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The world is experiencing a dramatic increase in population, This is causing problems not only for poor, undeveloped countries, but also for industrialised and developing nations. Describe some of the problems that overpopulation causes, and suggest at least one possible solution.

There is no doubt that the world's population is increasing rabidly. The real question is what proplems this might cause for different countries. The three main issues are related to the difficulty to get the needed education, place to live and securing a job.

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Some people think that job satisfaction is more important than job security, while others believe a permanent job is more valuable. Discuss both views and give your opinion

It is often argued that job satisfaction is more valuable than job security, while others believe that permanent job is more important. Nowadays this topic has attracted significant attention worldwide due to its impact on individuals. This essay will examine both the views and provide relevant examples to support my point.

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People now have the freedom to work and live anywhere in the world due to the development of communication technology and transportation. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.

There is no doubt that technological and transportational play a prime role in todays multidimentional development. The questions is wether the benifits of this development overweight its negatives? In my opinion I think that there are a notable need of technology and transportation despite its negative effect as they make our lives easier and have a primary role in academic development.

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It is inevitable that traditional cultures will be lost as technology develops. Technology and traditional cultures are incompatible. - To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view? - Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Many people believe that It is impossible that technological advancement can led to loss of traditional culture. I disagree with this statement as festival celebration happens through mobile phones and many young influencers on social media believe that traditional heritage is boring.

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It is better for young adults to move away from their family home than to continue to live with their parents. Do you agree or disagree?

People often find a challenge separating from their parents when growing up. Some state that it is better for early adults to leave their family’s home and move in with their parents. I completely disagree with this statement for several reasons. This essay will discuss my point of view and give reasons to support my opinion.

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Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

There is no denying the fact that every individual has the right to live hes life as he wants. While it is a commonly held belief that some people like to live their life with the same routin, there is also an argument that engaging in new and different experiences can be benefecial and also has a great impact on people lives. This essay will discuss this topic from both points of view and expresse my own opinion.

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Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some individuals believe that all learners should study whatever they prefer. While, others contend that they should only study beneficial subjects. Like, science and technology .Although, the previous choice is argued. I personally believe students should pick whatever they tend to enjoy.

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With a growing population, many countries believe that we should focus on producing gm foods. What are the advantages and disadvantages of doing this?

Genetically Modified foods as the name suggests are foods genetically altered to achieve certain purpose. In some cases it's just a matter of quality, as per fruits and some other vegetables.

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Nowadays people are not fit and active as before. These will have negative effect in the future health. What are the reasons and solutions to this issue?

Fitness of future is facing huge risk due to sedentary lifestyle, including unhealthy diet and reduced body activities. I strongly believe that this factors contribute in reduction of population level of body fitness. To begin with unbalanced diet, individual tend to eat much more fast food than in the past years. As a result of busy schedule, people use the technology to order the fast food . This improvement of application makes the consumption of a quick prepared meals, more easier by provide the customer full access to the restaurant's menu in addition to the flexibility to the users to ordering any time and anywhere. This diet lack of fresh ingredients that fall of fiber, high protein, and a balanced carbs.In long-term, this advise eating habits has proven to be linked with heart disease, diabetes, and high cholesterol level, lead to shorter the normal life span of a human. Moreover, technical development play key roles in transportation, therefore community depend on automated...

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Nowadays many people choose ready-made food and refuse to cook at home, why and what are the advantages/disadvantages?

In today's fast-phased world, it is noticable that people often prefere ready to eat meals rather than preparing healthy home made food. This trend mainly due to busy lifestyle. While ready-made food provide certain benefits such as saving time, but they also have drawbacks including health concerns. This essay will discuss the this trend along with its pros and cons.

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In many workplaces, online communication is getting more common than meeting face to face. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, many aspects of life have changed compared to the past, and one of the most significant changes is technology like meeting online instead of face to face. Hence, there are some advantages and disadvantages for online communication. This essay will show two benefits and a drawback.

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The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in towns and cities closing.\Do you agree or disagree?

The growth of online shopping will oneday lead to all shops in twons and cities closing. In my opinion, I completely agree with this statement because online shopping makes people buy things easier and cheaper.

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in some countries,owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. why might this be the case Do you think this iis positive or negative situation

It is indeed true that, At the present most of individuals think taking house for rent is more essentials for survival in different countries. According to the my mindset, I think there is a positive tendancy. However, This essay wil discuss them in detail with a summary.

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In many countries, paying for things using mobile phone (cellphone) apps is becoming increasingly common. Does this development have more advantages or more disadvantages?

In this modern world, the method of paying for transaction is gradually changing from cash to smart phones, but what are the advantages and disadvantages of this tendency? In this essay, I will discuss both positive and negative aspects and give my opinion.

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Obesity has been found to be a serious health hazard over the world, over the past few decades. What are the causes behind it? What steps can be taken to slow down this trend?

Studies show that obesity is one of the main causes of Diabetic and Cardivascular diseases in the world. Kuwait ranked second place world wide on obese percentage. However, if it is not controlled may lead to several health hazards. This essay will examine the causes of obesity, and recomendations and serious steps to keep people healthy and safe.

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Climate change is a big environmental problem that has become critical in last couple of decades. Some people claim that humans should stop burning fossil fuels and use only alternative energy resource, such as wind and solar power. Others say that oil, gas and coal are essential for many industries, and not using them will lead to economic collapse. What is your opinion? Support your point of view with relevant examples.

In recent years, there has been an ongoing debate about whether people should continue use fossil fuels or to replace them with other environmentally friendly resources. While, I understand the importance of oil, gas and coal, I strongly believe that maintaining and developing alternative energy resources is far more beneficial, as they carry environmental value and can bring long-term economic advantages.

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SOME PEOPE THINK THAT SPENDING A LOT OF MONEY ON BIRTHDAYS AND MARRIAGES CELEBRATIONS IS A WASTE OF MONEY BUT OTHERS THINK THAT IT IS IMPORTANT TO THE YOUNG PEOPLE AND THE SOCIETY. DISCUSS BOTH VIEWS AND GIVE YOUR OPINION.

Spending a large amount of payment on Celebrations is a waste of cash. The question is, some families believe it is important to spend a lot of cash on celebrations, however, others believe there are many more necessary things than celebrations. In my opinion, I believe people should save their salary and not spend it on parties because they are just celebrations. In this essay, I am going to introduce both views and give my opinion.

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Some people think that giving daily homeworks results in students' high academical performance, while others think that giving daily homeworks is not the main reason for their achievements

There are many heated discussions about should the students be given homeworks everyday to be more successful academically or giving homeworks too frequently is not the key factor for good grades. I personally think that the impact of the homeworks are in their quality, intensity and engagement.

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Many small businesses today are being forced to close because they are unable compete with huge malls and mega stores. What problems does this cause and how can this problem be solved?

The business industry today has a variety of different sectors. Within this industry there are multiple competitions between different brands. Simple businesses are forced for closure, because of the rivalry with known brands and malls. As a result, problems are caused because of obligating small businesses to close. This essay will discuss this issue and both the problems it causes and solutions to it.

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In many countries around the world, rural populations are moving to cities, leading to a decline in the rural population. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

The moving of rural population to cities reflects not necessarily a negative development, but certainly a change that requires attention and support from the government.

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