IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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Why do many people choose to delay having children? What are the effects of this trend?

On a global scale, having children has become a secondary consideration in modern society. This article will examine the noticeable reasons of such decision and discuss potential effects in individuals` lives in the long run.

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_Nowadays technology is influencing modern art in areas such as design, painting and film._ *Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

These days it is become increasingly common to see how technology is promoting modern art in several sectors including design, painting and filming. I am of the opinion that this trend might bring two main problems in the long run.

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Food travels thousands of miles from producers to consumers.Some people think that it would be better for the envionment and economy if people only ate the local food produced by farmers.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Food industry is globaly expanded due to easy air travel from one place to another. Owing to this, some folks argue that it is better for country development and environment if we do not export food to other countries. I am partially agree with this statement. In upcoming paragraphs i will discussed how its is good to use food in local shops.

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Some people like to try new things, for example, places to visit and types of food. Other people prefer to keep doing things they are familiar with. Discuss both these attitudes and give your own opinion.

In this modern world, some people are willing to pursue a fresh lifestyle, while other folks prefer to do things in a familiar way. In this essay ,I will discuss each perspective and give my opinion.

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The tendency of news reporters in the media to focus more on problems and emergencies than on positive developments is harmful to the individuals and the society as a whole. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

It is often argued that the media focus more on negative aspects of society than on positive developments, which can be harmful to both individuals and society. While reporting problems can provide some benefits, I believe that too much focus on negative news can cause harm.

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The number of refugees and immigrants is increasing. what are the possible causes and effects of this? Provide specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Immigration has become a topic of discussion in recent times as there seem to be an increase in the number of refugees in some countries. In this essay, I will elucidate the causes and its effect in the society.

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The number of refugees and immigrants is increasing nowadays. What are the causes and effects of this trend?

In this modern era, travelling became more convenient due to advancement in technology. Because of this, the statistic of immigration is also rising. The following paragraphs will expatiate both stances and the core reasons with lucid examples.

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some people believe that social media plays an important role in our lives. Some say that social media is not important to our lives..... discuss both these views and give your opinion.

In recent times, social media has made a remarkable progress especially in modern societies. Some people argue that it is an indispensable part of people's life, whereas others contend that it has some negatives consequences and not relevant to the individuals. However, I personally believe that it has both countless benefits such as convenience and instant information and disadvantages which will be substantiated in upcoming paragraph.

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Some people think secondary school students and high school students should be allowed to choose academic courses leading to university or practical courses leading to careers such as carpenters. To what extent do you agree or disagree？

Many citiziens belive that students from both, secondary school and high school, should have the option to choose between an university related course or a practical course for other type of careers. I totally agree with this afirmation.

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Even when rich countries help poor countries economically, there are still issues related to hunger and diseases. What are the causes and solutions to these issues?

In today's world, eradicating poverty and eliminating contagious deseases have become increasingly crucial for small countries. Although, they constantly facing limitation in responding the issues, wealthier states are always willing to grant any foreign aids to assist. However, the problem is always there, no matter how much money they have poured to the country. From my point of view, there are several reasons to indicate the casual matter and the possible solutions.

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Some systems require students to specialize in a limited range of subjects from the age of fifteen. Other systems require students to study a wide range of subjects until they leave school. What are the benefits of these two education systems and which is better?

Nowadays, many people are arguing about which type of education is better. Some schools think that there is no need to study all the subjects, but the other systems have other opinion about that. Both of this options have their advantages, but I personally agree with the latter point of view and strongly assert that students should learn all subjects.

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Should a city try to preserve its old, historic buildings or destroy them and replace them with modern buildings? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.

Many cities face two main approaches to dealing with historic buildings: preserve them with careful maintenance or replace them to make space for modern developments. Both viewpoints are often debated, but this essay focuses on two clear arguments and their implications.

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Some people think that some subjects taught in school are a waste of time, while others disagree and believe that everything studied in school is useful for students. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

There is considerable disagreement over whether a wide range of courses benefits students or wastes their time From my perspective, my own point of view is that the student will be beneficial from wide range curriculum in school Admittedly

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In some countries, there is a rising number of young people comitting crimes. What are the advantages and disadvantages from sending the young offenders to prison

In some countries, there is a rising number of young people committing crimes. In my opinion, these people should be sent to prison.

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The government should close companies that produce toxic waste materials without their own waste treatment facility in order to protect the envirnonment. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Use specific reasons and examples to support your position.

Companies whose are not treating their waste prior to release into natural surroundings should be banned. I totally agree with this notion, because poorly managed waste not only negatively impacts environment but also human and wildlife.

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some people say that parents shouyld encourage their children to take part in organized group activities in their free time. others say it is important for children to learn how to occupy themselves on their own. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some people believe that children should be inspired to get indulged in collaborative activities in their leisure time, whilst others argue that children must be taught how to stay occupied on their own. However, In my opinion, this trend has both advantages as well negative consequences which will be substantiated in this essay with relevant examples.

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Some people believe that teaching children at home is the best for a children's development while others think it is important for children to go to school. Discuss both advantages of each method and give your own opinion.

There is an ongoing debate among parents and teachers to determine if the best method of education is home schooling or attending school with other students. In my opinion, each child has different needs and while some may benefit from home schooling others may not, furthermore I believe that as children grow their preferences on public schooling or home schooling may change. In this essay I will highlight the advantage of each method of education.

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violence in the media couses youth to became agressive, do you agree or disagree

Media has become a platform that support the freedom of speech which also applied to content creation. There are no actual filters on what we can see, yet we are the consumer who often receving contents provided by certain platforms. Violent is inclusive on this matter and society has been experiencing drawbacks as a result of this particular content. I strongly believe that the existance of violent content could affect the youngsters to be uncontrollable. With this essay, I will lay out two reasons why such content can be harmful.

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Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past 30 years that may cities in the world are now "one big traffic jam" How true do you think this statement is? What measurement can government take to avoid this.

In recent 30 years there is a fast-changing tendency in cities: big amount of car ownerships turning the planet into a place with infinte traffic jams. These changes are a big issue that needs to be considered not only by government, but by ordinary people too. Personally, i agree with this quote, because it is not that hard to see this problem by myself on everyday basis.

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Food travels thousands of miles from farms to consumers. some people believe we should buy food from local farmer to protect the environment and support local businesses. do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

It is often argued that some individuals believe that buying food from local farmers to protect the environment and support local communities is more benefitial. Therefore, others believe that giant stores have wider variety of goods and it is more convenient for consumers to buy different items ( food, chemicals and machines) in there in order to save time. Personally, I believe that buying from local suppliers provides a lot of benefits : environmental, social and economical.

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