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Some people believe that good teamwork is what makes companies successful . Others feel that it is more important to have a good leader . Discuss both views and give your opinion

Nowadays, there are ongoing dabate on workplace, while many people believe that communicating in a work with collegues is beneficial, others think that managing by skillful leader is one of the most essential way to achieve succes. In my point of view, collaborating with personnels is key factor to achieve goals.

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Big salary is much more important than job satisfaction

It is often argued that it is more advantages to choose a job with high salary wages even if it doesnot appeal to you all. I completely disagree with this opinion and think that job satisfaction is much more important than a handsome salary.

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In marriages today, some argue that it is the responsibility of both spouses to earn a living for the family. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, people believe that household expenditure should be shared by both parents equally as with modernisation and advancement in technology, the expenses are rising at an alarming rate. I strongly agree with this prespective of shared responsibility.

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In some countries university students live at home with their family while they study, whereas in other countries students attend university in another city?

There is no denying the fact that university period play a crucial role in our lives. While it is a commonly held belief that studying away from hometown might be beneficial for students careers, there is also an argument that opposis this idea. this essay will analyse this topic from both points of view and express my opinion.

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“Many university students live with families while others live away from home bcause their universities are in different places.” What are the advantages and disadvantages of both situations?

Universities are far away from students's houses very often situation among our generation.At the same time, learners can live with families during whole university life.

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Some Countries have implemented mandatory community programs for young people. In these programs, children aged 16 to 18 do charity work, help old people or work with animals. What are some advantages and disadvantages for this for young people?

In some countries, young people aged 16 to 18 undertake volunteer activities, suporting senior citizens, and look after abandoned animals. This have some benefits and drawbacks for young people.

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Some people think that it is more beneficial to take part in sports which are played in teams, like football, while other people think that taking part in individual sports, like tennis or swimming, is better. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Several individuals believe that the game played on group provide more advantage, while remaining individuals believe the game played by individuals is best. Although sports played in teams teach to be more supportive and accountable, individual games teach to be more skilled and independent.

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Childhood obesity is becoming a serious problem in many countries. What are the main causes and solutions of this?

In the contemporary world, many adolescents have become a serious concern in many different countries. This essay will discuss the main causes of these problems and suggest possible solutions to address them.

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Childhood obesity is becoming a serious problem in many different countries. What are the main causes and solution of this?

In the contemporary world, many adolescent have become a serious concern in many couuntries. This essay will discuss the main causes of these problems and possibles solutions to address it.

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Education is not a luxury, but a basic human right and as such should be free for everyone irrespective of personal wealth. Do you agree or disagree?

For a long time education was a privilege and was accessible for wealthy people. But now it is believed that education can not be treated in this way, and should be accepted as basic human right and must be free for everyone despite of personal wealth. I partially agree with this statement, because people value and perform better when they pay for it, but free education could help science to develop and open students potential.

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Government investment in the arts, such as music and theatre, is a waste of money. Governments must invest this money in public services instead. Do you agree or disagree?

It is believed that government have to invest money in public services instead of in arts, such as music and theatre. I agree with this statement, because public services supply citizens needs such as free healthcare and protection of the country.

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Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In today's world, there are development and underdevelopment countries. Of course, in the first world country students can get an eduction and training to be doctors and engineers, therefore a lot of people go to the industralized countries for high level of universities. Should they stay in the country where they trained, or should they be free to work elsewhere?

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Governments should increase taxes on unhealthy food. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, people keep saying that the government should increase taxes on unhealthy food for several reasons .

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Sciencetists predict in the near future, cars will be driven by computers, not people. Why? Do you think it is a positive of negative development? Linh

Experts have forcast that in comming future,car will be driverless and fully operated through technology. It is because car invention has taken a great upgrade with time. This development carries both benefits such as; no driving licence required and cost effective, and drawback likewise; increases the number of road accident and create unemployment situation.

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Some employee wants to able to contact their employee all the time. Does this development have advantages or disadvantages?

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Today many children suffer from Obesity. This is a serious health issue. Give reasons for this problem and offer solutions to fix this problem.

Recently obesity become a major issue in the teenager generation. Children health is under serious danger. Lifestyle habits are the direct reason in this case. This essay will review the reasons behind this problem, as well as, the solutions that will help to get rid of its impact on their general health.

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The internet has changed the world in many ways Give the advantages and disadvantages of the internet

Due to technology, the world is a very different place then the past. The internet has arrived and has changed the world and how people live. This essay will examine both the advantages and disadvantages of the internet.

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Some people think high school graduates should travel or work for a period of time instead of going directly to study at university. Do the Advantages outweigh disadvantages?

High school are very important stage in the whole eduaction journey. It build solid foundation for the future.

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Robots and artificial intelligence are being developed to replace humans in the workplace. Why is this happening? Do you think this will have a positive or negative impact on soiety?

Intalligence Artificial and its diffrents forms are developing to take individuals work in work area.This case can happend because of owners of the companies are seeing AI more profitable than humas and I believe this replace will has a negative impact than its advantages, because only the learner s of AI will take advantage if it .

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Some people believe arts subjects such as literature and music have little importance in schools today. To what extent do you agree with this?

It is believed that arts subjects such as literature and music are not enough important in schools todat. I partially agree with this statement because it is time consuming for kids and distruct from subjects that are more valuable for their future exams and country, whereas state support is art subjects develops a well-rounded personality and creativity.

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