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Topic: When choosing a job, the salary is the most important consideration. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is widely believed that, salary plays a vital role when someone chooses a job. I completely agree with this view that salary is the most significant issue when choosing a job because mental satisfaction and family needs are highly relevant to income.

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their future careers. Others believe that students should be allowed to study subjects they are interested in. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, learning has become more challenging for students in many countries around the world. Some people believe that university students should only study subjects that are required their future careers, and other people think that they should study subjects are interested in. This essay will discuss both views; however, I believe that university students should be allowed to study subjects that they are interested in.

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Some people move to other countries when they retire. Others think that it is better to retire in their home country. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples.

Financial stability plays a huge role in societies, Adults around the world would travel and move cities for better job opportunities.

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In many professional sports, there is an increase in the number of athletes using banned substances to improve their performance. What are the causes of the phenomenon and what are some of the possible solutions?

It is argued that more and more professional athletes use performance enhancing substances to improve their performance. Being a phenomenon spread in many differet sports, I believe the roots of the problem can be found in the fact that today's athletes are under a lot of pressure from social media exposure. Moreover, the number of competitions and turnaments is always increasing. I believe a possible solution would be providing psychological support to the athletes and raise awareness on the damage of doping.

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Essay type: Discussion Theme: Some people feel that it is better to live in a city while others believe that life is a better in the countryside

Where to live has been a very interesting topic theses days, weather it's in the beautiful natural side of the world or in the heart of ticnology fast pace and beautiful arctecture of buildings. some individuals look for the peace and serenity surrounded by lots of trees, wild animals and the sounds of Mother Natur. Usually older generation prefer that While younger individuals shift more into the city and the city life making it easier for them to access to the digital world and job opportunities as all companies are mainly located in the heart of the busy life of the city.

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some people say that the main enviromental problem of our time is the loss of partivcular species of plants and animlas. others say that there are more important enviromental problmes discuss both these views and give your opinion

It is with no doubt that every species in this earth has a role in the circle of life weather its a specific plant or animal.

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Some people believe that educational success depends on good teachers, while others believe that students attitude is important. Discuss both views and give you’re opinion.

It is often considered that individual’s academic growth is in teachers’ hand, whereas many believe that student’s behaviour towards studies have paramount importance. From my perspective, both of them have to fulfill their responsibilities with utmost professionalism.

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: Some people think that schools should reward students who show the best academic results, while others believe that it is more important to reward student who show improvements. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Most of the individuals argue that education system should give a price for the student, who score first rank in academics exam and other's say that reward each student, who got better results than previous tests. I personally agree with, reward for all the student with better improvement.

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The government should control the Internet to reduce cyber-crime and ensure safety of users. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Many people believe that the government should take control of the Internet to stop cyber-crime and make online spaces safer for users. I strongly agree with this statement because government regulation can prevent illegal activities and protect citizens from online dangers.

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Many believe that climate change is the most serious issue facing humanity, while others think it is over-exaggerated. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The largest proportion of the world think that the climate change is global serious problem for humans, other part of people suppose that this issue is overwhealmed.

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People are not excercising regularly, even though they know it is beneficial for their health. Why is this a problem? What can be done to tackle it? Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Many people don't do trainings or can't maintain stability in them, which shows random motivation, rather than discipline. There are several reasons for that which have possible solutions. In this essay I will provide my ideas how this problem can be addressed.

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Despite a variety of sports facilities and gyms, people are less fit nowadays than ever before. What do you think are the main causes of this problem? What solutions can you suggest?

It is widely argued that although fitness facilities are widely available, people are getting less in shape over time. This is particularly affected by an unhealthy lifestyle, especially for younger generations, and it can be solved through implementing high-taxation for junk foods and sugary drinks.

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Some believe buildings should be built in a way that serves their purpose rather than just look beautiful. Others, however, say buildings should represent art too. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

In contemporary society, housing plays an essential role in people’s standard of living. It is a contentious issue whether simple house with basic amenities is beneficial or decroative builidings are far-reaching. Although simple house is afforadable, I strongly believe that buildings with art broaden individuals’ horizon.

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Some people believe that studying at univeristy or college is the best route to a successful career,while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after school.Discuss both view and give your own opinion.

There is no denying the fact studying at univeristy is the best way to acheive a successful career. while it is a commonly held belief that some people still prefer to get a job straight after school.There is also an argument that opposes it,i consider that studying at college helps student achieve finacial stability after graduation.

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Some people believe that university students should focus on studying subjects that will lead to high-paying careers, such as science, technology, or business. Others argue that students should be free to study whatever subjects they prefer, regardless of future job prospects.

Many university students prefer studying subjects that they want, even with the consequences, and even though it is considered a gamble. But if they choose the other option, it will be much easier in the future.

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Many sports players advertise sport-related products. What extent the disadvantage outweigh the advantage?

It has become increasingly common for athletes to promote sporting goods. While it has some upsides for sports players, such as increasing their income, I believe that the downsides, such as health risks associated with certain sporting products, can be greater than the advantages.

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Some people believe that the experiences children have before they go to school will have the greatest effect on their future life. Others argue that experiences gained when they are teenagers have a bigger influence. Discuss both views and give your option.

Nowadays, a lot of people think that the experiences children have before they go to school will have the biggest effect on their future life. Others argue that experiences gained when they are teenagers have a greater influence. This essay will discuss both views and give my opinion.

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Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plant and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

One of the major problems facing humanity is environmental concern, especially the shortage of green areas and animals. In recent years, a portion of mankind thinks this is right, while others say that there are arguments more essential than this. I totally agree with the second view, and I will discuss both views before reaching a conclusion.

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In their advertising, bussinesses nowadays usually emphasise that their products are new in some way. why is this? do you think it is a positive or negative development.

With the growing competition between multiple businesses, most of them try to make their product unique so it get more attention. The main purpose of the business is to generate sales so it remains successful, but keep maintaing this performance is difficult when multiple competitors comes in. So organisations used advertisements as their tool to present their items in a unique way so it gain more popularity.

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Advertising is becoming more and more common in everyday life. Is it a positive or negative development?

An increasing number of companies are choosing to advertise their products and services through various channels, making advertisements a remaining part of everyday life. From my point of view, this is a negative development because it encourages unnecessary consumption and can mislead people into making financially detrimental decisions.

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