some people think that single sex schools perform better academically. others, however, beleive that mixed schools provide children with better social skills for adults life. Discuss both of these views and give your opinion.

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that single-sex

schools

provide a comprehensive education system to students and others assert that mixed

schools

bestow more social values which is a useful skill for their adult lives. I strongly agree with the

second

argument mentioned above and

this

essay will analyze both views followed by a reasoned conclusion.

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to the opposite gender group gives

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of

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environment and practical knowledge to students from their childhood in mixed

schools

. It

also

helps to improve their relationship qualities.

Consequently

, not only children learn to respect the other gender but

also

, understand their mentality because it is

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fact that males and females have completely different characteristics, thinking

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and

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.

As a result

, they will learn to maintain and protect their relationship throughout their

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school age onwards.

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recent research carried out by the University of Colombo with divorced individuals in Sri Lanka, showed that 73% of them, went to single-sex

schools

and have respective problems, domestic violence and verbal abuses.

Nevertheless

, single-sex

schools

are academically more productive than mixed

schools

due to less distraction since same gender share

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rhythm of thinking may minimize conflicts among students.

Therefore

,

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pupils

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can concentrate on their academic performances and achieve targets with minimum obstacles.

However

, these scholars have less humanity and poor soft skills

such

as interpersonal skills, ethics and flexibility so on.

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problem may indirectly the

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for increasing rates of violence, crimes and rapes.

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, 68% of prisoners in Brazil studied in same-sex

schools

according to the Times magazine article. To conclude, it is translucent that mixed

schools

develop kids’ social skills require to their latter lives despite, the fact that

single sex

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schools

produce more academic results.

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world needs

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with good humane than high profiles.