IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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In their advertising, business nowadays usually emphasis that their products are new in some way. Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

Nowadays, companies are running advertising campaign to showcase their goods such that it looks different from other companies advertisements. Overall i believe this is a positive development because i offers more benefis than drawbacks.

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Many people today leave the countryside and their small villages and move to the big city. Give reasons why people do this and give some problems it might cause.

In the modern days people have changed their living life style. Many of them today leave the countryside and their small villages and move to the big city. This essay will examine the reasons why people do this move and give some problem it might cause.

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When designing a building the most important factor is the intended use of the building rather than its outward appearance. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

One of the main factors when designing the building is the purpose of using construction inward than external view. It seems to me that at the beginning of the project for building it is needed to pay attention for inner functionality than outward appearance.

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Many aspects of the way people dress today are influenced by global fashion trends. How has global fashion become such a strong influence on people's lives? Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

There is no denying the fact that global fashion become an important part of people's daily lives. This essay will discuss how global fashion has become so influential and explain why I believe this is positive.

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Nowadays, if people want to find work, they have to move away from their families and friends. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

In this day and age, the trend of hunting work while leaving family behind is increasing rapidly. Many believe that people need to move far from close ones to achieve their professional career goals. It is clear that there are major benefits such as overall development, however there are significant drawbacks as well like lonliness, home-sickness. This essay will discuss both merits and demerits in following paragraphs.

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Some people believe that technological tools such as body scanners and CCTV have significantly enhanced our safety and security, while others feel that they have resulted in a loss of privacy. Do the benefits of these items outweigh their disadvantages?

In today's rapidly evolving world, the innovation in technical field increasing day by day. With that, many of the individual believe that some tools like CCTV and body scanners are crucial for the safety from various criminal activites. On the other hand, some argue that it is breaching the privacy of person.Therefore in my opinion, I firmly agree that there are more advantages then its drawbacks. I will discuss further in the upcoming paragraphs.

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many young people are leaving their home in rural areas to study or work in cities. what are the reasons? do advantages outweigh its disadvantages?

In recent years, increasing numbers of individuals are migrating to big cities for better work positions and higher studies. This is beacuse there are less opportunities for studies and work in rural areas. I think there are more advantages of this trend than disadvantages and i will elaborate it more in upcoming paragraphs.

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‏Some people do not go directly to college but travel or work for a short time. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages

Nowadays, an increasing trend is seen in young students taking a year gap before starting university. Although this trend may cause some drawbacks.But ,i believe it has more advantages, like maturity and being able to choose universities wisely.This essay will discuss both sides.

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details of politicians private life should not be published in newspapers. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

Nowdays, exposing private life of an politicians should not be shared to any article or to an newspaper. To a major extent, I strongly agree with the given view, my inclination will be elucidated in the following paragraphs.

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In many countries, women and men are working full time. It is, therefore, logical for women and men to share household tasks. To what extent do you agreee or disagree?

It is argued that male and famale who work in a full time job should divide home taskes fairly. In my perspective, I think that helping and assisting each others is the key for a succssful family and happy life.

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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

It is often argued that living in a country without speaking a native language can lead to serious social and practical issues. In this essay, I will elaborate on why I wholeheartedly agree with this, and I believe that language barriers can create severe misunderstandings and less job opportunities.

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Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more than other people in important professions. Some people think this is fully justified while others think it is unfair. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. Discuss both views and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.

It is increasingly common nowadays that athletes earn more than individuals working in essential sectors such as health and education. While some people believe it is fair and justified, others firmly hold the view that it is unfair. This essay will discuss both viewpoints and my personal opinion will be presented.

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It can be difficult for small local shops to compete with large supermarkets and with on-line shops. How does this affect local communities? What could be done to improve this situation?

Whether purchasing products from online websites or big store rather than small stores has become an argument because it has dtreimental effects on locals as well as employers. Steps like , promoting small businesses and encourging in-persong shopping is responsibility of every individual and authorities as well. I will elaborate my points in upcoming paragraphs.

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Global warming is one of the most serious issues that the world is facing today. What causes global warming and what measures can governments and individuals take to tackle the issue?

In recent years ,the global warming is a one most serious problem .This causes climate change and increases more heat over the globe.But these can be rectified by government taking some precautions like reduce green house gas emissions and reduce pollution . This essay will discuus the problem and solutions.

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Some people think all lawbreakers should be sent to prison, while others think there are better alternatives for those whose crimes are minor, such as making them to do work for the local community. Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion.

We all make mistakes but there is a difference between intentional and unintentional ones. For decreasing the number of people with bad intentions, countries prefer to imprison them for a period. From my perspective, there are different solutions for various cases. Working for the local community or paying a fine can represent some of this punishments used for minor crimes.

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Some people think that children should start learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

The world has greatly changed , and that includes the education children receive. A lot of people believe that children must start learning a new language at an early period of time . While others think that learning a new language is not that important . This essay will explore whether the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages .

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Research shows that some activities are good for health and others are bad. Despite knowing that, millions of people engage in unhealthy activities. What are the causes of this? What can be done? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Some studies agree that not all the activities that we’r doing are good for our health.A lot of them have a bad effect on our bodies and health.However, so many people engage in unhealthy activities to get high paid jobs. The most viable solution for that would be to share awareness around the country.

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Some people think students should study the science of food and how to prepare it. Others think that school time should be used in learning important subjects. Discuss both views and give your opinion? Give reasons for your answer, and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Some individuals believe that school should prioritize educating pupils on dietary health and meal preparation while other think institutional time is more essential for major subject. Although focusing major subject helps to score better marks on academic, teaching dietary knowledges helps them to be healthy from childhood.

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Some people suggest that setting up more gyms will encourage people to remain active. What problems are associated with this proposal? What solutions can you offer for good health?

Sports are a crucial part in our lives, there are many types of sports, each player has his own experience. Having multiple gyms around us is one of the main reasons which helps us commit to practice.

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Some educationalists say that every child should be taught how to play a musical instrument. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In our modern society, more and more educationalists believe that youngsters ought to be taught how to play a musical insterument at an early age.In this essay, I will state so facts on why I strongly agree.

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