IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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Many countries consider eighteen-year-olds to be adults, while other countries don’t. What do you think about it? Give your opinion and some relevant examples based on your own experience.

There are countries in the world that consider eighteen-year-olds as adults, in contrast some countries in the world consider them still underdeveloped. I believe that at the age of eighteen a person is developed enough both mentally and physically to make decisions concerning themselves independently.

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Caring for children is probably the most important job in any society. Because of this, all mothers and fathers should be required to take a course that prepares them to be good parents. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?

Nowadays, people in different societies believe that taking care of children is the most significant work. Therefore, they consider that all parents have to be passed from course that could help them to be great parents. I partly agree with this trend, yet not every couple could afford the cost and the time.

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Some people argue that primary schools focus too much on formal learning. To what extent do you agree with this opinion? How important do you think it is for children to play as well as learn in theprimary school classroom?

The increasing pressence of elementary schools fuss over on academic learning has become a noticable phonmenon all over the world. While some may disagree with that point , from my perspective, focusing too much on formal learning is inappropriate, and it is vital for children to focus on academic studying and learning.

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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.

Certainly, it is absolutely true that the language is humans` most advanced and important factor aiming for communicating with each other and also a tongue weapon at the same time. We all know that language is our appropriate way of showing our emotions and also it plays a huge role on the way we understand each other precisely. However, it is also something that whenever it is misused, it can cause any kind of problems especially the social problems that we can face within a harsh emotions. I completely agree that there are several considerable advantages of learning a foreign language in different country; and these advantages have a huge impact on both our outlook and linguistic. I think first main popular belief is learning a new language with high pressure can fasten the process. Psychologically, if a person wants to learn something faster, adding pressure can sometimes helps on a right way with boosting person`s effort and productivity. As a result, even simple pressure for...

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some people claim that not enough of the waste from home is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recyclings for governments to make it legal requirement. To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste.

Many people think that not enough waste from houses are recycling. They thought that the only way to increase the recycling is if governments make it legal requirement. While without laws many people did not give attention to things that can be recycle and just throw them to rubbish, I strongly agree that laws are necessary to teach people how to recycle their waste also reduce the number of rubbish by taking important things from it.

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The topic of renewable energy is widely discussed these days. What are the main reasons behind the increasing use of renewable energy sources, and is this trend a positive or negative development for the environment?

Green energy transition is a trending topic recently and received many concerns across the global studies, due to its role to delay global warming and replace limited fossil fuels. In my opinion, this development is more beneficial, which will be examined more in this essay.

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Many children today are overweight. This is a very serious health problem. Give the reasons for child obesity and give solutions to fix this health problem

Life is changed nowadays and that includes how children live. Today there is a serious health issue involving children. Many of them are overweight and unhealthy. This essay will examine the reasons for child obesity and give solutions to fix this health problem.

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In their advertising, business nowadays usually emphasize that their products are new in some way. Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

At present sceniro, while advertising their product, business use to highlight their product as new in some aspect. The main reason behind it is competative market. I think it is a positive development because every product provides new tests to the user.

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There is an increasing amount of advertising directed at children, which encourages them to buy goods such as toys and snacks. Many parents are worried, while some advertisers claim that they provide useful information to children. Discuss both and opine.

in this fast pacing world, when everything is globally available and socially advertize, people often intend to buy what they see virtually. when the child start growing from their childhood, many parents often introduce them to technology, when they should encourage them to play fully away from devices in open playgrounds with other peers. so using this technology children see so many advertisements on toys and snacks which attracts them more. in this essay, i will be discussing both the opinions.

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Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be share freely.

With the rapid development in our society, people seem to pay more attention to the accessibility of resources, such as scientific research, the business project and the academic world. However, while some people claim that providing all information for everyone is the better way, others suppose that invaluable information should not be completely free of charge. This article is going to explain both aspects and give my opinion afterwards.

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It is increasingly common for people to get the news from social media. Traditional sources of news like newspapers, television and radio are becoming less popular. Why is this so? Is it a positive or negative development?

More and more people think that news is increasingly easy to found in social media has become a significant issue in modern life. This essay will first discuss why people prefer to use the easiest technologies to get the news, and then will explain why geting news from social media is a positive development. In my opinion, I believe that social media is help you to get the news faster than television.

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Some people belive that testing products on animal should be banned but others think that it is necessary. Discuss both views and give your opnion

Some argue that eximained products on animals must be prhibieted, others convinced it is crucial thing.While experiment products on animals can be unjustic and selfish thing,I believe doing that is a crucial thing due to humanity elevation.

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nowsadays children spend a lot of time watching TV and playing computer games. However it does not help in improving children's mental abilities. Do you agree or disagreed

Today, the amount spent of online games and TV had increased among youngsters. These habits does not help to develop their mental abilities. In my opinion, i agree with this statement. Computer games do more harm than good to our children.

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Should government invest more money in public transport instead of building more roads?

Is it worth investing on public transport?

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Access to clean water is a basic human right. Therefore every home should have a water supply that is provided free of charge. Do you agree or disagree?

.I disagree with the idea, that is, a water supply should not be completely free to access for every home.

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There seems to be an increasing number of serious crimes committed each year.While some think the best way is to use the death penalty as a deterrent, ,many believe that other meausres will be needed. Discuss both sides.

The number of crimes is increasing in many parts of the world annually. So, there is a strong debate in many societies whether, death penalty is sufficent to solve this issue or other actions are needed to deal with this serious issue.This essay will discuss both points of view.

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Nowadays more and more people are purchasing online instead of physically going to stores. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

In comtemporary, Individuals tend to do shopping online rather than traditional way, as it facilitate the procedure. I firmly agree that is a positive trend as it brings purshasing and reduce time consuming .

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There seems to be an increasing number of serious crimes committed each year.While some think the best way is to use the death penalty as a deterrent, ,many believe that other meausres will be needed. Discuss both sides.

These days, the criminal cases gradually increase every years. In society, some people agree with death punishment, whereas the rest of people prefer other alternative. Considering what penalty should be taken, there are several determination that potentially may solve the issue, which will explain in this notion.

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some people decide to start their own business instead of working for a company or organization. Do the advantage outweigh the disadvantages?

We can agree that you can decide the way you earn money, for some people they like being business men and working for them self, there is also the kind of individuals that like working for a firm. We will be discussing both views in this essay.

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Teenagers are facing more problems these days as compared to old days. The reason is that parents are spending less time at home. Agree or Disagree.

In a modern society teenagers can come across various hardships, which lead to a tragic consequences. Some people think that the main reason for this is parents, who spend less time with children at home. I completely disagree with this statement and think that globalization is the most common reason for such a horrible problem.

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