IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

It is indeed true that in the modern world most students have mobile phone. Even though children spend their whole day with mobile phones. However, according to my mindset, I think this is not a positive tendency. So this essay will discuss them in detail with a summary.

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Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree? What other measures do you think might be effective?

The price of petrol may significantly play a role in the ecological challenge. Rising prices of petrol can resolve environmental degradation. I believe that this not only conserves natural habitats but also avoids pollution.

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Some children spend hours every day on thier smartphones. Why is this case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

Nowadays, many children spend a lot of time on their smartphones. There are several reasons for this. First, smartphones are very interesting and entertaining. Children can play games, watch videos, and chat with friends. Second, many school activities and homework need the use of phones or the internet. Finally, children often see adults and friends using phones, so they want to do the same.

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Teachers are more important than technology. Agree or disagree?

‏The role of teachers in society is essential and there is no technology tool could replace it.I definitely agree with this idea.

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it is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents,for instance for sport or music,and others are not.However,it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician. discuss both these views and give your opinions.

From my viewpoint I think lots of individuals possess their incredible skills from their born, and definitely youth also might improve their abilities as they grow mainly because of produced pheromone upgrading every child's activity twice better than adults. And I would keep my mind on the second opinion. I suggest young human-beings are amazing in growing up.

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It is important for people to take risks, both in their professional lives and their personal lives. Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages?

Recent days the topic of if It is important for people to take risks, both in their professional lives and their personal lives has been widely discussed. In my opinion about this topic, I see the advantages of taking risks both in their professional lives and their personal lives are equally with disadvantages of taking risk in many reasons.

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In some place old age is valuable, while in other cultures youth is considered ,ore important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In some society, elderly people are given more importance over the young ones; others think society should value the youth more than its old citizens. I believe that a balanced approach is ideal, as elderly populace hold valuable experience and young people have the strength to bring ecomonic growth.

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In recent years, many small local shops have closed because customers travel to large shopping centres or malls to do their shopping. Is this a positive or negative development?

With the development of novel technology and tendencies in trading and purchasing, modern individuals have been given numerous opportunities to fulfil their requirements. In that aspect, novel concepts have come to light ,and at the same time it paves the way for changing of purchasing patterns of consumers ,and collapses of samll and medium business ventures. From my perspective, the trend is reflected positive outcomes interms of, consumers' well-being and trade competition.

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Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

The topic of growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor has been widely discussed, and it has many positive sides and a many negative sides. It's depends on how people will deal with it.

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The number of people working online from home has grown in some countries. What advantages and disadvantages can come of this trend?

Nowadays working online is slightly famous jobs that most people in the present love to do beacause anybody can do this jobs just only you have one mobile phone and internet,that will gain a lot of money for you. There for it is depented on the quality of product, the presenting and the margeting that will help you to promote and awareness for consumer. Moreover it is have a many applications that provide for sale such as Amazon, Shoppe, Lazada or another platfrom online, that can help you to represent you product easier.

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Some people believe that learning practical skills (like cooking, fixing things, or managing money) is more important than learning academic subjects (like history, math, or science). To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The last period of time this topic was one of the most topic that people discussed about, in my opinion every one of these two types of skills, have a positive side and it's important to learn.

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With the migration of people to cities in search of a better life, many rural areas are now underpopulated. What are some problems associated with a lack of people living and working in rural areas? What solutions could be proposed?

In recent year, the statistics have shown that individuals often migrate to the new country. Should individual move to the new city in search of better life options and opportunities? Because of these reasons there is declining population in many rural areas. There are many issues associated with this statement and what actions should take to resolve this will be explain in this essay.

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Some people believe that the good leaders are born, whereas others hold the opinion that the leadership qualities could be obtained during the life. Who represents the good leader qualities indeed? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays, many companies seek successful leaders, because they return to the company in many aspects of the company domin such as developing. Hence, some people think that good leaders are born with personality, while others see the leadership quality might be gained through experience. This essay will show both points and present my opinion.

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It is important for everyone, including young people , to save money for their future. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

It is argue that all humans should protect money for fothcoming days. In this essay I will talk about how limit I accept with this statement. First of all, saving bucks for the future is a benefit for a person. Whether it's little or much money. As Arabic famous idiom said: protect your white bucks for a black day. Also we can't predict what the future is disappear for us, may one will die tomorrow so he don't have much enjoy with his asset. Evidence of that, we see a lot of people who we think they don't have high range of salary after they died, they dropped a lot of money, however lot of people don't agree with this speech they will still save money as they do now. In other hand we can say that if we don't have funny time in your youth you will not have it when you get older. Behaviour of protect money is appropriate for selfish people who just about himself and don't ever mind about others even his wife or family. Think is differ in different age. Actually our brain can chane hi...

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The working week should be shorter and workers should have a longer weekend. Do you agree or disagree?

It's thought that five days a week is much length duration and it might be a shortend work hours. In my own opinion, I'm super agree with this statement.

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Some people think that it is better to work for a large company, while others believe that working for a small company is more beneficial. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

It's argued that once you start work for the large companies , you will be don't want to leave it, because it's much better than the small companies, however sometimes it's better for your self to work for the small companies for some reasons.

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Many people think modern communication technology is having some negative effects on social relationships. Do you agree or disagree?

Many people belive that modern communication technology has negative effects on social relationships. In my opinnion, I totally agree with this statement because it can reduce face-to-face interaction and affect people's social skills, and the following examples will be provided to support my opinnion.

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Some people think that competition at work, at school and in daily life is a good thing. Others believe that we should try to cooperate more, rather than competing against each other. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

It is thought by many people that rivalry at different sides of life is neck thing. Others object this claim and comment that we suppose to participate ourselves. In this essay I will provide wide knowledge about both claims and give my own opinion.

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Some people think students should study the science of food and how to prepare it. Others think that school time should be used in learning important subjects. Discuss both views and give your opinion? Give reasons for your answer, and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays, many aspects of life have changed compared to the past, and one of the most significant changed is new sciences. As a result, there are many subjects studying at school. So, some people believe that school time should be used in learning crucial subjects instead of traditional and easy subjects such as science of food. I strongly agree with this opinion.

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some students prefer to study in a university located away from their hometown. Others prefer to stay and study in their hometown.

Many students think it is better to study abroad, while others believe is has many difficulties. In this essay I will discuss both views and give my opinion.

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