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You saw an advertisement in the news for a job and you are interested to apply.

#advertisement #news #job
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing
this
 letter to apply for the post of sales manager in your company as advertised in Daily
tribune
(ancient Rome) an official elected by the plebeians to protect their interests
Tribune
 on 25th of
july
the month following June and preceding August
July
. My name is Farrukh. I have recently completed my post graduate degree in business administration from the university of
behria
. I have
also
 done six
months
Suggestion
month
 internship in the safari hotels. Fortunately, during my study period
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
also
 got a chance to go overseas for three month diploma in hotel management on scholarship. I would provide excellent services to customers. I am an honest person with effective communication skills. I am available to come for an interview at your convenience. Please let me know if you have any specific requirement regarding job hours. Hoping to get a prompt response from you! Yours faithfully, Farrukh Maqsood
Submitted by farrukh.maqsood on

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For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

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