IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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In a public-funded healthcare system, people who are willing to pay for the best and fast treatment should be able to do so. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Being able to recieve medical treatment fast, and in the best way , should be a everyons right. However, Medical caregivers, cannot tend to everyone at the same time, theres a priority system that needs to be followed. Hence I disgree with saying people being able to pay for the best , and fast treatment should be able to do so.

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In the future, nobody will buy printed books or newspapers because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying? To what extent, do you agree or disagree with this statement

With growing popularity of technology, many people believe that printed books or newspapers will be out of favour due to many individuals able to read everything via online without spending money. However, I strongly agree with this view as the printed materials causes harmful impect over the environment due to excessive use of papers and plastic, also it cost a lot of money in long run period, there are many new devices suitable from reading and protect our vision.

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Many aspects of the way people dress today are influenced by global fashion trends. How has global fashion become such a strong influence on people's lives? Do you think this is a positive or negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

There is no denying the fact that, influenced by world wide fashion trends be an intgeral part in our lives. While it is commonly belief the opposes it. In my perspective, I consider that influenced by them have many beneficial factors.

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Some people that people should make effort to fight climate change while others think it is better to learn to live with it. Discuss both vies and give your own opinion

It is stated nowadays that humidity adjustment can be combatted, however, there is another assessment which proposes the opposite aspect, which claims that society should simply. While there are certain reasons for adapting to life where aridity difference cannot be solved, I agree with the glimpse that environmental changes, caused by human activities, can be solved.

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nowadays , a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medecine and treatments instead of visiting doctor. do you think this is a positive or negative development?

In recent years , nation treat well-being problems by self khnowledge medecine instead of visting specialist professor. I personally believe that some of medecine if any patient take it wothout doctor's precpective fitness risk. this will delay medecine and proper treatment.

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Public transportation is a great way to travel, particularly within a metropolis. The metro is the most convenient way to get around a city. Do you agree or disagree?

In today's fast paced world, every government provides the fundamental facilities to inhabitants. In the given context, i strongly agree with this viewpoint that, there should be an encouraging trend of travelling through public transportation, specifically, a metropoliton train. Which is considered as the best way to move around the city. This essay will elaborate the ascribed perspective further.

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Aircrafts have been increasingly used to transport fruits and vegetables to some countries where such plants hardly grow or are out of season. Some people consider it a good trend, but some people oppose it. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

The usage of planes to import and export fruits and vegetables has increased in some countries where these plants can not be grown. Some people believe it is good because it promotes economy revenue and create more jobs opportunities for poor neighborhoods, while others consider it harmful for the environment and health bacause they consume more fuel. I agre this is a good trend for many reasons that I will explaine.

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In some countries, more and more people are hiring a personal fitness trainer, rather than playing sports or doing exercise classes. What are the reasons for this? Is this a positive or a negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

These days, In a few countries, most people prefer to hire a personal fitness trainer instead of playing sports or attending exercise classes. This essay will discuss the reasons such as professional guidence and trust, and explain why I believe that it is a negative development, as it leads to isolation and less exposure.

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Nowadays more and more information and resources related to arts and entertainment are being digitized. Do the advantages of this trend outweight the disandvantages?

The art and entertainment digitalization has become an increasingly debated issue in modern society. It is obvious that there are positive and negative aspects of this trend. This essay will discuss both the merits and demerits of art and entertainment resources available online and evaluate whether one outweights the other.

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Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It has been argued that in the modern world, there are many choices for individuals, and this fact gives people the freedom that they need. This essay totally agrees with this statement because of the lack of opportunities that humanity suffered from in the past, and the human's instinct that led to a noticeable growth in our lives' quality.

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Some people think that competition at work, at school and in daily life is a good thing. Others believe that we should try to cooperate more, rather than competing against each other. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

There is no denying the fact that competition and cooperate a commen supject need to discussed. While it is a commonly held belief that compettion at both work and school very essential to get and achive your goal, there is also an argument that cooperate and help tgaother it is also important part.

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Before a lot of advantages, some people believe that the internet creates many problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree whit this statement?

There is no denying the fact that the internet has a lot of troubles, but it is becomes the most popular things in the recent years. while it is commonly held belife that web has the power to transform the way we live and work. There is also an argument that opposes view. In my opinion, I consider that digital world has more benefit than the drawback.

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Some people think that high salary is important when choosing a company to work for, while others think that good working atmosphere is more important. Discuss both view points and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant example from your own knowledge or experience.

these days some people think that high salary is important when choosing a company to work for, while others believe that good working atmopshere is more important. This essay will discuss oth sides and will draw my personal conclusion.

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Aircraft have been increasingly used to transport fruits and vegetables to some countries where such plants hardly grow or are out of season. Some people consider it a good idea, but some people oppose it. Dicuss in both views and give your opinion.

In recent years, the transportation of crops and plants by air have become more common, especially to regions where such products can not grow. While some people believe this is a positivie developement, others think it has negative consuqences. This essay will argue that the increasing transportation of fruits and vegetables by air is a possitive developement.

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Some think hosting an international event is beneficial for the country while others believe it is bad.

It is widely debated whether hosting an international sports event is beneficial for the country. I believe there are several advantages and disadvantages to hosting international events, and the benefits clearly outweigh the drawbacks.

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Millions of dollars are spent on space research every year. Some people argue that this money should be allocated to improving living standards on Earth. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Today, most richest countries trying to win space over other competitive countries. While they doing space research, some people accusing, the millions of money they spending on those research are not really useful and it's better those money could be allocated to improve living standards on earth. So, this essay will discuss with reasons why i'm partially agree to this statement above.

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"Some people believe that the media should be strictly controlled to prevent false information, while others argue that freedom of the press is essential. Discuss both views and give your own opinion."

Media control over false news has recently become a major concern in the society. Some individual insists that media should be rigid rules and regulations to prevent news that are not true while others believe that there freedom of the press is relevant as such, be given the opportunity to share whatever they want to share. Although, there are different views to this, I will discuss both views but I believe that news should be well investigated before it is shared thereby not abusing the freedom of press.

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Sme people spend most of their lives living close to where they were born. What might be the reason for this? What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

Living closer to one's place of birth has currently become a major concern among many people. Some individuals spend most time in the environment where they were born due family attatchment, lack of opportunity, comfort. Although, there are many reason why one would prefer staying where they were born, I will be discuss the advantages and the disadvantages.

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Human activity has had a negative impact on plants and animals around the world. Some people think that this cannot be changed, while others believe actions can be taken to bring back a change.

Over the last years it's been shown that human activity is causing an impact on plants and animals around the world. Some people think it cannot be changed because of all the damage already caused while others believe that we are still on time to stop and make a positive difference.

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Human activity has had a negative impact on plants and animals around the world. Some people think that this cannot be changed, while others believe actions can be taken tobring back a change.

Humanity has provoked a negative impact on animals and plants thanks to their activities. Some people think that the biological annihilation of some animal species can be changed next to the restoration of ecosystems and habitats destroyed by humanity. While others think it cannot be changed and that the obliteration of some animal groups and the natural destruction is permanent.

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