The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in towns and cities closing. Do you agree or disagree?

In today’s world, online shopping is becoming more and more popular and trending due to multiple reasons. There is no doubt that it will lead to
closing
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the closing
of many shops in towns and cities. While some people will disagree with
this
fact, there are many others like me who thinks that
benefits
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the benefits
of online purchase
such
as multiple varieties at
single point
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a single point
and door step services will surely take over the market.
This
essay will discuss both advantages in detail.
Firstly
, as
compare
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compared
to markets where we need to visit multiple showrooms to get want we need, virtual shopping provide us varieties of options in a just a single click.
Moreover there
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Moreover, there
are
numbers
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a number
number
of different e-commerce websites specially designed to
fulfill
put in effect
fulfil
our needs.
For example
, we can compare the products, choose from different outlet, check reviews etc.
Hence
, by
this
way a consumer and a seller both can get multiple benefits.
On the other hand
, Purchased items will be delivered at our
door steps
the sill of a door; a horizontal piece of wood or stone that forms the bottom of a doorway and offers support when passing through a doorway
doorsteps
in just
couple
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a couple
of days.
Therefore
, we do not need to take time out of our busy schedule to go out and look for the things.
Secondly
, we can modify the delivery address and surprise our near ones.
For instance
, a person can deliver an online purchased gift to their parents’ home staying in
different city
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different cities
a different city
.
This
way, life can be made simpler and
happy
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happier
through technology. To conclude, both the advantages mentioned above shows that online market can easily take over
offline market
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the offline market
because it is more beneficiary not only to customers but
also
to the service providers.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • e-commerce
  • brick-and-mortar
  • physical stores
  • online retailers
  • retail apocalypse
  • digital economy
  • consumer behavior
  • sustainability
  • commercial landscape
  • high-street
  • consumer trends
  • augmented reality
  • showrooms
  • carbon footprint
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