IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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Some scientist thinks that there are intelligent life forms on other planets and message should be sent to contact them. Other scientists think it is bad idea and would be dangerous. Discuss both views and give your opinion

Some scientists believe that there are intelligent life forms out of our earth and they can send massages to them. While others from the same field say that it is not good idea and also can be dangerous. I will discuss both views in balance and my personal view is in a conclusion at the end. But, personally, regardless of the benefits of discovering new life forms can be dangerous on our astronomers's lives.

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Some people think that hosting an international sports event is good for the country, while some people think it is bad. Discuss both views and state your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Some people argue that hosting international sports ceremonies is beneficial for country economic growth and for global reputation, while others believe that there are some serious challenges in doing so. I am of the view that it is good for tourism, cultural values and for hospitality industries.

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The rise of remote work has changed the way businesses operate. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this shift?

It is widely recognised that many businesses remoted their work place from offices to online platforms. This issue has generated significant discussion regarding the privileges and drawbacks of replacing their work place from buildings to digital platforms. This essay will examine both aspects in detail to provide an objective analysis of the situation.

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Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree? What other measures do you think might be effective?

Some argue that the best strategy to overcome the traffic congestion and pollution problems is to increase the petrol prices. I completley disgaree this view because this way may increase socioeconomic disparity, and I believe other measures, including cheaper public transport facilites and to reduce the number of unprofessional drivers, are the effective strategies.

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Some people think that technology has made people's lives easier, while others believe it has made life more complicated. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

The impact of technology on modern life is a widely debated topic. While some argue that modern innovations make daily life more complex, others believe they bring immense convenience. In my opinion, despite causing occasional stress, technology has ultimately made life easier.

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Many people believe that international tourism has negative implications on their countries. What is the reason for it? What can be done to change the negative attitude towards international tourism?

It is argeud that many people believe that international tourisim has negative emplications on their countries becouse of some international tourists that dont respect others ccultures ,especially when they are on other country places . However there are many international tourists that do repect others place and act by their manners whrever they'll be .

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In many countries, primary and secondary schools close for two months or more in the summer holidays. What is the value of long school holidays? What are the arguments in favour of shorter school holidays?

Schools across different countries are being closed for two or more months during the summer holidays. While a longer break allows children to rest enough from the previous academic year and engage in other activities, such as sports. A shorter break helps to stay on track and forget less material.

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Some people believe that to achieve success, people need to be hardworking and determined, while others think other factors like money and personal appearance play a more important role. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience

Many people think that to achieve success in life, individuals need to be hardworking and determined regarding their goals. However, others argue that other factors such as, financial situation and physical appearance play an important role.

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In the past, when students did a university degree, they tended to study in their own country. Nowadays, they have more opportunity to study abroad. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this development?

In this modern age, studying abroad is more accessible than before. The ability to pick any University and choose the best in certain fields, unlike before where their options are limited to their own country. And it’s a true privilege we have today. But the question remains, is it always better to study abroad.

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Some people feel that the primary function of a university should be to prepare students for the working world. Others argue that the purpose of a university education is to provide knowledge for knowledge’s sake. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

There has been an ongoing debate about University education. Some argue that university courses are for getting a future employment, while others believe that its for rising awareness only.

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It is often argued that every town and city should provide large public outdoor areas such as parks and squares. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There is no denying the fact that our cities need outdoor places. While it is a commonly held belief that large public outdoor areas should be provided by every town and city. There is also an argument that opposes it.

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It is importnat for childern to learn difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? What sort of punishment should parets and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behaviour to childern?

Home is first shool for childern because this is where learning begins. Awareness of good and bad must be provided to childernfrom early ages of 2-5 etc. I firmly agree with the punishing infants for their bad deeds.

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some people think that museums should be enjoulyable places to entertain people while others believe that the purpose of museum is to educate people . discuss both views and give your opinion

Some people argue that museums should be allocated for people who are looking for fun. Others, however, believe that museums are made to educate people. I partially agree because museums should be allocated for education with an enjoyable approach at the same time.

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Some people argue that primary schools focus too much on formal learning. To what extent do you agree with this opinion? How important do you think it is for children to play as well as learn in the primary school classroom? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Many individuals complain that primary schools focous too much on formal learning. While, play was very crucial the students as well to enhance their coginitive skills, mental development and for a good health. I totally agree with this statement and i give valid point in the upcoming paragraphs.

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(SOFIA) With the rise of the internet more and more people are getting their news from social media platforms. Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?

Twenty-first century has witnessed substantial changes in people's lifestyle and one of them is obtaining news from the internet.As with the prevalence in the technology ,the public wants to find easy way to get know about their surroundings by using of online media.As per me ,it is mixed blessing ,even though it has some merits,the demerits certainly overshadow them.

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Some people think that computers are more of a hindrance than a help in today's society. Others believe that they are such indispensable tools that they would not be able to live or work without them. Discuss both opinions and give your opinion.

Nowadays, technology is making our life more easier which is great example is computers. However, some people believe that computers are more of a distraction than a help in our lifes. Some of us believe that they are such essential tools that they would not be irreplaceable. Personally, I completely agree that computers are such a vital tools in our daily life. This essay will discuss both views.

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"Some people think that young adults should leave their parents' home as soon as they finish school to live independently, while others believe they should continue living with their family until they are older. Discuss both views and give your opinion."

Many individuals say that young people should be leaving their families once they become adults to build their life from the beginning, however, others say that they should not. People debate between if parents should allow their teenagers to leave them and travel abroad or even inside the country to achieve their goals and reach to the best version of themselves, while others argue that adults better be with their families until they turn into the age of 20, so they can be fully prepared once they decide to travel abroad to make achievements.

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Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara desert or the Antarctic. What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places?

Today, more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara Desert or the Antarctic. What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places?

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Cars have become a convenient and economical form of transport and as a result, the use of cars has increased dramatically during the last century. Discuss the problems this increase has created, and offer some practical solutions.

In an era defined by new, advanced technologies and the widespread use of a private vehicle, it has become increasingly common for individuals to use their own cars in recent years, especially in urban areas. While some ongoing issues can be attributed to this trend, I believe that government can be taken some far more efficient solutions to tackle this problem.

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Is it better to work in a team or work alone? Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Nowadays, because of the complexity of life a new issue has arisen: is it better to work in a team or work alone? I believe that working in a team is better than work alone because the mentions depend on ability, performance, and intelligence.

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