"The chart below gives information about “Istanbul Promo plus” sales in 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant"

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The chart shows how Promo Plus in Istanbul fluctuated over a period of 12 months. It is observed that in the first month of 2007, Promo Plus

sales

stood at 200

million

turkish

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lira

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and rose slightly to reach about 225

million

in February.

This

was followed by another increase,

although

much steeper, in March when

sales

where

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were

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almost 125

million

turkish

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lira

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higher than

February

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in February

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However

this

upward trend was suddenly broken and

sales

plummeted dramatically over the

4 months to reach a little over 100

million

turkish

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lira

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in July. August

sales

showed a significant rise back to January levels as figures nearly doubled, but

this

was not to

last

as they dropped again in September to the same level as they were in July. October came with a small increase of about 100

million

turkish

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lira

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sales

, after which

sales

figures levelled off and remained relatively static over the

last

two months of 2007.

Overall

, Promo Plus in Istanbul remained relatively unchanged in 2007 as January and December

sales

were fairly equal.

Also

sales

were at their highest in March

while

the weakest

sales

figures could be observed in July and September.

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