Governments in many countries have recently introduced special taxes on foods and beverages with high levels of sugar. Some think these taxes are a good idea while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Sugar

, it's one of the highest consumed

products

, it's not only used for homemade purposes but

also

to manufacture a variety of foods and beverages. The

levels

of

sugar

consumed are alarming and recently, governments in many countries have imposed special

taxes

on foods and beverages with high

levels

of

sugar

. People have

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different

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towards the special

taxes

, few are satisfied by the step as it may reduce the alarming consumption of

sugar

,

while

others dislike the imposition of

taxes

as it'll cost them higher than usual.

First,

Sugar

has a lot of unhealthy features and is known for its contribution to obesity, diabetes, and many more health issues. The imposition of special

taxes

might turn out bad for the foods and beverages manufacturing

companies

,

therefore

, they may focus

to reduce

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sugar

levels

in their

products

by enhancing the research and development sector of their company,

This

will result in

products

with lower

levels

of

sugar

, making them healthy and tasty at the same time.

This

could be the reason behind people supporting

such

initiatives by the government.

Second,

companies

cannot always find a perfect replacement for

sugar

,

therefore

they cannot reduce the

sugar

level in their product,

this

will lead to the implementation of special

taxes

, which will indeed increase the pricing of the product.

This

change might not be favourable to either,

companies

or consumers. It's a reasonable point to not support the special

taxes

. In conclusion, the latest implementations by the government have their own merits and demerits, in my opinion, the government should reformulate the law in

such

a direction, that it restricts

companies

to use

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a high level of

sugar

and

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the pricing of the product,

such

a step would make

products

healthier and affordable at the same time, both,

companies

and consumers stay satisfied.