IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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The growing number of overweight people is putting strain on the health care system in an effort to deal with the health issue involved. Some people think that the best way to deal with this problem is to introduce more physical education lessons in the school curriculam. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The figure of obese people is growing is putting strain on the medicine industry in an effort to deal with health issue involved. Some people think that the best way to deal with this is to include more physical education lessons in the school subjects. The best way to cure a disease is to deal with the roots not with the symptoms of it. To be more obvious, if obese people have unhealthy that cause obesity, the training would not change these habits. Because of this I completely disagree with the given statement while schools can hire food specialists to change those people's habits.

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Some people suggest that it is wrong to give money to beggars asking for money on the street, while others think that it is the right thing to do. Which point of view do you think is correct, and why?

Some portion of people believe that it is for good to give money to beggars, while the other portion believes that it is not appropriate. I deeply beleive that giving money to beggars is not the best way to help them, because it does not adress the root cause.

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The plans below show the Site of a farm in 1950 and the same Site today. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The plans illustrate a farm site named “Beechwood Farm” in the year 1950 and the plan today.

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Artificial intelligence will replace a large proportion of human jobs in the future. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In recent years, Artificial Intelligence (AI) has transcended into something beyond human logic. Some people believe that in the near future AI will replace human workers in many areas, while others believe AI is limited in some working areas. Although the advancement of AI will be able to helping human doing their works, I firmly believe that some jobs required human ability, such as art and physical activity.

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In many countries, young people are moving from rural areas to cities to work or study. Why is this happening? What are advantages or disadvantages of this trend?

In many parts of the world, people are on teenager generation living in the countryside seems obvious to fly the nest to find greater opportunities in terms of career and education. There are so many opinions expressed that would be outweighed value of their quality of life in the long run, whereas other argue that that moving to the big town has several downsides aspect of high costs of living and a ton of pollution. However, I personally believe that there are both ways its benefits and drawbacks.

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Some people believe that traveling to foreign countries is the best way to learn about new cultures, while others believe that watching television and reading books is sufficient. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Many people think that travelling is the most effective method to learn about different cultures. However, others argue that in recent years watching television or reading a book is more comfortable and efficient. In my opinion, both views are equally important, but physical interaction with people can make learning a tradition more personal and engaging. On the one hand, it is believed by some people that by technology we can obtain information easily to learn about certain cultures through watching videos or reading a book. In fact, watching television can be very comfortable and save time, and most notably does not require money for flight tickets and other expenses compare to traveling. For example, travelling to Iceland requires high amount of money more than 3000$ for each person for a week there including flight tickets, but watching videos to learn more about icelandic culture and tradition save a significant amount of money. Therefore, watching or reading about different c...

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Some people think that in the modern world we are more dependent on each other, while others think that people have become more independent. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

It is independency which is an important argument in recent years, while some people believe that in the modern society, individuals have more dependency on others. Some others think that many humans have become more independent. I completely agree with the latter because of the increase value of being self-reliant person.

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In some countries, boys and girls are educated in different school rather than in the same school. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

In some regions, women and men are divided into different academic instituations instead of mixed one for both. This can have a advantage of specilizing children more in jobs that are for specific gender more than the other. Also there is disadvantage when activities that require both genders these schools cannot do these activities.

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News stories on TV and in newspapers are very often accompanied by pictures. Some people say that these pictures are more effective than words. Whats your opinion about it?

The issue of the news stories on TV and in newspapers that are accompanied by pictures have sparked considerable debate in recent years.Some people believe that the pictures are more effective than words,while others argue that the words are more effective.This essay will examine both perspectives before offering my own opinion.Although both arguments have their merits,I firmly believe that the news stories on TV and in newspapers are accompanied by pictures are more effective.

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Some people believe university education should be free for everyone. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In recent years, the rising cost of education has become an increasingly important issue. While some believe that students should pay their tuition fee based on their economical background, others believe that more benefits will be gained if it completely free. I fully agree that providing free education will give rise to equality among people and nations prosperity in the long run.

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Some people think the best way to solve traffic congestion is to increase the cost of fuel for cars. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The traffic jams has many reasons, and many people suffer from this problem everyday specialy who lives in the city. But, rising the prices of the fuel is the worst choice can be made. In my opinion, I disagree with rising the price of fuel will reduce the congestion.

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Many people strive to maintain a successful career and happy family life at the same time, but fail to do so. What are the reasons of this failure? What are the possible solutions?

Induviduals who seek for a succefull careers tend to be careless with their personal life. Several studies has shown that having a balance beteween professional growed and happy families requered a huge effort nowadays due to many jobs in the 21 century has become remote and the education accesibility has been increase the opportinities to improve the skills by studing master or Phd in order to maintan a successful career.

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Today, more and more people use robots to do tasks at home and at work. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

In the fast-paced world, there is an ongoing debate about whether robots are being used to do tasks at home and at work is positive or negative. While advanced technology brings undeniable benefits, it also presents significant challenges. Therefore, ahead of my opinion, both views will be discussed further.

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The education of young people is highly prioritized in many countries. However, educating adults who cannot read or write is even more important; governments should invest more in this. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Education is regarded as a one of the main priorities of governments, especially when it comes to young people. However some argue that, governments should allocate more on adults who do not have qualification for reading or writing. I believe that, education of younger generation should funded more than the adults.

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The study of ancient culture is not a relevant subject in modern education. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Education systems worldwide are increasingly focusing on practical skills and technology to prepare students for their future careers. However, it is argued by some that study of ancient civilization is no loger relevant to the modern education systems and classrooms, which I strongly agree. I believe that modern education should focus on technology, science and skills like twenty-first-century skills which are essential for building a career.

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Some people say that the governments should pay for health care and education but others think that this is not the government's responsibility. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

Some people think that state and local authorities are expected to provide health care and education to citizens due to inequalities. However, others say that the responsibility of providing health care and education is not the government's responsibility. This essay is going to examine both aspects of the discussion and present my own opinion.

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Some people argue that it is not wise for an industry to replace its experienced but old workers with new and young yet inexperienced individuals. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In today's competitive era, everyone has wanted to chase their competitors. Some people say that it is not the right decision to replace old older employees by young worker. I totally opposed this argument by providing below information.

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These days, there are programs, like Write & Improve, that use a type of artificial intelligence (AI) to give students automatic feedback and scores for their writing. How do you feel about this? Do you trust the feedback they give? What are the advantages and disadvantages of automatic feedback? How could it be improved?

In recent days, the use of AI to provide automatic evaluation and assessment to the writing has gained a huge traction. Its popularity is rising drastically and it's being considered one of the best inventions in human history already.

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Tourism has been a good source of revenue in many countries and government should promote the industry. Do you agree or disagree.

In recent years, many governments should spend a large amount of money in industry and encouraging tourism because tourism has been growing a financial revenue for several countries . I completely agree with this view because it is important to bring benefits to authorities and citizens.

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Opinions on food are changing rapidly and there are many who believe that everyone should follow a vegetarian diet because it would have a positive impact on our health and the environment. Do you agree or disagree?

In recent years, many people are debating over which type of food is better for human health and the environment. People's beliefs on food are changing rapidly, some believe that plant based vegetarian diet is better than non-vegetarian food. Although, this can be benefical to the environmet, I partially disagree with this as many of the nutrients are difficult to consume just with vegetarian diet.

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