In many countries today, the eating habits and lifestyles of children are different from those of previous generations. Some people say this has had a negative effect on their health. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

As the world is advancing towards rocket science and its use.

people

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People

and children are adapting to these changes in the environment.

As a result

the eating habits and lifestyle of children has drastically changed when we compare with those of previous generations. I completely agree that

this

change has created a negative effect on their health, at the same

time

, let us discuss the changes and its effect on children.

Firstly

, the eating

behaviors

manner of acting or controlling yourself

behaviours

have changed

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has changed

nowadays, children no more eat fruits and vegetables as much as previous generations. Processed

food

and fast

food

become

favorite

something regarded with special favor or liking

favourite

dishes in

this

generation. As kids are addicted with the deliciousness of fast

food

tastes unlike having

blade taste

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a blade taste

the blade taste

from

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of

healthy dishes, it will be difficult to convince them to cut down the amount of fast

food

consumption

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consumed

. Not only fast

food

concern that becomes a big issue in

children

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children's

child

health, but other sweet products

such

as chocolate, candy or cake

also

another concern for children. Having sweetness products has already affected on their

healthy

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health

, as many studies found that kids in western countries have

diabetes problem

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diabetes problems

a diabetes problem

in their early ages because they consume

high level

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high levels

a high level

of sugar excessively.

Secondly

, in

term

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terms

of lifestyle, children in the past used to walk or play with their peers on the way from home to school, whereas nowadays they travel by their parents’ private vehicles and have less work out

instead

.

This

cannot blame only transportation

modes but

Accept comma addition

modes, but

it is

also

caused

from

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by

other factors

such

as too much rely on technological devices or stressful from academic. Many gadgets

such

as computers or video games deprive

time

for physical activities in children. Schools

also

tend to focus only

academic

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academically

and ignore to encourage students to play sports which unlike in the past.

Moreover

, children lifestyle

also

leads to lack of socialising with other people. More and more children nowadays spend

time

playing computer games in their bedroom which have beneficial outcomes to train their

mind

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minds

.

In contrast

,

this

habit has many disadvantages,

for example

, becoming addicted which lead to the lack of contact with their friends and

also

get sick because they never do exercises.

Furthermore

, the children should be able to manage

time

wisely between playing computer games and socialising with other people. To sum up,

although

none of these changes could, on its own, have caused widespread harm to children’s health, there can be little doubt that all of them together have had a devastating effect.

This

, in my opinion, can only be reversed by encouraging children to return to move traditional ways of eating and living.