IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To some extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

The variety of choices is topic to discuss in many countries recently. I strongly agree with the idea of selecting coise is waried and todays people have more choises rather than the past. The answer of this question is complex becuse the question refer generally.

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The percentage of overwieght children in western society has increased by almost 20% in the last ten years. Discuss the causes and effects of this disturbing trend

Nowadays the number of overweight less aged people is constantly surge in western society.In this essay I will discuss the main reasons of this epidemic and describe the possible effects of this problem.

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The money spent by governments on space program would be better spent on vital public services such as schools and hospitals. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, some people believe governments should give an extra fund on space program to discover new opportunity and knowledge outer space. However, others argued the authority should spend more on vital services such as a education dan public transport. I strongly believe, retaining the essential public services is important for government because it will give more benefits for people.

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With the rise of remote work and global interconnectedness, the concept of national identity is evolving. Some believe that increased interaction with other cultures weakens national pride and traditions, while others argue that it enriches understanding and fosters a more inclusive global community. Discuss both these viewpoints and offer your opinion on the future of national identity in a globalized world.

Working remotely and global interconnection have risen significantly, and it is influencing national identity. It is argued that interacting with different cultures subsides national pride and traditions. However, others think of it as an opportunity to explore new communities worldwide. In this essay, I will discuss both sides of the argument and share my thoughts about this topic.

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Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships people make? has this become a positive or negative?

In the modern world technology has impacted the way how people comunnicate with each other, making people look for individuals who can be useful to them only for certain things, which leaves a negative impact, because people also start to compare themselves to what they see on the inetrnet.

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It is important for everyone, including young people, to save money for their future.

It is argued that investing and saving money for the far future is extremely essential for everybody, and it is equally crucial for younger individuals. This essay totally agrees with the statement because this idea will benefit their life’s quality and improve every aspect, and it will result in their academic life when they grow up.

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Access to clean water is a basic human right. Therefore, every home should have a water supply that is provided free of charge. Do you agree or disagree?

Any house should have free water supplies provided for people because of precised rules in life.

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Some people think news has no connection to people's lives, so it is a waste of time to read the news in newspapers and watch television news programs. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

A sum of people have the conclusion that reading or watching news is wasteful, and because of that, people are showing an irrelevant opinion.

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Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

In recent years, a growing number of people who have deceases tend to traditional medicines and treatment rather than visiting their usual doctor. I personally believe that society should trust only professionals who have diploma and an incredible experience in the area they treat people.

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The development of tourism contributed to English becoming the mostprominent language in the world. Some people think this will lead toEnglish becoming the only language to be spoken globally. What are the advantages and disadvantages to having one language in the world?

In the modern world, someone said that the development of torism made English the language of the world. So I can't help imagine a world where everyone speaks the same language. This idea presents a mix of significant advantages and considerable drawbacks which both could be easily seen.

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In some countries young people are encouraged to travel or work for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this .

Nowadays, students are guided to take a yearly break after their primary education, and spend that time in travel or gaining work exprience. This trend has several benefits such as an opportunity to reflect on decisions and financial gains, and certain drawbacks like increased drive to discontinue further education and loss of connection with the curriculum.

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Some people believe that in order to give opportunities to new generations companies should encourage high level employees who are older than 55 to retire. Do you agree or disagree?

Some folk think that senior employees who are between the age of 55 or more should retire early just to give a role opportunity to the younger generation. I disagree with the opinion because, it will increase the financial burden on the government and tax payers also, there are many ways in which they can get chances to become successful.

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ome people think that radio has become out of date and there is no need to listen to the radio for entertainment and news. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In the past, radio was considered an important and convenient source of information. Although many people believe that radio is outdated due to new technologies, I disagree. I think radio will continue to play an important role in the future.

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the gragh below shows the number of universitiy graduates in Canada from 1992 to 2007.

This graph demonstrates the number of men and women who graduated from 1992 to 2007 in Canada.

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Some people believe that climate effects the person’s way of life while other believe that climate has greater impact on economy of a region. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Although the climate in the country gives impact on an individuals mental health, I agree that the climate has a big impact on the country's economical system, because it gives privileges that other countries might not get.

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art and music are considred some of the fundamental elements of all societies, and some suggest that hildren should learn them at school. Do you think art and music still have a place in today;s modern wordl of technology? Should children spend more time learning art and music at school ?

In all societies, art and music are an important element and it should be teached for kids in school, because it still has an impotant place in today's world, even though technology is nowadays becoming a big part of the world.

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Many cars nowadays are driven by computers, not people. Do you think the advantages of autonomous cars outweigh the disadvantages?

In today's time, some vehicles are being driven by computers and i dont think that is good for the society, because technology can't react the same as a person would and electricaly connected objects can shut down any minute.

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Nowadays there is a trend that reports of media focus on problems and emergencies rather than positive development . Some people think it is harmful to individuals and to society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, many news outlets tend to highlight problems, crises, and emergencies instead of positive achievements. Although I believe that such reporting can negatively affect individuals and society, it is also important because it raises awareness about real issues.

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Many Offenders commit more crime after serving the first punishments. Why is this happening and what measures can be taken to tackle this problems.

The number of criminal activities increases after criminals get their first punishments for doing crimes. The primary cause of this problem is lack of work and poor housing and solutions to this are to help to look for job, provide education and money for work training.

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Some people think the best option is to accept a difficult situation, such as having a job they do not enjoy or not having enough money. Others believe it is better to try to make such situations better. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

I believe that doing something you don't like everyday will have a huge impact on your daily life, especially if its in work. Some people think it's best to accept it. While otherothers suggest istrying to try and make such situations better. In this essay, I'll explain both points andpoints, give examples from my own knowledge, and give my opinion at the end. Firstly, one's attitude and actionactions can changeschange very quickly, so, itsso it's important to solve any personal problem. For instance, stressing about a job they hate doing, which they may do bad at it, and itbadly at, shifts their mood instantly. The best possible choice, is to resign and find another workjob or another place. Furthermore, your mood will change significantly for the better, and you'reyour day will become smoother. Additionally, being happy is important for your health, and you'll be way more confident. Secondly, not changing something you dislike doing or seeing everyday, will have a huge impact in...

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