IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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In the future all cars, busses, and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

It is widely believed that many vehicles, such as cars, buses, and trucks will be driverless in the future and people will be only passengers inside these vehicles. Although people claim that reduce costs to paid for drivers, I contend that the disadvantages completely outweigh the advantages because driverless's system errors can cause danger to passengers' life.

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The internet has made possible for everybody to read anything online for free. This will make it unnecessary to pay for printed materials such as books or newspapers in the future. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

The internet has made every aspect of our life much easier. Nowadays, any digital materials, such as eBooks, news, and magazines are accessible through the internet without the need to pay for the physical one. I firmly agree that due to the easy reach to online resources, everyone will be able to find their suitable topics, and the replacement of physical materials is considered to be beneficial for the environment.

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Many people today think that homework is still an important part of school while others think that it is becoming outdated. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

In this modern era, it is undeniable that education plays an imperative role in the humans’ development. Some individuals believe that school homework is always vital for students, whereas others believe that this trend is old in schools. In this essay, I will discuss the important role play by school homework in the student’s development and my position is argued with an explanation.

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Now days more and more people buy and use their own cars . Do you think the advantage of this trend for individual outweigh its disadvantages for the environment ??

An increasing numer of people drive their personal cars more than use the transportation, waking, or cycling. Because it is convenient, reducing time, and distance for traveling. According to these reason, they will not think about affect to our environmental which will be discuss in this essay.

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Many aspects of the way people dress today are influenced by global fashion trends. How has global fashion become such a strong influence on people's lives? Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

In this modern era, the wave of international fashion trends have hugely influenced youths and adults. In this essay, we will discuss about how this trend has become significant part of individual's lives and I personally think this has a negative impact in our mental well-being.

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As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowsaday, the numer of people use technologies for suppor thier life in every way. And, its quite of effecient result, that the reason why they rely on it. I firmly agree regarding the capacity of human thining will decline by using GPS, smartphone, and AI-powered tool, which will be discuss in this essay.

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Today, people in many countries can live and work anywhere they choose, because of improved communication technology and transport. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your on knowledge or experience

There is no denying the fact that technology enables people to connect with others in different places , such as the internet. It is a commonly held belief that people in many countries can live and work in any country because of improved communication technology and transport. I believe that the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages.

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Now days more and more people buy and use their own cars . Do you think the advantage of this trend for individual outweigh its disadvantages for the environment ??

It has been growing discussion about people who buy and ues their own cars and the benefits for people leads to disadvantages for the environment. While this trend has both negative and positive aspects and I believe that the advantages far outweigh the disadvantages and this essay will explain why.

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Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organisation. Why might this be the case? What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed?

Nowaday, more and more people adapt tp be self- employed instead of working for a company and a organisation. This essay will discuss the reasons for this trend and the drawback of being self-employed.

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As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is often argure that numerous people getting depend on technologies, which result to weaken their thinking abilities. I agree this view and believe that too much use of digital tools may allow many students worse results.

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Some people think that drug addicts should be treated like criminals and sent to jail, while others believe that they should be treated like patients and sent hospital. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

many people feel that folk who rely on pills must sent to jail as a criminal, whilist other argue that they should treat as patient and sent to medical to come overt from this kind of addiction .this essay think that addicts should treat as patient and well madication.

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Due to the development and rapid expansion of supermarkets, many small local businesses are unable to compete. Some people think that the closure of local businesses will bring about the death of local communities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people believe that rapid expasion of supermarkets, many small local businesses brings the death to local communities. I strongly believe that it can lead to lack of community with local people and it distract reigion economy for the local inhabitants.

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Some individuals believe that companies should be legally required to provide employees with a four-day work week. Why is this being suggested? Do you think this would be a good idea for the global economy?

In contemporary society some people think that corporations should be legally required to contribute workers with a four-day work week. It is being offered mainly because of increasing effectiveness of employees and I believe that it would be also a fundamental decision for developing global economy.

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Some people think that competition at work, at school and in daily life is a good thing. Others believe that we should try to cooperate more, rather than competing against each other. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some people say that competition at workplace, at school and in daily life is a good thing, while others think that we should try to work together, rather than competing each other. I believe that competing with others gives more opportunity to get encouragement or high achievements in every fields of life.

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Some people think that high school students should be taught how to use money as it is an important life skill. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

It is argued that as part of upbringing kids it is necessary to teach them critical skill on how to spend the money. I believe it is a necessary skill because it helps them understand the value of money and start saving since their schooling.

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Some say that people living in high-rise apartments are lonely and unhappy, while others say that it’s advantageous to stay in high-rise apartments. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Nowadays, some say that people living in high-rise apartments are lonely and unhappy. however, others say that it's very fasinating to live in high-rise apartment. Personally, both sides of the issue are right from my perspective. the reasons of both ways are below.

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Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

There is a common belief that the loss of particular species like plants and animals is a global problem as a consequence of environmental issues, while others think that there are more important environmental problems. Although creatures exitinction is one reason, I belive that there are more cause of envrionmental challenge such as climate change, pollution and global warming.

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Some people believe that the government is wasting money on the arts and that this money should be invested better in other areas. To what extent do you agree with this view?

It is the opinion of some people that government is wasting funds on arts, when it could be redirected to other sectors. This is a mentality I wholeheartedly disagree with and I shall explain further in the following paragraphs.

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Nowadays, some people claim that public museums and art galleries will not be needed because people can see historical objects and works of art by using a computer. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Some people believe that, because of developing technology art galleries and museums will not be on demand like in the past. I am partially agree with that opinion because some people would rather real interaction than digital interaction with art and historical pieces.

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Some university students want to learn about other subjects in addition to their main subjects. Others believe it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for a qualification. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

There is no denying tha fact that choosing an academic major is the most significant part of your college experience. Many students are wanting to study other subjects beside their main spealization, While other argued that it it more crucial to focus only on studying for thier main field to get qualification. I believe that exbanding you knowledge in today day and age will always be benefecial.

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