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In some countries today children are taught from young age that competition is important and winning is everything. Is this a positive or negative development?

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In
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 trend that young
children
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youngsters to achieve
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whereas
, I believe that it is not an appreciable development, even though it has some upsides. One of the major drawbacks of
this
 trend is
children
 become more mentally stressed. When they are forced to achieve a task, youngsters will go through a stressful situation.
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 the end, if they do not win, that incident will lead to some psychological problems like depression, lack of concentration etc.
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 in their
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lives due
 to their immature behaviour.
In addition
, competitive spirit among
children
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illegal ways to attain
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good results. Sometimes it would not be their cup of tea,but they are compelled to work for it. When they think that, they cannot reach the target,
children
 look for different ways to achieve the goal without knowing the impacts.
However
, competitive minds make them
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achieve goals and encourage them to work hard for it. In later life,
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 would help them to achieve their goals
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. In conclusion, teaching
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children
 to become competitive to win is appreciatable, but
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stress and the pathway to wrong decisions.
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