IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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In many countries, woman no longer feel the need to get married. Some people believe that this is because woman are able to earn their own income and therefore do not require the financial security that marriage can bring. To what extent do you agree?

The statement argues that woman dont need men anymore to provide them with financial security and therefore dont need to marry anymore. In this essay I will share my opinion.

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In many countries today, crime novels and tv crimes dramas are becoming more and more popular. Why do you think these books and tv shows are popular? What is your opinion of crime fiction tv crime dramas?

Nowadays in a majority of nations, crime ficion books and tv crimes series are attracting more and more people, and it is because they give us a change to learn more about the lives as detectives, polices and thieves that we are curious about. I believe this is a great opportunity for everyone who lives their lives regularly and just wants to experience the other exciting live happening in the crime ficion world.

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Some people believe that robots are important for humans to develop their future, while others think that it is a dangerous invention that will impact society negatively. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

There is a controversy among individuals in the businesses and industrial spheres due to whether robots are important for future development or will impact the communities negatively. I will discuss both point of veiw and give my opinion lastly.

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The increase in mobile phone use in recent years has transformed the way we live, communicate and do business. Mobile phones can also be the cause of social or medical problems. What forms do these problems take? Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages of mobile phones? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

There is no denying the fact that the use of smart phones has been increased lately, and plays a vital role in the human lives in terms of communication and business. This essay will discuss how the mobile phones usage will have a social cosequences, and whether the advantages will outweigh it is drawbacks or not.

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Some people think increasing business and cultural contacts between nationals is positive. Others think it leads to the disappearance of national identity. Discuss both views and state your own opinion.

There is no denying the fact that it is an advantage to rise the business and cultrual between the counteris. While it is a commonly held belief that it is a beneficial to have a sharing business and cultrual relation across many nationals, there is also an argument that having a contact with the outsiders will have a potential negative impact, which it leads to forgetting the country identity.

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Some people believe that employers should not care about the way their employees dress, because what matter is the quality of their work. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The statement argues that employers should not care how their employees dress, since their quality of work matters more. I will share in this essay my opinion.

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Many people believe that cooking is an essential life skill and should be taught to both boys and girls in schools. Others disagree and believe that teaching cooking is a waste of valuable school time. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

People have different opinions regarding what should be included in school curriculum. Some supports the addition of cooking classes while others believe it is unnecessary. I believe that cooking can be added in curriculum but more importance should be given to core subjects.

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Governments give a lot of support to artists, even though some people think it is a waste of money that could have been used elsewhere. Discuss both views and give your opinion

Many people think that state should fund artworks to support artists. However, others disagree and say that governments should focus only in important aspects rather than arts. In my opinion, both perspectives are reasonable, but arts are essential for society's history and individuals creativity. On the one hand, it is believed by some people that government should spend money only for important aspects, such as poverty.

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In many cities, planners tend to arrange shops, schools, offices and houses in specific areas and separate them from each other. Do you think the advantages of this policy outweigh the disadvantages?

There is no denying the fact that in many cities, planners used to split the shops, schools, offices and houses and put them in an appropriate spot. While it is a commonly held belief that seperate and arrange the shops, offices, and houses in precise places would be an advantage policy, there is also an argument that opposes it. In my opinion, I consider that would be a posotive procedure and it will help the city to be more arragned.

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Companies that have a long average working time are more economically successful than those companies that do not have a long working time. Do you agree or disagree?

There is no denying the fact that long working hours play a vital role in the companies productivity. While it is a commonly held belief that, working in a long period of time increases the revenue of the companies, there is also an argument that oppses it. In my opinion, I consider that it is not an indicator that your company will grow due to the long working hours.

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Some people feel that the exploration of space justifies a large amount of government and private investment. Other people think that this field is of increasingly low relevance, and should not be a priority. Debate both sides of this discussion, and explain your own view. How important is it for us to explore space at the moment?

Nowadays, increasing number of countries has shown keen interest in space exploration. Some people reckon that it is worthwhile to spend a lot of money on it, while others believe that this is a less important area to focus on. I believe that it is crucial to invest in this field. In this essay, I will discuss both viewpoint in the forthcoming paragraphs.

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There seems to be an increasing number of serious crimes committed each year. While some think the best way is to use the death penalty as a deterrent, many people believe that other measures will be needed. Discuss both sides.

In recent years, there has been considerable debate about how authorities could restrain people committed crimes. Some people believe the death penalty will be the best option, while others believe several measures are needed. In my opinion, before the death sentence is given to criminals, many aspects need to be considered to avoid misjudgment.

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Nowadays, people get married and have children after the age of 30. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this development.

These days, people in this modern era delays their marriages as they want to become financially indepandent so they can spent their life in good ways. There are some pros and cons of delaying marriages which must be take into consideration.

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Nowadya, it is possible for people to buy many products and pay for treatments to look young , is this a good thing or bad thing. give reasons with your knowledge and experience.

In this digital world, it is convenient for people to purchase branded products and take costly treatments to keep themselves young. In my opinion, it is a good way for olders to see see young. In this essay, i will discuss some reasons why this is a good thing for people to buy highly cost products and take treaments which helps them to look younger.

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In many parts of the world, childhood obesity has become a major public health problem. What are the main causes of this issue, and what solutions can be proposed to address it?

In many world regions, one of the major public health problems is adolescent obesity. This is happening because of children are now less active than previously. However, setting rules and Combining their favourite food with healthier option can be on of the solutions.

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It is better to be self-employed rather than work for a company or organisation. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Nowadays, some people think that rather than working for a company it is better to self-employed. I strongly agree with this statement because this can lead to better productivity and it can save a lot of resources.

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the natural resources such as oil, forest and fresh water are being consumed at an alarming rate. what problems does it cause? how can we solve these problems?

There is a global alarming rate due to the high consuming of the natural resources, such as oil,forests and clean water supply .I will discuss in this essay the main issues and give a possible solutions .

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Some cities ban private cars from entering the center and force people to use bicycle and buses. Do the advantages of this policy outweigh the disadvantages.

As we know pollution is the most common debate topic, due to this, they not only take action and ban private vehicle in few cities from entering the center,but also put presure on individuals to use public transports instead. According to me , there are more demerits of this other than merit.

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some poeple think that succes in life comes from hard work and deternimation while others think that there are more important factors such as money and appearance . discuss both view and give your opinion.

In recent years, successeding in life have beoe utmost important. Many individuals consider money and appearance as a key to success, while others believe that hardwork and determination in life helps them get successfull. Although, both the views could be considered, I believe that financial background and clothing doesnt matter that much to achieve somthing in life.

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The topic of renewable energy is widely discussed these days. What are the main reasons behind the increasing use of renewable energy sources, and is this trend a positive or negative development for the environment?

In recent years, many people around the world discuss increasing resources of using renewable energy. There are several advantages and disadvantages of using renewable energy for the environment. I will discuss in this essay, and I completely agree with this trend because it can bring several benefits on the ecosystem.

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