The media should limit how much bad news they report because it discourage people from doing activities which usually involve very little risk. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Most news reports tend to be sensational, shocking and unpleasant.

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, I believe we have a right to know what is happening in the world and I do not believe that the

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should restrict what they tell us.

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who argue that the

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should not report so much bad news have one main reason for

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opinion. They suggest that bad news discourages

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from doing things which are normally safe,

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crime rates may be a major factor in discouraging

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from visiting a city.Another example is when a plane crashes and many

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stop flying for a

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, even

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one of the safest ways to travel.

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of these reactions, businesses suffer because

people

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become frightened of doing things they previously thought were harmless.

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, there are strong reasons for arguing that the

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should not limit their reporting.

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have to be informed so that they can

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take

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make

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responsible decisions.

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people

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have to be able to decide for themselves what risks are involved in doing a particular activity.

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, when there

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an accident on the motorway, I do not stop driving,

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I usually drive more carefully for a few days, especially if the case of the accident

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the weather. In short, I think the

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have a duty to report all important events.If we do not receive information of

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type, we cannot make responsible decisions about what we do, and

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reduces our freedom to act in a way which is best for us.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

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Task Achievement: 7.0

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Many museums and historical sites are mainly visited by tourists but not local people. Why is this the case and what can be done to attract more local people to visit these places?

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