The media should limit how much bad news they report because it discourage people from doing activities which usually involve very little risk. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Most news reports tend to be sensational, shocking and unpleasant.
However
, I believe we have a right to know what is happening in the world and I do not believe that the media
should restrict what they tell us.
People
who argue that the media
should not report so much bad news have one main reason for this
opinion. They suggest that bad news discourages people
from doing things which are normally safe, for
instance
crime rates may be a major factor in discouraging Add a comma
instance,
people
from visiting a city.Another example is when a plane crashes and many people
stop flying for a while
, even thought
it Correct your spelling
though
was
one of the safest ways to travel.Wrong verb form
is
As a result
of these reactions, businesses suffer because people
become frightened of doing things they previously thought were harmless.
On the other hand
, there are strong reasons for arguing that the media
should not limit their reporting.Firstly
, people
have to be informed so that they can then
take
responsible decisions.Correct your spelling
make
Also
, people
have to be able to decide for themselves what risks are involved in doing a particular activity.For example
, when there has been
an accident on the motorway, I do not stop driving, Wrong verb form
is
although
I usually drive more carefully for a few days, especially if the case of the accident was
the weather.
In short, I think the Wrong verb form
is
media
have a duty to report all important events.If we do not receive information of this
type, we cannot make responsible decisions about what we do, and this
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