IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantagee.

Currntely in different parts of the world, the fast mijority of people are young people when comparing them with older ones.Although this phenomenon rquired specefic afforts from all society towerds youngesters, the benefits are outweigh the drawbacks because youth is a main source for any improvement.

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Some people believe that reading stories from story book is better than watching TV or playing computer games for children. What extent do you agree or disagree.

In my perspective, last few decades there have been enomous changes in the way of people's lives are affected with reading story books as well as playing computer games and watching tv. so in way of thinking i partially agree with the statement. the reasons are as follows.

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In today's world, people are purchasing more than what they need. Is this a positive or a negative trend? Give your opinion with reasons and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

From last few decades there have been enormous changes in the way of people's lives are affected by purchasing thing more then they need. Recent years have witnessed much discussion revolving around the issue whether is that this happens because of easy availability of everything to the people. Personally, both sides of the issue should be taken into consideration. The reasons for this are manifested in several ways.

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: In many countries, some employers reject job applicants because of their age. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?"

Nowadays, working in some companies is becoming common among individuals, especially, young people, because of the desire to achieve financial independence. However, some managers and employers do not accept young workers. This trend is a highly negative development for both individuals and society.

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(2016) It is not necessary for people to travel abroad to learn about other countries. We can learn it from bokks, films and the Internet. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

World is full of wisdom and diversity in form of different countries, culture, religion, history and many more. To satisfy the curiosity for other nation, people have lots of resources in form of text, movies and internet . But in my opinion I would say that above mentioned resources give an idea for a picture to some extent but the real life experience is irreplaceable.

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Some people think that the best way to solve the problem of air pollution in cities is to increase the cost of vehicle fuel. Others think that different measures should be taken. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Due to the increased number of motor vehicles, the quality of the air in urban areas are diminishing day by day. some individuals believe that,peaking of the fuel prices is the best measure towards this problem, while others think that,feasible ways should be Implemented. I personally believe that increasing the fuel price will not have an expected outcome.

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Environmental problems such as climate change and pollution affect everyone around the world. Although efforts to tackle these problems are made on a global-scale, few solutions can be found. Why are so few solutions taken? How can these problems be solved?

While environment has been confronted with serious problems that requires people to handle immediately, many human attempts are likely to be superficial. This phenomenon stems from the soaring population as well as over-relying on non-renewable sources. Personally, I contend that both government and individuals must take a personal stake in tackling environmental problems.

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Public celebrations (festivals, national day) are held in some countries. Some people think that they are very expensive and the government should spend money on some other important issues. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Cultural events are celebrated in many nations. People argue that authorities should allocate funds on other concerns because these festivals prove to be costly. I totally agree with the statement because these funds could be used for the issue's of minorities other than that resolve problems of transport and accomodation of needy peoples.

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Traffic congestion has become a serious issue for many cities around the globe. What are the effects of traffic congestion? How could this issue be resolved?

Nowadays, traffic gridlock has become a huge problem for urban areas across the world, mainly because of lack of state-of-art-infrastructure. The government should pay attention on this problem gradually with making comfortable daily commute system.

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Governments should stop spending billions of dollars on space exploration and instead focus on solving immediate problems on Earth, such as poverty, healthcare, and climate change.

In today's fast-paced world, space exploration is an integral part of governments' budgets. While some people believe that nations ougth to allocate more resources to meet countries' crucial needs such as poverty and healthcare. I somewhat disagree with this perspective. Although space exploration help countries conduct some experiments about a new safe place for their future, countries have to find a solution to poverty,leading them to facing economic issues.

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"Some people believe that it would be better if the world had only one language for communication. To what extent do you agree or disagree?"

More and more people think that having a one standard language for every nation is more advantageous than having multiple languages. In my opinion, I completely disagree with this statement and I believe that while a common language will improve communication, the loss of diversity would be a disaster.

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Many children today are overweight. This is a serious health problem. Give the reasons responsible for the child obesity problem and give solutions to solve this problem.

Obesity is quickly becoming a global epidemic related to serious health conditions that involves having excess body fat early in life. The extra weight often has a negative effect on child’s health. As it may lead to poor self-esteem and depression. Currently, data indicates that the prevalence of obesity in children is at 20 %. This easy will examine the reasons and the solutions for that matter.

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Some people find advertisement amusing or annoying and they are not influenced by this when they shop. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

Some individuals think that advertisement are amusing or annoying and they are not influenced by it when shopping in real life. In my opinion, i completely agree with this statement many false information are being spread through these advertisments just to grab the attention of the buyer.

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Some people think that to be successful, you need to get a university degree, whereas others say it is not true. Discuss both the ideas.

To become properous, a university degree is compulsory, However some people assume that it is not correct. Although qualifying into a degree makes you compatible for proffesional and corporate life, but the time utilised in taking a four year long degree can be spent in making a bussiness.

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It is better to go out for a live performance (a show or concert) than stay at home watching TV or using the computer. To what extent do you agree or disagree

It is better to go out for a live performance (a show or concert) than stay at home watching TV or using the computer. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Some people think traffic and housing problems in big cities can be solved by moving companies and their employees to the countryside. Do you agree or disagree with this statement ?

Many individuals believe that congestion and housing problems in urban areas can be solved by moving organisations and their workers to the countryside. In my opinion, i disagree with this statement moving association's and employees to the countryside is not the most effective method.

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All people should go to university, even if they are not going to use that education In their job. Do you agree or disagree?

Some people believe that all people should go to university, even if they are not going to use that education in their job. I strongly believe that people should go th the universaty beacause it leads to learn about how to communicate with others and help them to manage their schedule.

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Technological innovations have negatively affected our lives. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

The advancement in technology has adversely affected individuals. I strongly agree with this statement as it has made individuals lazy by becoming dependent on its utilization and also, with the increase in its usage, humans are suffering from the rise in unemployment.

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Topic: many people work long hours, leaving very little time for leisure activities. Does this situation have more advantages or disadvantages?

It is undeniable that much working hours with short time for activities is one of the major concepts that many people talking about it. While some people believe having a long period of time in work is suitable, there is also a contrast viewpoint on this matter. From my perspective, the person should balance between his job and his real life.

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Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed rather than to work for a company or organization. What might be the cases? What could be the disadvantage of being self-employed?

Today in our modern day society many individuals choose to be self-employed, rather than working under an comapany or organization. In this essay, i will examine the reasons of this trend and explain the disadvantages.

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