IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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Many people today are worried about ‘cybercrime’ such as hacking and identity theft. What problems does ‘cybercrime’ cause, and what solutions can you suggest for ordinary people and businesses to take?

Many people are victims or feel unsecurity about cybercrime, for that people always feel afraid and be under threat, engineers are working every day again cyber stolen and other way to crime on web to solve this issue. I will explein about it.

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People produce more garbage than in the past. Explain how it is affecting us and the measures that could be taken to address the situation.

In modern times, the community produces more garbage compared to old times. As a result, we live in a place more polluted. It is affecting the nature, animal and as too. This issue could solve implementing mesures that decreasing overal cunsuption and increase recycling and reusing trash.

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Some people think that parents should teach their children how to be a good member of the society. However, Other believe that school is the best place to learn this. Discuss both the view and give your own opinion.

Some individual belive that parents should educate their child to be a good member of the society. While, some other people think that school is far more better place to learn this. This essay contain both the views with relevant example, with my point of view.

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In some countries, the government pays for health care. In others, the individual must pay for their own health care. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of each system.

Nowadays there are many countries that provide the healthcare system for their people. Also there are many countries where people should pay for their healthcare services.

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•It is thought by some that it is better to live in a city while others believe that life is beer in the countryside. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Living in both cities and countrysides have merits and drawbacks. While a proportion of individuals believe that it is superior to reside in a city, an opposing argument considers the countryside a better place to live in. This essay will examine both perspectives and present my own opinion. Which favors the lifestyle of cities.

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While mobile phones have many advantages, a number of problems have also resulted from them or the ways in which they are used. What are some of these problems? What solutions can you suggest for solving these problems?

Despite having several advantages Mobile phones have caused a lot of problems or being used in a improver way. This essay will talk about some of the major problems involving both young adults and older generation. Also, will disscuss about the potential solution to all these problems.

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Access to clean water is a basic human right. Therefore every home should have a water supply that is provided free of charge. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Water should be accessable to all human as it is a basic human right. Therefore every household should get a water supply that is provided free of cost. I strongly agree with the given statement, my inclation will elucidated in following paragraphs.

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While mobile phones have many advantages, a number of problems have also resulted from them or the ways in which they are used. What are some of these problems? What solutions can you suggest for solving these problems?

Today there are many benefits and drawbacks of using mobile phones. There are over the 8 billion of people in the World and the largest proportion of people are phone users. Mobile phone is the most genius creation of the humanity. There are many beneficial things of using phones but also there are some disadvantages that seriously impact on people of this century.

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one of the consequences of improved medical care is that people are living longer and life expectancy is increasing. do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the diadvantages.

Advanced medical cures and services led to a notable increase in citizens' average life expectancy. Despite the fact that individuals will have more time to contribute to the development of the nation, I firmly believe that the drawbacks of this trend outweigh the merits.

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Some school leavers travel or work for a period of time instead of going directly to university. What are the advantages or disadvantages for their study?

There are sivergent opinions about academic success. On this topic, I partially agree about work for a period of time instead of going directly to universicy.

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Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

In moder times, many sick peoples use alternative therapys and treatments rather than ask for help to a traditionals health workers, I partly agree because is case by case, for simple conditions alternative medicines would be useful many times. However, patients with serious health issues should ask a doctor to recive traditional diagnosis, treatments and medicines.

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Nowadays, many people spend less and less time at home. What are the ‎causes of this? What are the effects of this on individuals and on society.‎

In modern society, individuals spend lesser time at home. This essay will discuss vibrant city life and the rise in workload can lead to this trend, while also stating some possible effects on individuals and the community.

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Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters (such as food, clothes and entertainment) is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. Other people believe that it is important for children to make decisions about matters that affect them. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.”

Some people think that children should not make their own choices because they may become selfish. However, other people think that children should make decisions about things that affect them. This essay will discuss both views and give my opinion.

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Some people think citites are the best place tolive.Other prefer to live in the countryside.Discuss both of view and give your opinion

A group of people believe that living in the urban areas are better whilst others think that rural is better. This essay will discuss both of these 2 point of views and my opinion will be stated at the end of the conclusion.

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All university undergraduate courses should include a period of time spent studying abroad or doing a work placement. Do you think the advantages of this would outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In the modern world, all university should have an undergraduate program which include a where students should spent a period of time spent studying outside the country or doing a work placement. although this trend has several drawback, but advantage outweigh them in long run.

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Some people say that in the digital age, theatres and cinemas are no longer important as people can watch all the entertainment they want online. Others argue that theatres and cinemas are still important both economically and culturally. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In the modern era, many people prefers to watch movie in cinemas and theatres. While, some other people argue that theatres and cinemas plays and important role to our country both economically and culturally. This essay eludicates both the relevant views with examples, with my point of view.

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Nowadays, not enough students choose science subjects in university in many countries. What are the reasons for this problem? What are the effects on society?

Science degrees in university such as medical or biology are not popular these past few years in most of the countries. There are some reasons behind this argument as well as consequences to the society. This essay will discuss further about this trending topic.

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ome people think that mothers should spend most of their time raising their family, and therefore the government should support them financially. Do you agree or disagree?

Mothers play an essential role in the upbringing of their children. It is often argued that the government should support the mothers financially as being a mom is a full time job. I personally beleive that when mothers get paid by the state this makes them financial independent so they don't regret while taking career breaks.

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Some people believe that technological advancements have made traditional skills and methods obsolete, while others argue that these skills are still valuable. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

One group of people suppose that new technologies replaced the old traditional skills and hand technics however other group of people think that we should keep humanity and human's simple skills.

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Modern technology has made it easier for individuals to downloat copyrighted music and books from the Internrt for no charge. To what extent is this a positive or a negative development?

One of the impact that technology improvement bring is download musics and books that are not free of charge in the internet. This argument carries positive and negative impacts along with it. According to this topic, this essay would discuss more about the advatantage and disadvantage.

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