IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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Scientists say that junk food is harmful to people’s health. Some say the way ask people to leas fast food is educate them.while others say education doesn’t work.discuss both sides and give your opinion.

The junk food issue is old news. Everyone knows that junk food is harmful and will cause a serious health issue if it's not taken seriously.

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Some people believe that longer prison sentences are the best way to reduce crime, while others believe that there are more effective methods of preventing crime. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

In a recent survey which was conducted in my country, sixty per cent of citizens think that longer prison sentences are the best way to decrease crime.However, the other forty per cent of individuals believe that there are better ways to reduce the number of crimes in the country. In this essay, I will be discussing both views before presenting my opinion.

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Some people think that some individuals are naturally good leaders while others think individuals can learn leadership skills. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

There is an ongoing debate about whether leadership skills are innate or learnable, while some nations think that only a certain population with inborn attributes become leaders. I believe that anyone can become a leader with practice and training.

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Analysts tell us that many people today feel stressed and depressed. They think they have no control over their lives. What problems can such feelings cause for people? What remedies could you suggest?

There a lot of problems can being a bad feeling for people and there are many ways to fix it. I partially agree with this statement. This essay will provide evidence to support my opinion.

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The food travels thousands of miles from farm to consumer. Some people think it would be better to our environment and economy if people only ate only locally produced food. What extent do the advantages outweigh the disadvantage?

the food travels thousands of miles from farm to customer . Many people believe it would be better to our economy and environment if individuals ate only local food . While others prefer the food outside the country . In my view , I believe that the advantages outwigh the disadvantages because it is better to rise the economy .

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The working week should be shorter and workers should have a longer weekend. Do you agree or disagree?

Some people believe that the working week should be shorter so that employees can enjoy longer weekends. Although some people argue that working longer hours over a few days reduces productivity, I disagree because longer weekends can negatively affect motivation and workplace efficiency.

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The internet has greatly increased our access to information. To what extent do you think this is a good thing? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

it is believed that the intrernet has greatly increased our acces to information.i completely agree with this statement because it has merit rather than demerit for some reasons.

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Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives. Which viewpoint do you agree with? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

in this point i will encourages about thing because i think will advantages for seller than they just sell some products by offline because people really like online shopee in the world so we need advertisements in order to our store will find out to everyone whereas we will not get some money.

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Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school education. Others believe students should spend this time on academic studies instead. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Certain individuals think that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school education. Others believe learners should spend this time on academic studies instead. While there are two different opinions, this essay will discuss both sides.

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Cooking food is a waste of time in today’s hectic life. Fast food restaurant are helpful in modern living and it is less stressful. Do you agree or disagree?

The lifestyle of various communities has greatly changed recently. It is widely accpeted to depend on fast food restaurants, instead of preparing food at home, and their excuse is unsufficient time to cook. I completely diagree with this trend for the following reasons.

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In the future all cars, buses and truck will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

The world is changing rapidly, this includes the transportation system in various cities. In the soon future, the need for drivers to drive vehicles, will be something from the past. Driveerless system will be considered, and will replace the classic way of traveling. This altration may have some benefitis and drawbacks, which will be discussed in the following paragraphs.

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Many children today are overweight. This is a serious health problem. Give reasons for this problem and offer solutions to fix this health issue

Child obesity has a massive health problem that affects people around the world. Several children struggle with this situation. This essay will determine reasons for child obesity and suggest some solutions to fix this situation.

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Nowadays, many people with families leave their country to work abroad. Do you think the benefits of this trend outweigh the disadvantages for the families?

In modern society, many individuals choose to relocate overseas for employment, leaving their families behind in their home country. While I acknowledge that this separation can cause severe emotional strain, I believe that the advantages, such as higher earnings and superior healthcare, far outweigh the drawbacks.

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“Prevention is better than the cure.” Researching and treating disease is too costly and so it would be better to invest in preventative measures. To what extend do you agree?

Prevention is a crucial branch of any healthcare system, and it avoids the illeness before it occurs. Investing in such branch can save millions of dollars and has numerous benefits for the general health on the long term. I strongly agree with such investment rather than spending a huge budget on treatments.

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Some people think that it is necessary to travel abroad to learn about other countries, while others think that it is not necessary because all the information can be found on TV and the internet. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some community believe that it is important to learn about the overseas atmosphere through travel abroad, while others think that it is just a waste of time because we have informative television shows and the Internet to learn about other countries. I personally believe that travelling is more effective because it creates opportunities for someone to see other atmospheres with their own eyes and broaden their horizons.

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"Some people believe that university education should be free for everyone. To what extent do you agree or disagree?"

Nowadays, there has been a question whether university degree should be free for everyone. I completely agree with this view because as the number of students increase, economic of the country which provide free education significantly grow. Moreover, there are members of society who need financial support in education because the cost of the university education is high.

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In many cities, planners have separated schools, homes, shops and offices into specific areas which are widely separated from each other. Do you think the advantages of this policy outweigh the disadvantages for city residents?

There is no denying the fact that planneing towns structer is highly crucial. while it is commonly held belief that separated each bloucks for spesific need is the best way to plan the nieprghhood, there is also an argumen that mixing area more suffeciant. In these essay we will analys poth points of view and express my opinion.

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Some people think that by paying taxes they have contributed enough to their society. Others think there are other responsibilities besides paying taxes. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

There is no denying the fact that every one of us have aplucation to his community. While it is commonly held belife that paying a persent from our income is the onley thing we have to do to our city, there is also an argument opposes that we must do more than giving money for taxes. This essay will analyse this topice from both diffrente views and express my own opinion.

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When asked to choose betwee a life without work and working most of time, people would always choose not to work. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

In contemporary society, it is argued that if given a choice to live a life without any work and to work almost everyday, people will opt for not to work. I completely disagree with this statement because despite work pressure, it provide individuals to maintain relationships with peer and leadership quality will be enhanced.

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The plans below show the layout of the ground floor of a museum in 1990 and in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at

The two plans illustrate the layout of a ground floor of a museum in 1990 and how it changed by 2010. Overall, the building became more modern and visitor-friendly over the 20-year period. While some of the existing areas were renovated or replaced, several new facilities were introduced. However, the nature history room, museum office, and local history room remained in the same location.

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