IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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Communication through text messaging and other instant of online communication are short and basic. Some people think this will be the death grammar and spelling. Do you agree or disagree?

It has been observed that communicating via social media led to short and simple texts. Some individuals argue that, this will result in more mistakes in grammar and spelling. I truly agree with the given statement, because short text may be misunderstood and lack emotional expressions. This essay will discuss it in details.

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Multicultural societies, in which there is a mixture of different ethnic peoples, bring more benefits than drawbacks to a country. To what extent do you agree or disagree? benefits are cultural diversity, various traditions, aslo different cusines examples, in canada, usa, where most people are immigrants who follows different curtural , food options drawbacks are disturbing local people causing fights. people of different groups by residing for a long time tend to have some

Cities having multicultural communities with various ethnic groups can be advantage to the city. Although, people say that different groups living in a same place might have some drawbacks it can be outweigned. I agree that it benefits the country and provide evidence to prove the arguments.

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Some people think that children should go to kindergarten before attending primary school, while others believe that children should stay all day with their families. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

Nowadays,there is an ongoing debate about whether to let parents choose to attend their kids in kindergarten, which has attracted considerable public attention in recent years.Some people believe that we should let them go to develop their skills before school,while others think they are too young,folk have much era for studying at another era.l strongly agree with the idea that pupils have to take courses before joining a real school.This essay will examine the extent to which this opinion is valid and discuss two significant reasons supporting it.

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🔶More and more people are eating healthy food and exercising regularly. 🔸What are the reasons for that? What can we do to make other people do the same?

The society has changed greatly in recent years, and this includes the mentality of people towards healthy lifestyle.Many peopole are consuming healthy food and moving regularly. This essay will duscuss the poosible reasons behaind this change in behaviour and will suggest how to encourage more peolple to follow the same steps.

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We are becoming more and more dependent on machines to function in this modern world. Some people think it is negative trend. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

It is argued that in contemporary society people are becoming increasingly often more dependent on machines to function, what makes it, as many people claim, a drawback. I firmly agree. Machines are being encountered more and more frequently than ever, what in terms of some factors, decreases the possibilities of work, and what's more, may result negative trends, such as technical malfunctions due to the obsolescence.

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Some say that due to heavy traffic, governments need to build more roads in metropolitan cities, while others argue this is not the right solution. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays,there is an ongoing debate about whether governments have to build more streets in rural cities, which has attracted considerable public attention in recent years.While some people believe that councils should make a modern harbour, others think governments do not have to create new ones

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In many countries, financial crime involving identity theft is increasing. What are the causes of this trend, and what effects do identity theft have on the victims involved?

In recent decades, various crimes are becoming more widespread all over the world. In particular, financial crimes which involve identity fraud has emerged as a growing concern in most countries. This essay will examine the main causes of this troubling issue and discuss its potential impacts.

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Some people prefer to live in an extended family where a number of different generations live together. Others prefer to live in a small, nuclear family. List some of the advantages and disadvantages of living in a large, extended family.

In today's world, while many individuals prefer to habitate in nuclear families, others still find value in living with extended family. This essay investigates the pros and cons of dwelling in large families.

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The percentage of overweight children in western society has increased by almost 20% in the last ten years. Discuss the causes and effects of this disturbing trend.

In recent days, various kinds of food are very accessible and over-eating habits has been a concerning issue worldwide. An increasing percentage by 20% of obese adolescents has intensified, particularly in Western countries. This discussion will elaborate the underlying causes and of this issue and following impacts.

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In some countries, more and more adults are continuing to live with their parents even after they have completed their education and found jobs. Do the advantages of this outweigh its disadvantages?

These days, there has been a growing concern about adults staying with their parents after completing their studies, and obtaining good job prospects. While this trend offers several benefits such as moral and emotional support, it also presents certain drawbacks that should not be overlooked. This essay will examine both perspectives before reaching a conclusion.

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In some countries people’s weight has significantly increased while their levels of health have decreased. What do you think may be the causes of this problem and what solutions can you suggest solving them?

There is not a secret that in many countries people’s weight dramatically gained over the last decades. Simultaneously, the level of health drops by more than 50%. This essay will discuss how fast food chains and lack of sport affects a human body and how to improve health by improving your eating habits and adding new activity to your routine.

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Nowadays, not enough students choose science subjects in university in many countries. What are the reasons for this problem? What are the effects on society?

These days, many aspects of life have changed compared to the past, and one of the most influential changes is the poor of studying science subjects in university. This essay will show some reasons for this problem and effects on society.

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Some people believe that famous celebrities are poor role models for teenagers, while others think that they can be a source of inspiration. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of celebrities as role models for young people.

Some role models have different impacts to the people, especially to the younger generations. In some ways famous people, celebrities, athletes, as we call “our role models”, form and say how we should live, enjoy life and what we should aim for. In this essay I will talk about whether famous celebrities, athletes are poor role models or people, whose path we should follow.

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ome people believe that famous celebrities are poor role models for teenagers, while others think they can be a source of inspiration. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of celebrities as role models for young people.

Nowadays teenagers use social media almost every single day. On social media they see a lot of celebrities who are role models for young people. They often impact teenagers’ mindset, ideas, personality or inspire them. So let’s look at the advantages and disadvantages of celebrities being role models for teenagers.

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Some people think that homework is not necessary for students' development. Do you agree or disagree?

Many individuals claim that 'additional duty', such as homework is not essential for students' development. I strongly disagree, whereas reinforcement of learning and time management are two abilities that homework improves, which in my opinion are necessary during young people maturing.

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In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative change?

In various nations, citizens prioritize buying a house over renting it. I belive this majorly comes from the love of stability. This is a good change as it would not only garantee permanent accomodation, but also help manage our spenditure.

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living in a country where you have to speak foreign language can cause serious social problem and practical problem. to what extern do you agree or disagree with this statement.

There is no denying the fact that spending your life outside your country where you have to speak another language can make serious social issue and practical problem. While it is a commonly held belief that speaking in foreing language could lead to a lot of problems, there is also an argument that opposes it. In my opinion, I consider that it could cause serious issue and practical problem.

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Some people say free time activities for children should be organized by parents. Others say that children should be free to choose what they do in their free time. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Nowadays, many aspects of life have changed compare to the past, and one of the most influential changes is the rise of activities for children. Some people think parents should organized free time activities for their children, while others believe opposise of that, and that activities rely on children choosing. This essay will discuss both points and present my opinion.

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The older generations tend to have very traditional ideas about how people should live, think and behave. However, some people believe that these ideas are not helpful in preparing younger generations for modern life. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view

In an era of rapid technological transformation, there is a growing belief that the traditional ideas are outdated and hold back the progress of the younger generation. However, I strongly disagree with this perspective. I believe that many traditional values are not only relevant but essential for success today.

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Nowadays children watch much more television than they did in the past and spend less time on active or creative things. What are the reasons? And what measures should be taken to encourage children to spend more time on active or creative things?

There is no denying the fact that kids are watching much more television than they did in the past and let less time on creative things or other activities. This essay will discuss the reasons and the solutions.

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