IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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Some people believe university education should be free for everyone. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In recent years, the rising cost of education has become an increasingly important issue. While some believe that students should pay their tuition fee based on their economical background, others believe that more benefits will be gained if it completely free. I fully agree that providing free education will give rise to equality among people and nations prosperity in the long run.

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Some people think the best way to solve traffic congestion is to increase the cost of fuel for cars. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The traffic jams has many reasons, and many people suffer from this problem everyday specialy who lives in the city. But, rising the prices of the fuel is the worst choice can be made. In my opinion, I disagree with rising the price of fuel will reduce the congestion.

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Many people strive to maintain a successful career and happy family life at the same time, but fail to do so. What are the reasons of this failure? What are the possible solutions?

Induviduals who seek for a succefull careers tend to be careless with their personal life. Several studies has shown that having a balance beteween professional growed and happy families requered a huge effort nowadays due to many jobs in the 21 century has become remote and the education accesibility has been increase the opportinities to improve the skills by studing master or Phd in order to maintan a successful career.

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Today, more and more people use robots to do tasks at home and at work. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

In the fast-paced world, there is an ongoing debate about whether robots are being used to do tasks at home and at work is positive or negative. While advanced technology brings undeniable benefits, it also presents significant challenges. Therefore, ahead of my opinion, both views will be discussed further.

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The education of young people is highly prioritized in many countries. However, educating adults who cannot read or write is even more important; governments should invest more in this. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Education is regarded as a one of the main priorities of governments, especially when it comes to young people. However some argue that, governments should allocate more on adults who do not have qualification for reading or writing. I believe that, education of younger generation should funded more than the adults.

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The study of ancient culture is not a relevant subject in modern education. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Education systems worldwide are increasingly focusing on practical skills and technology to prepare students for their future careers. However, it is argued by some that study of ancient civilization is no loger relevant to the modern education systems and classrooms, which I strongly agree. I believe that modern education should focus on technology, science and skills like twenty-first-century skills which are essential for building a career.

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Some people say that the governments should pay for health care and education but others think that this is not the government's responsibility. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

Some people think that state and local authorities are expected to provide health care and education to citizens due to inequalities. However, others say that the responsibility of providing health care and education is not the government's responsibility. This essay is going to examine both aspects of the discussion and present my own opinion.

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Some people argue that it is not wise for an industry to replace its experienced but old workers with new and young yet inexperienced individuals. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In today's competitive era, everyone has wanted to chase their competitors. Some people say that it is not the right decision to replace old older employees by young worker. I totally opposed this argument by providing below information.

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These days, there are programs, like Write & Improve, that use a type of artificial intelligence (AI) to give students automatic feedback and scores for their writing. How do you feel about this? Do you trust the feedback they give? What are the advantages and disadvantages of automatic feedback? How could it be improved?

In recent days, the use of AI to provide automatic evaluation and assessment to the writing has gained a huge traction. Its popularity is rising drastically and it's being considered one of the best inventions in human history already.

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Tourism has been a good source of revenue in many countries and government should promote the industry. Do you agree or disagree.

In recent years, many governments should spend a large amount of money in industry and encouraging tourism because tourism has been growing a financial revenue for several countries . I completely agree with this view because it is important to bring benefits to authorities and citizens.

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Opinions on food are changing rapidly and there are many who believe that everyone should follow a vegetarian diet because it would have a positive impact on our health and the environment. Do you agree or disagree?

In recent years, many people are debating over which type of food is better for human health and the environment. People's beliefs on food are changing rapidly, some believe that plant based vegetarian diet is better than non-vegetarian food. Although, this can be benefical to the environmet, I partially disagree with this as many of the nutrients are difficult to consume just with vegetarian diet.

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Some people argue that it is not wise for an industry to replace its experienced but old worker with new and young yet inexperienced individuals. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is widely recognized that companies start to replace their experienced elder worker with a new young individual. This issue has generated significant discussion regarding to replace its experienced elderly employee with a young inexperienced employee. While some argue that companies should maintian with their old worker , I largely maintian that refreshing the industry with new and young developers will improve the state structure ,and this essay will examine both aspects to provide a comprehensive perspective.

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Some people believe that economic growth is the only way to end poverty and hunger in the world, while others say that economic growth is causing damage to the environment and should be stopped. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

In recent times, the topic of many individuals think that goods and services are the one and only way to end starvation and poverty in the world, but some say economic growth is harmful for environment, gathered significant attention and sparking widespreadconcern. Therefore, it is crucial to take a deep dive into its surrounding complexities and explore potential outcomes. In my opinion, I strongly beleived its is a important factor to strengthen economy rate.

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Nowadays many people choose to be self employed rahter than to work for a company or organisation . why might this be the case ? what could be the disadvantage of being self employed ?

Recently, many individuals have tended to become self-employment instead of working for the companies and other organizations. This trend is ubiquitous pretty much in all countries. Although there is beneficial sides, detrimental effects on people cannot be overlooked. In this essay I will first discuss reasons behind this tendency before explaining the possible downsides of it.

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Some people believe that the goverment sholud take care of old people and provide financial support after they retire. Others say individuals should save during their working years to fund their retirement. What is your opinion? Is it a postive or negative development?

It is the government's duty to take care of taxpayers. A section of society thinks, it is responsibilty of the regime to provide support for old-age community, while others disagree with this view. I believe that the ruling class owes to folks in their later part of life, therefore, it is a positive development. I will elaborate upon my views in this upcoming essay.

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Some people think the increasing business and cultural contact between countries bring many positive effects. Other say it causes the loss of national identities. Discuss both side and give your opinion.

One of the most debated issues in recent years is whether international businesses and cultural contact across different countries are beneficial for their own nation. While some people argue that it can cause confusion and conflict between a national culture and global trends, I believe that international connections and multinational corporations can help a country promote economic prosperity globally.

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It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sport or music, and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some people are born with special abilities and some not. In contrast, some argue that children can learn certain abilities, including sports person or musician, by teaching them. Some individuals receive inherent talent from their parents; however, I think children without innate talents achieve their goals through hardwork and obtain more benefits from it.

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Children who are brought up in a family that does not have a lot of money are better prepared to deal with problems when they become adults than children who are brought up by wealthy parents. Do agree or disagree with the statement.

Children can be brought up in casual family which is not rish. Those children become better prepared to deal with probems when they are adults than children who grow up in rich families. I completely agree with this statement when in first case those children can be convinced to work from an early age. Those children can face work problems and learn how to deal with them. So, they can be able to deal with these kinds of problems later in their lives. Unlike children who come from high-income families that have options to not work until university. They would face these problems and learn how to deal with them later.

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In some cities, public parks and open spaces are being changed into gardens where local residents can grow their own fruit and vegetables. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience

Many people think that in some areas parks and open places are being transformed into gradens where local people can plants their own fruit and vegetables.

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Wild animal have no place in 21st century, so protecting them is a waste of resources. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There is a widespread belief among the animal-lovers that without doubt every wild animal living on the Earth has a special place in the nature despite the lack of researches of the role of the wild animals in the biodiversity. In this case, although most of the people share the opinion about the restrictive regulations on some wild animal breeds which can sometimes spread danger to the public, such as street dogs, I believe that in order to preserve biodiversity in the nature including wild animals we should carefully use all our resources on the strong grounds of scientific researches. In this essay, I will firstly discuss the importance of protection of wild animals using all the possible resources before explaining its drawbacks.

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