IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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some people think that the government is wasting money on the arts and that this money could be better spent eslewhere. To what extent do you agree with this view?

Historically arts take forward the history, traditions and itdentity of the culture. With that, nations obtain recognision and value form others. It helps to attract visitors and their economy many ways. However some people argue that government should not invest on those arts and cultural events. But these funds must be used in essential sectors. I am not completely agree on this statement because investment on arts is not an unimportant thing.

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In some countries, more houses are needed to cope with rapidly increasing populations. Some people think that it is better to build houses in existing towns and cities, while others believe that it is better to build houses and develop new towns in rural areas. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In comtemporary society, many houses are essential to tackle the increasing number of populations. More and more individuals are debate whether it is efficient to build aditional houses in urban areas or construct extra houses in countryside and develop new urbanisation. In this essay I will explain both aspects, followed by my own opinion.

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There is an increasing trend around the world to have a small family rather tahan a large family. What are some of the advantages and disadvntages of having a small family rather than a large family?

The topic of whether having a small family is a good thing has sparked considerable debate in recent years. Some people believe that having a small family rather than a large family has several benefits that will affect people`s lives, while others believe that the drawbacks exceed the benefits. This essay will explore the advantages and disadvantages of having a small family rather than a large family.

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In some countries young people have a little leisure time and are under pressures to work hard in their studies. What do think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?

An over pressure in the new generations studies and less leisure time have become normal in some countries. This essay will discuss the principal causes and solutions that may help youngs go trough this situation.

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The best way to make roads safer is to make vehicle drivers take a driving test each year. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is often argued that the best way to improve road safety is to require drivers to retake driving tests annually. While this view has some merit, I partly agree with this opinion because tests can help, but they are not the best way on their own.

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Some believe that tackling environmental issues should be managed by a global organization instead of being handled individually by national governments. Do you agree or disagree with this belief?

It is said some people believe that solving environmental problems should be managed by a global organization, while others think that it should be a national government's responsibility. I agree more with the former that global organizations should be mainly responsible for these issues.

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Some people think that buildings such as flats and houses should be designed to last a long time. Others believe that it is more important to provide accommodation quickly and cheaply. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowladge or experiance

With the increse of population in the world accomatation is a basic need of all the human beings. To achive this authorities are develop flats and houses without having proper consideration of longivity and its designs. Even though, those buildings have provide temperary solution for accommodation issues that immidiately these solution were not sustain longer. I belive making temparary solutions cheaper and quickly not a problem solver for longer term.

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In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people traveling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

The context about whether cars, buses and trucks will be driverless and people traveling inside will be only passengers is more in advantages or not. I believe that driverless cars do better than harm as they show technological advancement and more facilities.

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Some young people are leaving the countryside to live in cities and town, leaving only old people in the countryside. What problems are caused by this issue? What can be done to solve this situation?

The context is about the trend of younger generations leaving the countryside to live in cities and towns, while old people live in the countryside. This essay will examine what are the possible problems caused by this issue, and what worldwide governments and citizens should do to tackle these problems.

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More and more work is being carried out by machines in all areas of our lives. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this development?

More and more work is being carried out by machines in all areas of our lives. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this development? Discuss with appropriate examples.

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some people believe that technology has made our lives easier, while others think it has made our lives more complicated Discuss both views and give your own opinion

Nowadays, Technology is widely spreading in the world. So everyone uses it, which makes lives easier for some of them, whereas a group of people argue that technology is harmful and damages their lives. From my perspective, using technology helps us a lot and makes our lives more convenient. However, we should use it wisely as much as we can.

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Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Languages are an important part of communication , which represents the civilisation of a particular country. Some people think that there should be a lower number of languages in the world because it will bring comfort to our lives , as many of the tongues are vanishing from the globe yearly. I firmly disagree with this point of view.

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Some people thing that the best way to reduce time spent in traveling to work is to replace gardens and park close to the city center with apartments and building for the commuters, other disagree. Discuss both the views and give your opinion

There is an arguement where one argue that gardens and parks should be replaced with city housing near city center to reduce the travelling time for communters, and other disagree. This essay will discuss both the views ,but i strongly disagree in the statement as it will affect mental and environmental health.

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It is important for children to learn the differences between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behavior to children?

The topic of debates highly noticed recently among many that is about teaching the importance of differance between good and bad thing at young age . some people believe that punishment is most significant way to do that ,however according to me, it should not be considered as the only path to teach them because it can put huge impact on their mental health and in some cases it can lead to the worse cases.

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Some people think that getting a degree from university is the best way to secure a good job. Others believe that employers value work experience more than a university degree. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

Some people argue that a certificate from colleges is the best way to secure a good position in workplaces. However, others think that workers' past experiences about work outweigh college degrees. Personally, populations have been increasing and also students with degrees from various colleges who need to get jobs. This can make some companies to look for experiences instead of their degrees. For this situation, experiences can be better in hiring than anything else.

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Some people say that rich countries should assist poor countries by sharing their wealth. Others say that it is the responsibility of the governments of poor countries to take care of their own people. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In twentiy first century word has economically divided in to two main sectors as rich and poor countries. Some of the rich countries have money historically. Another set of counties obtain that status by make stratagic decicions. However their is a discussion on table that rich counties should help poor counties for their development. I have mixed ideas on this matter. I dont believe that witout proper plan, any country can become rich, even though they got lot of funds form developed nations.

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Some people say that in the digital age, theatres and cinemas are no longer important as people can watch all the entertainment they want online. Others argue that theatres and cinemas are still important both economically and culturally. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Nowdays, many people can watch movies, shows and cartoons online being at home instead of going somewhere outside. Because of it, some people think that cinemas and theatres are no longer important. However, others believed that these places are still needed for our society and country economy. In my opinion, cinemas and theatres are still that important evef if online watching is more easy and comfortable.

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The growing number of overweight people is putting a strain on the healthcare system. Some believe that introducing more physical education lessons in schools is the best way to address this issue. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Is believed that adding more physical education lessons is the ideal method to solve the increase in the obesity rate. Personally, I completely agree with this perspective. In this essay, I will discuss the reasone sporting this belief, focusing on the importance of early intervention and make it at no cost.

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Many people today are leaving their small towns and villages and moving to the big city. Give reasons why people are doing this and give possible problems it can cause.

The world has changed significantly. Many people move from small town to big cities. And it's widely acknowledged that this topic plays a paramount role in modern society. This essay will cover both reasons and problems can result in.

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Some university students want to learn about other subjects in addition totheir main subjects. Others believe it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for a qualification.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

With the vast availabilty of knowladge lot of university students engage with differnet subject other than their main subjects. Some people are argue that student must forcus only their main subjects; that helps them to be expert on their sectors. But another group of people raised different openions than that; learning about differant subjects will be benifit them later by appling those skills into differant sectors. I personally belive with the changes of requirments of current job industries learning a additional subject will be benifits them strongly in there careers.

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