IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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A lot of people who wanted to become professional athletes gave up this idea because of the fear of failure and parents’ pressure. Do you think that parents should support their children who want to do a career in sports?

While some parents remain worried about the risks and instability of a sports career, others believe that children should be fully supported in pursuing their athletic passions. In my opinion, families should strongly support their children who aspire to become professional athletes, while simultaneously ensuring they maintain a balanced focus on their education for future security.

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Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar which cause many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to enourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

It is observed nowadays, that there is a rise in the production of manufactured food and drink. This phenomenom has lead to the over consumption of this. However, it is been argued that it should more expensive so that people should not consume much, which I personally agree with this logic.

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Traditional medicines, such as herbal remedies and acupuncture, are very popular in some countries. Those who practice traditional medicines claim that it is better than modern medicine in maintaining and improving health. Do you agree or disagree with this viewpoint?

In the past, people were treated basically with traditional medecines such as herbs and acupunture in several nations. However, many individuals think the ancient treatment is better, while others consider the modern one is more efficient. I personally agree the the modern treatment is much better than the former although, we should not neglet the previous method.

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The student who study from the school to university get benefit less and contribute less too, than those of student who go to travel or job and get skills and experience before going high. Do you agree or disagree?

It is strongly debated that many students who study from school to the university benefit and contribute less than those who prefer to go on trips or perform a job and acquire experience. I thing both are valuable ,but I strongly believe those that goes on tours and have greater opportunities and support in the society.

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Some people say that children given pocket money every week will have lesser money problems when they become adults. Do you agree or disagree

Children who get a weekly allowance from their parents are less likely to have financial problems in the future. I largely support this view because of the potential benefits it provides.

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Some people say that there is too much harmful content on the internet. They say the only way to make the internet safe is for the government to censor the content of websites. To what extent do you think the government should control what information is available on the internet?

Nowadys there are many uses for the internet and many websites, it can be helpful or harmful which depends on the way of using the internet.

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All university undergraduate courses should include a period of time spent studying abroad or doing a work placement. Do you think the advantages of this would outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Every undergraduate university courses should include a period of time spent studying overseas or undergo a work placemment. The advantages of this approach helps improved skills and experiences. Hence, the disadvantages would be the cost and time taken to complete a certain course.

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Some people say that children given pocket money every week will have lesser money problems when they become adults. Do you agree or disagree?

Children who get an allowance from their parents, are likely less to have a financial problems in the future. I largely support this view because of potential benefits it provides.

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Experts say that if older people spend their time with others and exercise daily, they will be healthier and happier. However, many elderly people do not exercise and spend time alone. What are the reasons for this? How can this be resolved?

Specialists claim that the elderly who spend time with other people and work out regularly tend to be healthier and be more satisfied with their lives, while many of them choose to have no exercise and to be alone. This essay will explore the contradiction and suggest some actions can be taken to resolve this disturbing problem.

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The working week should be shorter and workers should have a longer weekend. Do you agree or disagree?

In recent years, working time has become an increasingly important issue. Some people believe that people need more holidays weekly, while others argue that current systems are enough. I fully agree that giving people less time for work offers several benefits, such as reducing burnout and having more time to develop themself.

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Some people argue that primary schools focus too much on formal learning. To what extent do you agree with this opinion? How important do you think it is for children to play as well as learn in the primary school classroom? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

A certain amount of individuals may argue that primary schools focus too much on formal learning. Hence I agree with this statement. Playing makes the childrens feel more excited to learn and it also helps children to be more engaging with people and new knowledge.

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Obesity is a serious problem in many countries, especially in reach countries. Discuss ways to solve the problem . Provide specific reason and examples to support your answer.

A hot issue of modern societies is about obesity, especially in rich countries. How to solve the problem is an important question for society.To this issue, it is advisable to analyse reasons and solutions of the trend. I will discuss reasons and solutions of the direction in this essay.

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Training 65-year-olds to use computers would be a good use of government money. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The government's finances are of great importance for a country, it must be utilised on fruitful resources. I strongly disagree with this statement that teaching IT skills to senior citizens would be a good use of money. There are many other better options where a ministry can spend and will have favourable consequences.

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Without capital punishment (the death penalty) our lives are less secure and crimes of violence increase. Capital punishment is essential to control violence in society. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

The rise of crime has sparked a considerable discussion in recent years. There is an ongoing debate about whether the death penalty should be given to violent criminals. In which, i completely disagree with this view because there is a better option , such as life imprisonment and providing extra petrol to protect the communities.

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Prevention is better than cure. Do you agree or disagree that out of the country’s health budget, a large proportion should be diverted from treatment to spending on health and education and preventive measures?

Nowadays, we clearly experience an increase in illness rate, which consequently increase number of people in health facilities. However, this can be prevented by investing funds in prevention methods than in cure. In my view, I personally agree that much budget should be spent on health, education and health.

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Many people believe that family members are very important in life while others say friends are important. Do you agree or disagree with this statement

Nowadays it is been argued about the ideology that our close relatives are mostly very beneficial to our life but we can also see people are convince that their companions are quite better. I personally agree with the statement that the family brings more than our acquitances.

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Some people think that multinational companies have a negative effect on the local economy and environment of a developing country. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some population argue that international group negatively impact the local economy and ecology of developing nations. I partly agree about their negative influence towards the environment since they often pollute nature to maximise production. Nevertheless, they contribute to an economic boost by providing jobs for local folk and paying taxes to the government.

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Some people believe university education should be free for everyone. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is often argued that University education should be free for everyone.Although people have different views about this issue, I strongly agree with this idea because education everyone in university can provide students with better opportunities in life and Education can help people become more independent.

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Global warming has become one of the most serious issues in the world. What are the reasons for this? What can be done to solve this problem.

Nowadays, global warming has been one of the biggest problem world wide. Overall, I contend that global warming is being caused mainly due to problems such as burning fossil fuels and deforestation.

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Learning to manage money is one of the key aspects of adult life. How in your view can individuals best learn to manage their money? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowl experience.

Financial management has been very important in adult life, and it is necessary to address valuable approaches. While there are many methods to manage individuals' savings, I shall discuss two that I agree are the most valuable. In this case, it is about knowing personal wants and needs and also making a habit of always reviewing a good that individuals plan to buy.

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