IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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Nowadays, more people are choosing to study abroad. What are the advantages and disadvantages of studying in another country?

In modern era, many people prefer to persuade their studies abroad, rather than, getting education in hometown. This situation brings certain drawbacks and benefits which will be discussed in this essay.

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it is often thought that the increase in juvenile crime can be attributed to violence in the media . do you agree that this is the main cause of juvenile crime? what solutions can you offer to deal with this situation?

It is often believed that the rise in juvenile crime can be connected to violence in media.

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With the increasing use and development of new technology, many machine are new able to do the work which people used to perform. Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?

There is an ongoing debate about how the proliferation of technology has become a major affects to around the world. Some argue that new technology taken human work and brought new updates. However, technology has changed the lifestyle of humans because it is more convenient and flexible for people's lives. This essay will explore both advantages and disadvantages before reaching a conclusion.

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Some people think that the best way to reduce crime is to give longer prison sentences. Others, however, believe there are better alternative ways of reducing crime. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is considered by some that the best way to subside crime rate in societies is, locking down the criminals, while there are others who think different methods will be more appropriate to punish them than giving them longer prison sentence. In my opinion, I consider that alternative methods of punishment will be more effective than prison.

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Many people prefer to shop online rather than go to physical stores. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend?

By developing shopping platforms, many people became more into online shopping, and regressing from traditional shopping. This trend brings obvious benefits and disadvantages.

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Present a written argument or case to an educated reader with no specialist knowledge of the following topic. It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Nowadays, many adults people still cannot now about something between right and wrong. Because of that there is an opinion says, its important to teah childern the differene between right and wrong. And also say, punishment is necessary to help them learn the distincion. In this essay writer will talk about this problems and give an argument.

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Some people think that modern technoloyhas make people more sociable and others think it makes them less sociable. Discuss both views and give opinion with relevant examples

There is an ongoing debate about whether technological inventions has increased or decreased our interactions with our society. While some people believe that it has enhanced the way we socialize, others claim the opposite. In my opinion, I agree with the former view because it offers numerous platforms to support social communications. This essay will discuss both views and my opinion in detail.

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Some people say that the public funds should be spent on promoting healthy living than on the treatment of people who are ill. Do you agree or disagree?

Health plays a vital role in an individual's overall well-being and quality of life. It remains a debatable issue whether more money should be utilized on healthy living standards or on medical care. I firmly believe that more emphasis should be given to treating patients, for which explanation is in the upcoming paragraphs.

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A survey conducted for the places in which people gain access to the Internet from 1998 to 2004.

The bar chart shows the percentage of people using the Internet in 4 different locations between 1998 and 2004.

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Some people think that it is better to work for one company all your life, while others believe it is better to change jobs frequently. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

People have diffrent views on whether to stay and dedicatre your life to one place, or to be versatile and work for diffrent companies. There is no doubt that working in one place could be convenient for most of the people as you can develop further on, on the contrary,I personally, believe that constant change to workplaces will lead to success in long term.

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Many students experience stress and anxiety before major exams. What solutions can help reduce it ?

Due to academic pressure, a significant number of students suffer from a sense of stress and anxiety, which has become a concerning trend in recent years. In this essay, I will disclose my resolutions comprehensively.

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It is important for people to take risks, both in their professional lives and their personal lives. Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages?

There is controversy over whether taking risks are crucial for individuals in their careers and perivet lives. From my perspective, I firmly believe that the advantages are outweigh the disadvantages because many opportunities are provieded from taking risks like better life and keeping people work effectively.

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Some people think that government funding for schools should be spent on science subjects rather than on other subjects. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

In our modern society the budget of the governement become precious and should be use carefully. I partially agree to the statement.I will begin by explaing how science is important and usefull then showing that some other topics can be also important.

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We have long imagined the possibility that life exists on other planets . Do you believe that there is life in the universe outside of earth? What would be the implications of proving that alien life exists? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.

In the prevailing era, scientists are striving to explore other creature of the nature in the universe with the help of satellites, and aerospace places. There are some assumptions made by the scientists that aliens are exist outside the earth. This essay will not only discuss the implication of its existence but also provide insights into causes.

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The use of social media is replacing face-to-face interaction among many people in society. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

The social media is good and bad think at the same , because social media it help to much in many things like when someone want to study or do some research , in social media can find an teacher do some video about the subject of the research, also it help when someone need to learn new language he can contact a teacher from social media who are famous about the think that he do , social media it's good for person who have new project and he need people to know it , it's a good idea to do an advertisement or promot a video also i will give an example like i know a famous women i send her message and i send the product to her to do for me an advertisement (Ad) because she have on instagram or tiktok more than 100000 of peolpe follow her, also she is living in the same town , so now social media it help me to growth my project and much of people they know the project after the Ad , and i paid the famous person for this Ad and she is making benefit for me and for her .

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Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment; only Government and large companies can make difference. To what extend do you agree or disagree.

There is a strong conviction in modern society, that big companies alongside with government are the only things to address environmental problems. But in my opinion mere people could also affect on a nature's state in a better way by collectively controlling their daily practices and organizing community initiatives.

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Most people accept that we now live in a globalised world but not everyone agrees this is beneficial. To what extent is globalisation a positive or negative development? Give reasons for your answers and include relevant examples from your knowledge or experience

As public safety is of the highest importance, it is often necessary to test new products on animals. It is better for a few animals to suffer from for human life to be placed at risk by untested products. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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Some feel that cities should be designed to be beautiful while others feel their functionality is more important. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

Cities can be beautiful and creat many jobs. The question is, some people believe cities must be beautiful while other people blieve the econimcs are more essential than beauty. In my opinion, I believe cities can be focused on their beauty also growing their econmics. In this essay, we are going to discuss both views and give my opinion.

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Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement

Nowdays it’s argued that government should invest on railways instead of roads. Complicated and disorganized road systems that made in 21th. century have caused this thought in people’s mind. However, I totally disagree with this idea. Despite all the negative sides of roads it’s clear that its way logical than using railways.

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In many cities the use of video cameras in public places is being increased in order to reduce crime, but some people believe that these measures restrict our individual freedom. Do the benefits of increased security outweigh the drawbacks?

It is true that active usage of surveillance cameras have brought a lot of distress among citizens where it is uncomfortable to be pointed out with the cameras, on counterpart, there are plenty of evidences where, these devices helped to keep sanity of the people over the long periods of time.

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