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In some countries, fast food restaurants and supermarkets give money to school to promote their products. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

In some countries, fast food restaurants and supermarkets provide financial support to schools in exchange for promoting their products. While this practice may bring certain benefits, I believe it is mainly a negative development.

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Women can do everything that men can and they even do it better. They also can do many things that men cannot. But it is a fact that their work is not appreciated as much as men’s, although they have to sacrifice a lot for their family and career… It is said: “A woman’s place is in the home.” What do you think?

For many centuries, women are regarded as a main workforce when it comes to household routines. Throughout the world, many example can be found that women are more likely to engage in household work while men are working outside of their homes. In this modern world, we can see this barrier eruding, and I strongly suppose this tendency should be acceralated.

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More and more parents are allowing their children to play on computers and tablets as they think that children should learn technology skills. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.

In today's world, computers and tablets have become the most essential equipment amongst children.Parents have allowed their kids to use this technology because, they think that kids should be more in to technology, is a huge advantage for their future development. Similarly , there are advantages and disadvantages. This essay is going to unfold the both impact.

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Learning English at school is often seen as more important than learning local languages. If these are not taught, many are at risk of dying out. In your opinion, is it important for everyone to learn English? Should we try to ensure the survival of local languages and, if so, how?

Some people believe that learning English at school is more important than learning local languages. Nevertheless if new generations don’t learn local languages, they might disappear in the future. In the essay we will discuss both opinions and find solutions for the survival of dialects.

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Learning English at school is often seen as more important than learning local languages. If these are not taught, many are at risk of dying out. In your opinion, is it important for everyone to learn English? Should we try to ensure the survival of local languages and, if so, how? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays we are living an historical moment that can be mentioned as “The Globalization Era”. The growing rate of international exchanges of people and items has led people of different countries to the acnowledged need of speaking the same language. For this reason, learning English at school has been becoming more and more important and in many place c in the world it’s going to substitute the native languages. In my opinion it’s of vital importance the study of English but it’s of vital importance that the single local languages survive and continue to be spoken.

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Some people believe that music should be taught in school, while others think that it is best to focus on science and computer. Do you agree or Disagree?

Since education has been formally established hundred years ago, the debate between if arts or science is more essential has never been prolonged. On one hand, art related subjects like music provides us a medium to facilitate character growth and holistic development. On the other hand, science and technology is literally the car that drives the human race foward, also improving improves our daily lifes. However, although focusing science and computer subjects certainly help our students to keep up with the footsteps of this everchanging generation. Music should also a vital subject for students to have enhanced brain developement, all round character growth , and it eventually even elevates our life quality as humans .

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Modern technology now allows rapid and uncontrolled access to information in many countries. This is danger to our societies. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

Technology plays a vital role in life and it make human being life convenient. There are many online reaources available to get information about any country at anwhere. But this out of control information access is dangerous for society. I will discuss both views in the upcoming paragraph.

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Some people believe that reading printed books is more valuable for learning than using digital resources, while others think online materials are more effective. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In the modern era, education is most important part of life. There are two resources available for reading, one is printed books and other is online materials. Some mobs think that read from printed books is more effective, but others oppose it. I will discuss both views and my perspective in the upcoming paragraphs.

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The only way to improve safety of our roads is to give much stricter punishments on driving offenses. To what extent do you agree with this idea? (REVANN)

Nowadays, it has been widely argued that the only approach to enhance road-safety is to apply harsh fines on driving offenses. From my perspective, I strongly disagree with this statement. In this essay, I will discuss the reasons that support my opinion.

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In some countries, university students live away from home and in another city while studying. Do you think the disadvantsges outweigh the advantages of living in another city?

Nowadays, students from several different countries prefer to move out from their family for better educational purposes. I'm personaly an immigrant living overseas away from home. And I strongly spport the idea of immigrating for better education. In my opinion the benefits are higher then disadvantages.

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Fresh water has always been a limited resource in some nations of the world. Today, however, growing global demand has turned this problem into a global one. What are the causes behind the increased demand and what steps can goverments and individuals take to address this problem?

Nowadays, providing fresh water for people or other kind of reasons like industries makes a lot of concerns for the government and society. Additionally, this problem has became global issue because of demand of water in world. In this essay, I will explain reasons behind this issue and how government can solve this problem properly.

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Childhood obesity is becoming a problem throughout the developed world. Because of this, some people think that adverts for fast food, sweets and sugary snacks should not be allowed in schools and colleges. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In recent years, it has been widely recognized that obesity among young people became a serious issue around the world. As a result, some people argue that advertising junk meals and high sugar food must be banned in educational facilities. In my perspective, I strongly agree with this statement. In this essay, I will discuss the reasons that support my opinion.

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Academic The most important function of music is that it helps people reduce stress. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

it is widely believed that stress can be minimized through listening to music and considered a very significant way of relieving stress, because it helps to calm the body and the mind. I partly agree that music can relieve stress, yet not the only way.

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The plans below show the site of a farm in 1950 and the same site today. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two maps illustrate the transformations of Beechwood Farm between 1950 and today.

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Some people suggest that international news should study as a subject in secondary school (High School). However,others say that it will be a waste of valuable school time. Discuss both views and give your opinion

Students study many subjects in the schools.No one can deny that studying these subjects are very necessary for them.Some people think that some subjects aren't important to study.This essay will examine why international news should be studied as a subject in high school and why we shouldn't put it as a subject.

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the average number of hours each day spent on holiday in Greece

The bar chart illustrates the average number of hours per day that tourists from four different countries spent on three types of leisure activities while on holiday in Greece. These activities include spending time at the beach, reading books, and visiting places.

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In the developed world, average life expectancy is increasing. What problems will this cause for individuals & society? Suggest some measures that could be taken to reduce the impact of ageing populations.

In many developed countries, average life expectancy is steadily increasing. Although this trend reflects on development in healthcare and living standards, there are possible challenges for both society and individuals. This essay will discuss some problems cause for society and give possible measures that can reduce the impacts of ageing populations.

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The percentage of overweight children in western societies has increased by almost 20% in the last ten years. Discuss the possible causes and effects of this disturbing trend and offer solution.

The rate of overweight children increased by around 20% in westren countries in previous 10 years.

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In many countries, paying for things using mobile phone (cellphone) apps is becoming increasingly common. Does this developement has more advantages or more disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.

In a modern era, usage of mobile phone is proliferating rapidly, due to advancement in technology. Nowadays, it has become a trend among common people. This development has some pros and cons. In my opinion, advantages of this trend overlooks the disadvantages.

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Nowadays, as a part of the educational process,students work at a company for a short period of time without pay .Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages ?

Recently students must do unpaid work at a company for a short period of time as a part of educational courses. In my opinion, the advantage of doing so is more than disadvantages.

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