IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

band

Nowadays, not enough students choose science subjects in university in many countries. What are the reasons for this problem? What are the effects on society?

These days, many aspects of life have changed compared to the past, and one of the most influential changes is the poor of studying science subjects in university. This essay will show some reasons for this problem and effects on society.

band

Some people believe that famous celebrities are poor role models for teenagers, while others think that they can be a source of inspiration. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of celebrities as role models for young people.

Some role models have different impacts to the people, especially to the younger generations. In some ways famous people, celebrities, athletes, as we call “our role models”, form and say how we should live, enjoy life and what we should aim for. In this essay I will talk about whether famous celebrities, athletes are poor role models or people, whose path we should follow.

band

ome people believe that famous celebrities are poor role models for teenagers, while others think they can be a source of inspiration. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of celebrities as role models for young people.

Nowadays teenagers use social media almost every single day. On social media they see a lot of celebrities who are role models for young people. They often impact teenagers’ mindset, ideas, personality or inspire them. So let’s look at the advantages and disadvantages of celebrities being role models for teenagers.

band

Some people think that homework is not necessary for students' development. Do you agree or disagree?

Many individuals claim that 'additional duty', such as homework is not essential for students' development. I strongly disagree, whereas reinforcement of learning and time management are two abilities that homework improves, which in my opinion are necessary during young people maturing.

band

In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative change?

In various nations, citizens prioritize buying a house over renting it. I belive this majorly comes from the love of stability. This is a good change as it would not only garantee permanent accomodation, but also help manage our spenditure.

band

living in a country where you have to speak foreign language can cause serious social problem and practical problem. to what extern do you agree or disagree with this statement.

There is no denying the fact that spending your life outside your country where you have to speak another language can make serious social issue and practical problem. While it is a commonly held belief that speaking in foreing language could lead to a lot of problems, there is also an argument that opposes it. In my opinion, I consider that it could cause serious issue and practical problem.

band

Some people say free time activities for children should be organized by parents. Others say that children should be free to choose what they do in their free time. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Nowadays, many aspects of life have changed compare to the past, and one of the most influential changes is the rise of activities for children. Some people think parents should organized free time activities for their children, while others believe opposise of that, and that activities rely on children choosing. This essay will discuss both points and present my opinion.

band

The older generations tend to have very traditional ideas about how people should live, think and behave. However, some people believe that these ideas are not helpful in preparing younger generations for modern life. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view

In an era of rapid technological transformation, there is a growing belief that the traditional ideas are outdated and hold back the progress of the younger generation. However, I strongly disagree with this perspective. I believe that many traditional values are not only relevant but essential for success today.

band

Nowadays children watch much more television than they did in the past and spend less time on active or creative things. What are the reasons? And what measures should be taken to encourage children to spend more time on active or creative things?

There is no denying the fact that kids are watching much more television than they did in the past and let less time on creative things or other activities. This essay will discuss the reasons and the solutions.

band

It is believed that working in team enhances the skills better then working alone. Do you agree or disagree.

In today’s competitive world, partnership is often promoted as a powerful way to develop personal and professional skills. I strongly agree that working in a club enhances skills more effectively than working alone, as it encourages collaboration, improves communication abilities, and exposes entity to diverse perspectives.

band

Some people believe bicycles have a lot of advantages whereas others believe bicycles have more disadvantages. Discuss both and give your opinion.

Bicycles are a great way to improve your health. The question is, there are many people who believe bicycles have more advantages than disadvantages. In my opinion, I believe bicycles benefits are greater. In this essay, I am going to discuss both views and give my opinion.

band

Some believe that robots play a crucial role in shaping humanity’s future, whereas others argue that they pose risks and could harm society. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, robots become a comercial things. And useful for human, such as for housekeeping and for be a worker. Because of that, some people say robots play a crucial role in shaping humanity future and can gives some risks for society. In this essay writer will discuss about this argument and give an opinion.

band

Young people are spending increasing amounts of time and money on fashion trends. Is this a positive or negative development

Young people are spending increasing amounts of time and money following fashion trends.Especially, blogers spending a lot of money. They are interesting fashion trends. But they are have trend of money. This is a lot of positive development. However have negative development.

band

many people decide on a career path early in their lives and keep to it. This, they argue, leads to a more satisfying working life. To what extent do yous agree with this view? What other things can people do in order to have a satisfying working life?

Pursuing a specific career path early in life and maintaining it can be rewarding for many people, as they are more likely to have more stability and satisfying working life. I totally agree with this view for crucial reason which I will mention in this essay. Besides deciding a career path early in life, people should also choose fields that they are talented and passioned about to achieve a rewarding working life.

band

Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment; only governments and large companies can make a difference. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Only governments and large companies can improve the environment while individuals can do noting to it. I agree if the governments and the companies can fix the environment through certain policies, while I disagree with the statement that only them that can change it.

band

• Many people argue that fame, rather than social contribution, determines income today. Do you agree or disagree?

nowadays, many people argue that celebrities are paid far too much money and rather than social contrirbution , determines income today it is often argued but celebrity earn money I think this is wrong sing song , actor ,fame they entertainment but hard work however in my opinion doctor, teacher , and market trend , nurse firefighter esential workers and contribute to societyed morever celebrity earn money this wrong on the one hand they sing song actor and fame justified by talent on the other hand people between fame spark debate

band

Some people think that success in life comes from hard work and determination, while others believe that there are more important factors, such as money and appearance. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

There is no denying the fact that some people believe that success in life comes from crucial factors, such as money and appearance, while others say it comes from tough work and determination. While it is a commonly held belief that to be success in life you need to do hard work, there is also an argument that say it does not depend on hard work, it depend on money and appearance. This essay will analyse both points of view and express my opinion.

band

It is thought by some that is better to live in a city while others believe it is better to live in the countryside. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

It is considered by some that urban life is better than anywhere while there are others who think, living in countryside is much better. In my opinion, I consider that living in the cities is more reasonable than in the rural areas.

band

Some people think the money spent in developing the technology for space exploration is not justified. There are more beneficial ways to spend this money. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, many aspects of life have changed compared to the past, and the one of the most influential changes is the rise of space explration. Some people think the money spent in developing the technology for space exploration is wasting. This essay will discuss this issue and present my opinion.

band

Some people think that the teenage years are the happiest time of most people’s lives. Others think that adult life brings more happiness, in spite of greater responsibility. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Happiness is a serious business. While some opine that teenagers are by far the most happies people in their daily life, others argue that adulthood comes across with many enjoyable moments. Nveretheless, they are really busy. In my view, the younger individuals are, the happier they are.

🚀 Prepare for IELTS writing section today!

Unlimited Task 1 & Task 2 checks
Practice with essays, charts, and letters.
Personalized suggestions & mistake analysis
Spot every mistake and boost your score.
Topic ideas & vocabulary helpers
Expand your ideas and use the right words.
Progress tracking
Watch your writing improve with every practice.