IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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Laws should not be rigid or fixed. Instead, they should be flexible enough to take account of various circumstances, times and places of the offence. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer.

It has been suggested that laws shoud be flexible not be rigid or fixed. The statement is based on the belief that the reason of crime are various, different times, situation, and places of offence will have different effects. From my perspective, I agree that opinio, laws shoud deside by various circumstanes, times and places of the offence should be flexible not be rigid or fixed.

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Some university students want to leran about other subjects in addition to their main subject.Other believe it is more important to give all their extra time and attention to studying for a qualification.Discuss both views and give your opinion.

People have different views regarding weather additinal subjects should include or not .While some learners believe to study optional subjects ,other argue that it is essentisl to maintain focus on main subjects which contribute to higher qualification.This essay will explan both prospective before I support the latter view.

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In a number of countries, some people think it’s necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. Others believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

It is a highly debatable topic in public that some countries spending their large chunks of financial on building new railway lines for high speeds train to commute between cities while, others argue that more money should spend on existing public transport . This essay will discuss both the perspectives along with my opinion. However, I agree with former viewpoint.

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In the future, it seems more difficult to live on Earth. Some people think more money should be spent on researching another planet to live on, such as Mars. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Some people believes that future on Earth is not easy. So governments should spend more money on finding another planet to live. I partially disagree with statement because there are some problem on Earth need immediate solution and we need information about other planets like Mars to invest more economy.

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These days Internet –based courses have become a popular alternative to University – based courses. Some students prefer this type of learning because they do not need to attend lectures. Others argue that it is important to study at university. Discuss both these views and give your opinion

Nowadays, both Internet-based courses are so famous and most people prefer learning from them rather than university-based courses. Because, students tend to learn from comfortable place in comparison to go somewhere and attend lectures. But, a lot of different arguments raise about which of them could be more useful than other. Personally, I have neutral opinions about each of them.

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Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development

These days, public debate going over on whether young generation spending a significant amount of every day on their smartphones. This assay will examine the main causes of this issue and discuss why this negative situation.

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Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

These days, public debate going over on whether young generation spending daily significant time on their smartphones. This assay will examine the main causes of this issue and discuss why this negative situation.

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Many people join distance - learning program (study materials,post, TV, Internet) and study at home, but, some people think that it cannot bring the same benefits as attending colleges or universities does. Do you agree or disagree?

Individuals argue that, online classes do not have the same results as physical classes. I partially agree that live courses are less successful than interract with a professor, while i strongly support that in person strategy are the best. In this essay, i am going to develop my point of view about the subject.

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Some people believe that money is one of the most important factors in a person's happiness. To what extent do you agree with this?

Money is commonly believed to be an essential reason for human happiness and well-being. I agree that purchasing expensive goods for your surrounding can make them happier. On the other hand, I also believe that material things can't help you find a lifelong love that is one of the clues to happiness.

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In many countries, a small number of people earn extremely high salaries. Some people believe that this is good for the country, but others think that governments should not allow salaries above a certain level. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In some nations, a few people are highly paid. Some people reckon that it is beneficial for the country, while others argue that higher authorities should restrict salaries upto a certain level. I agree with the former statement and will discuss both viewpoints in the upcoming paragraphs.

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In many countries, plastic bags are the main source of rubbish, causing pollution in oceans and on land; therefore, they should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

In this contemporary era , pollution has been a major concern . It is believed by worldwide that bags made od plastics are causing problems such as pollution in water bodies and land , thats why it should be removed permanently . I strongly agree with this statement which i will be discussing further .

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Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In the present age, whether professionals should be work in the place where their trained or not has sparked much debate. Some people assert that doctors and engineers need to work in country they applied training there, whereas others argue that they should have own choice where they want to work. Personally, I am in favour of the second view.

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Sometimes spouses have to live far away from each other. Maintaining a long distance relationship is sometimes difficult and straining. What do you think are the main reasons of long distance relationships? What can be done to help couples feel closer?

under the inluence of rapid changes of lifestyes and economic situation, people surviving under the society are required to scout for opprotunities individually. as many oversees working opprotunities have been discovered, partners are forced to move aboard in order to get better payed and treatment.

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Most countries have traditional celebrations that ocur annually. İn Your opininon, what benefits do these celebrations have for society? Support your opinion with reasons and examples from your own knowladge or experience.

2026 is the ear of AI, until now , still lots of countries from western and asian countries celebrate lots of festivals anually . Need less to say ,Cerebrating Chrismas in December become an unpensable part of lots of people. People continues to celebate the traditionals not only the heritage of the family and society but also because there are lots of benefits

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Some people think that mobile phone is harmful for children, while others disagree or agree. Discuss both view and give your opinion

Although the technology has been developing in the society ,sometimes it causes major problem among kids .Simuateously the people can not live without it .

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Some people believe that household duties should be shared equally between men and women. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is often argued that household duties should be shared by both men and women. This issue has sparked considerable debate, and I firmly agree with the opinion. As both men and women can feel tired after work, it is unfair for anyone person to do most of the cooking and cleaning. Moreover, sharing chores reduces stress and gives each partner more time to rest or pursue their personal interests. This essay will present well-supported arguments to justify my stance.

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n many countries today, both men and women need to work full time. Therefore, some people think men and women should share household task equally (e.g. cleaning and looking after children). To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is often argued that household duties should be shared by both men and women.This issue has sparked considerable debate and I firmly agree with the opinion. As, both man and woman can feel tired after work so it is unfair for one person to do most of the cooking and cleaning.Moreover, sharing chores reduce stress and gives each partner more time to rest or persue their personal interests.This essay will present well-supported arguments to justify my stance.

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Government in many countries are urgently seeking ways to reduce employment in rular areas. what are the most effective ways to do this? which measure do you think would be the single most effective step that government could take?

In modern era, federal and provincial authorities are promptly putting their efforts to reduce the unemployment in outback areas. This essay will try to elaborate the pragmatic solutions along with examples in subsequent paragraphs.

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Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

These days, public debate has been going on over whether options available to us in modern life are more than enough. I tend to believe that this era we have a large number of choices-for the following reasons.

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In today’s world, people spend a lot of money on appearance because they want to look younger. Why does this happen? Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

Nowadays, public debate has been going on over why some people are investing a lot of money on changing their look to become younger. I tend to believe that this kind of development has negatively impact on them in some way, I would discus that in this assay.

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