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Every year several language die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer language in the world. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Thereis a debate that every year languages get extinct, and there are a number of people claiming, life will be easier if there will be fewer languages worldwide. I completely disagree with this opinion, and will share the reasons in paragraphs below.

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the movement of people from villages to cities for work can cause serious problems in both places. What problems does this cause? What can be done about the problems?

Migration of people from the rural to urban area for better work oppurtunity is creating issues in both areas. Like, in cities increased taffic, strained public services and in villages less development and shrinking population. but this problem can be solve in both places by increasing tax and creating jobs respectively.

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With a growing world population one of the most pressing issues is that of feeding such a large number of people. Some people think that GM foods offer a viable solution to this problem. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In recent years, overpopulation has put an immense burden on food supplies, which is making it difficult for the government to provide food to every citizen. The majority of people think that genetically modified food represent a solution to this challenge. Although GM food helps to increase yields, I contend that it is detrimental to human health.

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evaluate 🌿Some people believe that success in life comes mainly from hard work and determination, while others think that factors such as money and family background are more important. 🌿Discuss both views and give your own opinion

The term "Success" has evolved so widely, classified into different categories such as financial stability, career, education and many more have been discovered now a days. I firmly believe that reaching up to a certain level, hard work and perseverance are the key factors. Apparently others support that: references, family background and monetary levels are the prime reasons, that contribute towards the success.

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Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships people make? Has this becom a positive or negative development?

In this modern world, it has been claimed that there are number of people interacting with each other differently as compared to past years, and the reason why is technogical development. There are several ways in which types of relationships has been affected, and it will be described in the below paragraphs. In my opinion, this has become a negative development.

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Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school. Do the advantages of this outweigh the drawbacks

Globalization has presented us with the number of challenges and decisions.

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the world of work is changing rapidly and people cannot depend on the same job or the same condition of work for life.discuss the causes and give your suggestions on how people should prepare for workin the future

Nowadays, human beings cannot sustain with a single job as well as same condition at work.Changing of the nation fastly in the terms of work and working conditions is caused by earning less salaries and working for long hour shifts.Therefore, I totally suggest that companies should increase pay of the workers for them to stay at work for a long period.

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The best way to educate children is by using Internet in every lesson.To what extent do you share this option?What other ways are there of making lessons effective for children?

It is sometimes thought that using internet in every lesson is the most effective method to teach children. I partially agree with this statement, while internet certainly enrichess the learning process, there are several other effective methods a teacher can use in lessons to enhace classroom learning.

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Today many children spend a lot of time playing computer games and little time on sports. Why is this? Is it a positive or negative development?

In the world today,a majority of minors spend most of their time playing computer games. This has made them to exercise a little. Being confined at home is one of the reasons for children to play online. I think this is a negative development because it leads to certain diseases.

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Many people are leaving the countryside and small villages to live in the big cities. What are the reasons for people moving to the city and What problems does this cause?

Many people nowadays are moving from the country side and small villages to live in big cities .This trend has increased in recent years due to various reasons. This essay will discuss the main reasons why people choose to move to cities and the problems that this movement can cause.

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Computers and AI technology are increasingly used for online education. Can artificial intelligence enhance the learning experience? Is this a positive or negative development? (VMN)

With the apace development of technology, artificial intelligence have benn introduced into a variety of jobs, including education. With the intervenetion of AI, on one hand, some students might experience a much joyful and easy learning time; on the other hand, this may lead to various problems for teachers and other students.

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Some people think that electronic devices and the internet have made printed books, newspapers, and magazines unnecessary. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In this modern day and age, electronic devices have profoundly made our lives easier. A significant number of folk these days rely on desktops and electronic devices to access the readily available information , due to which it is argued that there is no more need for paper books, newspapers and magazines. However, i firmly disagree with this statement because if children are made accessible to electronic devices for a longer period of time, it can have detrimental effects on children's health in the long run , as well as some people of different age groups can find it daunting to access the information online.

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Some people say that now we cans see films on our phones or tablets there is no need to go to the cinema. Others say that to be fully enjoyed, films need to be seen in a cinema. Discuss both these views and give your own opinions.

Some people agree that now we can watch films on our phones and tablets there is no need to go to the cinema. However, others believe that to be fully enjoyed, films need to be seen in cinema.

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Many believe that the goal of one's career should be to pursue a passion while others feel it is merely a way to earn a livelihood. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some people select career to follow their dreams while other work on certain field and develop interest after. Everyperson has different approach towards personal goal behind various career pathways. In this essay I will discuss both views and give my opinion in it.

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some experts believe that it is better for children to begin leaning a foregin language at primary school rather than secondary school. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

Few auditors think that learning an international language should be initiated by the children at primary level instead of secondary in schools. According to my opinion, it has more advantages than disadvantages, which would be explained in the following paragraphs.

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Some people believe more actions can be taken to prevent crime, while others think that little can be done. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion

Offence is increasing day by day which has taken a terrific face. A few people ought that crime can be controlled by taking strong action, but orthers believe that this can be done by little efforts. I am strongly agree that more action can be helpful to reduce crime rate in the society and I will discuss both views in the upcoming paragraphs.

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Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Access to clean water is a basic human right. Therefore, every home should have a water supply that is provided free of charge. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

being able to have an access to clean water is a basic right for people. Therefore, every house should have a water supply that is provided free of charge. I totally agrre with that statement because it will help people to be more confortable living their lives and reduce health issues caused by dirty water.

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In many countries people now wear western clothes rather than traditional clothing. Why? Is this a positive or negative development?

In majority of the countries in the world, wearing western attires are gaining more and more fame among citizens, taking the place of traditional clothing styles. This can be attributed to globalization and convenience, whereas these are providing us with both emotional and physical comfort, it is giving a chance to show their personality and inner side more freely lieu of following the general mindset that limits their freedom in style.

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People in many countries do not wear their traditional costume. Some argue that they would forget their history and tradition. Do you agree or disagree?

It has been argued that many citizens in different parts of the world are not wearing traditional attire as it might lead to people forgetting their past history. This essay agrees with the narrative because clothes act as a reminder to illustrate evolution and they are also affordable.

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Some people think that children should learn to paint and draw. Others believe that is a waste of time. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

It is often suggested that children should develop hobbies, not spending all of their time in studying for exams. However, "Hobbies like painting and drawing are a waste of time." is also a popular opinion. In this essay, I will be discussing both views and provde my own opinion on the subject.

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