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Some people say that physical education classes are an important of childs education. While others believe that it is more important to focus on academics during school time Discuss both the views and give your opinion

Methods of children's class organisation have always been a controversial issue.While some people affirm that physical education courses remain important for children's education,the other proportion ,including me, believe that children should focus on academic development during school time. This essay will discuss why this is the case and the reasons i prefer focusing on academic achievement.

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Rising university fees and scares employment prospects for graduates have led some people to say that universities should not teach arts subjects, like philosophy and history, and only offer practical degree courses that maximise chances of employment. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people argue that higher educational institutions ought not educate humanities subjects for example Philosophy and History as graduates are facing less employment opportunites along with increasing fees in university. They consider the authority should allow nothing but practical courses in order to get the maximum opportunity for jobs. In my opinion, I strongly disagree with this view since Arts is such a versatile academic arena which is anything but impractical.

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Many people argue that resturants should be required ti disclose the nutritional information of the dishes they serve. Do the advantage of this outweugh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, many restaurants are opened with a wide range of food variety. A large number of people emphasise that every dish should be described with nutritional information on menu cards, while other holds the opposite side of it and are not ready to disclose any details.

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Many people argue that resturants should be required ti disclose the nutritional information of the dishes they serve. Do the advantage of this outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, many resturants are opened with wide range of food vareity. A large number of people emphasize that every dish should be described with nutritional information in menu cards, while other holds opposite side of it and not ready to disclose any details.

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In many countries, people are now living longer than ever before. Some people say an ageing population creates problems for governments. Other people think there are benefits if society has more elderly people. To what extent do the advantages of having an ageing population outweigh the disadvantages?

People living a longer life than ever before in many countries, especially developed countries because of the advancement in the health sector. An elderly citizens are create extra burden to the government by means of responsibilities to take care of aged people. Although, it brings some benefits to the society by exchange of experience, knowledge between elderly and young people.

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Some people think that we should replace old buildings and houses in cities with more modern buildings. Other people think we should protect old buildings. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

In today’s world, some people argue that old buildings and houses in cities should be substituded by modern buildings. While others believe that we should protect old buildings. In my views, the historical buildings need to be preserved rather than demolished.

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Some people say that schools should concentrate on teaching students academic subjects that will be useful for their future careers. Other people say that subjects, namely, music and sports are also necessary. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

people these days have different ideas as regards to being well educated. One side says that, teaching just academic subjects are more beneficial for their career path, whereas others support the idea of learning non-academical subjects such as music and sport. From my point of view, non-care subjects are crucial, as well. However, I will discuss both viewpoints.

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Some people believe that, the internet has brought people closer together by making world smaller. Others disagree, claiming that, the internet has made people and communities more isolated, because they no longer need to leave home and interact with others. Discuss both views.

Some people these days have differing ideas as regards effect of internet on society. One side says that, it makes people closer to each other, whereas the other support the idea of it causing isolated lifestyle. However, from my point of view, I consider advantage of utilization of internet is superior than drawbacks. However, I will discuss both viewpoints.

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Some people think that physical strength is important for success in sport, while other people think that mental strength is more important. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

The relationship between technological development and environmental problems has always been a controversial issue. While some people affirm that development in technology has caused many environmental problems, another proportion, including me, believes that new technology is necessary for environmental durability. This essay will discuss why this is the case and the reasons I believe that technology is the key to a better environment.

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Some people claim that many things children learn at school have actually wasted their time. Other people argue that everything taught at school is useful in the future. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Education serves as a stepping stone towards everyone’s future. Some people believe that school is a ineffective institute and should not be recognised as a prestigious venue. Others argue that school provides students with a high standard learning. This essay will carefully analyze both positions prior to presenting a well-reasoned personal opinion.

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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Living in a foreign country always means communicating in a language that is not your mother tongue.This language barrier generates heated discussion that some people assert that it will trigger severe social and practical issues,while I advocate the opposite opinion that such problem may occur initially or occasionally,I believe they are not long-lasting or serious as the statement suggests.

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Some people think news has no connection to people's lives, so it is a waste of time to read the news in newspapers and watch television news programs. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

News is one of the most important readings in many people’s day but in many opinions it's a waste of time because news in newspapers or television is not related to their daily life. I totally disagree with this statement.

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Now adays the surveillance is happening at almost all public places. is it good or perceived bad by people? what are the advantages and disadvantages?

It is not uncommon to see that cameras are found everywhere in public places most of the time. The two main advantages are national security, and crime prevention and the key drawbacks are privacy concerns, and potential for misuse.

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The percentage of overweight children in western society has increased by almost 20% in the last ten years. Discuss the causes and effects of this disturbing trend.

Nowadays, the proportion of corpulent children has increased. I will not only try to explain the causes behind this growing tendency but also shed light on what possible effects it can cause.

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Malnutrition is still a significant problem in many developing countries. What are the causes of malnutrition, and how can this problem be addressed?

Now a days, many people are suffering from malnutrition and it is increasing rapidly in many countries. It is caused because of inadequate nutrients supplied to the body. This essay will discuss the causes and solutions for this deadly disease.

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Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Life is full of ups and downs, and how we respond to these circumstances evaluates our own journey. Many people claim that it the best decision to accept unfavourable situations like job dissatisfaction and sometimes shortage of financial issues, as these happenings are inevitable parts of life. Meanwhile, others asserted that by adopting significant proactive approaches, situations can be improved. In my opinion, there should be aproper balance between accepting and improving the inevitable incidents.

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Large businesses have big budgets for marketing and promotion and as a result, people gravitate towards buying their products. What problems does this cause? What could be done to encourage people to buy local products?

It is widely acknowledged that individuals tend to purchase products of the huge corporations, because thay have a brand awareness and good advirtising. However, it may lead to several negative consequences for local busineses. In this essay, I will examine the main problems and propose several measures to address them.

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Many governments think that economic progress is their most improtant goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

There is no denying the fact that economic regulations play a crucial role in improving the public's life. While it is a commonly held belief that many sectors might enhance the general utilities, there is also an argument that the trades alone can bring greater progress. This essay will analyse this topic from both points of view, followed by my own opinion.

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Some people believe that governments should invest more in public transportation, while others think that improving roads and highways is more important. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

A large proportion of society claims that the governments should spend more on public transportation rather than improving roads and highways. From my perspective, public transportation is more vital because most people do not use it due to the low-quality of buses and motorways, and they prefer to use their private cars. Devoting more money to this matter is a game changer for every country.

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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

It is clear that living in a foreign country has its own benefits and drawbacks to consider. The social issues of living abroad area topic to discuss in many countries. I strongly agree with the idea that living in a different country has its own issues.

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