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Question:- Over the past 50 years, young people gain status and power but old people have lost.What is the cause and it is a good or bad development?

The issue of young people gaining status and power while elderly people are losting theirs has become a significant concern in recent years. It is widely believed that elderly people should have power and status. This essay explores the causes of the problem. Although both argements have their merits, I firmly believe that it is a beneficial development.

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Globalisation means that people around the world increasingly share the same culture, products and entertainment. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this development?

Nowadays, it is normal people at the two different continents using same kind of products, this phenomenons is because of the globalisation. In this essay I am going to discuss the benifts and the drawbacks of this development.

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In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually empahsise that their products are new in some way. Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

Today's business always highlight the brand new products. Companies marketing are responsable for the advertisment, studing the way to tranform normal people in future clients. In this essay I will explain why those types of advertising is happening nowdays, and the negative development that may bring for the population.

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In the last decade, there has been a great increase in global air travel. What do you think are the reasons for this and do you think it is a good thing? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.

Over the last ten of period world air travels has massively increased. With the global economic developments and increment of traveling requirements are mainly causes for this trend. Although this has some drawbacks I believe this is a good improvement in transpotation. In this essay I will discuss the main reasons for this trend.

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In some countries, many children are becoming overweight and unhealthy. Some people say it is the responsibility of governments to solve this problem. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

In some regions around the world, more and more kids become overweight and unhealthy. Some individuals believe that policymakers are responsible to solve this problem. I utterely agree with this when some of those people are unhealthy, because they live in places are lack of sports facilities. The other purpose also is that some unhealthy food is affordable for children in cheap prices. So, it is governments' responsibility to solve both of these problems rathar than anyone else.

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Some people argue that climate change is a natural phenomenon that has occurred throughout Earth's history. Others believe that human activity is the primary cause of the current changes in global climate. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Many people think that climate change is a normal thing and its a part of the history while others think that it is primaraly happen as a part of human activities. Althoguh, we have evedance it is a part of natural process I believe current climate changes has been apeared mainly becasue of human activities.

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The working week should be shorter and workers should have a longer weekend. Do you agree or disagree?

There is a widespread belief that weekends should be longer and working week should be shorter for workers. Although it has some negative effects on companies, I completely agree with this opinion because it can help people's mental health and their productivity. In this essay, I will firstly discuss the benefits of it for workers before explaining their drawbacks.

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Some schools now require students to wear devices that track their physical activity and location during school hours. Why might schools implement this policy? Do you think the benefits of this surveillance outweigh the drawbacks for students?

In recent years, there has been a growing trend towards tracking devices for students. Numerous schools are adopting this trend because it ensures students are in an advantageous condition. In contrast, this essay completely agrees that the merits of this trend outweigh the drawbacks because it increases learners' safety and it improves their performance.

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The increasing use of credit cards has led to a rise in personal dept. Some people argue that this is a problem that needs to be addressed, while others argue that it is a necessary part of modern life. Discuss both sides of this argument and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, more and more cardholders are in debt, because of using their cards for buying their personal needs. For some people, this can be a problem that need to be solved, however, others consider this as a essential part of modern life. For me, this can be a essential part in people's lives to not to make them live without essential machines in their homes. I can discuss both views and my opnion in more depth in next pargraphs.

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TOPIC: In recent years, the family structure and the role of its members are gradually changing. What kinds of changes can occur? Do you think these changes are positive and negative?

It is evident that currently there are some changes occurring on family structures as well as changing of roles by its members.These changes have both positive and negative impact according to my own perception.

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In the modern world, many employees lack soft skills such as communication and working in teams. What are the main causes of this problem? What are the effects of the lack od soft skills?

The issue of many employees who have lack soft skills such as communication and working in teams has become a significant concern in recent years. It is widely believed that the soft skills are the most important thing in jobs. This essay explores the causes of the problem and suggests possible solutions.

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Leaders of all kinds are often younger now than in the past. What are the reasons for this? Is it a positive or a negative development? Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Individuals in leadership positions nowadays are usually younger than in the past. The reason why they succeed in the younger ages is that the educational system has been developed more significantly. The youngsters now are more flexible and tend to be more adaptable to updated high-tech. I believe that this is a good development.

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Some species of animals are almost extinct; and many others seem to be fast approaching a similar risk. What are the reasons for this? What should be done to solve this problem? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.

Many animal species are in the threat of the extinsion because of many reasons while other animasls are in the risk of it. This essay is going to discuss the main reasons and what are the posible solutions of protecting those animals before world lose them completely.

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Many supermarkets are selling more and more imported foods instead of seling locally produ byced foods? What are the reasons for this? İs this positive or a negative development?

Big markets are selling imported food products in the marketplace rather than selling locally produced foods. It is partially a positive development and this inclination could be due various reason that will be explained in the upcoming paragraphs.

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Some people think that it is good fir a country's culture to import foreign movies and TV programmes. Others think that it is better to produce these locally. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

The foreign movies like herry porter and marvel are undieniably attractive and well-known in the world, which may provide enormous experience to audience . However, the Hong Kong local movie incorporate numerous people's memeroies and local culture.Therefore, Hong Kong movie is more important rather than foreign movie .Thus, it is better to produce these locally.

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While some countries encourage short school days, others encourage long school days. Do you think that having short school days has more advantages or more disadvantages?

There are some regions support long school days, while others do the opposite of this. I think that short school days can have more advantages than their disadvantages. I can explain why in next paragraphs.

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In many countries, crime rates amongst younger people have been rising. Discuss the causes and solutions for this problem.

Recently, in many countries, crime rates have been rising especially among the young people. Firstly, this essay will discuss reasons behind this tendency and secondly propose some solutions to counteract this issue.

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Some people think that secondary or highschool student should be taught how to use money management as it is an important lifeskill. Do you agree or disagree with the statement?

Some people believe that academic institutions which are before a university degree are supposed to teach students how to use money management as it is a significant lifeskill. I partly disagree when parents can take a part in this mission because children probably do not always remember what they are taught in schools. While, if parents needed to teach them this, it would be better.

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Some people say that in the digital age, theatres and cinemas are no longer important as people can watch all the entertainment they want online. Others argue that theatres and cinemas are still important both economically and culturally. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

The development of digital technology has significantly changed the way people access entertainment. While some argue that people can access entertainment through internet, making the less significant of venues entertainment. Others maintain that theatres and cinemas remain important for both traditional and economic aspects. In my opinion, even though online entertainment offers greater convenience, cinemas and theaters continue to play an important role in economically and culturally.

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the working week should be shorter and workers should have a longer weekend. Do ypu agree or disagree? give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience

There is an argument that working week is better to shorter and the workers could have one more day of at the weekend. I largely agree with the idea. This essay will explain my reason for agreeing with this topic.

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