Heath is the most important thing to having a great life.
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care about
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body. I totally
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health will decline. I would like to discuss
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reasons in the following paragraphs.
Firstly
, most
people
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a day without
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. And, we noticed the total fat average rates are increasing.
For example
, my friend Mike his
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meals are
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and pizza.
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I am watching TV with my friend Mike he just ordered five chicken burgers with two Cola drinks. I got shocked when I saw what he just ordered.
Moreover
, I told my friend Mike to stop eating fast foods because
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his health and body.
Secondly
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bed for a long time with their own phones or playing video games and without going outside home to
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fresh air and get vitamin D
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the sun.
For instance
, my small brother loves to play video games 24 hours
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stop
instead
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the environment.
Furthermore
, with
this
the health average will be lower in the future.
Finally
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day
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and move away the junk food that
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a lot of fats.
In addition
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people
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cellphones or video games because
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of addiction that may
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children or adults.