IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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Television has two roles: to inform and to entertain people. Explain which of these roles you see as more important. To what extent do you think that TV today performs each of these roles in an effective way? Support your point of view with details from your own experiences, observations or reading.

Television provides its audience with important information and entertainment for a long time since its invention. Personally, I think it is more important to broadcast a significant news to the citizen through TV channels. However, I have never seen any news on television which is displayed before it got viral on internet. While informative means of televisional media lost to social media in terms of speed and accuracy, entertainment from the TV broadcast still holds its ground since it cannot be watched from somewhere else.

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Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

It is true that recently many children browsing mobile phone numerous hours. Nowadays parents are not spend time with their child, for the consequence children's addicted in digital devices. I think it depends on how they are use phones, without phone current time passing for an hours become so tough.

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Some believe that people will purchase a product based on their needs and advertising is not needed. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some argue that men and women trend to pay products that they need and there is no need for adds .This essay completely disagree with the statement because people often pay things because of strong adertising and these commercials are really important because people know many good products from them.

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Human activities have negative effects on plants and animals species. Some people think that is too late to do anything about effective measures can taken to improve this situation. Discuss both views and give your opinions.

Civilization existed only a fraction of time on earth. However, the activities done by population caused so much damage to other species, globally, due to the rapid growth of industries, and never-ending innovative technology. Some might argue that it is already too late to act on anything to bring the world back to its healthy state, but I personally disagree. Humans still have the chance to save the world and the innovations mentioned earlier is the key to success, along with raised awareness of the people.

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Many people lose their income due to CoVid19 pandemic. What solution that can do by government or individual to overcome this problem.

CoVid19 could be one of the most impactful pandemic of this era that has caused the downfall of many businesses. In my opinion, I think the problem of this scale have to be solved properly by government. The system can help the victims of this financial crisis with supports to business to recover and start hiring people back, leading to more occupational opportunities for those who were laid off due to the CoVid19's influence on corportates.

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The threat of nuclear weapons maintains world peace. Nuclear power provides cheap and clean energy. The benefits of nuclear technology far outweigh the disadvantages. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.

Nuclear power is an alternative source of energy which is carefully being evaluated during these times of energy problems. During these years we can say that we have energy problems but in more or less 50 years, we will be facing an energy crisis.

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Some people think that children should begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

There is a growing trend that it is more beneficial to learning foreign languages at primary school than waiting untill secondary school. Nevertheless it creates huge challenges, i strongly believe the advantages surpass the disadvantages.

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QUESTION: Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Give reason for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

A language is not just words to form sentences, its more than that, its a set of words mixed with emotions and expressions! its indeed important for communication and to exchange information.

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Influence of human beings on the world ecosystem is leading to the extinction of species and loss of biodiversity. What are the primary causes of loss of bio diversity? What solution can you suggest?

Nowadays, power of people on global ecosystem causing many species to disappear, which lead to decline in biodiversity. However, there are several reasons has been investigated for such occurrence. Some productive step can help to remedy the situation to a large extent. The causes and measures are discussed further.

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Some people have decided to reduce the number of times they fly every year or to stop flying altogether. Do you think the environmental benefits of this development outweigh the disadvantages for individuals and businesses? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Many people nowadays have decided to stop flying or to limit the amount of times they use this form of transport. This will undoubtedly have great benefits for the environment, but it may mean that for individuals or businesses this can translate to higher expenses. I believe the disadvantages for individuals and businesses would be greater than the effects on the environment. This essay will discuss advantages and disadvantages of this

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Creative artists should always be given the freedom to express their own ideas (in words, pictures, music or film) in whichever way they wish. There should be no government restrictions on what they do. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

I agree with the statement that there should be no government restriction on creative artists who express themselves in the way they do and that they must be given freedom for the same. Expression has always been the keynote in a person's life. It is the result of mere expression of our thoughts that we are able to communicate. Restrictions on how we present our thoughts is senseless.

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Some people like to try new things, for example, places to visit and types of food. Other people prefer to keep doing things they are familiar with. Discuss both these attitudes and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In this day and age, more and more people try to discover various destinations and diverse types of food,while others are likely tocontinue doing something that is familiar to them. In my point of view, I advocate for the latter statement and this essay will discusstwo aspects of this problem. First and foremost, travelling to many new refreshing places might help people change the boring atmosphere that they need to witness every day or some people yearn to taste a bunch of different cuisines all over the world.Even though change can bring a wide range of benefits to humans such as new knowledge, and new experience, it also involves some shortcomings.The adaptations and the embarrassment of the new life might be the pivotal causes that hinder people from stepping out of their comfort zones. For example, it takes time to pick up a new hobby or a new food. In addition, first time going visitors have to struggle with making acquaintances with strangers. Secondly, choosing to carry out...

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Some people say that it is better to work for a large company than a small one. Do you agree or disagree ?

After carefully reviewing both viewpoints. I unequivocally support the benefits of the large organization, as it provides more practical and employee-friendly approach. I know both have own merits.

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The promoters of social media claim that they are connecting people and enabling people to share like never before. While critics claim that social media site often impinges up on one's privacy. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.

The promoters of social media say that a indivudial for others and enabling people to share more than before. Whereas other argue that social media pages have a negative impact on people's privacy. I will discuss both views, for me, spcial media can give any unknown person an access on others's photos. This access unknown people can use it for harm others.

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In the future all cars ,busses will be driverless.The only people travelling will be passengers.Do you think the advantages will outweigh the disadvantages?

Public transportation such as a bus can be driverless, in the future. And the only people travelling will not be drivers but passengers. This can decrease the accident that happen because of the speed and the driver fault. Following this, more systimatic roads that can have a great impact on people work and life. So I think the advantages are greater than the disadvantages.

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Travel from and to work is becoming more difficult. One solution is that employers should allow employees to work at home. Do you agree that the advantages are more than disadvantages?

A transportation for work is becoming harder. The solution is that worker can permit to work at house. Sometimes this can affect negatively on the workers performance, if they have children. When, they can make much noise. The advantage of this can be greater. While, people can less their expenses on fuels and food, they sometimes convince to buy if there any long day at work.

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Nowadays, managers and team leaders in different organizations are much younger compared to the past. What are the reasons for it? Is it a positive or negative development?

It is an indisputable truth that DURING the last several decades more young people have taken leadership positions.

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The rise of social media has affected personal relations and society as a whole. Do the advantage of using social media for communication outweigh the disadvantages? (KN)

Nowadays, the increasing social media has impacted on people relationships and our socities.

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It is important for people to take risks, both in their professional lives and their personal lives. Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages?

It is argued by some people that taking risks into decisions has not only benefit but also it brings negative outcomes as well.

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Some people say that professional workers such as doctors, nurses, and teachers, who make greater contribution to the society should be paid more than those people in the field of sports and entertainment. to what extent do you agree or disagree

Many people believe that individuals working in essential professions, including doctors, nurses, and teachers, should earn higher salaries than those employed in the sports and entertainment industries because of their significant contributions to community. In the following paragraphs, the reasons to support the disagreement with the agreement will be discussed in detail.

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