IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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Some people say that economic growth is the only way to end hunger and poverty, while others say that economic growth is damaging the environment so it should be stopped. Discuss both views and give your opinion. Level: Medium

In this modern era, especially after the human experienced industrial revolution, economic growth have been regarded as a key driver to eliminate hunger and poverty. On the other hand, people around the globe also had learned lessons and noticed serious side effects of economic growth, environmental pollution. Although admitting its negative byproduct, I still believe economic growth plays essential role to let people with ample supply of food and other essential needs.

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These days, people work in more than one job , and often change careers several times during their life. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this ?

There is no denying the fact that some groups are straggling with several jobs for better life. While it is some individuals think widely they also need to have multiple careers in their cv. This essay will describe the both of the advantages and disadvantages in this topic.

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In many countries crime is increasing. What are the main reasons for this? What can be done to improve the situation? Support your position with relevant examples and include your own experience.

Nowadays, crime is increasing in many countries around the world.

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Please evaluate this essay. Space exploration costs tax payers an exorbitant amount of money each year. What are the advantages and disadvantages of spending money on the space exploration.

In recent years, the importance of space exploration has become significantly increased, which leads to economic burden for tax payers. There are both upsides and downsides of space researchs. From my stadpoint, spending too much on space studies are unneccessary, and I will elaborate on my reasons for thinking so in the following essay.

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The most effective way to solve the current traffic and pollution problems in cities is to encourage people to move from the suburbs or countryside into the city centre. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There is a trend for vast majority of people to hold an opinion that the relocation of citizens from suburbs to megapolices will have possitive environmental effect and help to resolve the traffic and contamination obstacles. I do not agree with this viewpoit and I strongly believe that mass migration will have controversial effect due to that requires dramatically encreasing existed urban areas. In addition, I confirmed that, developing greenenrgy transport became vital nowadays.

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Some people say that it is not possible to be happy without money while other things that money does not guarantee happiness. Discuss both views and give your opinion. Give reason for your answer and include any relevant example from your own knowledge or experience.

First of all, Some people say money does not bringing the happiness. In the opposite, they say money does bring a happyiness. In my perspectives, It is various perspectives to define their own definition about what is happiness.

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some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters( such as food, clothes and entertainment) is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. other people believe that it is important for children to make decisions about matters that affect them. discuss both these views and give your own opinion

Nowadays, raising their kids has many ways to teach them become mature. Some people argue that allowing children to choose their favorite things on daily life, such as food, customs, and interests, is possibly to become a selfish person in society, while other people say that children need to consider about what’s truely influence themselves. In this essay, I will discuss both views and present my own opinions.

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Some people believe that students should be allowed to evaluate their teachers, while others think this could lead to a loss of respect and authority. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

"There is no denying the fact that evaluating teachers by students is important for improving education. While it is a commonly held belief that this could lead to misbehavior and a loss of control, there is also an argument that it could provide valuable feedback for teachers.

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Technology has enabled the mass production of goods with the use of machines. Discuss the merits and demerits of mechanized production.

Machinery manufacturing improves an automated production of commodities due to the fast pace of technology advancement, enabling growth in quantity of products. I think that robotic production grants access to social flourishing. Conversely, it also gives job losses due to human labour replacement by machinery one.

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The money spent by the governments on space programmes would be better spent on vital public services such as schools and hospitals. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The expenses made by government to benefit interplanetary purposes haw excited the support made to schools and essential health service's. I personally completely agree to this proposition. The amount of money spent on space issues haw increased lately and this affects the welfare of the community.

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Young people are having less social contact with older people today. Why is this ?what could be done to improve it?

There is a widely debated topic that most younger people are not spending their time with old people. The main reason for this consequence is technology and the insufficiency of time. This essay will explore possible solutions for this repercussion.

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Young people are having less social contact with older people today. What are the reasons behind this situation, and what could be done to improve it?

There is widely debated topic that most younger people are not spending their time with old people. The main reason for this consequence is technology and insufficiency of time. This essay will explore possible solutions for this repercussion.

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In recent years, there has been a rise in the popularity of second-hand clothing amongst the younger generation. Why is this happening? Do you think it’s a positive or negative development?

Nowadays, a number of countries people like used clothes because of the brand. In recent years, it becoming popular to people, specifically to young generation. The generation giving priority to brand because they think it represent their status. I think it is a positive development due to it inspire them to become rich.

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Many people think that libraries are essential for society. Others, however, disagree and say that it is more practical to access information on computers, while libraries are a waste of money and resources. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Earlier, libraries used to be a very important place for all age groups. One could find all sorts of books from comics to competitive exams. But with the advancement in technology, many people believe librariers are a waste of money and resources. The society is divided whether libraries are essential or not.

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Today, many people around the globe adapt the Korean culture too much. What problem is associated with this? What can be done about this?

There is no denying the fact that there are some group of individuals become adaptable for other culture such as Korean culture. This essay will discuss the possible problems and the solutions and it will express my own perspective as well.

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Government should focus their spending on public service rather than on arts such as music and painting. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people believe that the government should focus their money on public service rather than on the arts. This essay will discuss both views. And i believe that both of them are important to spend on and improve them.

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These days, a majority of animals are kept in zoos in order to save them from becoming extinct. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

Today many animals are being kept in the zoo in order to prevent them from extinction.

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The internet has changed the world and how people live today. Give the advantages and disadvantages of the internet.

The Internet is a very different place today. It is changed the word and people lives. This essay will give the advantages and disadvantages of the Internet.

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Some people believe that schools are no longer necessary because students can study well at home through the Internet. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some dissenting voices believe that students can learn through Internet from their home instead of going to the school. Nevertheless, I totally disagree with this view points, due to the overall development of children, and to build a discipline and punctuality, claiming that school plays a crucial role in build the future of the students. Therefore, my standpoints will be elaborated with reason and examples in the upcoming paragraph.

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Some people believe that social media has improved communication, while others think it has caused more problems than benefits.

Nowadays, many individuals are communicating through social media. This situation has generated a considerable debate regarding the issues of social media. This essay identifies the benefits and deficits of social media.

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