Instead of requiring primary school students to do experiments themselves, schools should only alllow them to watch experiments demonstrated by teachers. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
These days, many schools contain experiments in their curriculum especially in the science field, and even elementary school students learn how to research the scientific phenomena.
However
, some people complain that teachers should not permit children to do the investigations. In the following essay, I would argue both sides and state that I tend to disagree with the idea.
First
of all, it is actually obvious that sometimes the classes would be dangerous for the students. As they use some kinds of detrimental chemicals or fire, the risk of getting injured or even death will be high when the teachers let the individuals to
do experiments. In fact, there was an incident in Japan that during the class when people were using an alcohol ramp, one student did not follow the right procedure and a fire broke out. Change the verb form
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Consequently
, the class that deals with chemicals or fire would be unfavourable.
Second
of all, on the other hand
, a benefit will outweigh the downside because through
the trials, the individuals can realize an enthusiasm Add the comma(s)
,through
of
learning. Change preposition
for
Although
just by watching the demonstration given by teachers is boring and not impressive, by doing by
themselves, they may notice a plethora of things and mesmerised by the discoveries. Correct pronoun usage
it by
For example
, most of
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individuals
might not be aware Add an article
the individuals
of
that a crystal could be made from salt by adding process. Change preposition
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However
, through the experience of making a crystal, they might realize how wonderful the world scientific phenomena are and this
feeling cannot be obtained from the demonstration.
In my conclusion, I believe that even though the risk of accident is high when depend
on the children in experiments, the impression of the children should be prioritised. Replace the word
dependent
Therefore
, I tend to disagree with the premise.Submitted by dokmally2 on
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