IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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The tendency for human beings to copy one another is shown in the popularity of fashion in clothes and other consumer goods. Do you agree or disagree?

In this contemporary world, competition among people have already peaked significantly. People try their best to be more attractive or better. While I agree that core driven factor is that people have a passion to compete and achieve higher social status.

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Nowadays, there is a trend that reports of media focus on problems and emergencies rather than positive development. Some people think it is harmful to individuals and to society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Recently, we have been noticing a popular trend among the media to report information, emphasizing the issues and crisis instead of focusing on the positive changes. Some believe that this could negatively impact the viewers and the community, and I agree with their belief.

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Many foods are shipped from far away. Some people think that eating local food is more environmentally and economically. Do you think the advantages outweigh its disadvantages?

Some believe that eating regional food is a better environmental and economical option than eating foods shipped from distant regions and countries. This essay will discuss the advantages and disadvantages of both these options, and I will explain the reason why I believe the pros of interstate or international trade of foods, outweigh its cons.

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Many people around the world spend the majority of their free time at home watching TV shows. What are the advantages and disadvantages?

Nowadays, people from around the world choose most of their free time by watching TV shows at home. I believed this activity has benefits but there is also certain drawbacks that can be ignored. This essay will explore both advantages and disadvantages.

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In most of the countries, people prefer to live in a rented apartment rather than buying a home. What are the advantages and disadvantages of living in rented accommodation?

Along with the inflation, prices of the houses and the cost of building a house are getting increased, cause of this issue, most of people prefer to rent apartments rather than buying a house. So, this essay will explain with reasons why i'm disagreeing with this statement.

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Some believe that school children should not be given homework by their teacher, whereas other argue that homework plays an important role in education of the children. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.

The modern world has changed drastically when it comes to schools grading systems. Moreover, many schools are now considering not giving homework to children. However, people are arguing with this idea. Furthermore, I think that giving work outside of school is a tarrible idea. This essay will examine the advantages of not making children work at home and the disadvantages of making them work at home.

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In today's world many people own a smartphone. Do ou think the advantage of owning a smartphone outweigh the disadvantages?

In the present times our community tend to own a smartphone. I believe that the advantage of owning a smartphone does not really override the disadavantage. At least three reasons I would like to write down, having an advanced mobile phone surely help us a lot but it declines our survival mode as human. Not only that, when everything becomes easy we are as human also become easy we become more fragile and weak and last but not least having a smartphone gets us more confused.

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Some of people believe that unpaid community service should be compulsory part of high school programmes (for example working for a charity, improving the neighbourhood or teaching sports to younger children). To what xtent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays public perceive that volunteer programmes such as helping the neighbourhood, coaching sport for younger children and simply working at charity plan should begin already from high school. In my opinion, the idea is great but I believe it could be reckless as well if stricted rules are not applied. I would like to explain to which extent I agree and disagree.

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The most important aim of science should be to improve people’s lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

It has been argued that the main objective of studying and teaching sciences is to enhance individuals' lives. This essay totally agrees with that because of the lack of sources that can make people's lives better, and the fact that the most ethical purpose of science is to serve humanity.

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Some people think that in modern society individuals are becoming more dependent on each other, while others say that individuals are becoming more independent of each other. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from own knowledge or experience.

It is often argued that a large the number of people in many countries are relying on each other, while some believe that societies are transforming and becoming self-dependent in different terms. This essay will discuss the both views before presenting own opinion.

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The internet is an amazing invention which has changed the world. Many people use it a great deal. Give both the advantages and disadvantages of the internet.

Society is very different today from the past. The internet has really changed everything about life. Many people use the internet and have made it an important part of life. This essay will examine both the advantage and disadvantage of the internet.

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The internet has changed the world and how people live. Give both the advantages and disadvantages of the internet.

Society has changed greatly from the past. The internet is an amazing invention which has changed the world. Many people use it extensively. This essay will examine both the advantages and disadvantages of the internet.

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Artificial intelligence is replacing human jobs. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

In this modern era, the technology is expanding in every sector whether it is a daily job or study. Due to this, many people believe that Artificial Intelligence which is said as AI is also improving and people are adapting in the replacements of human jobs. There are more betterments of AI than our involvement in work which I will explain in the following paragraphs.

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Some businesses find that their new employees lack basic interpersonal skills such as cooperative skills. What are the causes? Suggest possible solutions. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

Some business organizations might feel that their new employees do not have basic interpersonal skills. This essay will discuss reasons for new employees lacking such abilities, and provide some recommendations to resolve this issue.

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Millions of dollars are spent on space research every year. Some people argue that this money should be allocated to improving living standards on Earth. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Curiosity is the innate human drive to explore and investigate the fundamentals in the world. In the given context, i tend to agree with the statement. While inventions should be carried on to identify several other possible new ways, major funds should be spent on certain developments on earth to make it more comfortable. A short amount of budget could be used to find new places not only for raised standard of living.

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Today many children are overweight and suffer from obesity. Give the reasons for this and offer solutions to fix this problem.

The world has changed and that includes the eating habits of most children. Today many children suffer from being overweight. This is a global health issue. This essay will examine the reasons for this problem and possible solutions to help fix this health issue.

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Traditions become different from one generation to another that may be accepted differently by people. Do you agree or disagree that cultural changes are acceptable?

Culture labels distinction of countries that evolve over time across generations. These modifications are seen by some as admissible which I also support on the premise of perspective broadening.

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It is important for everyone, including young people, to save money for their future. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

In recent years, people of all ages should save money for their future has become an increasingly debated isssue. I completely agree with that everyone, including young people should save their money for future.

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Access to clean water is a basic human rights. Therefore every home should have a water supply that is provided free of charge. agree or disagree

Nowadays, it is often said that access to clean water is crucial human rights. This is why everyone should have a water supply that is provided freely. In this essay, I will explain why I am convinced it is a wrong assumption for the following reasons with some examples.

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Citizens in many countries are eating more fast food and convenience snacks. What are the causes of this? How serious are the consequences?

Nowadays the number of people that eating fast food and convenience snack are increasing, it is because these people live in a very fast pace lifestyle and these foods are very accesible. However, there will be consequences from continuing this habit, which are health problems and reduce work performance.

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