IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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it is important for everyone,including young people,to save money for their future. to what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.

It is often argued that the most significant thing for the most people including young one's is saving money to the future. I partly agree with this opinion and think that saving money is slightly important than spending it.

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Some people think that the government's decision to close the land borders in order to boost local production is a great idea. what are the advantages and disadvantages of this decision? What alternative decisions could have been used to boost local production?

It is a good initiative by governent to close the land borders to uplift local manufacturing. This essay will discuss pros and cons of the goverment's decision. I will provide some suggestions that can used to increase in-house manufacturing.

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Some people feel that the government should pay the costs of running universities so that a university education will be free for anyone who wants it. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

It is argued that government should have to pay the the costs of running universities, the main reason behind them is to make it free for everyone to study there. I support this statement to large extent but there are some drawbacks too. Before commenting on my opinion it is argued with further explanation.

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Some people say that in our modern age, it is unnecessary to teach children about the skills of handwriting. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays, It is an undeniable fact that teaching handwriting to children has always been a debatable issue. Few citizens think that, In the recent era, it is not at all worth to educate young borns about the art of handwriting. I am completely disagree with this statement and believes that, this should be the first step a children needs to learn after joining learning institution.

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Some people think only best students should be rewarded. Others think we should reward students who make progress. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

In recent years, it has been widely recognized that awarding should be limited to successful scholars only, while others believes in rewarding scholars who make a development and effort. From my perspective, I fully agree with both views in different way of situations. In the following paragraph I will discuss both views while giving the reasons behind my agreement and disagreement in each one, yet I will debate my opinion.

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The crime rate nowadays is decreasing compared to the past due to advance technology which can prevent and solve crime. Do you agree or disagree ? 07:07

In recent days, crime rate is reduced compared to the old time because improved technology overcomes and solves crime. This essay agrees that climate rate is going to decrease with the help of cutting-edge technology since we have surrounded by advanced alarm systems, well technologies against to cyber attacks and as last powerful camera systems.

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Some people believe that only employees who have worked at a company for a long time deserve to be promoted to a higher position. What is your opinion about this?

Many argues that only promotion is only intitled to the employes who served company for long duration. I disagree because skill evaluation and equality plays major role in company while promoting someone.

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Nowadays most of the people prefer using keyboard for their assignments and they are not used pen or pencil. Discuss the both points give your opinion

There is no denying the fact that people need to write their duties. While it is a common held belief that writing by using keyboard is favourable, there is also an argument that say using the traditional way for their assignments by ysin pen is more fast. In my opinion, although, using pencil or pen is an active but I prefer to using the modern method by using keyboard because it is easy to read.

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Some people suggest that a country should try to produce all the food for its population and import as little food as possible. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There are some suggestions raising significantly these days that it is beneficial for dwellers if a nation providing food and limiting the importation as much as possible. In my perspective, I disagree with this statement.

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many crimes are often related to the consumption of alcohol. what can be measured to tackle this problem?

Needless to say using alcohol is one of the most considerable contributors to committing crime. There are several valid ways to tackle this tendency such as some restrictions and promoting public programs.

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Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if the wish. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Many have this belief that professional doctor and engineer should serve the homeland for where they got the education from, while others opinion that it depends on their desire where they like to live. As both sides has their own merits — I believe that freedom should be prioritized. This essay will discuss both opposing point of views and explain why I agree with the former opinion.

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You attended a conference and noticed that a speaker gave incorrect information. - say what was the mistake - how it influenced the presentation - suggest a way to correct it

I am writing to bring your attention to a mistake made by one of the speakers during the recent technology conference held on April 20th.

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In some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message. (KLL)

In some nations, people tell to children that they can accomplish what they want if they strive hard sufficiently. This essay will show that while there are some advantages such as preparing children to their future from now, different disadvantages like kids' hurting themselves with trying hard exist.

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Some people think that it’s important to spend money on family celebrations(e.g. weddings, birthdays. But some think expensive celebrations are a waste of money.

There is a debate over about whether spending money is essential celebration such as weddings and birthday . Some argue that luxury celebrations are waste of money . In my opinion, both have their advantages; however , I personally support negative aspect .

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According to some people, death penalty must be used as a punishment for people who committed serious crimes. What are the advantages and disadvantages of capital punishment? Umar 2

According to several individuals, the death penalty ,must be used as a punishment for humans who commit the serious offences. The advantage is that, already died people would be an example to others to prevent the number of crimes,scaring them ,but the disadvantage is there is always a chance to kill inaccurate inhabitants.

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Many people believe that watching a live performance is more enjoyable than watching the same event on television. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

According to some, they believe that watching a live performance is more enjoyable,while other think is watching the same event on televison is less, i will discuss both opinion and give my honest opinion with examples in this essay.

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The rate of cybercrime is increasing day by day in the world. What are the reasons and what can be done to tackle this issue?

Today, the world faces an issue that the rate of internet crime is rising. This essay will explore possible causes of this problem and will try to find solutions.

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Animal extinction is a natural process, like the dinosaur did in the past. People have no reason to prevent this from happening.

In recent years, animal preservation has become a controversial for humankind. While some argue that animal extinction is an inevitable process and it is unreasonable for humans to prevent this from happening, I firmly disagree with the statement.

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Some people think that you can only learn about the cultures of different place by traveling to there. other people think that you can learn just as much about these places from reading books and watching travel documentaries about them. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

In the contemporary era, some people thought that you can learn about the cultures of different place by traveling to there. While, others argue that you can learn just as much about these places from reading books and watching travel documentaries about them. In this essay, I will discuss both perspectives before presenting my opinion.

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Modern use of communication have reduced the amount of time for people to interact. This has negative impacts on social lives of people. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The blessing of latest communication channels decreased the numbers of real-life interactions which some believe to be a negative development upon social lives of individual. I agree because people get accustomed to put less effort, keep the connections and seek of their comfort zone.

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