IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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Some sports are extremely dangerous but many people still like them very much. Why do people take part in dangerous sports? Give some suggestions on how to deal with these dangers.

It is widely believed that many sports are very risky but most of people still want to try it. From my perspective, I think people want to explore their life by trying more sports and overcome their fear. This essay will discuss the reasons followed by some strageties to play safely.

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As child obesity becomes a serious health issue in today’s society, some people feel that TV commercials advertising junk food aimed at kids should not be shown before 9pm. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?

Nowadays, High level of obesity can seen in kids and this is a major concer for parents as well as community. Many individuals believe that the reason behind this trend is TV advertisement and to prevent this authorities should put limitations on timing and should not be shown before 9pm. I am totally agree with this and in this essay I will discuss why it is important.

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Some people say that the Internet has positive points, while others say it has negative effects. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

In rapidly changing world, lifestyles have changed over the years, and some people believe that this modern way of life has negative consequences for family life. Although it is important to acknowladge that contemparary lifestyle bring certain benefits, I consider that drawbacks of this trend overweigh the advantages.

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Human activities have negative effects on plant and animal species. Some people think it is too late to do anything about this problem. Others believe that effective measures can be taken to improvw this situation. Discuss both view and give our opinion.

These days there is an opinion, the human activities are destroying the fauna and flora, some think it is over to solve this issue, but others trust the way to save the environment. I personally believe that we can fix it still and in this essay, I will elaborate on the reasons as to why I think so.

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"Some people think that the government should provide free education at every level. Others believe that it is the responsibility of individuals to pay for their education. Discuss both views and give your own opinion."

Some community members believe that the government should introduce chargeless education at every level. However, an undeniable number of people think that paying the tuitions is a personal resposibility. I belive that the government shuld handle the education fees.

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Hard work and determination are the main requirements for success in life. Others think other factors are more important. Discuss both views?

In the modern world, there is an ongoing debate about whether hard work and determination are the main requirements for sucess in life or other factors are more important. This trend has become increasingly relevant in today's society. In this essay, I will examine both perspectives about this issue.

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Some people consider price as the most important thing to think about when buying product (such as cell phone) or service (medical treament). Do you agree or disagree?

Some people consider price as the most important thing to think about when buying product (such as cell phone) or service (medical treatment). Do you agree or disagree?

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Nowadays, most information is available online, whereas in the past knowledge was used to be stored in books and on paper. Do you think the advantages of this situation outweigh its disadvantages?

In the modern world, internet play an important role in this digital era. Most of people only spent few second by searching any information online, while 20 (twenthy) years ago books, paper and magazine are the one and only information their used. for now digitalization had so many impact in our daily activities, everything seems easiest with online information, i strongly agree with this argument and i write down my opinion below.

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Some people think that killing animals for food is cruel, but others claim that animals are a necessary part of diet. What is your opinion?

rom the past until now, community must live from eating. It means whatever you can digest to make your body grow. Other community believe population can only choose to be vegetarian because it won't kill any animals. I am convinced and i will examine it.

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In many countries,people are now living longer than ever before. some people say ageing population create problems for government.Other people think there are benefits if society has more elderly people. To what extent do the advantages of having angeing population outwight the disadvantages.

In this contemporary world,ageing population is one of the most conspicuous issues. Yet, the issue of whether the drawbacks of this trend are eclipsed by its benefits,has become an integral part of acontentious never-ending debate among people. It is my opinion that although elderly citizens has a myriad of undeniable pitfalls,its advantures are more sifnificant.

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The best way to protect the environment is to use local resource, such as food or building materials rather than transporting resources from other places. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

in recent years, environmental issue has been a global concern. some people argue that the most effective way to save the environment is by utilising local resources, such as food and construction materials. This essay completely agree with the notion, and I believe the use of local resources is the most efficiant method to protect the nature.

