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Finding job satisfaction is considered to be a luxury in many developing countries. Why do you think that is? Do you think job satisfaction is important?

In the contemporary era, professional fulfillment is often regarded as a luxury in some developing nations. This essay will discuss the causative factors behind the scenario and explain its important.

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With a great variety of social networking websites, people often add complete strangers to their friend lists. Do you think that this tendency helps people to find new friends or is it just a mean to increase their self-esteem? Justify your opinion with relevant examples.

Nowadays, people tend to use social midia significantly in both views, as it is the easiest and convenient way to find new friends as well as increase self-confident. This essay will give relevant evidences to proof my opinion.

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Some people believe that humans are damaging seriously the environment. What are the causes? What should people do to solve this problem?

Many individuals think that humans have a harmful impact on habitat. Initially, wars, wasting, and gas usage. These problems have a lot of solutions also this essay includes everything about it.

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Some people believe that online learning is more effective than traditional classroom teaching. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

In today's society, due to rapid technological development, people tend to study through internet websites. From my personal perspective, i partly agree with this statement because although digital lesson is more convenient method to use, classroom teaching is vital to deduct discipline behavior for students.

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Many aspects of the way people dress today are influenced by global fashion trends. How has global fashion become such a strong influence on people's lives? Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

People nowadays are widely influenced by globalization, icluding in the aspect of fashion. Nearly everyone in developed society cannot escape from the impact of global fashion trends.

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Artist should habe a freedom to express they thoughts or ideas . Do you agrre or disagree with this statment ?

Art has an important role in society. Art has been around us for many years. Some people think that artists should have complete freedom to create art. I agree with the statement that artistic individuals should have full freedom to express their creativity while creating a piece of art, especially since art often addresses important political or social issues.

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Fast food is now universally available in most countries and is becoming increasingly popular. Some feel that this is a positive trend, while others do not. What are your opinions on this?

Fast food is becoming more and more popular within minute in most countries of the world. These days most of the people prefer fast food over a healthy meal. I believe fast food is very damaging but usefull if known the boundaries of eating.

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In spite of technological developments in transportation, many people believe that a bicycle is the best way to reach any destination within the city. What are the advantages and disadvantages of using a bicycle nowadays?

In modern society, people already achieved a lot of technological developments in transporation and think that it is an important way to reach any destination while others think that using bicycle is more convinient. I strongly believe that there are more disadvantages of using a new technologies in transportation than advantages.

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Many young people today prefer to live in large cities instead of rural areas. What are the advantages and disadvantages of living in a city for young adults?

In this period of time, mostly of adolescents would prefer to stay in large cities instead of rural areas. Its have both of good point and drawbacks by discussion in the following paragraph.

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Children today are overweight and in poor health. Give reasons for this and give solutions to help fix the problem.

Nowadays, young people are overweight and in poor health. It might be the results of a terrible eating habit and a none exercing lifestyle.

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In a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. Others believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In several nations, people believe that it is essential to invest major amount of money on building new railway tracks for faster trains between cities, however, others believe that the same amount should rather be spent on developing existing public transportation. This essay talks about both views, and explains my personal opinion on why monies should be spent to contruct new railway lines instead of improving existing facilities.

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Atomic energy (Nuclear power) is becoming more and more popular energy source. However, some people argue that nuclear power puts life on the Earth to danger Discuss both view and give your opinion?

In last decades, nuclear technology has arised plenty of risks. It is a well known fact that nuclear technology is a great renewable energy source because it is clean and effective. However, possession of the nuclear technology also can be a threat to human. In this essay, I will discuss both views and give my opinion.

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It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behaviour to children?

At present, whilst opponent hold the view that it isn't an essential for guardians to teach breed to shape behavior in certain age, proponent have a divers perspective that parents should teach offspring the distinguish between right and wrong at an early age. However, I'm a staunch believer that custodians must teacher their children difference between right and wrong when they are kids because first, children will get knowledge about what is good and bad things to deal with daily basis. Second they will have ability to opt in different situations what is the right and wrong on society.

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People from many countries have to spend more and more time away from their families. Why is this? How this affects them and their families?

In the contemporary era, the traditional family structure is changing as more individuals spend long periods away from their families. This trend is mainly driven by the demands of the globalized labor market and the pursuit of higher education. While such separation is often necessary for financial stability and career advancement, it can have significant emotional consequences for both individuals and their families.

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A large number of young people cannot find jobs after they leave school. What problems will youth unemployment cause in individuals and for society? What measures should be taken to reduce the level of unemployment among young people?

A huge amount of youngsters are able to find well job after leaving their studies. They can face distinct problems such as they can get mental health problems even they can feel more burden in society owing to unemployment. Different kind of steps should be taken, there should be age limits in which people can find jobs. These viewpoints I gonna discuss in the upcoming paragraphs.

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Schools should concentrate on teaching students the academic subjects that will be useful for their future careers. Subjects such as music and sports are not useful. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is often considered that education should just explain academic subjects which is important for their future jobs and subjects like music and sports shouldn't be teaching in schools. I totally disagree with that statement, i think music and sports are important for our lives.

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Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, hould be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some member of society think that doctors, engineers and other professionals should work only in country where they did their study. Other people think that work can be free in another country if they want. In this essay, I will discuss these both views, in addition I believe that people can have labour In any country if they wish.

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In some countries, students pay their college or university fees, whileThe In some others, the government pay for them. Do you think the advantages that government pays the mony outweigh the disadvantages?

For the past half century, the education system changed a lot. In some countries, parents pay for children's college or universities fees while in other country the government pay for them. There are a lot of advantages and disadvantages, but i strongly believe the government should pay for students, because there a lot of talented students who do not have a financial opportunity.

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Most major cities around the world continue to grow at a phenomenal rate due to the massive increase in population. Discuss some of the effects of a high population density and suggest some ways on which this trend could be reversed. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In this world there are many main towns that are facing the increasingly extraordinary situation about the citizen number extremely rise.

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some people believe that government should give priority to healthcare whereas others say that they should spend on other important priorities. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Healthcare issues are arising at a rapid rate throughout the globe; as a result, many masses surpport the notion of offering adequate funding to it while others believe that there are several other sectors to consider for the same. Both of the ideas will be captivated in the forthcoming paragraphs along with the conclusion at the end.

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