IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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Tuition for healthy children usually has top priority in most countries. However, teaching students with disabilities or mental issues is more difficult and even more important to support and develop. Which viewpoint do you agree with? use specific reasons and examples to support your answer?

In many countries, educating normal students have been a top priorities. While, other believe that we should focus more on developing the disable or mentally retard students. Nevertheless, in my opinion, due to equality among the abnormal students in the society and having a sense of independence supporting them could be the most appropriate choice.

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‘Some schools are very strict about their school uniforms and the appearance of their pupils, while other schools have a very relaxed dress code. What are the advantages and disadvantages of children of having a school uniform?

Almost all of damocracy countries, it is stated in the constitution that all man is eqaul and the freedom of expressions are protected by the government. To pursue that notion, some school do not bother with students about their attire or apperances too much. However, other schools, especially elite, have a stringent dress code and even hairstyle. While these principles can be advantages and disadvantages, it mainly depends on both students and authorities' actions toward the rules.

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Global warming is one of the biggest threats human face in the 21st century and sea levels are continuing to rise at alarming rates. What problems are associated with this and what are some possible solutions.

In today’s rapidly changing world, the issue of has attracted significant public attention. People hold various opinions regarding, and the debate around this topic has become increasingly widespread. Although viewpoints may differ, it is essential to examine the main arguments related to this matter. Therefore, this essay will analyse the key aspects of the issue and present a well-reasoned conclusion.

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With the increased global demand in oil and gas, undiscovered areas of the world should be opened up to access more resources. To what extend do you agree?

In the contemporary world, available means of natural resources in the world is used to be discovered.

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The news media have become more influential in people’s lives, some people think it’s a negative development. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is argue that the news media, which effects people's lives more influential can bring negative development. I strongly agree with this view because it could limit people's thought and fake news can make people confused.

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? “When people succeed, it is entirely because of hard work. Luck has nothing to do with their success.” Use specific reasons and examples to explain your position.

Many people tend to belive most of the success comes from luck. They see only the outcome not the hardwork and dedication that has been gave upon. I partitally belive in this statement. A little amount of luck can play huge role in overall success.

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Some children spend hours every day on thier smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think it is a positive or a negative development?

Over usage of mobile phones by youngsters is a topic to discuss in many countries. I strongly agree with the idea. The phenomenon has pros and cons, but this essay will contend that on balance, the advantages of using mobile phones outweigh the negatives.

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Are sports essential in school life for children .Some people believe that sport is an essential part of school life for children, while others feel it should be purely optional. Discuss these opposing views and give your own opinion. You should give reasons for your answer, and include ideas and examples from your own knowledge and experience.

For the student curriculum has become a contentious issue in people's lives. It is widely argued by some people that games are important in school life for kids. While others contend that it is not that important for students, it depends on their opinion. I strongly agree with the former perspective because it offers physical activities and a healthy their life style. This essay will elucidate both views before reaching a conclusion.

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Some people believe that school should concentrate on teaching students academic subjects that will be useful fot their future career. Other people think that subjects such as music and sports are also necessary. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Nowadays, There is a debate about school should concentrate on teaching students academic subjects rather than subjects such as music and sports because they think it wil be useful to students’ career. This eassay will discuss both views and give my opinion.

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Some people think that museums should be enjoyable places to entertain people, while others beilieve that the purpose of the museums is to educate. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Certain individuals are of the opinion that museums are meant for entertainment. Others, however, think that such places are used for educational purposes. I think the latter holds more water. The essay below will discuss both views and then give a conclusion.

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Explain some of the ways in which humans are damaging the environment. What can governments do to address these problems? What can individual people do?

Nowadays, many aspects of life have changed compared to the past, and one of the most influential changes is the rise in damaging the environment. This essay will show some of the methods in which humans are harmful to the environment.

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Some people say that the experiences a child has before starting school have the most influence on their future life. Others say that experiences as a teenager, especially at school, are more influential. Discuss both views and give your own opinion?

There is no denying the fact that childrens are facing a lot of challenges while growing. While it is a commonly held belief that early phases of child growing can be impactful for his mentality, there is aso an argument that school is the most critical place for children to engage more effectivley with society members. This essay will analyse this crucial topic from both points of view and express my opinion.

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It is important for people to take risks, both in their professional lives and their personal lives. Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages?

It has been said that taking risks in professional and private life crucial. In my opinion the advantages of taking risks outweigh any potential drawbacks.

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Some people suggest that a country should try to produce all the food for its population and import as little food as possible. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, an increasing number of people are concerned about the food source, some of them support that local food instead most of import food, However, whether import food from other country is a controversial issue. My view is that government need to keep balance between local food and import food.

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These days, more people are choosing to socialise online rather than face to face. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In these days, socialising is very common amongst public. This is in two ways like, one is face to face and the other one is being in online. Recently most famous one is being through internet. In my perspective is there are advantages and disadvantages in this option.

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Should art be a mandatory subject for children in school, or is it a waste of time? Should children be encouraged to focus on art over other subjects?

One of the most significant issues today is arts, which people can not decide to add with mandatory to pupils subject, due to people aspire to encourage pupils to arts from childhood and some of them think art have to be major subject in school than others. The aim of this essay is to demonstrate both of the situation.

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A country’s first duty to its citizens is to protect them. Therefore, it is logical that defense should take up a significant proportion of the national budget. In what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is argued, that national defence system should use major fundings of a country, as protection is the primary right of its people. I completely agree to this ideology and will discuss the reasons for my agreement in this essay.

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Some university students want to learn about other subjects in addition totheir main subjects. Others believe it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for a qualification.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some university admission study extra elective courses in addition to their main subjects. In contrast, some argue that admission should focus on the main subjects to improve the quality of their studies. I believe while enlistment should improve their main courses, they should learn other subjects which can help them in life.

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Some people think it is more important to spend money on roads and motorways than on ublic transport systems such as railways and trams. To what extent do you agree and disagree?

Many consider spending money in roads and motorways is a better idea than using the funds for general transport like railways and trams. I disagree with this idea, as I believe, all of these are principle ways of transport, and should be invested in equally.

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some parents buy their children a large number of toys to play with. What are the advantage and disadvantages for the child having a large number of toys?

In today era, some of the parents are financially stable and alwasy determine to fullfil small wishes of the child especially toys so they may utilize more time with the toys and parents may continue busy in their life without getting distubance. However, this brings advantages and disadvantages for them too which I will explain further in the following section.

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