IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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More people are now behaving more violently in society than before. Can this behaviour be prevented? Discuss the causes and reasons for this trend. Provide examples to support your opinion.

Now a days, the percentage of individuals doing violent thing increased, when compared before and by educating people and government developing new law and order can prevent the violent behavior. I agree with the statement, crimes are increased compare to last two decades.

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As compared to the past, people nowadays are choosing to have fewer children than their parents and grandparents. Describe some of the problems that having fewer children can cause and suggest at least one possible solution.

Couples these days prefer having fewer kids in comparison to previous generations, where average children was statistically higher. This essay will examine the main consequences of having fewer children and present potential solutions.

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Many people think that handwriting is less important nowadays because of modern technology. To what extent do you agree or disagree?"

Many people think that handwriting is less essential because for the modern technology. Unfortunately, I disagree with this statement. I believe that handwriting is important even today in an era of technology. There are many arguments surround my opinion.

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Experts say older people were happier and healthier in the past because they did more excercise and spend more time with their family and friends whereas now many suffer loneliness and health problems.What are the causes o this and what are some solutions

Elderly individuals were more satisfied and healthier in previous decades because they participated in more exercises and have more time with their families and colleagues, according to various experts. Whereas these days many people face challenges with isolation and health issues. This essay will examine the primary reasons for this problem and suggest potential solutions.

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some people believe governments should spend money on building train and subway lines to reduce traffic congestion. Others think that building more and wider roads are the better way to reduce traffic congestion. discussion both views and give your opinion.

. It is indubitable that traffic congestion is a growing concern in many parts of the world. In order to mitigate this problem, some individuals suggest that motorways should be made, but others think that train and subways line should be made. This essay intends to analyze both opinion and i believe that both methods have power to reduce traffic congestion.

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These days consumer are faced with an increasing amount of advertising from various companies. To what extend do you thunk consumers are influenced by advertising? What measures should be taken to protect them?

Consumers receive excessive amounts of advertisements from a variety of diverse enterprises. This essay will discuss how far advertisements influence them and potential actions that should be taken to protect them.

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Some people think it is harmful for people to watch advertisements, others think it improves our lives. Discuss both views and give your own.

Most of the individuals argue that seeing advertisements was risky and others say it might improve day to day life. I partly agree with the second statement because, they're both positives and negatives by watching ads, and advantages are more helpful.

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In many countries, children are spending more time playing video games than playing outside.Question 1: What are the causes of this trend?Question 2: What effects does this have on their development?

Nowadays, Kids like to engage more in Indoor games rather than Outdoor Sports.This essay will examine the reasons of this change and its consequences on their growth.

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Many people believe that all zoos should be closed, while others feel that zoos have a positive impact. Discuss both views and give your opinion

Most of the individuals argue, that all the zoos must be close and others believe that zoos has a adavantages than disavantages. In opinion, zoos has a always positive impact on soceity.

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It is thought by some that it is better to live in a city while others believe that life is better in the country side. Discuss both sides and give your opinion

Most of the individuals believe that urban life is good to live and others aruge that rural area is better place to live. I personally think country side living has some disadavantages than cities, eventhrough villages is good place to live.

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In many countries around the world young people decide to leave their parent's home once they finish school. They start living on their own or sharing a home with friends. Do you agree or disagree with this approach. Give your opinion.

Quite often young adults after finishing their studies decide to move out. This is often helped by the fact that they can split the rent with a roommate. I believe that this is a good approach as to figuring out life on your own, living independently often helps people shape into their true selves. This is supported by the fact that living without support often helps in developing a good economic sense when it comes to spending, and also helps with managing tasks.

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In many countries, the government prioritises economic growth above all other concerns. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this.

In many nations, governments place a primary emphasis on driving economic development. The main advantages of this are its improvment on the infrastructure and the creation of nomurous job approtonities. However, it also carries drawbacks, including enviromental degradation and the exploitation of labor rights.

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Many peole think that it is important to go to university while others prefer to start work without getting a universty education. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Education plays an utmost important role in a human’s life. It is often debated whether it is vital for people to go the university whereas some choose to work but not getting university education. This essay will discuss both sides of the argument and provide a reasoned conclusion.

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In many countries, a small number of people earn extremely high salaries. Some people believe that this is good for the country, but others think that governments should not allow salaries above a certain level. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Due to most countries adapting a capitalistic ideology, we have seen an rise in people making an incredible sum of money. This in return gets quite a few different opinions, on whether it's positive or negative for people to achieve such high salaries. On one hand, people argue that this helps countries to develop economically, but on the other hand, we have those who feel that this is unfair, and plead with the governments to put a limit on how much one can earn. Overall, it's quite hard to decide which side is right, but I think we should praise creative people and let them be awarded for their ingenuity instead of punishing them and limiting their monetary gain, so that the rest of us can earn as much as them.

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Nowadays the use of online books is on the rise and conventional books is on decline. Do you agree or disagree

Children nowadays have adapted to the use of the internet specifically in order to consume media. Moreover, they use it to find any type of information that they may require such as literature. Due to the uprise of online books in recent years i wholeheartedly agree that they are replacing traditional books as the primary medium to reading literature. Due to this fact i think the benefits heavily outweigh the negatives such as, the ease to access said information and also the low prices to do so.

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Some people say that experiences a child has before starting schools have the most influence on their future life. Others say that experience as teenagers, especially at school, are more influential. Discuss both views a

There is no doubt that the experiences which individuals have, no matter if they are good or bad, have an influence on their future lives. Although some people believe that teenagers may suffer from these experiences more than toddlers because they seek validation at this age, I agree with the other view that children are more influenced by negative experiences because they are still in their initial stage of building their characters.

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Some people think competitive sport is important for a child's education. Others think it has negative effects on children. Discuss both views and give your opinion

Many individuals believe that game is crucial for a child's education, when it becomes competitive. While others public oppose this idea, they think, it has bad effects on children. I agree with the first view and think that, competitive sports develop good decision making quality among infants through a tough situation.

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Nowadays, technology is being widely spread. In the following years, technology will totally replace the teacher role in the classroom. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

In recent years, technology has become increasingly important part of our modern lives. Especially, in the education domain and classrooms. I strongly disagree that the robotic instructor can replace the human teacher. In this essay, I will support my perspective with two real facts. Teachers can offer role models to their pupils , as well as provide students with motivation and discipline.

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The percentage of overweight children in western society has increased by almost 20% in the last ten years. Discuss the causes and effects of this disturbing trend and offer a solution.

It is an undeniable fact that western countries constitute more than 20% of overweight children over the last 10 years. This essay will discuss the main reasons for this trend and examine the possible effects of the problem.

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Many criminals commit further crimes as soon as they released from prison. What do you think are the causes of this? What possible solutions can you suggest?

Many criminals commit further crimes as soon as they are released from prison. What do you think are the causes of this? What effects will this have on society?

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