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The table shows forested land in millions of hectares in different parts of the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The table shows forested land in millions of hectares in different parts of the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
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The table illustrates the forest area in
hectares
 divided into six parts of the world in the years 1990, 2000,
2005
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and 2005
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. In 1990
Europe
 and South
America
 had the vast majority of forested land respectively 989 and 946 million
of
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ha,
on the other
hand
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 Oceania had the little one in the same year, only 199
millions
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million
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of
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ha.
The other
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Other
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 countries like Africa, North
America
 and
Asia
remains
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remain
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 in the middle with 749, 708 and 576 million
of
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ha. In 2000, all the countries had, big or
less
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fewer
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 losses,
in contrast
,
Europe
 was the only
that
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one that
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 improved
her
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its
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 lands, adding 9 million
of
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hectares
 for a total of 998. In 2005, North
America
 and Oceania stay
with
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in
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 almost the same areas
than
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as
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 five years before, 705 for the first
from
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and from
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 198 to 197 for the
second
 one.
Therefore
, Africa and South
America
 lost again some millions of
hectares
 (respectively from 709 to 691 and from 904 to 882).
By contrast
,
Europe
 and
Asia
 higher their forested land in five years (
in particular
Asia
 from 570 to 584, meanwhile
Europe
 from 998 to 1001). In conclusion,
Europe
 always develop some new forested areas,
Asia
 only from 2000 to 2005,
although
 the other countries always ream steady or decrease their millions of
hectares
 of
lands
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land
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.
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