IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices to what extent do you agree or disagree with this statment

In this modern society, people believe that they have wildly range of options in their lives, such as entertainment, job opportunities, and living places. I completely agree with this view, and we will discuss and point out my perspective in this essay.

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Scientists Say that in the future humanity will speak the same language. Do you think it’s a positive development or negative development?

It is widely accepted that a language is a prominent source of communication. Scientists have anticipated that in future, we might solely depend on one language for conversation as many school and workplaces prefers to use globally accepted language. I strongly believe that it is a negative development as learning international languages is important in this competitive society, whereas indigenous languages also plays a significant role to display the value of our culture, reasons to support my perspective will be ellucidated in the following paragraphs.

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Many parents these days working in other countries, taking their families with them. Do you think the advantages of this development output disadvantages?

In modern society, it is widely debated whether settling down in a developed country is beneficial. Many parents content that relocating to a different country, along with their family and working there offers significant advantages. I believe that there are a few merits and demerits associated with this trend, which will be discussed in the following paragraphs.

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Freshwater has always a limited resource in some nations of the world. Today, however, growing Google demand has turned this problem into Global one. What are the causes behind the increased demand and what steps can government and individual take to address this problem?

It is inevitable fact that water is one of the fundamental sources of sustainability. In many countries, with the rising population, water consumption is also surging significantly, given that population growth is directly proportionate to the increasing demand of water. However, with the limited availability of freshwater, it has become a Global challenge for humanity to survive. The causes of reducing level of drinking water and steps to address in the prevailing situation would be analyzed in the following paragraphs.

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In some countries, fast food restaurants and supermarkets give money to school to promote their products. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

In some countries, fast food restaurants and supermarkets provide financial support to schools in exchange for promoting their products. While this practice may bring certain benefits, I believe it is mainly a negative development.

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Women can do everything that men can and they even do it better. They also can do many things that men cannot. But it is a fact that their work is not appreciated as much as men’s, although they have to sacrifice a lot for their family and career… It is said: “A woman’s place is in the home.” What do you think?

For many centuries, women are regarded as a main workforce when it comes to household routines. Throughout the world, many example can be found that women are more likely to engage in household work while men are working outside of their homes. In this modern world, we can see this barrier eruding, and I strongly suppose this tendency should be acceralated.

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More and more parents are allowing their children to play on computers and tablets as they think that children should learn technology skills. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.

In today's world, computers and tablets have become the most essential equipment amongst children.Parents have allowed their kids to use this technology because, they think that kids should be more in to technology, is a huge advantage for their future development. Similarly , there are advantages and disadvantages. This essay is going to unfold the both impact.

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Some people think that the main purpose of education is to prepare individuals for employment, while others believe it should focus on personal development. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

In the modern world, it is undeniable that purpose of education has been evolved over the period of time. Some critics argues that it should focused on employment prospective. While some people in the favour, education policies should be personal development centric, for a overall development. In this essay an attempt will be made to examine both perspective before presenting my own opinion.

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Learning English at school is often seen as more important than learning local languages. If these are not taught, many are at risk of dying out. In your opinion, is it important for everyone to learn English? Should we try to ensure the survival of local languages and, if so, how?

Some people believe that learning English at school is more important than learning local languages. Nevertheless if new generations don’t learn local languages, they might disappear in the future. In the essay we will discuss both opinions and find solutions for the survival of dialects.

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Learning English at school is often seen as more important than learning local languages. If these are not taught, many are at risk of dying out. In your opinion, is it important for everyone to learn English? Should we try to ensure the survival of local languages and, if so, how? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays we are living an historical moment that can be mentioned as “The Globalization Era”. The growing rate of international exchanges of people and items has led people of different countries to the acnowledged need of speaking the same language. For this reason, learning English at school has been becoming more and more important and in many place c in the world it’s going to substitute the native languages. In my opinion it’s of vital importance the study of English but it’s of vital importance that the single local languages survive and continue to be spoken.

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Some people believe that music should be taught in school, while others think that it is best to focus on science and computer. Do you agree or Disagree?

Since education has been formally established hundred years ago, the debate between if arts or science is more essential has never been prolonged. On one hand, art related subjects like music provides us a medium to facilitate character growth and holistic development. On the other hand, science and technology is literally the car that drives the human race foward, also improving improves our daily lifes. However, although focusing science and computer subjects certainly help our students to keep up with the footsteps of this everchanging generation. Music should also a vital subject for students to have enhanced brain developement, all round character growth , and it eventually even elevates our life quality as humans .

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Modern technology now allows rapid and uncontrolled access to information in many countries. This is danger to our societies. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

Technology plays a vital role in life and it make human being life convenient. There are many online reaources available to get information about any country at anwhere. But this out of control information access is dangerous for society. I will discuss both views in the upcoming paragraph.

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Some people believe that reading printed books is more valuable for learning than using digital resources, while others think online materials are more effective. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In the modern era, education is most important part of life. There are two resources available for reading, one is printed books and other is online materials. Some mobs think that read from printed books is more effective, but others oppose it. I will discuss both views and my perspective in the upcoming paragraphs.

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The only way to improve safety of our roads is to give much stricter punishments on driving offenses. To what extent do you agree with this idea? (REVANN)

Nowadays, it has been widely argued that the only approach to enhance road-safety is to apply harsh fines on driving offenses. From my perspective, I strongly disagree with this statement. In this essay, I will discuss the reasons that support my opinion.

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In some countries, university students live away from home and in another city while studying. Do you think the disadvantsges outweigh the advantages of living in another city?

Nowadays, students from several different countries prefer to move out from their family for better educational purposes. I'm personaly an immigrant living overseas away from home. And I strongly spport the idea of immigrating for better education. In my opinion the benefits are higher then disadvantages.

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Fresh water has always been a limited resource in some nations of the world. Today, however, growing global demand has turned this problem into a global one. What are the causes behind the increased demand and what steps can goverments and individuals take to address this problem?

Nowadays, providing fresh water for people or other kind of reasons like industries makes a lot of concerns for the government and society. Additionally, this problem has became global issue because of demand of water in world. In this essay, I will explain reasons behind this issue and how government can solve this problem properly.

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Childhood obesity is becoming a problem throughout the developed world. Because of this, some people think that adverts for fast food, sweets and sugary snacks should not be allowed in schools and colleges. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In recent years, it has been widely recognized that obesity among young people became a serious issue around the world. As a result, some people argue that advertising junk meals and high sugar food must be banned in educational facilities. In my perspective, I strongly agree with this statement. In this essay, I will discuss the reasons that support my opinion.

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Academic The most important function of music is that it helps people reduce stress. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

it is widely believed that stress can be minimized through listening to music and considered a very significant way of relieving stress, because it helps to calm the body and the mind. I partly agree that music can relieve stress, yet not the only way.

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The plans below show the site of a farm in 1950 and the same site today. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two maps illustrate the transformations of Beechwood Farm between 1950 and today.

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Some people suggest that international news should study as a subject in secondary school (High School). However,others say that it will be a waste of valuable school time. Discuss both views and give your opinion

Students study many subjects in the schools.No one can deny that studying these subjects are very necessary for them.Some people think that some subjects aren't important to study.This essay will examine why international news should be studied as a subject in high school and why we shouldn't put it as a subject.

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