The internet is viewed as an excellent means of communication by many. However, there are some who argue that it is actually destroying our communication skills. Discuss both views.

INTRODUCTION- As the consequence of tremendously improving technology, cell phones
,
Accept space
,
computers and these types of gadgets providing an exquisite ways for communication online through
facebook
Suggestion
Facebook
,
Accept space
,
WhatsApp, email and by so. According to
this
it is considered by some that these are the fabulous and effective ways due to myriad merits. Whereas, some intend that it can be a prime cause of destroying communication skill. I think that both aspects should be
analyzed
examined carefully and methodically; broken down for consideration of constituent parts
analysed
.
However
,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
am in favour of telecommunication.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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