IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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Some people think that boys and girls should attend school together. Others feel that they should be educated separately. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

Some would argue that both boys and girls should attend school with each other, while others say that they should be educated alone. Although providing an environment for students to study in schools with the same gender as them will make them focused on their education, I think that it is best for them to be able to study with other genders so they can develop their social communication.

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Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members ofsociety. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Whether parents should provide ethical education to their children or schooling is the best way to teach this, there is a considerable argument. Thoungh both parents and schools are the cofounder of children's mental growth,I firmly believe that,parents play the most crusial part for this role.

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Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other s think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both views and give your own oipinion.

There are a number of people saying that advertisments play a vital role in the process of purchasing the products, and few argued, it is such a common practise that we do not pay much attention to it anymore. This essay will discuss both the views, and will share my opinion in the paragraphs below.

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Nowadays many people choose to be self employed rather than to work for a company or organisation. what could be the disadvantages of being self employed?

In our modern time, a number of people choose self employment over working with a company or organisation. This essay will discuss the demerits of being a businessman or owner in paragraphs below.

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Access to clean water is a basic human right. Therefore every home should have a water supply that is provided free of charge. Do you agree or disagree?

Clean water is essential for human lives; everyone needs to ingest a couple of liters waterdaily for maintaining their lives. Therefore, someone proposed that the water supply should be free for every household. Hereby, I absolutely disagree with this opinion, since it is remarkably against economic princinples remarkably.

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In many countries, financial crime involving identity theft is increasing. What are the causes of this trend, and what effect does identity theft have on the victims involved? Give reasons for your answer, and provide ideas and examples from your own experience

As technology develops, nothing remains untouched and the lifesyle of people is no exception. Nowadays,due to the presence of online world, security threats are common problems. Although this problem has a lot of complications, it does not necessarily mean that nothing can be done. This essay will explline the cuasses of this trend and suggest some valuable suggestions.

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people believe that in the future, environmental problems will mean that we are unable to live on this planet. In order to survive, the human species will need to find another planet that can support life. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

There is no denying the fact that the evironment issue may will be problem people survive. while it is a commonly held belief that some nation think in the future environment issue will mean that we can not live in this planet so we have to looking to a new planet to live, there is also an argument that oppoess it. In my opinion, I consider that we have to work to keep oure planet safty and clean to help us live .

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Research shows that some activities are good for health and others are bad. Despite knowing that, millions of people engage in unhealthy activities. What is the cause of this? What can be done?

Scientiest make the article that activities are divided into two group. They find out that some activities are good for health, while others have drawbacks. In spite of this, it cannot stop people from doing it. This essay will argue why people do this and what can be done to prevent society from doing it. People do these as they mostly do it as a habit and when they lose control over themselves. To prevent it, people can understand the causes why they do it and develop self-discipline.

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As computers are being used more and more in education, there will be soon no role for teachers in the classroom. Discuss advantages and disadvantages of this trend.

Recently, media has put its attention into a topic of artificial intelligence that can be the replacement of teacher. There are one major benefits and drawbacks respectively.

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More and more people are using computer and electric device to access information. Therefore, there is no need for printed books, magazine and newspapers. To what extent do you agree or disagree ?

In this modren day and age, electronic devices have profoundly made our lives easier. Significant amount of people these days rely on desktops and electric devices to access the readily available information due to which it is argued that there is no more need for paperbooks, newspapers and magzines. However, i firmly disagree with this statement because if children are made accessible to electronic devices for longer period of time it can have detrimental effects on children's health in a long run as well as some people of different age groups can find it daunting to access the information online.

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In some countries people spend long hours at work. Why does this happen? Is it positive or negative development

There is no denying the fact that pepole spend a lot of time at thier job. whie it is commonly held belife that in some countries around the world nation spend a lot of time at work, it is also an argument that oposes this idea. This essay will analyse this topic from both pints of view and express my opinion.

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The use of social media is replacing face-to-face interaction among many people in society. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

There is no denying the fact that uesing social media is replacing face to face interaction among a lot of pepole in society. While it is commonly held belief that the social media will change the people form face to face to apps to meeting. There is also an argument that many people think the social media replace the meeting among nation in society . Thier essay will analyse this topic from diffrent pints of view and express my opinion.

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We are becoming increasingly dependent on computer-based technology. How do you think it will change in the future? Is it good for us to rely so much on computers?

Advancements in artificial intelligence and machine learning will likely lead to even greater dependency as tasks become more automated. I think it would not change in the future, However it would increase more. In my opinion, it is bad instead of good to depend too much on computers.

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Some people believe that teenage students should volunteer and do free community service in their free time. Give the advantages of students doing this for themselves and the benefits for the community.

The world has changed and that includes how teenagers live. Some teenagers volunteer helping the community without getting paid.Also, helping the community for free improves people lives.This essay will explain about the advantages of students doing this for themselves and the benefits for the community.

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Some people say History is one of most important school subjects other people think that, in today world,subject like science and technology are more important than History.Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

Some groups of citizens believe that history is one of the most vital school subjects while other

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In many countries people now wear western clothes (suits, jeans) rather than traditional clothing. Why? Is this a positive or negative development?

In many countries, people now wear western clothes (suits, jeans) rather than the traditional clothing. Why? Is this a positive or negative development?

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Governments should spend money on public transportation rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

It has been a concern that the state should utilize its finances on improving public means of transport and not the roads. This essay will disagree with it because better roads reduce maintenance cost and promotes safety for all passengers.

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In many countries nowadays,consumers can go to a supermarket and buy food produced all over the world. Do you think this is a positive or negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In recent years, various food from all over the world is presented on shelf in supermarket to appeal people. In my opinion, I believe this trend is a positive development for people’s life and countries’ economy.

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The quality of healthcare a person received should not depend on the size of their bank balance. The government is responsible for providing a high level of health level of health care for all its citizens. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Healthcare is a most fundamental basic need in the country. I thoroughly believe, people should not depend on individual payment way to access healthcare facilities. Specially for senior citizens and children in the society. I agree governement must provide the advanced healthcare system to all citizens with free access.

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Most scientific and inventions and discoveries are worthless and only waste time and money resources. To what extend do you agree or disagree?give your own opinion

In the modern era, people cannot refused the discoveries and inventions, which have done a few decades ago. Gadgets and machines are developed with the help of inventions. This eassy will give clarity with the necessary supporting details in the upcoming paragraph.

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