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As technology advances, travelling to space is likely to become an option for holidaymakers in the future. What do you think are the advantages and disadvantages of space tourism?

As there are advancements in technology, there will an option for individual who are wanting to travel to space in the future. This essay will discuss what are the pros and cons for travelling into the space where I believe it may hamper the environment wellbeing.

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Some people think young people should be required to have full time education until they are at least 18 years old. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people believe that young people should invest their time in education fully before they reach 18 years old. I agree to this statement to some extent because of the time needed for brain developement, social skill enhancement, and maturity to choise a proper career that full time education can provide.

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Many people believe that today there is a general increase in anti- social behaviour and lack of respect for others. What might have caused this situation? How to improve it? Or what are the reasons for this and how to fix the situation?

Undoubtedly, some people are getting more worsed due to changes in their behaviours along with do not giving respect to others in today's world. In this essay, I will analyze the reasons along with suitable solutions to overcome above-mentioned statement in the upcoming paragraphs.

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An increasing number of professionals, such as, teachers and doctors are leaving their own countries to work in developed countries. What are the causes of this problems? What solutions can you suggest?

Nowadays,tendency of professionals,such as,teachers and doctors leaving their countries to work in more developed ones gained a momentum.This means a loss in number of specialists in less developed countries.This essay will discuss the causes of this problem and suggest a solution.

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Many people believe that education and high qualification will bring success. Others think that it is not required to achieve success in life. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

There is no doubt that these days many people believe that why. Why many people believe the high education it is important for good life but rather than must the people thinks not important to bring good qualifications to get better life.

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InMore and more people could now access information from computers and other electronic devices. Therefore, there is no need to use printed books, magazines, or newspapers on paper. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In the past, Letters and Newspapers are vital for sending information. Entertainments were usually on television such as football games, television dramas and reality shows. Moreover, students had to prepare books for each day's lessons. Some heavy books were hard to carry to school. That was the reason why studying was very hard.

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The precentage of overweight children in western society has increased by almost 20% in the last ten years. Discuss the causes and effects of this disturbing trend.

It is indeed true that, nowadays, people are suffereing more from different types of illness and diseases aa compared to earlier. It is stated that obesity among youth has surged approximately 20% since last decade in the western side of the world. I will discuss the reasons and impacts of this current trend in the subsequent paragraphs.

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The percentage of overweight children children in western society has increased by almost 20% in the last decade. discuss the causes and effects of this disturbing trend.

Over the last few decades,the proportion of overweight for children who live in the west of community has risen dramatically at roughly %20.In other words,more and more kids are becoming fat every day.It is obvious that this issue has alot of various causes and effects.In this essay,I will address some reasons and also I will express some significant consequences.

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Some people think that the teenage years are the happiest time of most people's lives. Others think that adult life brings more happiness, in spite of grater responsibilities. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

The life of a normal humain contains three phases. The first is the childhood phase. The second is the teenage years and the finally phase is the adult life. Some people think that the teenage years are the happiest time of most people's lives. Others think that adult life brings more happiness, in spite of grater responsibilities. The both groups have logical reasons.

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An increasing number of people are choosing to have cosmetic surgery in order to improve their appearance. Why are more people choosing to have operation to change the way they look? Do you think this a positive or negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Have you ever thought about having operation to change the way you look?Well,there many people who chose to change the way they look.people who do it have their own reasons although this they that can lead to many drawbacks,

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In some countries university students live at home with their family while they study, whereas in other countries students attend university in another city. Do you think the benefits of living away from home during university outweigh the disadvantages?

In recent studies, it has shown that a huge number of international students prefer to study in another city or country. This is due to a lot of reasons and benefits a student can gain while studying elsewhere. For example, they study elsewhere to adapt to a different change in environment, making them more flexible and can easily adapt in other environments in the future.

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In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why is this be the case? Do you think this a positive or negative situation?

There is a negative situation in some countries which is nesseccary for people to buy a house insted of renting one because of incresing the cost of every single thing that is the result of turning up the renting cost in some countries.

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Some companies sponsor sport and sports stars as a way to advertise themselves. Some people think it is good, while others think there are disadvantages. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In today’s world, numerous businesses support sports and idol athletics as a way of spreading themselves, a number of societies believe it is an interesting opinion, while other people have adverse views. In my point of view, advertising the image of idols in outside activities has both a beneficial view for them and their concern, on the contrary also it brings the adverse effect on the companies if they are advertising incorrect people.

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Write about the following topic: The most important aim of science should be to improve people’s lives. To what extend do you agree and disagree with this statement?

The primary goal of science should be to improve people’s live. I believe, to date, science has benefited humanity through various advancements, including medical advancement and technological innovations.

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Some people think that hosting an international sport event is good for the country, while some people think it is bad. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It’s believed that an international sport events are hosted by a country is good however others said that it is bad for the country. Both sides have pros and cons for the country. So when the country take a responsibility like that, the government will hold a balance.

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Global warming is one of the biggest threats human face in 21 st century and sea levels are continuing to rise at alarming rates. What problems are associated with this and what are some possible solutions.

Global warming is one of the most pressing issue facing our planet today, moreover, consequences of a warming climate are becoming increasingly evident, with rising temperatures. In this essay, l will attempt to shed light on the problems this trend gives rise to responsible and will propose some rational solutions to overcome this challenges.

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Doctor, nurses and teacher make a great contribution to society and should be played more than entertainment and sport celebrity. Do you agree or disagree

Education is the key to success. Health care workers and teachers play a vital role in the development of the society and they should be motivate more as compared to actors and fun industry. I completely agree with this statement. In the upcoming paragraphs, I will describe some points to support my opinion.

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With increasing popularity of online learning, some people believe that traditional classroom education will become obsolete. Do you agree? Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of both online and traditional learning methods.

Some individuals think that face to face education will become antiquated due to the rise of virtual learning nowadays. The writer disagree with the above statement. The essay will discuss both advantages and disadvantages of both virtual and face to face learning methods.

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Climate change is a big environmental problem that has become critical in last couple of decades. Some people claim that humans should stop burning fossil fuels and use only alternative energy resource, such as wind and solar power. Others say that oil, gas and coal are essential for many industries, and not using them will lead to economic collapse. What is your opinion? Support your point of view with relevant examples.

Weather alterations is major issue that got seriousness in the last few years. Few people believe that, we should restrict the usage of fossils and use other natural resources such as, wind and solar energy. Whereas, other people thought that these organic resources are crucial for the survival of our economy. In my opinion, use of oil and gas is important but, we should make measures to use other sources as well. In the upcoming paragraphs, I will describe some points to justify my opinion.

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IELTS Writing task 2: In the future, it seems it will be more difficult to live on the Earth. Some people think more money should be spent on researching other planets to live, such as Mars. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Due to the environmental problems that the world is facing nowadays, people argue that in the next years, people will have a difficult time to survive in Earth. In regard to this matter, government must invest in exploring other terrestrial planets that is inhabitable and I, mostly agree with this.

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