IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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It is the responsibility of individuals to save and provide for their own retirement. Governments have no obligation to provide this benefit. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

With the decline in the government jobs and increase in the private ones, there is a topic that is raising lot of concerns, which is regarding the welfare of citizens in old age. Some people say that it should be the duty of the government to take care of the finances of senior citizens after retirement, while some say that government has other priorities This essay will provide points as to why citizens should start thinking for age after retirement from their adulthood, and provides some examples for the same.

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Some people believe that unpaid community service should be compulsory in high school programmes (for example, working for a charity, improving the neighbourhood, or teaching sports to younger children). Do you agree or disagree?

It is argued that volunteering should be made part of the school curriculum. This essay agrees with the notion completely because it helps students develop motor skills and helps them gain much-needed work experience.

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Many aspects of the way people dress today are influenced by global fashion trends. How has global fashion become such a strong influence on people’s lives? Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

The global fashion trends are admitted to drive the way we are dressing nowadays. The hype is quickly adapted by the younger generation, particularly through an excitement to follow their favourite celebrity or public figures. However, the other older generation tends to stay dressed in their comfortable way. This could be describe by maintaining a timeless wardrobe, while still adjusting with the global trends to present properly in a certain occasion.

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These days, mobile phone and the internet are very important to the ways in which people relate to one another socially. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

The technological advances that have been made in the latest decades have a huge influence in the social life of people. They prove as a gateway to a easier social life where you pick and chose what others see about you. The advantages mediate the negatives by a huge margin. Therefore we have the obvious, people that have a hard time integrating in a social circle find it way easier to recognize others with the same interests and the communication between these people has never been easier.

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Some people think that it is an individual responsibilty to take care of an environment but others think it is government's job to do so. Discuss both opinions and give your own opinion.

Taking care of enviornment are often a subject of debate recently, with some arguing that this is a crucial job of government, while others, including myself, believe that maintaining a healthy life should maintain our world.

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Some people believe that violence on television and in computer games has a damaging effect on society. Others deny that these factors have any significant influence on people's behaviour. Discuss both points of view and give your opinion.

Nowadays, television and computer games have a big role on children. Multiple people believe that watching violence affect on children minds. While others think it does not affect on them. I strongly agree that violence damages children lives. This essay will examine both sides and the way they think

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At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adult, compared with the number of older people. Do the advantage of this situation outweigh the disadvantage?

In this modern era, It is undeniable the developed countries have the large number of youngsters compared to an older people. Although, young people can use technologies to develop their nation and help their elders in household’s work while unemployment rate of the nation will get higher and companies will start replacing their old employees with youngsters. In my opinion , this statement has more advantages than its disadvantages.

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Some companies sponsor sports as a way to advertise themselves. Some people think it is good, whiles others think there are disadvantages to this. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

In recent years, there has been a growing debate about whether sponsor sports as a way to advertise their company. While some people believe that it is advantage to promote their company brand, others argue that it's completely waste of money and time. This essay will discuss both views before presenting my own opinion.

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İn some countries, a few people earn extremely high salaries. Some people think that this is good for a country, while others believe that the government should control and limit the amount people can earn. Discuss both two views and give your opinion.

In recent years, there has been growing debate about whether a some people earn extremely high salaries. While some people believe that good for the country's growth, others argue that the government should control and limit the amount people can earn. This essay will discuss both views before presenting my own opinion.

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Many people try to balance work and other parts of their life. However, this is very difficult to do. What are the problems associated with this? What is the best way to achieve a better balance?

Nowadays, a lot of population try to balance their work commitments and other parts of their life, such as personal life, but it has become really challenging in these days. As a result, working long hours may lead to negative impacts on their physical health and also, it can lead to various family conflicts. This essay will discuss the main problems caused by poor work-life balance and give the most effective solution.

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In modern times, children are spending less time with their families and more time with their friends. Why has this change occurred? Do you think parents should force their children to spend more time at home?

Children in many societies tend to spend more time with their peers rather than with their parents , there are many reseans for this trend , children grow up and technology using . In my opinion , parents should encourge family time and should not force children staying at home or stop them go out . One main reason for children spending time with their friends become older and independent .Children usually form and develop strong relationship with their friends and class mates , and these bonds become stronger when they get older and approach teenager age , becuase they share the same interesting .For example childern they enjoy playing sports , go out for shopping and other liesure activities with thier friends instead of their parents . Another major reason contribute for keeping children away from their parents is technology ,it’s massive factor in modren sociecty .Children use smartphones , online games and chating with thier friends unlimted time and every where , even they a...

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Organizing a large family celebration such as a wedding can often create problems. what can be the problems associated with organizing a large family event and what solutions can you suggest?

In many parts of the world, planning such a big family events can create issues between family members. Unlimit disagreements may occure so it is important to keep a small group in charge of the organising.

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Accidents are common on roads. What are the causes of this problem? Can you speculate the effects of this phenomenon and how could the frequency of accidents be reduced?

many peopel have been in car crash in there life.in this essay l will discuss how can we decrease the number of accidents.

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The availability of entertainment such as video games on handheld devices are harmful to individuals and to the society they live in. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In rerent times, there has been an ongoing debate regarding the availability of entertainment namely online games are harmful. A group of individual believe that video games on handheld devices also play a crucial role in developing hands-on skills and enhancing critical thinking or soft skills. Conversely, others argue that playing device games have a negative impact on humans and to the society they live.

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Many people no longer read newspapers or watch TV news programmes. Instead, they get news about the world from the Internet. Is this a positive or negative development?

There is no denying the fact that reading newspapers and watching TV news programmes are not common among young people . While it is a commonly held belief that many people do not read newspapers or watch TV news programmes at the moment. There is also an argument that the majority of people prefer to get information from the Internet, which has numerous advantages because it makes it easier to reach international news or local news. This essay will discuss both points of view and express my opinion.

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Some people believe that transportation is a major cause of pollution and that the government should be responsible for solving this problem. Others believe that individuals should take responsibility for reducing pollution caused by transportation. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, Many critics think that transportation is one of the most commen reasone for causing pollution and the governments should take all the responsibility to find a soultion for this issue, while others suggest that local people also should be responsible to reduce the transport pollution. In my perspective, I reckon that individuals should share aweraness in our community and try to use public trasports instead of using their own car . However, governments play a significant roll to limite the detreminteal effects that caused by transports.

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In many workplaces, online communication is now more common than face-to-face meetings. Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?

At modern workplaces, online ways of communication are often preferred over traditional face-to-face meetings. Using digital ways for official conversations, i believe bring more benefits than drawbacks.

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Some people think that managers alone should make decisions in the company, while others think that employees should be involved in the decision-making process too. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In today's dynamic job market, decision making in work culture has sparked ongoing debate. However, while some argue that only managers should make key decisions in the company because they have the experience and vision to access broader perspective of the company. I believe that employees should be included in the decision-making process, as it directly boosts employees moral and job satisfaction.

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Many adults suffer from stress due to log working hours. What problems does this create, and how can these problems be solved.

It is widely known that long working hours have a negative impact on people’s lives and stress has become a common effect of it. Stress has a lot of side effects, such as lack sleeping, mental health problems as anxiety, just to mention. However, there are some ways to lower down stress levels, this essay will explore possible solutions.

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In many societies, the number of people living alone is increasing. Why is this happening, and is it a positive or negative development?

It has become very common that people nowadays prefer to stay alone, which brings attention to the reasons behind it and the impacts it is putting on personal relationships and society. I think this trend is creating many problems like high divorce rates and lack of responsibilty towards community.

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