The growth of the online shopping one day closure to shopping stores in cities. Do you agree or disagree with this.
Due to the development of
the
technology, people become more dependable on Correct article usage
apply
internet
. Many masses argue that the shopping Correct article usage
the internet
stores
will be shut down because, the high demand of
online shopping. I Change preposition
for
am totally disagree
with Change the verb form
totally disagree
this
perception because people are more addicted to physical stores
as well as its
give more satisfaction than online shopping. Change the pronoun
they
it
This
essay will elaborate the
reasons supporting the view.
Change preposition
on the
To begin
with, window shopping is indispensable
part of the life of women. Add an article
an indispensable
a indispensable
Although
, they purchase multitudinous items such
as clothes, gadgets and so on. But they still goes
to their local market to buy things. Whenever ladies have spare time, they like to spend it in shopping malls and some small Change the verb form
go
stores
. For instance
, A recent newspaper report showed that window shopping is habit
of 55% Add an article
the habit
a habit
women
. They get relaxation and reduced their stress with it.
Change preposition
of women
Furthermore
, it is not easy to trust on
online Change preposition
apply
stores
. Numerous kind of stuff is available on some websites but when we ordered something, we never got anything. These sort of frauds are increasing day by day. That's why,
people have trust-issues with these type of online Remove the comma
apply
stores
. Although
, it's not deniable that many companies like Amazon provide crackerjack service to their customers but
all companies are not Remove the conjunction
apply
same
.Correct article usage
the same
For example
, according to
68% shopping websites are scams because, Change preposition
apply
they
does not send your thing which you ordered, nor refund.
To conclude, it is noticeable that online shopping has Change the pronoun
it
their
own benefits but these merits are not enough to close the local Correct pronoun usage
its
stores
. I opine that these stores
are not threatened by online shopping.Submitted by nirmaljeetkaur538 on
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