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In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is therefore necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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In certain countries, the
number
 of
people
 facing
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health
 problems is increasing
due to
 excessive consumption of unhealthy
food
.
Therefore
, governments have to rate a higher
tax
 on junk
food
. I agree with some
point
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. I will discuss and render my opinion. Fast
food
 contains many extremely harmful
nutrients
such
 as excess sugar and lipids. These
nutrients
 will
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form into big molecules and accumulate and dog blood
vessel
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vessels
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.
Also
, cooking methods
such
 as repeated frying oil and poor quality ingredients.
As a result
,
this
 kind of
food
 can cause various
illness
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.
For example
, cancer and obesity.
However
, the advantages of fast
food
 are cheap, fast and convenient.
Therefore
, fast
food
 is a good choice for low-income
people
 who are not able to eat at
restaurant
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restaurants
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 often or who are in
hurry
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. Undoubtedly, imposing a higher
tax
 on fast
food
 will impact
food
 prices.
Therefore
, it may cause
people
 to change their minds to eat more useful
food
 at a similar price.
Although
this
 measure will reduce the
number
 of
people
are
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suffering from '
health
 problems
but
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it makes low-income
people
 have less
food
 to consume. Governments should focus on the quality of
food
, especially ingredients,
nutrients
 and cooking preparations.
For example
,
di fining
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 the
number
 of times to use fried oil
g
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and
 banning some fatty dishes. In conclusion, in my opinion, I believe that imposing
tax
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 will not help much in solving the
health
 issues and have some
assitance
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assistance
 measures for
people
 having
low
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 income. Focusing on ingredients,
nutrients
 and cooking preparations will be more
sucessful
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successful
 than increasing the
tax
. In the future, the
number
 of
people
are
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facing
with
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health
 issues will decrease.
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