One of the reasons is that people spend a lot of time on social media, so it's easier for salesmen to sell their items by using marketing strategies, because of which society has a big wish to buy them. In my opinion, the main consequence of this problem is internet fraud, because a lot of costumers in all ages lose money, because they trust in advertisements.

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The percentage of overweight children in western society has increased by almost 20% in the last decade. discuss the causes and effects of this disturbing trend.

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In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want on web or phone without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

It is argued that printed newspapers and statement will no longer be bought in the future because people will be able to read all content for free on the internet or on their phones. I disagree with this statement because many population still prefer paper, and online content is not completely free.

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Art classes, like painting and drawing are as important as other subjects, so they should be compulsory subject in high school. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

As there is a decline in the number of high school students who are not interested in art classes, it is highly argued that these creativity-based subjects ought to be compulsory as other general classes. While others oppose this notion, I personally argue in favour.

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Some people think that university education should be free for everyone. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, high education has become free charge for everyone who wants to study. Some of the population thinks that colleges should be unpaid for everyone wants to study, while others think that it shouldn't be free for all people. In my perspective, I believe that universities should be free for everyone. In this essay, I will explain why it should be better to be unpaid for everyone wants to have knowledge.

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Many countries now have people from different cultures and ethnic groups. What are the reasons for this? Is it a positive or negative development?

World globalization has started with a mix of cultures and nationality is some countries. People are looking for better quality of life and opportunities overseas. In my opinion, imigrants are a great development for certain countries, since the people have a degree to work in areas in need and respect the local culture.

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All the people in a company should be treated equally and provided with the same numbers of vacations in a year.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

All the people in a busnises should be treated equally and provided with the same numbers of vacations in a year.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Nowadays, some workplaces tend to employ equal numbers of men and women. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

In the modern workplace, recent development show that same composition of men and women that is need to be employed is more familiar. Many companies tend to make it diversification of their employee based on their performance rather than their gender. However, some field institutions still prioritize man as an employee due to their physical strength and the tradition of men itself as a job seeker, so if women is appointed to be an employee it will impact on institutions performance. In this regard, these two sides of view are still need to discuss more elaborately whether it is a positive or negative development.

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Fossil fuels, such as coal, oil, natural gas, are used in many countries. But in some countries, the use of alternative sources of energy, including wind and solar power, are encouraged. Is this trend a positive or a neg

NATURAL ENERGY SUCH AS COAL, OIL ,AND GAS ARE UTILISED IN MANY COUNTRIES NOWDAYS. HOWEVER THE ENCOURAGEMENT OF ENERGY RENEWLABLE IN SOME COUNTRIES IS BECOME MORE SIGNIFIGANT. WHILE THIS TREND HAS CERTAIN DRAWBACKS . I STRONGLY BELIEVE THAT ITS ADVANTAGES MAKE IT A POSITIVE DEVELOPMENT.

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In many countries around the world, rural people are moving to cities, so the population in the countryside is decreasing. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

In the modern world, the demographic problem is becoming more and more significant. People all around the world are moving from rural areas to big cities. There are both positive and negative effects of such situation and in this essay I will discuss them and provide a conclusion. Though opinions about this topic usually varies, I personally believe that this is mostly a positive change.

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Many people like to wear fashionable clothes. Why do you think this is the case? Is this a good thing or a bad thing? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant ideas from your knowledge or experience

Nowadays, people prefer wearing fashionable clothes. This essay will discuss the main aspects of this topic and examine its effects on society. From my point of view, people want to follow the latest fashion trends not only to keep up, but also to express their personal style.

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In many countries around the world, rural people are moving to cities, so the population in the countryside is decreasing. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

In numerous countries worldwide , rural individuals are relocating to cities, so the number of people in the countryside is decreasing. Although this trend may have some positive impacts, it also has significant disadvantages . In this essay, I will firstly discuss the negatives of moving to cities, before explaining its benefits.

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Some parents think giving children a small amout of money on weekly basis is good, while others think it is bad. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Two groups of people have a different views about giving money to children by their parents. The first group says that it better to give them a small amount of money weekly. While, the other believe this is bad. For me, I support the view about giving kids a small amount of money weekly which is more beneficial for them.

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in some countries owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positives or negative situation?

House rental become a trend for people in some countries, people are less prefered on purchase their own residental right now. Since values changing and house rent getting higher and higher, the housing market is transmitting. However, it might be a hidden bomb for the government and society.

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Some people prefer to buy high-tech electronic devices like cell phones and computers instant when they are introduced for the first time, while others believe it is better to buy these products after a while when they are in the stores. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Two groups of people have different opnions about the time of buying new devices, such as computers and mobile phones. The first group prefers to buy them once they are in stores. While, others differently say that it is more beneficial to buy them after sometimes of avalibality in stores. For me, the former opnion might be better for users for some reasons.

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