IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

Different sports has their different playing rules. While some are practiced within a group of members, there are others which are played with only one person in field. At present there is an opinion that being in activites with a team is better than being a lone wolf. Personally, I happily go with this view, however, forthcoming paragraphs will shed light on both viewpoints....
Advancement in technology have made our life effortless. In many nations, majority of people now prefer to make payment or pay bills through mobile applications. Though this advancement have some demrits in making online payments, its merits far outweigh them. To begin with, there are number of advantages of using apps for making payments, paying bills or shopping online. Firstly, paying online using apps through our comfort zone. In other words, we do not have to stand in long queue to pay for telephone bills, now we can pay online just by single click on phone. This saves humankind time and energy. Secondly, payment through apps saves money. Nowadays, many apps offers discount and cashback while using app to pay bills. For instance, I get 5% discount for paying my first telephone bill through Gpay app. Thus, it is clear that E-payment saves time and are more accessible and inclusive. On the other hand, there are several demerits of using apps for paying bills especially for older people. They are not very familier with the latest technology and its various applications. This made elderly more prone to frauds while making transactions and paying bills. To site an example, I had teach my grandfather multiple times how to use banking apps, but still he got confused. Therefore, online payment may be unsuitable for most older people. Moreover, there is always a risk of fraud. If the phone gets stolen, the information saved on it could be misused. To conclude, it is becoming popular among people to use mobile apps for paying bills. Even though it has some negative sides, it saves humankind time , energy and money. Hence, its merits by far outweigh the disadvantages....
In these days, already all the population visit to other regions for enjoy. Some people think that this trip affects to countries badly. I believe that travelling to any country for any people would provide great returns for people. I will elaborate on my opinion in the further paragraphs....
Advertising has become an integral part of a global corporate world and it has may advantages as well as drawbacks which makes people from all the word to think about it's implementation. In current compitative word each and every enterprise, company or organisation look a way to publish their new products in a consumer oriented market and to gain a success in launching the product or to provide the information to the consumer which they are looking from the product....
Some people argue that technology has raised the gap between the wealthy and the poor people, while others belive believe (spelling) that is decreasing the gap between them. The widevariety of technological advancements is reshaping our lives and there are strengths and weaknesses with of both ideas. Certain inventions and developments have an important role in filling the gap between peopleof different income levels. Some technologies are accessible to all people due to their availability at cheap rate. The Internet, for example, is affordable to almost all sections of societyand certain places such as airports, bus stations and restaurants have Wifi wi-fi spots option where the Internet is freely available. Furthermore, modern technologies have provided more opportunities for everyone to improve their incomes and to develop different types of businessesregardless of financial status. With mobile applications like Uber anyone can join business whether they have a car or not. (whether is like ‘if’) Despite the positive impacts, technology can also have many disadvantages. A large numberof manufacturing companies are gradually shifting from hiring human labor to machines for different production of different items. Rapid advances in robotics and artificial intelligence had led to a decline in people's work hours decline. One A factory in China has replaced 90% of its human workers with robots.- the idea is good but it should be more developed, the example is only one sentence. Can you think of developing it more? Moreover, advanced treatments and medicines have been developed to cure deadly diseases but their cost is to too expensive and inaccessible for the poor people (or: for the poor). For instance, people dye die if they suffer from chronic illnesses such as asthma or cancer without receiving medical care because it is to too expensive. To sum up, I strongly believe that the true is lies somewhere in the middle in-between and it depends on which the point of view are we looking ( essay should be impersonalized as much as possible) considered when thinking about at the advancement in technology....
The human body requires a balanced diet. An unhealthy diet can cause various health problems such as increase in weight. Necessary steps are required to alleviate this issue and the causes are also discussed in this essay....
Internet makes whole world into tiny village and purchacing things is become very easy and conveinent due to online shopping .But it has its own pros and cons ,will discuss in this essay....
Nowadays modern music is widely common and you can tolisten it everywhere spontaneously. People divided into two thoughts about modern rap. Most of them say it is the most harmful and have so many disadvantages to the young generation, however, others reckon that modern melody affects only on positive sides of listeners....
ELDERLY PEOPLE USED TO LIVE IN PLACE WHEREAS ARE HEALTHY PROFESSIONALS TO TAKE CARE OF THEM. BRITAIN IS A NATION THAT THIS KIND OF SCENARIO IS NORMALLY ACCEPTED. THE COSTS OF THIS CARE ARE SOMETIMES RESPONSABILITY OF GOVERNMENT ALTHOUGH FAMILIES HAVE DUTY ABOUT THIS BILL....
Although many entrepreneurs have put most of their efforts maximizing profits, I believe that businesses should take social responsibilities as one of their priorities for the following reasons....
It is known, that every human being needs a roof above their heads. It would be extremely difficult to live only in hotels throughout the whole life. That is why people decide to rent or buy a house. However, there are places where the majority prefers renting. Both options have its pros and cons....
Young people make the decision to spend more free time doing volunteer community work, instead of playing computer games and watching movies on the smartphone. I deeply agree that this kind of activities can definitely help adolescences collect many skills, knowledges and experiences....
It is irrefutable that museums in today society are the importance to show the various variety .However it can be seen that the local people do not seen to go these sites.This essay will discuss why locals do not visit museums and historical buildings and also suggest some ways to attract them. To begin with, there are several reason why local members do not visit the local places of history and museums.First and foremost people are busy with their domestic work and they are happy with their sedentary lifestyle.For example, it should be noted that london of a number of museums and historical buildings, the local people do not visit them, because majority of population in london is working.They have long working hours and after coming back from work they do not have more energy .On the other hand , Tourist are in a city to explore in a city all place of interest.So ,they will definitely visit museums. To commence with, there are several ways to attract people to museums and historical place.For instance, school can give their students assignment related to the history culture and tradition of their native place.This will encourage most parents to take their children to museums to collect use full information.However local administration can conduct various exhibition at these place to attract local people this exhibition product can handmade to attract the locals. Conclude,local people do not visit local museums and historical sites there are busy with their life .We can use various ways to get them interested....
Physical activities are a very important part of day especially for young children. Every parent has hard time deciding on which after-school activities their kids should go. There are lots of diverse classes and the main difference between them is their structure – group or private lessons. I fully agree with the statement that team activities can teach more practical and life skills than activities played alone....
In the contemporary era, owning a car is not only a symbol of social status but also a necessity to travel by people instead of using public transport. There are many reasons for this tendency and authorities should take some meausre to overcome this problem....