IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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Some university students want to learn about other subjects in addition to their main subjects. Others believe it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for a qualification. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

There is no denying tha fact that choosing an academic major is the most significant part of your college experience. Many students are wanting to study other subjects beside their main spealization, While other argued that it it more crucial to focus only on studying for thier main field to get qualification. I believe that exbanding you knowledge in today day and age will always be benefecial.

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Some people think that schools are too competitive and that this has a negative impact on children. Others believe the competitive environment encourages children to achieve. Discuss both these views and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowsdays schools become competitive for children.I think sometimes it must be challenging to filter good students and make bad students work hard more.In this essay we will discuss the impact of the competitive environment on childrrens.

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Some people believe that universities should offer places to young students with high marks. Other believe that people of all ages and with low grades should be allowed to study. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It has been an issue of debate whether the educational institutions offer admission to young students, who got higher marks or give admission to pupils of all age groups with low grades. This essay will discuss both sides of the argument.

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In many countries, there is a growing trend of young people moving from rural areas to large cities, leading to the decline of countryside communities. What are the reasons for this migration, and what steps can be taken to encourage people to stay in rural areas?

In the modern days more people in rural areas especially young people are going to urban areas which suppost to decrease rural areas population. In this essay reason of this and possible solutions will be discussed.

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In number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new railways lines for very fast trains between cities. Others believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Both views are right in their own mindset, but which is the best is highly debatable. Both are important aspects. However, which is the best is highly depend upon the scenario. The best outcome and decision can be made when the situation is presented with the ever growing population the strategies must be implemented and take pirority than the other whether if it is to spend on existing transport.

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Around the world, children learn English as a second language at school. However, in some places, they also learn at kindergarten (pre-school care, when children are aged two to five). Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of learning English at kindergarten.

Nowadays, Many people learn English langusage as a second language at school. However, some people make their kids learn it from an early age such as two to five. There are many advantages and disadvantages of learing English Language at kindergarten.

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There have been many inventions in human history (e.g the wheel) some people think the most important thing is the Internet. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Many people believe that the internet is the most important invention in human history is the internet. In my opinion, i agree with this statement, the net has improved our lives in so many ways and made it easier.

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Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Access to clean water is a basic human right. Therefore, every home should have a water supply that is provided free of charge. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Access to clean water should be for the general public, as it's considered a basic human right. Therefore, people going through finanicial struggles shouldn't worry about having clean water to drink and use, since water is part of nature which makes it a public property. However, selling water would help companies gain the money to improve their facilities which will result in a better quality water. In my opinion, I beleive that water is a public right even if companies need the money to improve their facilities a lot of poor people can't afford this basic right.

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YOU HAVE TO RECIEVE THIS EMAIL FROM WHO YOU WENT TO COLLEGE WITH. Do you know it will be five years since we finished college ? i think we should contact our friends and arrange to meet again.Have you got any ideas about what we could do to celebrat e and when? write and tell me jan write an email to jan : suggest a good way to celebrate with your old college friends explain when would be the best time for the celebrate offer to help organise the celebrate

It was really nice to hear from you. I can’t believe it has already been almost five years since we finished college, time really passed quickly.

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Around the world, children learn English as a second language at school. However, in some places, they also learn at kindergarten (pre-school care, when children are aged two to five). Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of learning English at kindergarten.

Worldwide, children usually learn English as a secondary language in schooling facilities. However, in some places, learning at kindergarten is also noticed. This development encourages young generations to build self-confidence from an early age and opens various career opportunities in the long-term though it usually causes mental overload and this could be challenging to overcome in the following years.

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In education and employment, some people work harder than others. Why do some people work harder? for better job achievement, Is it always good to work hard?

In study and job some individuals try harder than others. This essay will first discuss how people who is working harder might get better achievement and get promotion than those who don’t and suggest that working hard day and night won’t be always good because a lot of people might burn out during that process.

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The animal species are becoming extinct due to human activities on land and in sea. What are the reasons for this? What solutions could be used to tackle the situation?

The animal species are becoming extinct due to many human activities on land and sea. What are the reasons for this? What solutions could be used to tackle the situation?

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Many people think that the world should speak one language, others argue that countries should have its own languages. Discuss both views and give your opinion?

It is undeniable that while most people preferred one language around the world, others have opposite opinion which each country should have unique language, This essay will discuss both perspective before explaining why I am convinced that each country better to have different language.

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There are many female students who finish degrees in science and technology courses at university, but few move into the workplace after they graduate. Why is this? What measures can be taken to encourage them into work?

It is commonly believed that number of female graduated students with degrees in science and technology are increased. However, most of them don't look for jobs. This essay will discuss the main causes of this problem and suggest possible solutions to overcome it.

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Many people go and work in other countries, and bring their families with them. Do advantages for families outweigh disadvantages?

The phenomenon of moving abroad with their family in seek of work and eventually better life has become increasingly ubiquitous in many countries. While this has its certain benefits, I am convinced that drawbacks can clearly overshadow it.

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Around the world, children learn English as a second language at school. However, in some places, they also learn at kindergarten (pre-school care, when children are aged two to five). Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of learning English at kindergarten.

There has been a controversial issue whether or not attending English kindergarten from a very young ages. While numerous people claim that it may result negative affect to individuals, others argue that learning forein languae from a young ages comes intensive strong point to them.

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Convenience food will become increasingly prevalent and replace by traditional food preparation. To waht extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Ready meals will completely replace traditional cooking. In my opinion, convenience food will become more and more popular due to busy lifestyles, and will replace classic cooking.

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Some peole say that music is a good way of bringing people of diiferent cultures and ages to together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Many individuals claim that music is an effective method for bringing people of different age groups and cultures toghether. In my opinion, i agree with this statement, music should be shared across the world so people from different nations could participate in it.

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Some people feel that they should not have to pay any tax and should be able to keep all of the money that they earn. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There remains a controversial issue in various perspectives. Some argued that they earn money with their own effort, they should not bear any tax. Another point of view is that they have obligations to pay any tax despite they earn money by their own work. In my opinion, I agree that citizens pay any tax, even though they earn money by themselves.

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Parents should encourage their children to spend less time on studying and more time on doing sports and other physical activities. Do you agree or disagree?

In today's society, many people encourage their children to spend less time on their studies and allocate more time to physical exercise. As far as I am concerned, I strongly agree with this argument, and I will detail the reasons below.

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