IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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The plans below show a harbour in 2000 and how it looks today.

The following maps demonstrate a harbor in 2000 and its current look.

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Governments give lots of support to artists, even though some people think it is a waste of money that could have been spent better elsewhere. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Artists are well supported by government despite some indviduals who feel this as misuse of money. Although many art institutions are in need of this funding, I believe that public health facilities are in more need of this support.

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The Contribution of Various Economic Sectors to X country Gross Domestic Product in 2016, 2017 and 2018.

The table illustrates the percentage of contribution of three various economic sectors ( Agriculture, Industry, and Service) to X country gross domestic product in three different years (2016 , 2017 and 2018).

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Some people think that we should publicize much information as possible, typically science, commerce and academic issue, however other opine that it is too valuable to share freely Discuss both views and give your opinion?

Information is key, and knowledge is power as the saying goes. while some individuals believe informations which are vital, such as scientific, commerce as well as academical issues should not be made public free of charge due to its high value, others advocate for the necessity of publicizing these informations as they may be helpful to the society. It is essential for information to be made know as it can sometimes save people from hazardeous situation, but at the the same time, people might use these informations inaccuately if can be reached without a streched. I believe informations should not be given out freely without a cost.

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Some people say that schools should concentrate on teaching students academic subjets that will be useful for their future careers. Other people say that subjects such as music and sports are also necessary. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

Nowadays the majority of schools have subjects like music and sports,but some people think these are unnecessary subjects for academic lessons. This essay will discuss firstly the importance level of academic subject, then shape it with adding some facts about effects of music and sports in pupils' lives, eventually it will be finished with involving my own perspective which is based on academics.

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some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

many people believe that is better do learn a second language in primary school.While there are advantages and disadvantages to both.i think starting at a young age is more beneficial because it helps children develop their languageage skills faster. in this essay, i will explain both sides of the argument.

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Some people argue that all young people should be required to attend full time school until they are at least 18 years old. What extent do you argee or disagree

Some people argue that all young people should be required to attend full time school until they are at least 18 years old. While I agree that attending full time school can bring some benefits , I believe that young people have several better choices for their education

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Many people are changing their careers. what are the reasons for changing? and can there be any positive or negative impact by person or by society as whole.

A lot of people take decision about change their careers and ı think it has somelogical reason. For example low salary and work's terms. On the other hand, it affect many things about society. Actually, it don't affect just society but also personal life. İn adittion, It has a lot of pros and cons.

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Some school leavers tend to go for travelling or work for a period of time before directly going to university. What do you think are the advantages and disadvantages?

An increase in crime is always associated with a dysfunctional society. If there is favorable economic development in the state, there is no significant gap between the richest and the poorest, then crime cannot be fueled from those strata of society that are interested in it or join the ranks of its members.

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Online learning is becoming more popular and some people believe it will replace traditional classroom teaching in the future.

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Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor. 1 Do you think this is a positive or a negative development? Give reasons 2 for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words. 3

In modern society,there has been a notable increase in number of individuals who put their trust in alternative medicine rather than their doctors. While they are several reasons for that, I believe it is a negative trend and it will be explained in this essay why.

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Some people think that employers should focus on the personal qualities of potential job seekers instead of their academic qualifications and experience. To what extent do you agree with this opinion? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Academic qualifications refer to the evidence that a candidate has knowledge and competence in a particular field of study. This means that the job seeker has attained a foundational comprehension of the subject matter, and has acquired necessary skills through assignments, coursework and exams. This suggests that the individual possesses the knowledge and skills to perform well in the role. A software development firm seeking to appoint a programmer, for instance, may put more focus on a job applicant with a computer science degree. The degree demonstrates the fact that the candidate has acquired a certain level of programming languages, algorithms and competencies required for the job.

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In some cultures, marriage and having children is viewed as the main purpose in a person’s life. In other societies, having a good career and income is what is seen as success. Discuss both these views and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.

In contemporary era, a happy relationship and having children is the principle aim of thier lives in various societies while others are thaught that to have an excellent academic records and financial growth has seen as success. I have discussed several things for both scenario in ensuing paragraphs with suitable examples with my opinion.

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Some people think only best students should be rewarded. Others think we should reward students who make progress. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Every educational institution has their own outstanding students which are measured by different aspects. Not all of them become the top among others since the beginning, but there are also some students who work harder to fill the knowledge and skill gap between them and their peers. This essay will cover my opinion regarding which students deserve an appreciation from two points of view.

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eople nowadays sleep less than they used to in the past. What do you think is the reason behind this? What are the effects on individuals and people around them?

One of the widely discussed issues nowadays is that people nowadays sleep less than they used to in the past.  It is undeniable that using technology has become an essential part of our life.

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Overpopulation in many major urban centers around the world is a major problem. What are the causes of this problem? How can this problem be solved?

The number of population plays a role in who the universe should be.Nowadays,the effective of the large number of population become an incridible scare over the world. This essay will discuss the issues of this phenomenon and will implements solutions to overcome these problems.One possible cause is assembleing people in one city , as there is a a lot of people being crowded in small area this will increase the number of citizens,and it seems to put people together in a box. Moreover, this problem will leads to lack of food and water. Subsequently, another possible reason is the poor management , the management in this timeframe could leads many problem on people and environment . In contrast, the administration could also control the population's numbers and gives rise to good management. perhaps the huge number of immigrations in the cities around this country, this is a common issue and leads to a higher number of population owing to the newly people who enter the country . This...

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Some people believe that in order to reduce the rising obesity among children the school administration should make it necessary for every child to participate in sports and other outdoor activities. Do you agree or disagree?

Some populations think that to decrease the percentage of increased obesity among children the school administration has to make sports participation indoors or outdoors necessary for each student. This essay totally agrees with enforcing the students to engage in sports activities.

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The amount of time spend on sports and exercise should be increased in schools in order to tackle the problem of overweight children? Do you think this is the best way to deal with the problem? What other solutions can you suggest ?

These days, the rate of time spend on sports and exercise shoud be rose in schools in order to solve the problem of overweight students. So, I think this is not better way to behave with the problem. In this essay, I am going to discuss this point and give my own suggest.

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Many university students want to learn about different subjects in addition to their main subjects. Others feel it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for their qualification. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In the contemporary world, many individuals at university level have the desire to learn extra subject than their main stream course. However, certain groups of people are of the opinion that students should concentrate on selected program to achieve success in their academic. I agree with the second statement and In the following paragraphs, I shall explain my reasons for this befief.

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In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is therefore necessary forgovernments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food. To what extent do you agree or disgaree with this opinion ?

In this modern era, an increasing number od people are choosing to eat juck food and because of that folks are suffering from a plethora of health conditions. Thus, it is essential for the governments to take a more tax from the people who is buying fast food. If questioned, I bolster with this notion to a major extent. My inclination is justified further.

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