IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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The best way to plan a holiday is by not planning at all. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

For other people, they tend to believe not having an itinerary for their trip is more fun and enjoyable compared to having a schedule for their trip. In this essay, I will give my opinions based on my own experience.

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Some people say that the governments should pay for health care and education but others think that this is not the government’s responsibility. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

In today's world most people agree on the idea that the government should pay for healthcare and education, but others might not support that idea because see it as it's not the government's responsibility to do so. And this idea I will tackle and discuss and give my opinion on both of these headliners

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In many countries, plastic containers have became more common than ever and are used by food and drink companies. Do you think the adventages outweight the disadventage.

Due to continious production of plastic containers, plastic have now became more common then before, which is being used by many food and drink business. Although this trend has several benefits, I belive the drawbacks outweight them in long run.

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Should private schools receive government funding? Give reasons for your answer, and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In this day and age, private educational institutions should get government funding or not is a controversial topic. Many think that some funding from education ministry should go to private schools as well. This is because there will be more oppurtunities to accomodate significant facilities, and fees will become affordable for the common public.

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Some people think that competition at work, at school and in daily life is a good thing. Others believe that we should try to cooperate more, rather than competing against each other. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Many critics believe that having a competitive environment at the company and at the education councils is beneficial, while others argue that working with each other and being freindly can provide a healthy place for learning or working . In my perspective, I reckon that healthy competing is an essential part in our life.

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Crime rates will fall as advances in technology make it easier to detect and prevent crimes. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In the modern era, crime has become a major problem in society. It is argued that technological advances can detect and prevent crimes, leading to a fall of crime rates. Although I partly agree that the digital breakthrough can deliver a prevention of crimes, it does not reduce crime and may lead to cybercrime.

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some people think that sport teaches children how to compete, while others belive that children learn teamwork. discuss both views and give your opinion

There is no denying the fact that physical activity games are essential for children's skills development. However, it can be argued that whether different sports can equip kids with competition spirit rather than with teamwork manner. From my perspective, I believe that group sport activities can lead to collaborative work for children to learn. This essay will shed light on the different views of this case, discuss few related examples and provide my point of view.

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Some people believe that governments should focus on reducing environmental pollution and housing problems to help people prevent illness and disease. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Whether govenments should emphasize more on problems like enviornment pollution or better accomodation to maintain a healthy society is becoming a topic of debate in masses. I completely agree with the statement because working on these factors can improve many conditions of the country like health and poverty and can helps to motivate younsters to contribute in such approches.

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Nowadays, an increasing number of people with health problems are using alternative medicine and treatments instead of visiting their normal doctors. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

Due to modern tochnology, growing number of peoples are trying to solve their health problems by their ownrather than going to visit doctors for advice. I strongly believe that this is a negative development due to some reasons, my inclination will be elucidated in further paragraphs.

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Some think that developing a successful career is more important than spending time with family and friends, while others disagree. Discuss both views and give our own opinion.

It is often argued that focusing on a successful career is more crucial than spending time with family and friends, whereas some individuals disagree. While building a successful job career is compelling factor for life, I strongly believe that family and friends promote for happy moments and satisfaction.

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Many children today are overweight. This is a serious health issue. Give reasons for child obesity and give solutions to fix this problem.

Nowadays, a lot of children have problems with being overweight. This is a big health issue, which increases different type of health problems such as, diabetes, heart disease, and hepatitis later in life. This problem is mainly caused by, unhealthy food and lack of physical activity. Therefore, families, schools and governments should control the limit of junk food and encourage them to do sports.

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Some people think it is better to educate boys and girls in separate schools. Others, however, believe that boys and girls benefit from attending mixed schools. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Should boys and girls study together? Which is better mixed or separate?

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Advances in science and technology and other areas of society in the last 100 years have transformed the way we live as well as postponing the day we die. There is no better lime to be alive than now. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Scientific and technological enhancements in the previous century had a vital effect in transforming our lifestyles, also life expectancy rates which reached its peak. Consequently, an argument states that there is no era that is greater than the current one. From my perspective, I firmly agree with the given statement.

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Many elder people are no longer looked after by their families but are put in care homes and nursing homes. What are advantages and disadvantages of this? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Taking care about our families and looking to what they need is one of the humanity thing to do. However, a lot of people letting their families in care homes while they busy at work or being in other country.This can lead to reduce the family bonds and make it less stronger.I believe, that leaving the geriatric homes have both of pros and cons.

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Some think that developing a successful career is more important than spending time with family and friends, while others disagree. Discuss both views and give our own opinion.

Nowadays, people live in a fast-paced life in our world, because of hustling and bustling life style in metropolitan cities. This life style has created a hustle-culture in our current working environment. For this reason, large proportion of people think building a succesful career is more essential than hanging out with their the dearest and nearest; remaining part of people give more importance to their social life.

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In their advertising, business nowadays usually emphasis that their products are new in some way. Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

Nowadays, companies are running advertising campaign to showcase their goods such that it looks different from other companies advertisements. Overall i believe this is a positive development because i offers more benefis than drawbacks.

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Many people today leave the countryside and their small villages and move to the big city. Give reasons why people do this and give some problems it might cause.

In the modern days people have changed their living life style. Many of them today leave the countryside and their small villages and move to the big city. This essay will examine the reasons why people do this move and give some problem it might cause.

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When designing a building the most important factor is the intended use of the building rather than its outward appearance. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

One of the main factors when designing the building is the purpose of using construction inward than external view. It seems to me that at the beginning of the project for building it is needed to pay attention for inner functionality than outward appearance.

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Many aspects of the way people dress today are influenced by global fashion trends. How has global fashion become such a strong influence on people's lives? Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

There is no denying the fact that global fashion become an important part of people's daily lives. This essay will discuss how global fashion has become so influential and explain why I believe this is positive.

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Nowadays, if people want to find work, they have to move away from their families and friends. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

In this day and age, the trend of hunting work while leaving family behind is increasing rapidly. Many believe that people need to move far from close ones to achieve their professional career goals. It is clear that there are major benefits such as overall development, however there are significant drawbacks as well like lonliness, home-sickness. This essay will discuss both merits and demerits in following paragraphs.

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