IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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All over the world, societies are facing a growing problem with obesity. This problem affects both children and adults. What are the reasons for this rise in obesity, How could it be tackled?

Nowadays, it is undeniable that health issues related to obesity are spreading worldwide. Since this problem affects a wide range of people regardless of age, this problem has to be faced as soon as possible.

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We can learn everything about the past from the drama in films and on television. Therefore, we no longer need to read historical books. To what extend do you agree or disagree about this statement?

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many people today spend too much time using smartphones and social media. what are the reasons for this problem, and what solutions can be taken to reduce it?

The world has changed a great deal from the past. Nowadays, many people spend too much time using smartphones and social media. However, there are many reasons for this problem and there are many solutions to reduce it. In this essay will explain this cuases and how to solve them.

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These days, many children have difficulty paying attention and concentrating in their classes at school. What are the reasons for this? How can it be dealt with?

Nowadays, a lot of pupils find hard to focus in their classes at school. Because, many children have access to use smart phones in their houses. Also, some of them use this access unsupervised from their parents. So, applications new features can tend them to not tolerate a long movement or talks.

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The number of children that read books for fun has dropped dramatically in recent years. What are the reason for that? How can we encourage children to read more?

These days the amount of kids reading books for entertaining has significantlly decreased,due to the embarcing of new technology that affected children's brain,and in order to solve that, parents should be more strict and careful while providing support and motivation to their children.

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Some people believe that schools should teach practical skills such as managing money instead of traditional academic subjects. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Making money is getting easier and easier day by day, but for teenagers it is still one of the most challenging things in their early life, so many individuals believe that schools should train them in managing money rather than teaching academic subjects. I partly agree with this opinion because handling finances is important to learn, however, academic skills and subjects even more essential in your entire life.

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Many aspects of the way people dress today are influenced by global fashion trends. How has global fashion become such a strong influence on people's lives? Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

Nowadays, many people tend to wear dress as influenced by global fashion trends. Both genders from different ages became interested on it. This essay will discuss the possible reasons behind this issue. In addition, positive and negative sides of this development.

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The number of children that read books for fun has dropped dramatically in recent years. What are the reason for this? How can we encourage children to read more?

The latest information of young generations reveals that exploring by reading book has been surged drastically. This phenomenon occurs because of several causes and this potentially leads to something unwanted. In this notion, we will discuss more about the reason behind and how to solve this issues.

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Some people believe that lowering the speed limit will lead to maximum road safety. Other people believe that there are many other ways to improve road safety. Discuss both the views and give your opinion

Since motor veheicles has been using as transportation, there are increasing lots of motor veheicles accident every single days which cause lots of opeple died or injured. Therefore while some believe that controlling lower the speed limit will lead to maximum road safety, others believe that there are mumeous other ways to improve road safety. Lowering the speed limit might be helped the road safety. However, there are many ways to improve road safety such as educaional campaigns, practice defensive driving habits . I believe that the latter is not only better enhanced for road safety but also more effective way in general.

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Some people think the latest technology for home entertainment such as sophisticated TVs, high-speed internet connections and tablets are having a negative impact on people’s lives, especially young people. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people believe the last development of technological devices in houses, such as complex televisions, and fast internet connections, also tablets are carrying a negative impact on socities's lives, particularly children. I completely disagree with this, because nowadays schools try to be modern, so they give children sheets and homeworks on their smart devices. Also, children are benefited from a lot application on their devices. So, these elements can improve their educational performance.

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Some think that the best way to stay fit is to join gym. while others think doing everyday activities such as walking and climbing stairs is enough. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some people say that the best way to stay in shape is to join gym. Whereas, others believe doing everyday workout for example, walking and going downward and upward stairs is adequate. I will discuss both views, and, give my opinion in conclusion. But, gym lifestyle ensure people to not lose weight only, aslo, they lose weight, and gain muscles to compensate their fat losing. This is because, gym weights.

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The teaching situation of teacher and students in a classroom will no longer exist by the year of 2050. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is argued that face to face teaching practise of student and teacher will no longer exists in future.

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There is no doubt that globalisation has benefited the world by bringing together people, business and nations. People who criticise it stand in the way of progress. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.

Globalisation has brought many benefits to the modern world. Although, there are those who wish to stop its advancement. This essay will first discuss with those in agreement before turning to the other side. In my personal view, i fully stand with those who say that the modernazation of the human world has brought many advantages, but it does have a couple of downsides to it.

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The dangers of smoking are well-known, yet many people continue with this habit. Are the causes of this and how can we reduce smoking in society?

In today’s society, smoking has become a increasingly urgent concern. This essay will examine the primary causes of this problem and proposes feasible strategies to address the issue effectively.

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Demand for gas and oil is increasing and so finding new resources in remote and untouched areas is a necessity. Do the advantages of this outweigh its disadvantages?

Nowadays the gas and oil’s demand is so high to fulfil our needs in almost any field, such as transportation, manufacturing, production. So, we need these resources not only for different types of vehicles, but also for the most vital structures adequate functioning. That is why some people consider we have to discover new places, usually untouched by the humans, contain vital natural resources. Otherwise, these remote areas are sacred and necessary for its unique flora and fauna, and destroying the nature can lead to a real disaster. In this essay the main idea is to prove that there is no need to cause harm to our planet digging the wild areas.

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Many people believe that media coverage of celebrities is having a negative effect on children. To what extent do you agree?

A lot of people consider that media coverage of celebrities is affecting children negatively. I completely agree with that statement, because the unconcious mind of children getting hampered by watching lavish, and indecent lifestyle.

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In some cultures, children are often told that they can acheive anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message?

Children can achieve whatever they want, if they try their best, encouraged by some people in some cultures. However, this can be motivative, but it may have some negative effects. Both perspectives will be examined before I present my own viewpoint

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Some people think that government should ban dangerous sports while others think people should have freedom to do anysports or activity. Discuss both views and give your opinion

Some citizens say that authorities must ban dangerous sports. Whereas, others believe people must have choose sports or activities freely. I will discuss both views, and give my opinion in the conclusion. People learn sports for different reassons, also some these reassons can make sure that they are safe.

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Large internet companies and organizations hold the personal information of many individuals. Do you think the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

There has been a long standing debate about large internet companies and facilities hold the individual information of number of people. While this trend has both positive and negative aspects, i believe the advantages far outweigh the disadvantages,and this essay will explain why.

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Some people believe that it is more effective for students to study in a group, while others believe that it is better for them to study alone. Discuss both view and give your own opinion

It is commonly known that method of study is an integral part to improve knowledge in different fields; while some argue that study alone is the better option to prepare an exam, others say that study in groups may help to enhance this preparation.

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