IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organisation. Why might this be the case? What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed?

Nowaday, more and more people adapt tp be self- employed instead of working for a company and a organisation. This essay will discuss the reasons for this trend and the drawback of being self-employed.

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As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is often argure that numerous people getting depend on technologies, which result to weaken their thinking abilities. I agree this view and believe that too much use of digital tools may allow many students worse results.

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Some people think that drug addicts should be treated like criminals and sent to jail, while others believe that they should be treated like patients and sent hospital. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

many people feel that folk who rely on pills must sent to jail as a criminal, whilist other argue that they should treat as patient and sent to medical to come overt from this kind of addiction .this essay think that addicts should treat as patient and well madication.

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Due to the development and rapid expansion of supermarkets, many small local businesses are unable to compete. Some people think that the closure of local businesses will bring about the death of local communities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people believe that rapid expasion of supermarkets, many small local businesses brings the death to local communities. I strongly believe that it can lead to lack of community with local people and it distract reigion economy for the local inhabitants.

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Some individuals believe that companies should be legally required to provide employees with a four-day work week. Why is this being suggested? Do you think this would be a good idea for the global economy?

In contemporary society some people think that corporations should be legally required to contribute workers with a four-day work week. It is being offered mainly because of increasing effectiveness of employees and I believe that it would be also a fundamental decision for developing global economy.

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Some people think that competition at work, at school and in daily life is a good thing. Others believe that we should try to cooperate more, rather than competing against each other. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some people say that competition at workplace, at school and in daily life is a good thing, while others think that we should try to work together, rather than competing each other. I believe that competing with others gives more opportunity to get encouragement or high achievements in every fields of life.

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Some people think that high school students should be taught how to use money as it is an important life skill. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

It is argued that as part of upbringing kids it is necessary to teach them critical skill on how to spend the money. I believe it is a necessary skill because it helps them understand the value of money and start saving since their schooling.

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Some say that people living in high-rise apartments are lonely and unhappy, while others say that it’s advantageous to stay in high-rise apartments. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Nowadays, some say that people living in high-rise apartments are lonely and unhappy. however, others say that it's very fasinating to live in high-rise apartment. Personally, both sides of the issue are right from my perspective. the reasons of both ways are below.

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Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

There is a common belief that the loss of particular species like plants and animals is a global problem as a consequence of environmental issues, while others think that there are more important environmental problems. Although creatures exitinction is one reason, I belive that there are more cause of envrionmental challenge such as climate change, pollution and global warming.

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Some people believe that the government is wasting money on the arts and that this money should be invested better in other areas. To what extent do you agree with this view?

It is the opinion of some people that government is wasting funds on arts, when it could be redirected to other sectors. This is a mentality I wholeheartedly disagree with and I shall explain further in the following paragraphs.

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Nowadays, some people claim that public museums and art galleries will not be needed because people can see historical objects and works of art by using a computer. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Some people believe that, because of developing technology art galleries and museums will not be on demand like in the past. I am partially agree with that opinion because some people would rather real interaction than digital interaction with art and historical pieces.

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Some university students want to learn about other subjects in addition to their main subjects. Others believe it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for a qualification. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

There is no denying tha fact that choosing an academic major is the most significant part of your college experience. Many students are wanting to study other subjects beside their main spealization, While other argued that it it more crucial to focus only on studying for thier main field to get qualification. I believe that exbanding you knowledge in today day and age will always be benefecial.

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Some people think that schools are too competitive and that this has a negative impact on children. Others believe the competitive environment encourages children to achieve. Discuss both these views and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowsdays schools become competitive for children.I think sometimes it must be challenging to filter good students and make bad students work hard more.In this essay we will discuss the impact of the competitive environment on childrrens.

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Some people believe that universities should offer places to young students with high marks. Other believe that people of all ages and with low grades should be allowed to study. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It has been an issue of debate whether the educational institutions offer admission to young students, who got higher marks or give admission to pupils of all age groups with low grades. This essay will discuss both sides of the argument.

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In number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new railways lines for very fast trains between cities. Others believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Both views are right in their own mindset, but which is the best is highly debatable. Both are important aspects. However, which is the best is highly depend upon the scenario. The best outcome and decision can be made when the situation is presented with the ever growing population the strategies must be implemented and take pirority than the other whether if it is to spend on existing transport.

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Around the world, children learn English as a second language at school. However, in some places, they also learn at kindergarten (pre-school care, when children are aged two to five). Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of learning English at kindergarten.

Nowadays, Many people learn English langusage as a second language at school. However, some people make their kids learn it from an early age such as two to five. There are many advantages and disadvantages of learing English Language at kindergarten.

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There have been many inventions in human history (e.g the wheel) some people think the most important thing is the Internet. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Many people believe that the internet is the most important invention in human history is the internet. In my opinion, i agree with this statement, the net has improved our lives in so many ways and made it easier.

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Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Access to clean water is a basic human right. Therefore, every home should have a water supply that is provided free of charge. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Access to clean water should be for the general public, as it's considered a basic human right. Therefore, people going through finanicial struggles shouldn't worry about having clean water to drink and use, since water is part of nature which makes it a public property. However, selling water would help companies gain the money to improve their facilities which will result in a better quality water. In my opinion, I beleive that water is a public right even if companies need the money to improve their facilities a lot of poor people can't afford this basic right.

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YOU HAVE TO RECIEVE THIS EMAIL FROM WHO YOU WENT TO COLLEGE WITH. Do you know it will be five years since we finished college ? i think we should contact our friends and arrange to meet again.Have you got any ideas about what we could do to celebrat e and when? write and tell me jan write an email to jan : suggest a good way to celebrate with your old college friends explain when would be the best time for the celebrate offer to help organise the celebrate

It was really nice to hear from you. I can’t believe it has already been almost five years since we finished college, time really passed quickly.

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Around the world, children learn English as a second language at school. However, in some places, they also learn at kindergarten (pre-school care, when children are aged two to five). Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of learning English at kindergarten.

Worldwide, children usually learn English as a secondary language in schooling facilities. However, in some places, learning at kindergarten is also noticed. This development encourages young generations to build self-confidence from an early age and opens various career opportunities in the long-term though it usually causes mental overload and this could be challenging to overcome in the following years.

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