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ou should spend about 40 minutes on this task. In many countries, the number of people suffering from stress is increasing. What do you think are the causes of this problem and what measures could be taken to tackle it? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

There is no denying the fact that anxity has became more common. This essay well descuss why do some people feel stress, and what should do to solve this issue? To begin with, there are many causes for this proplem. Firstly, life has many paths to success and a lot of human do not know what path should they take ,and the scared feeling of take the wrong path leads to feel anxity and this is the most popular reason for it. In other words, life became more comblicated than it was in recent years. In addition, you have a lot of thing and many tasks to do. For example, you have to work 8 hours daily, and after that you have to send time with your family members and these one of many things you must do every week. According to a study conducted in Saudi Arabia found that citizens how feel anxity are 76 percentage and that is a huge number. In terms of what should we do to tackle this issue, the government must take this problem into consideration. It also possible to say that fathers hav...

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In countries all over the world, the volume of road traffic is increasing at a faster rate than new roads are built. What are the causes of this problem? What are some potential solutions?

Globally,countries are experiencing traffic in roads at an increasing rate than how new roads are being built.This has led to a lot of issues which will be discussed in this essay and how the problems can be prevented and goal met.

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Some businesses find that their new employees lack basic interpersonal skills such as cooperative skills. What are the causes? Suggest possible solutions. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

In businesses, a skillset and knowledge packages owned by new employees will determine the success of doing some tasks. Various skillset, both harskill and softskill, need to be complemented and improved by new employees. For hardskill, the competencies to solve a job with high quality is mandatory. However, softskill which is a skill beyond technical aspect is also crucial, mainly related to interpersonal skill. In this context, to build a strong foundation of those two skill for new employees is challengng and need to be match with the industry needs. For new employees, hardskill can be honed by building the academic skill from formal education. Nevertheles, softskill like interpersonal skill need to be improved by increasing a lot of experiences.

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These days many people interested in buying organic food even though it is often more expensive than conventionally produced food What are some reason people prefer organic food ? Do you think it is important to buy organic food despite the higher price?

In this contemporary era, people are becoming more health conscious because of that, many of them are interested in buying organic food rather than produced food, regardless of their higher price. However, In my opinion, due to the use of natural fertilizers for production, and holds its richness in nutrient, people are preferring to buy organic food. Also, it is crucial to consume healthy food in order to maintain proper health despite of higher price.

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Many people believe that international tourism is a bad thing for their country. What are the reasons? Sollutions to change negative acttitudes?

Some people argue that international tourism is not a good option for their country and would prefer an internal form. On the other hand, other ones' tought is that foreigns are a fundamental resource for their Nation.

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Environmental problems are too big for individual countries or individual people to address. In the other word, we have reached the stage where the only way to protect the environment is at an international level. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Environmental problems are considered as a big issue for both country and people individually. At this point we have reached a level that the only manner to protect this is at an international level. I completely agree with the above notion and therfore present some valid points.

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People today move to new cities or new countries more than ever before. What challenges do they experience? What strategies are there to meet these challenges? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant ideas from your own knowledge or experience.

In day to day life a lot of individuals are migrating to various states in such of good education and a better paying jod in order to sustain one's living starndards and achieve thr life goals set in place.In as much as looking for greener pastures has its benefits, there are various drawbacks that come with it.

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Some people believe that starting school at an earlier age is very beneficial for children,while others believe that children must stay home and attend to school at the age of 7. In your opinion, what are the advantages of attending school before the age of 7

Quite a number of people have an belief that sending children to school in their small age is good for them where as others thinks that babies stay home untill 7 years. The question that arisses here is - advantages of attending schools before seven. I will discuss my opinion in the forthcoming paragraph with relevant illustraions.

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The best way to solve the traffic and transportation problem is to encourage people to live in cities rather than suburbs or countryside. What are the effects of rapid population growth in the city? How can the quality of life city dwellers be maintain?

Encouraging people to live in cities to solve the traffic and transportation problem is better than living in suburbs or coutryside.There is a main effect of the rapid population growth in the city which is pollution, and the quality of the life city can be maintained by reducing the number of transportation.

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