IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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Some school leavers travel or work for a period of time instead going directly to university. What are the advantages and disadvantages.

Some students after finishing school they travel or work for some time instead of going directly to university. Although it will affect their memory about what they have learned in schools, they will have enough time to save money to study aborad or they will improve their communication skills while travelling.

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Some people believe that technological advancements have made our lives more convenient, while others argue that these developments have led to disconnection and isolation in society. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some people hold an idea that in recent years, technology has enhanced the quality of people’s lives in every fields such as communication. Others argue that poor relationship between people in a society is a consequence of development in technology. I believe that although it might have a negative influence on the bond between people, its benefits over weights its drawbacks.

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Some people feel that the design of newly constructed buildings in big cities should be controlled by government. others believe those who financed the construction of a building should be free to design it as they fit. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some people believe that all the designs of newly constructed buildings in big cities should be under controlled by the government while others argue thatshould be a decision of the finance party of their own . This essay will discuss both views and my opinion as well.

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In many societies, there is a growing emphasis on sustainable living and reducing environmental impact. What are the challenges of adopting a sustainable lifestyle? What practical actions can individuals take to contribute to sustainability?

In recent years, sustainable living is required to reduce detrimental effects to our environment due to globalisation and a rapid economic growth. This essay will discuss the challenges for sustainable living and the viable solution to mitigate the impact of this issue.

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Billions of dollars are being wasted on space research. The money used could be better if used to improving condition on people on earth. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Technological advancements in the world are turning people’s attention to research on. One of the areas which is receiving a lot of attention and curiosity is the study of the universe. Nowadays a lot of money has been spent on space research and while some support the idea of exploring space and consequently using billions of dollars in the study, others believe that the money can be used to improve people’s living conditions on earth. In this essay, I will explain the reasons why I disagree with the investments in spatial studies.

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It is often said that it is not necessary to have a tertiary education to become a successful businessman. To what extent to you agree or disaree with this statement?

In today's era, some people believe that tertiary education is not mandatory for a person to have a successful business. As education is essential part of individual life , I partially agree that it doesn't play vital role in shaping any type of career.

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Some people feel that the government should pay the costs of running universities so that a university education will be free for anyone who wants it. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

In the contemporary world, some believe that it is state's responsibility to provide funds for higher education. Although free schooling imparts opportunities to every person equally and reduces the poverty rate, it can also drop the degree's value and burden on the government. I partially agree with the mentioned statement , and this essay will discuss both points.

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Some people feel that it is always wrong to keep animals in captivity, for instance in zoos. Other people say that there are benefits for the animals and for humans. Discuss both sides of this debate, and give your personal view. You should give reasons for your answer, and include ideas and examples from your own knowledge and experience.

There is an ongoing debate whether wild animal should be perserved in zoo or not. It is argued by some individuals that keeping animals in the captivity is unethical. Others, however, believe that it can be beneficial for both animals as well as human. Nevertheless, in my opinion, due to the advantages of learning about different species by students, and protecting the endangered species, supporting the animals conservation will be the most appropriate choice.

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More and more business as well as individuals are choosing to communicate either professionally or socially using technology rather than being face-to-face. What are the advantages and disadvantages to this.

It is becoming more preferable by individuals and businesses to communicate either professionally or socially via technology instead of traditional face-to-face conversations. This essay will first suggest that reduced time spendings is the primary benefit of this tendency, while social degradation that can be caused by that excessive use of online communication is the main drawback.

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Many people feel it is a waste of money to try to save endangered animal species, for example the tiger and the blue whale. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

It is argued by many that funding institutions that are working on preserving the life of endangered species is financialy inresponsable. I agree with this opinion because this funds could be used for solving more preasing issues, such as children health in low-income nations. Also, I belive that there is a natural selection procces in which some animals will not survive in a changing enveronment.

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Having money and less free time is better than earning less money and having more free time. Discuss both views and state your opinion. (Essay by Keni)

In today's modern world, the debate among having money but less free time is greater than earning less money and having more free time is increasing significant. Ther are some people argue that the former has more benefits, while others believe that having more free time is more important. In this essay, I will discuss both views and explain why I believe that having more free time but having less salary is more crucial.

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human activity has had a negative impact on plants and animals around the world. some people think that this cannot be changed, while others believe actions can be taken to bring about a change. discuss both views and give your opinion.

In the contemporary era, plants and animals are increasingly threatened by human activities. Consequently, there is a debate regarding whether this trend is irreversible or some measures can reverse it. This essay will discuss both viewpoints and present my opinion.

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Some high school students work part-time in addition to going to school. What are the advantages and disadvantages of high school students having part-time jobs? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.

The financial freedom of working to earn your own money as a youngster, is a necessity in modern times. However, there may be a few drawbacks to this ideology that may detter the student's potential academically. I will discuss on these views in this essay.

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In Britain, when someone gets old they often go to live in a home with other old people where there are nurses to look after them. Sometimes the government has to pay for this care. Who do you think should pay for this care, the government or the family? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

It is very common for many elders to move to an old age home where they can be assisted by nurses and professional medical staff. These establishments, However, are not free and someone must pay for them. In many cases, the bill is paid by the family. other times, it is the government who pays for the care. Since, not all the seniors can not pay for this service, I firmly believe that it is the good idea for authorities to cover when they can.

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Some people argue that capital punishment is good for a country. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In recent times, the capital punishment has been a matter of concern in the justice system of some countries. Some people are of the opinion that this sentence is paramount and would be benefitial to the country's development. I am in support of this notion and I will discuss concisely in this essay.

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In many countries today young people are forced to get a job which they are not suited to or passionate about. What do you think may be the reasons for this? What problems might this cause?

In today's world, youths work in industries they are not interested about or qualified to work in . This is because of several reasons such as shortage of jobs and poverty. The problem with this is that it causes negative attitude towards the job.

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Immigration has a major impact on the society. What are the main reasons of immigration? To what consequences can it lead?

Immigratio has a significant impact on the society. Many advantages and disadvantages about immigration on the society. I want to discuss what is the main reason of immigration and what consequences can it lead.

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In many countries women and men are working full time. It is therefore, logical for women and men to share household works. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Men and women are both hired in permanent jobs in many nations. I partly agree that it makes sense for both genders to share domestic roles. Such a move can significantly lower their fatigue levels, but we should also consider their unequal abilities in performing these tasks.

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Environmental problems are too big for individual countries or individual people to address. In other words,we have reached the stage where the only way to protect the environment is at an international level. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In this modern era, urbanization has intensified the growth of environmental pollution. Some people opine that environmental issues are difficult to be addressed from a country level, and need the international support. I firmly disagree with this opinion and will explore reasons in this essay.

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Nowadays more and more tasks at home and at work are being performed by robots. Why do you think it’s happening? Is it a negative or positive development?

Currently, numerous houseworks and the tasks in the workplace are being performed by robots. It is happening because of the trend of the technologies innovation that make the people's working patterns change. In my opinion, the development for the trend is positive for the people.

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