IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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In recent years, the structure of a family and the role of its members are gradually band changing. What kinds of changes can occur? Do you think these changes are positive and negative?

In the past few years, there is a gradual change of the structure of a family and their members' role. Significant change can be seen mostly in parents, since they are the foundation of the family. This might be influenced by several factors that are also changing over time. Differences such as, people has less children, mothers are able to work, stay at home fathers, and daughters pursuing higher educations, may seems extremely rare if we thought about it in the early 1900s. Many people suggest that these changes brought more of positive impact rather than negative.

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The environmental problems that today's world is facing are so great that there is little ordinary people can do to improve the situation. So governments and large organisation's should be responsible for reducing the amount of damage being done to the environment. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is believed by some that environmental issues of the globe have become a huge problem, efforts of an induvidual will not make much difference, this issue should be solved at international level. While I agree that the government and industries should take steps against environmental issues, I believe that common people should not stop finding a solutions for this.

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Internet is a great source of information and has opened up opportunities for all people to learn all over the world. Some people think all information reliable on the internet. Rest think otherwise. What is your opinion?

İt is often argued that network is a good reference for datas and has started up chances for all humans to educated all around the global.Some citizen believe all contents trustable on the Cloud .Rest asserted that on the other hand.I think that it isn’t true for taking knowledge from internet.İn this essay I will explain with the reasons that why ı think my argument is true.

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Topic 01.It is often thought that the increase in juvenile crime can be attributed to violence in the media. What do you think is the reason for a growth in the rate of juvenile crime? What solutions can you offer to deal with this situation?

It is agrued that a significant increase of violent videos in the social media contributes to soar teenager crime. As far as I believe that it should be one of key reasons to deteriorate in juvenile crime. This essay will examine how sentitive content affects to younger generation and provides viable solutions.

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Interview form the basic selection criteria for most large companies. However, some people think that interview is not a reliable method of choosing whom to employ and there are better methods. To what extent to you agree or disagree?

There are some people that believe ,conducting interviews as a candidate selection criteria, is not the right method for employment and that, there are better ways of hiring employees, Even though, it is a primary stage of job hiring process in big companies. I do not completely agree with this statement, as I believe, interviews should continue to be conducted, although it should not be the only criteria of selection.

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Some people believe that wild animals should not be kept in zoos or other man-made environments as there is no longer a need for them in the 21st century. Do you agree or disagree?

It is often stated that animals should not be held in restricted areas, such as zoos or under protection surroundings. I agree with this view because these animals suffer from being in these areas, although the threat of hunters and food shortages in their habitats should also be taken into account.

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An increasing number of schools provide tablets and laptop computers forstudents to use in school, replacing books and other printed materials likeexams and assignments.What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend?

Nowadays, most schools provide tablets and laptops as a replacement, to printed books and documents, including tests papers and projects. This shift in teaching methods, have changed the ways of learning and distributing knowledge.

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Some experts believe it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary schools rather than secondary school. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, some people prefer make sure their children start to learn foreign language in primary school to secondary school. In my opinion, there are more advantages than disadvantages teaching other language in primary school, for example, young age is easier to change, have more duration to exercise, and can implement in more time. However, there are more disadvantages like reducing playing time and forgetting their primary culture.

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1.Some people think that it is more important to plant trees in open spaces in towns and cities than to build more housing. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, an increasing amount of people face the large stress from working . Several residents hope that parks and gardens , which are closed to the city center , can be placed by residential block , but someone disagree the claim. Overall , I think these public facilities are necessary for us.

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Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

During the age of data exploration, the possibility of information sharing is debatable. Some persons insist that it should benefit to various aspects, such as science, business and education, but someone argue that it is too vital if sharing freely. This essay will discuss the both sides of the argument and provide reasons why sometimes it is very dangerous to the mankind.

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Some people believe that robots are very important for the future of human development, while others believe that they are dangerous and have a negative impact on society. Discuss both perspectives and give your opinion.

Robot industries are developing rapidly, so they play a vital role on our lives. However, some individuals opine that robots would casuse disasterous influence on our community. This essay will examine both sides and provide my opinion.

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More people are shopping online today than ever before. Why do people choose to shop this way? Are there any disadvantages to shopping online? Provide your opinion and use specific reasons and examples.

Online shopping has became vary popular among today's fast pacing era. There are many reasons for diverting towards online shopping. Although this trend has a few detrimental effects, I believe that overall it is benefitial. Its advantages ,disadvantages and reasons are discussed further in this essay.

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the number of students that read books for fun has dropped dramatically in recent years.What are the reasons and how can we encourage children to read more?

Nowadays, students are not getting attracted very much by reading books in their leisure time. In my opinion, there are some factors that affect students to enjoy reading, however, they could be changed by the given strategies of the issue.

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The most important aim of science should be to improve people's lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Some argue that the most significant duty of science should be focusing on enhancing people’s quality of life. I strongly agree with that and think the final result of scientific research has main effect to humans life I completely agree and believe that the outcomes of scientific research have a significant impact on human life.

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“Although more and more people read news on the Internet, newspapers will remain the most important source of news. Do you agree or disagree?”

Advanced world have supplemented number of ways through which a person could easily find out what is going on around the world. While some people believe that internet plays a major role in spreading the news across the globe, others believe that newspaper is still the significant player in this area and I agree with this point of view. I will discuss both the sides of my opinion in the below paragraphs.

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In some countries, it can be very difficult for people over the age of 50 to get good jobs, despite their experience. What do you think are the causes of this proble

In many societies, finding an adequate career after the age of so can be complex for individuals, although they are skilled. The principal cause of this problem is high expectations among elderlies; therefore, a possible solution for it is that they try to be more realistic.

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Some people think that parents should teach their children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the best place to learn this. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

In recent years, the issue of who responsible teach children how to be good members of society has emerged as a matter of significant concern to the general public. While some individuals maintain that parents should teach children how to become good citizens, some others content that school is school is the appropriate place to learn how to be a good citizens. This essay aims to comprehensive analysis of these differing viewpoints.

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Some believe that the government should support artists like musicians, painters, and poets, while others argue that this a waste of money. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

In recent years, the issue of the leadership's investment in money has emerged as a matter of significant concern to the general public. While some individuals maintain that the lawmakers should support money for artists such as musicians, painters, and poets, I content that the government should give money to the health care system. This essay aims to provide a comprehensive analysis of these differing viewpoints.

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Some people think that competition at work, at school and in daily life is a good thing. Others believe that we should try to cooperate more, rather than competing against each other. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Some Individuals believe that challinging at work, at school and in normal life is something good, but others think that cooperation is much important than challinging toward each other. I clearly agree that cooperation is essential in all aspects of life.

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Some people prefer to carefully plan activities in their free time others think it’s a waste of time. Discuss both views and give your answer?

In my opinion, some people can prefer planning how to spend their free time, but it can also be people which thinks that it is a useless waste of hour. They think that just scrolling the social media’s in their phones is the most interesting and useful thing. Of course, not everyone thinks like that , as folk who actually enjoy planning and doing something useful and fascinating.

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